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Foreign Attraction
Chapter One: Tomoyo's diary
Tomoyo opened the doors to her grand mansion. Her house was warmly decorated and showed evidence of luxury but however, all these failed to please her. She didn't care for all the money her mother makes, she didn't care for all the house designs...what she cared for was Eriol only. She loved him too dearly. Tomoyo walked up the snake of stairs that led to her room and opened her bedroom door. It opened to a beautiful, velvet colored, decorated room. In the middle of the room, a purple canopy bed laid peacefully being surrounded, either sides, by two little drawers that carried a little lamp on top of it. Tomoyo took off her coat and placed it tidily on a coat hanger. She walked over to her desk and stared at a closed book: her diary. It was a diary that she had started keeping after she met Eriol. She had wanted to write down everything about Eriol and her, she had wanted to preserve her happy moments with Eriol even though there weren't many. Even the smallest details, she had recorded. Tomoyo opened the book to the first page..it had read.
September 1st,
School started today. I was happy to see Sakura at school again after the holidays. Everyone was very nice. Today we had a new student in our class...his name was Eriol Hiragizawa. The first instant he came into the room, I sensed something strong about him, something attracting. His eyes automatically pierced through my soul. The feeling was much too hard to describe...it was almost like love at first sight. He smiled over at Sakura and me. It was amazing...
Tomoyo stared down at her own written words and smiled trying to remember the details of that day's memories he had left behind her. Then she flipped a few pages and read on.
May 5th,
Today Sakura asked Eriol to be friends with us and he had sheepishly agreed. I've always admired Sakura and how she was always so straightforward. On the other hand, for some reason, I tend to keep things to myself and confine my feelings. Each day my feelings towards him grow stronger and stronger, making it harder and harder to conceal by the minute. Each time I see him walking past me, my eyes would automatically follow to where he's going and always be captivated by his handsome smile. I think I will have to tell him my feelings eventually. However, I guess I'll just have to let my heart beat my mind before action.
The feelings came back to Tomoyo as she tried to keep them from raging inside her. She had loved Eriol too much.
September 3rd, Today is my birthday, I was so happy to see everyone attend my birthday party, especially him..Sakura was of course here and it was always her who had made my birthdays so happy to pass by. I could still remember her being by my side through thick and thin; she would always be there, bringing smiles to my face. This year was even more special because Eriol was here. He and Sakura, together, bought me a huge teddy bear. It was so kawaii! Those large black eyes, and the cuddly body! I loved it so much, especially because it was given to me by the two most important people of my life. I wanted to thank them so much!
Happy memories came back as Tomoyo as she continued to flip the pages.
February 6th,
Today was awful. Sakura fell down while doing a somersault in mid air when cheering for Eriol's track and field team. She had jumped off the human pyramid and landed on her sides when a sudden shout from behind startled her. She had scraped her legs and broken an arm. Eriol seemed awfully worried..a little too worried if you ask me, but then I guess he was just caring for Sakura like a friend (WHAT AM I THINKING?! IT'S NOT AS IF I'M HIS GIRLFRIEND?!)
"He did care for Sakura a lot," Tomoyo thought to herself, tears building behind her eyes as she continued on reading.
July 22nd,
I don't know if I'm being overly sensitive, but I'm having a feeling that Sakura has feelings for Eriol too. I should have told Sakura about my passion for him earlier, it seems as if I'm betraying my own friend now. But I could never have thought that Sakura would fall for a boy?! She was always like a tomboy. Many boys had asked her out before but she rejected each and every one of them..but I guess it's because this is Eriol we're talking here. She's beginning to blush in his presence every time...just like me when I first discovered my feelings for him....this is SO CONFUSING!!!
A drop of ripened tear fell onto the page, splotching the ink. Tomoyo brushed away the tears from her face and cleaned her tearstained cheeks as she forced a smile on her face and continued writing for today's entry.
August 24th,
Today, Eriol won the track and field championship. He was so good! Sakura cheered loudly for him and he picked up a sudden pace as if Sakura had given him the sudden power of agility. He laid several glances on her, I think their relationship is definitely growing stronger...
Another tear splotched the newly written words that she had just written down.
Today, Sakura made a few good comments about him, which kind of tells me that she loves him. I had asked her finally today, if she had loved him, but the only answer she gave me was a blush..
"Tomoyo!" a voice trilled off from downstairs; it was Tomoyo's mother. "It's time for dinner now! Come down here now sweetie!"
Tomoyo quickly closed her diary and placed it safely in her drawers, her secrets and feelings were all kept in that drawer...that drawer, in which no one was to trespass...
A/N: Sorry this was a short update, I was planning to attach another part to this chapter but I've decided to split it into two chapters instead. Please give me LOTS of comments since I want to know if this fic is worth continuing. If I see this fic isn't doing too well then, I will just work on my other fics first...so PLEASE SUPPORT "FOREIGN ATTRACTION!!!" I'll try to update faster! Now go on....leave a review!!!!! Pretty please!?
Foreign Attraction
Chapter One: Tomoyo's diary
Tomoyo opened the doors to her grand mansion. Her house was warmly decorated and showed evidence of luxury but however, all these failed to please her. She didn't care for all the money her mother makes, she didn't care for all the house designs...what she cared for was Eriol only. She loved him too dearly. Tomoyo walked up the snake of stairs that led to her room and opened her bedroom door. It opened to a beautiful, velvet colored, decorated room. In the middle of the room, a purple canopy bed laid peacefully being surrounded, either sides, by two little drawers that carried a little lamp on top of it. Tomoyo took off her coat and placed it tidily on a coat hanger. She walked over to her desk and stared at a closed book: her diary. It was a diary that she had started keeping after she met Eriol. She had wanted to write down everything about Eriol and her, she had wanted to preserve her happy moments with Eriol even though there weren't many. Even the smallest details, she had recorded. Tomoyo opened the book to the first page..it had read.
September 1st,
School started today. I was happy to see Sakura at school again after the holidays. Everyone was very nice. Today we had a new student in our class...his name was Eriol Hiragizawa. The first instant he came into the room, I sensed something strong about him, something attracting. His eyes automatically pierced through my soul. The feeling was much too hard to describe...it was almost like love at first sight. He smiled over at Sakura and me. It was amazing...
Tomoyo stared down at her own written words and smiled trying to remember the details of that day's memories he had left behind her. Then she flipped a few pages and read on.
May 5th,
Today Sakura asked Eriol to be friends with us and he had sheepishly agreed. I've always admired Sakura and how she was always so straightforward. On the other hand, for some reason, I tend to keep things to myself and confine my feelings. Each day my feelings towards him grow stronger and stronger, making it harder and harder to conceal by the minute. Each time I see him walking past me, my eyes would automatically follow to where he's going and always be captivated by his handsome smile. I think I will have to tell him my feelings eventually. However, I guess I'll just have to let my heart beat my mind before action.
The feelings came back to Tomoyo as she tried to keep them from raging inside her. She had loved Eriol too much.
September 3rd, Today is my birthday, I was so happy to see everyone attend my birthday party, especially him..Sakura was of course here and it was always her who had made my birthdays so happy to pass by. I could still remember her being by my side through thick and thin; she would always be there, bringing smiles to my face. This year was even more special because Eriol was here. He and Sakura, together, bought me a huge teddy bear. It was so kawaii! Those large black eyes, and the cuddly body! I loved it so much, especially because it was given to me by the two most important people of my life. I wanted to thank them so much!
Happy memories came back as Tomoyo as she continued to flip the pages.
February 6th,
Today was awful. Sakura fell down while doing a somersault in mid air when cheering for Eriol's track and field team. She had jumped off the human pyramid and landed on her sides when a sudden shout from behind startled her. She had scraped her legs and broken an arm. Eriol seemed awfully worried..a little too worried if you ask me, but then I guess he was just caring for Sakura like a friend (WHAT AM I THINKING?! IT'S NOT AS IF I'M HIS GIRLFRIEND?!)
"He did care for Sakura a lot," Tomoyo thought to herself, tears building behind her eyes as she continued on reading.
July 22nd,
I don't know if I'm being overly sensitive, but I'm having a feeling that Sakura has feelings for Eriol too. I should have told Sakura about my passion for him earlier, it seems as if I'm betraying my own friend now. But I could never have thought that Sakura would fall for a boy?! She was always like a tomboy. Many boys had asked her out before but she rejected each and every one of them..but I guess it's because this is Eriol we're talking here. She's beginning to blush in his presence every time...just like me when I first discovered my feelings for him....this is SO CONFUSING!!!
A drop of ripened tear fell onto the page, splotching the ink. Tomoyo brushed away the tears from her face and cleaned her tearstained cheeks as she forced a smile on her face and continued writing for today's entry.
August 24th,
Today, Eriol won the track and field championship. He was so good! Sakura cheered loudly for him and he picked up a sudden pace as if Sakura had given him the sudden power of agility. He laid several glances on her, I think their relationship is definitely growing stronger...
Another tear splotched the newly written words that she had just written down.
Today, Sakura made a few good comments about him, which kind of tells me that she loves him. I had asked her finally today, if she had loved him, but the only answer she gave me was a blush..
"Tomoyo!" a voice trilled off from downstairs; it was Tomoyo's mother. "It's time for dinner now! Come down here now sweetie!"
Tomoyo quickly closed her diary and placed it safely in her drawers, her secrets and feelings were all kept in that drawer...that drawer, in which no one was to trespass...
A/N: Sorry this was a short update, I was planning to attach another part to this chapter but I've decided to split it into two chapters instead. Please give me LOTS of comments since I want to know if this fic is worth continuing. If I see this fic isn't doing too well then, I will just work on my other fics first...so PLEASE SUPPORT "FOREIGN ATTRACTION!!!" I'll try to update faster! Now go on....leave a review!!!!! Pretty please!?
