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Family Matters
Chapter 10-The First Adventure
Mackenzie and Lauren had slept quite peacefully in their room off of Dumbledore's office. They had been moved there the night before because Dumbledore thought they would be safer there then in the infirmary where everyone could get to them. The girls had talked with Remus more about the daily life of Hogwarts and both were dieing to go see the students. Though, unfortunately this was definitely forbidden. Dumbledore said that it was dangerous for them to interact with the students. He didn't know what they would think anyway about having two muggles in the castle. They only people they could talk to would be the people that know of their existence: Dumbledore, Snape, Sirius and Remus. Also anyone else Dumbledore might tell. A challenge for the wizened wizard was the cover-up of two teenaged girls "dropping from the face of the earth". He knew that no muggle would ever find them even if they looked. So he thought to himself, "the easiest way to do this is to leave it the way it is. The perfect kidnapping, absolutely no clues." So he knew that either in todays or tomorrows muggle newspaper there would be an ad about their disappearance. But Mackenzie and Lauren were thinking nothing of this at that moment (the moment happened to be 9:00AM on 22nd of October). Mackenzie happened to be thinking about why she didn't have another weird dream the night before and Lauren was thinking about breakfast. Both were sitting on twin beds in a well-furnished circular room. They each had a bureau and there was a window over looking the field. Dumbledore had explained to them the night before that it was not a field but a "Quidditch Pitch". "Quidditch", he said, "is the sport of the Wizarding world. Maybe you girls will get to see a game some time." It definitely didn't look like anything they had ever seen before. With three large hoops about 50 feet up in the air on each end. "I wonder what those are for?" Lauren had said. "Maybe they have brooms!" Mackenzie had said sarcastically not knowing that was the right answer. Now they were just looking at those three hoops on the end closest them. "Well what are we supposed to do? Dumbledore told us he didn't want us interacting with anyone we haven't met so we cant go out. Do we yell or something?" Lauren said. "Well lets go into Dumbledore's office and see if he's there." Mackenzie said getting up out of the bed and moving towards the door. "Wait," Lauren hissed," Some people could be out there. Lets listen first." Lauren said also getting up from the bed and moving stealthily towards the door. They listened for a minute and after hearing nothing pushed open the door and walked out into the oval shaped office filled with interesting things. "Well no one seems to be here so, now what?" Lauren asked as she was looking at the large red colored bird on a perch. "Hey look, it's some stuff addressed to us." Mackenzie said picking up a note with her and Laurens name on it. "Well read it! God sometimes you are so slow." Lauren muttered. "It says, 'Dear Girls, I'm sorry I am unable to be there but being that today is a Monday and a school day I have my duties as Headmaster. I have left you both some things in the package accompanying this note. They should help you throughout your stay here. Until later, Albus Dumbledore PS: Remember, DO NOT BE SEEN BY PEOPLE WHO DO NOT KNOW OF YOUR STAY HERE. THAT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO YOUR SAFETY.' Hmmmmm, I wonder what's in the package." Mackenzie said reaching for it. Lauren stood next to the desk watching as Mackenzie unwrapped the rather large package. What fell out was a silvery almost liquid material, a old looking piece of parchment and a medium sized crystal along with another note. Lauren picked up the material and looked at it. "Holy snap! Lauren your invisible!" Mackenzie said staring at her friend (or what could still be seen of her). "Whoa, that's so cool! Read the note though, maybe its dangerous." Lauren said taking of the material and tossing it away from her. Mackenzie picked up the second note and read, "Here are the things I thought would be useful. First is an Invisibility Cloak. You can go about unseen with this on but not unheard. Its completely safe so don't be afraid to use it. The piece of parchment is a map of Hogwarts. I urge you to stay away from the Great Hall at mealtimes, you cant bump into anyone. The rooms on the map are also the ones that don't change place very often so they're easier to find. You will most likely be able to find Severus in his potions room and Sirius at Hagrids. Hagrid by the way knows of you so he can see you. Lastly the crystal is probably your most valuable possession. The crystal will glow a shade of red if you are in danger and the red will get darker as the danger comes nearer. If all is well then it will stay clear. Good luck girls and I urge you again to be careful. Until Later, AD." Mackenzie looked at Lauren and said, "Well, what are we waiting for, lets go!" Lauren grabbed the cloak while Mackenzie picked up the stone and the map. They situated themselves under the cloak and headed out the door and down the spiral stairs. They walked out from behind the stone gargoyle and got ready to take off down the hall when Mackenzie let out a hushed, "Oh dear." Lauren glanced down at Mackenzie's hands and there lay the crystal- a bright horrifying blood red. Lauren slowly turned herself and Mackenzie around so that they could see behind them. There was what she had feared: people. Three kids that looked about her and Mackenzie's age. They were all looking around with their wands out (they had been told the night before what those stick things that these magical people carried around were). Mackenzie looked closely at their spotters (though, se figured they couldn't see them since they were invisible. They had just seen the statue move and no one appear from behind it.). One girl and two boys, the girl having rather bushy hair kind of like Mackenzie's (but she always had it pulled back). The first boy was long and lanky with bright orange hair and freckles the second was shorter and somewhat leaner with black hair and green eyes. "No way", Mackenzie thought to herself, "It's Harry. I don't believe this." Mackenzie and Lauren glanced at each other trying to figure out what to do. They were caught or very close to it and had to think fast, very fast. But how could they get out of this one.....
Yes!!!!!! I finally finished this chapter!!!!!! A cliffhanger as always. Review and answer my previous questions along with this one: What will happen next to our main characters? Will someone come along and save their butts or will they meet the Gryfindor Trio? YOU DECIDE!!!!!! ITS IN YOUR HANDS READERS!!!!!!! MAKE YOUR CHOICE AND PUT IT IN A REVIEW!!!!!!!! Until next time people's.
Your Truly,
~Mongoose
Family Matters
Chapter 10-The First Adventure
Mackenzie and Lauren had slept quite peacefully in their room off of Dumbledore's office. They had been moved there the night before because Dumbledore thought they would be safer there then in the infirmary where everyone could get to them. The girls had talked with Remus more about the daily life of Hogwarts and both were dieing to go see the students. Though, unfortunately this was definitely forbidden. Dumbledore said that it was dangerous for them to interact with the students. He didn't know what they would think anyway about having two muggles in the castle. They only people they could talk to would be the people that know of their existence: Dumbledore, Snape, Sirius and Remus. Also anyone else Dumbledore might tell. A challenge for the wizened wizard was the cover-up of two teenaged girls "dropping from the face of the earth". He knew that no muggle would ever find them even if they looked. So he thought to himself, "the easiest way to do this is to leave it the way it is. The perfect kidnapping, absolutely no clues." So he knew that either in todays or tomorrows muggle newspaper there would be an ad about their disappearance. But Mackenzie and Lauren were thinking nothing of this at that moment (the moment happened to be 9:00AM on 22nd of October). Mackenzie happened to be thinking about why she didn't have another weird dream the night before and Lauren was thinking about breakfast. Both were sitting on twin beds in a well-furnished circular room. They each had a bureau and there was a window over looking the field. Dumbledore had explained to them the night before that it was not a field but a "Quidditch Pitch". "Quidditch", he said, "is the sport of the Wizarding world. Maybe you girls will get to see a game some time." It definitely didn't look like anything they had ever seen before. With three large hoops about 50 feet up in the air on each end. "I wonder what those are for?" Lauren had said. "Maybe they have brooms!" Mackenzie had said sarcastically not knowing that was the right answer. Now they were just looking at those three hoops on the end closest them. "Well what are we supposed to do? Dumbledore told us he didn't want us interacting with anyone we haven't met so we cant go out. Do we yell or something?" Lauren said. "Well lets go into Dumbledore's office and see if he's there." Mackenzie said getting up out of the bed and moving towards the door. "Wait," Lauren hissed," Some people could be out there. Lets listen first." Lauren said also getting up from the bed and moving stealthily towards the door. They listened for a minute and after hearing nothing pushed open the door and walked out into the oval shaped office filled with interesting things. "Well no one seems to be here so, now what?" Lauren asked as she was looking at the large red colored bird on a perch. "Hey look, it's some stuff addressed to us." Mackenzie said picking up a note with her and Laurens name on it. "Well read it! God sometimes you are so slow." Lauren muttered. "It says, 'Dear Girls, I'm sorry I am unable to be there but being that today is a Monday and a school day I have my duties as Headmaster. I have left you both some things in the package accompanying this note. They should help you throughout your stay here. Until later, Albus Dumbledore PS: Remember, DO NOT BE SEEN BY PEOPLE WHO DO NOT KNOW OF YOUR STAY HERE. THAT IS VERY IMPORTANT TO YOUR SAFETY.' Hmmmmm, I wonder what's in the package." Mackenzie said reaching for it. Lauren stood next to the desk watching as Mackenzie unwrapped the rather large package. What fell out was a silvery almost liquid material, a old looking piece of parchment and a medium sized crystal along with another note. Lauren picked up the material and looked at it. "Holy snap! Lauren your invisible!" Mackenzie said staring at her friend (or what could still be seen of her). "Whoa, that's so cool! Read the note though, maybe its dangerous." Lauren said taking of the material and tossing it away from her. Mackenzie picked up the second note and read, "Here are the things I thought would be useful. First is an Invisibility Cloak. You can go about unseen with this on but not unheard. Its completely safe so don't be afraid to use it. The piece of parchment is a map of Hogwarts. I urge you to stay away from the Great Hall at mealtimes, you cant bump into anyone. The rooms on the map are also the ones that don't change place very often so they're easier to find. You will most likely be able to find Severus in his potions room and Sirius at Hagrids. Hagrid by the way knows of you so he can see you. Lastly the crystal is probably your most valuable possession. The crystal will glow a shade of red if you are in danger and the red will get darker as the danger comes nearer. If all is well then it will stay clear. Good luck girls and I urge you again to be careful. Until Later, AD." Mackenzie looked at Lauren and said, "Well, what are we waiting for, lets go!" Lauren grabbed the cloak while Mackenzie picked up the stone and the map. They situated themselves under the cloak and headed out the door and down the spiral stairs. They walked out from behind the stone gargoyle and got ready to take off down the hall when Mackenzie let out a hushed, "Oh dear." Lauren glanced down at Mackenzie's hands and there lay the crystal- a bright horrifying blood red. Lauren slowly turned herself and Mackenzie around so that they could see behind them. There was what she had feared: people. Three kids that looked about her and Mackenzie's age. They were all looking around with their wands out (they had been told the night before what those stick things that these magical people carried around were). Mackenzie looked closely at their spotters (though, se figured they couldn't see them since they were invisible. They had just seen the statue move and no one appear from behind it.). One girl and two boys, the girl having rather bushy hair kind of like Mackenzie's (but she always had it pulled back). The first boy was long and lanky with bright orange hair and freckles the second was shorter and somewhat leaner with black hair and green eyes. "No way", Mackenzie thought to herself, "It's Harry. I don't believe this." Mackenzie and Lauren glanced at each other trying to figure out what to do. They were caught or very close to it and had to think fast, very fast. But how could they get out of this one.....
Yes!!!!!! I finally finished this chapter!!!!!! A cliffhanger as always. Review and answer my previous questions along with this one: What will happen next to our main characters? Will someone come along and save their butts or will they meet the Gryfindor Trio? YOU DECIDE!!!!!! ITS IN YOUR HANDS READERS!!!!!!! MAKE YOUR CHOICE AND PUT IT IN A REVIEW!!!!!!!! Until next time people's.
Your Truly,
~Mongoose
