Hello!! And thanks for those reviews!!! Anywayz I forgot some datas about
my OC so Here it is!! (
Name: Phoemella Saotome Age: 16 B-day: Feb. 14 Eyes: Amethyst Hair: Jet black
Keep sending reviews!! For everyone this is my first fic! (
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Chapter II- There is more than meets the Ice
Following Day (still at the Comner's mansion)
Last night was one of the most dreadful night. I open one bleary eye after the other, shift my eyes from the ceiling to the couch where I saw a sleeping Mokuba, It turned out that I fell asleep.. or rather "WE" fell asleep at the parlor. I searched for a clock.
7:30 a.m: Ugh. My back hurts same as with my neck.
"It's freeeezing...." I shivered,
I stood up and rubbed my palms together and went to the window. It was snowing outside, It was then that I saw the landscape of the mansion, there was a big lake ( well. used to be. now it turned into ice.) and behind it was the woods. I figured out that we must be at the east wing near Silver Lake.
(GRUMBLE.GRUMBLE. )
"Eh. I guess I'm a little bit hungry" I look down to my stomach, then sigh. I walked across the room careful not to wake up Mokuba, But suddenly thought useless since sleeping Mokuba is presently SNORING and seems to be having the "Sleep" of his life, I decided to just walk. Luckily I was right! He didn't even move an inch, closed the door behind me.
"Uh.- where am I?" I asked myself looking down the hallways on both sides. I have no idea where in the mansion I am. So, I just decided to walk down the west hall.
I was dreamily walking (pretending that I was in the 18th century, and I am the lady of the house) When I bumped into someone. I was knocked down back to earth
"Look at where you're going." A stern male voice said.
I look up to see a pair of blue eyes staring down at me.
'Seto Kaiba..' I said to myself, then I automatically covered my mouth with my hands and walked hurriedly pass Seto, When I out of his sight
"Oh my God! Imagine bumping into vile-Seto!", that's what I decided to call him. well that's of course behind his back.you know.
"And him. with me in my morning breath." I shivered, "Good thing he didn't recognize that I'm still wearing my gown"
Then suddenly a thought hit me.
"Mokuba!" I said, snapping back, and quickly I retrace my steps and went back, when I reached the parlor I was about to turn the door knob when I saw Seto walking down the hall, he eyed me suspiciously.
"Hmp!" he said under his breath, as he walked pass me.
I almost fell down on my knees, I was still shaky when another maid saw me.
"My Lady. can I help you?"
"Yess." I said desperately "Do you know where's my room?"
The maid blinked.(Of course I wasn't the only guest there! ) I slapped my forehead.
"I'm Phoemella Saotome."
a look of relief came to her she smiled and pointed the door adjacent to the parlor.
"That is my room?!." I said .
All this time it was just A-DOOR-AWAY.
"You d-d-don't like it." the maid said meekly,
"No..no no. I was just surprised I didn't know it was just.. There-"
she nod then she showed me the room, It was gorgeous. The maid told me it was called the flower chamber, Victorian century inspired room with porcelain vases filled with spring flowers, the room was scented with Lavender, It was huge. It has its own parlor and bath with doors separating the rooms, she showed me the huge wooden closet and my six leather-bound suitcases which were neatly stacked on the floor, next she showed me the bathroom, the bath tub with its fixtures was made of porcelain and has a border hand-painted with rose and cherry blossoms. I felt like I was a daughter of a count and this is a gift from my dad. It was all too gorgeous!
"Thank you for showing me" I said to the maid, she then left me.
I sat on the four poster.
"What a nice room. too bad I'm on my way home again. huu.. I didn't even get the chance to sleep here." I said, then I lay down on the bed.
Being comfortable on the bed and the soft mattress along with the fragrance of the room, I slowly closed my eyes, this is "The life" for me.
"Mokuba!! I almost forgot about him!" I stood up quickly,
and went to the next room. (the parlor. almost tripped. I accidentally stepped on my dress.) Mokuba wasn't there..
"oh dear where could he be?" I said.
"He's not here- whoever you're looking for."
Iwas shocked, I didn't know there was somebody there. I walked inside to see who it is, there he is with his back turned (he's facing the window watching as the snow falls.) I took a few steps to get a closer look. He turned.
(Phoemella )
It was Seto. Just then at the peak of the silence my stomach grumbled. He looked at me (glared at me) I blushed a bit. 'geeze this is totally embarrassing.'
"um. Well.- gotta go! The door is waiting- I mean the dong- no the drink- the dog." I said
Seto blinked. Then I turned hurriedly and left the room, walked inside my room and closed the door behind me.
When I got inside, I slapped my forehead.
"since when did I had a dog!. really- a stupid thing to say"
I took a hot shower, change my clothes. (a white turtle neck long sleeves, knee length khaki skirt, and a suede caramel colored high boots.) I went out of my room. By this time I'm really, really hungry.
"I wonder if I could find a map, so I could get to the kitchen. I'm starving."
"Ms. Saotome. is that you?" a girld from behind asked.
I bet she's around 14 or 15 she seemed delighted to see me, she must be one of the guests. She has golden blonde hair tied in half pony and hazel eyes. (she's wearing a red jacket (open), a light blue top inside and a red checkered pleated skirt, a knee high blue socks and a white rubber shoes with a red line sew on both sides) She looks like a school girl.
"Yes, that's me.why?"
"Oh MY GOD! You're "the" Phoemella Saotome!" she piped up and blushed.
"You were the Decembers' cover story of FAME Magazine!"
Yeah. She's right, I remember doing a photo shoot a week ago, before I came here. And an interview. I didn't know that magazine was Big time! (fashion absolutely made easy)
"Yes. I believe that's me." I said.
"ooh. my friend's gonna turn green of envy, when they heard that I met you face to face." she said with a devlish grin on her face. She looked up to me.
"You are really gorgeous, no doubt why many guys are after you. I'm Maikah anywayz."
"Hi Maikah and thank you. Are you heading downstairs for breakfast?" I asked hopefully.
"Oh. Breakfast?. actually I am"
thank God! Finally someone who knows where the kitchen is!
"good! Can I join you on the way."
Her eyes brightened up and stars were on it "Wide" smile spread across her face, Like I've said something of a miracle to her.
"really?." , her eyes widening asked me.
"yup" I said.
"Yay!!" she shouted then she started jumping up and down.
(Phoemella )
I found out that Maikah Smith, is the eldest among the children of John and Angela Smith. (owner of Block Smith trading.)
After breakfast.
Got my coat and went outside. It was still snowing.
I walked down to the backyard of the mansion in my hands are my white pair of ice skates. (I'm not good at it. but at least I know how) down to the lake (which as I have said turned into an instant ice rink) I put on my skates, and stepped on to the lake.
"Nice. Skating while snowing I feel like I'm the snow queen."
I said as I clumsily balanced myself (hah! So good for a snow queen who can't balance on ice!.) I started skating (slowly), and made a turn ( a not so graceful pirouette ) I was half way through the middle of the lake when suddenly, I heard a crack. (like a glass about to break)
"What was that?!" I looked sideways. I was the only one outside.
Before I knew it, the place where I was standing collapsed, I was thrown down into the cold freezing water. I didn't get the chance to grab for a nearby block of ice, I didn't even screamed. The water filled my eyes, I untied my skates and let it sink down the water, the water also filed my mouth to my throat. I was choking, I can't breathe and my legs are aching. I tried to swim, to catch my breath, but I can't feel my legs anymore, then everything went black.
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A bright blinding light, then I saw myself looking out in the sky. It wasn't anything like Domino, all I can see is a wide stretch of sand, pyramids, and sand dunes. I was on the top part of what seemed like a palace of a pharaoh. I seemed to be waiting. but for what? Then a gust of wind, then the blinding light again.
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I coughed and gasped for air, I realized that I was (my half body) lying on Setos' arms with my hair dripping wet, my clothes and no skates just wet socks. I started crying, embraced to Seto and then cried.
"I was so scared.." I sobbed "I thought I- I'm going to die. I fell on the water. it- it started to f-fill my eyes and my mouth and I couldn't move my legs." I cried once more.
I don't care if he's listening or not, I need an outlet and he's the nearest one on sight. Then without warning, he picked me up and started walking towards the mansion. Just being honest here he was warm, and I felt safe in his arms, I embraced him tighter and lay my head on the crook of his neck. I slowly closed my eyes and fell asleep in his arms.
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so. what do you think? Please send reviews ( I'll really appreciate it.
thank you very much! And please send reviews!!!! (
sorry for the delay.. got problem with my connection. (
Name: Phoemella Saotome Age: 16 B-day: Feb. 14 Eyes: Amethyst Hair: Jet black
Keep sending reviews!! For everyone this is my first fic! (
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Chapter II- There is more than meets the Ice
Following Day (still at the Comner's mansion)
Last night was one of the most dreadful night. I open one bleary eye after the other, shift my eyes from the ceiling to the couch where I saw a sleeping Mokuba, It turned out that I fell asleep.. or rather "WE" fell asleep at the parlor. I searched for a clock.
7:30 a.m: Ugh. My back hurts same as with my neck.
"It's freeeezing...." I shivered,
I stood up and rubbed my palms together and went to the window. It was snowing outside, It was then that I saw the landscape of the mansion, there was a big lake ( well. used to be. now it turned into ice.) and behind it was the woods. I figured out that we must be at the east wing near Silver Lake.
(GRUMBLE.GRUMBLE. )
"Eh. I guess I'm a little bit hungry" I look down to my stomach, then sigh. I walked across the room careful not to wake up Mokuba, But suddenly thought useless since sleeping Mokuba is presently SNORING and seems to be having the "Sleep" of his life, I decided to just walk. Luckily I was right! He didn't even move an inch, closed the door behind me.
"Uh.- where am I?" I asked myself looking down the hallways on both sides. I have no idea where in the mansion I am. So, I just decided to walk down the west hall.
I was dreamily walking (pretending that I was in the 18th century, and I am the lady of the house) When I bumped into someone. I was knocked down back to earth
"Look at where you're going." A stern male voice said.
I look up to see a pair of blue eyes staring down at me.
'Seto Kaiba..' I said to myself, then I automatically covered my mouth with my hands and walked hurriedly pass Seto, When I out of his sight
"Oh my God! Imagine bumping into vile-Seto!", that's what I decided to call him. well that's of course behind his back.you know.
"And him. with me in my morning breath." I shivered, "Good thing he didn't recognize that I'm still wearing my gown"
Then suddenly a thought hit me.
"Mokuba!" I said, snapping back, and quickly I retrace my steps and went back, when I reached the parlor I was about to turn the door knob when I saw Seto walking down the hall, he eyed me suspiciously.
"Hmp!" he said under his breath, as he walked pass me.
I almost fell down on my knees, I was still shaky when another maid saw me.
"My Lady. can I help you?"
"Yess." I said desperately "Do you know where's my room?"
The maid blinked.(Of course I wasn't the only guest there! ) I slapped my forehead.
"I'm Phoemella Saotome."
a look of relief came to her she smiled and pointed the door adjacent to the parlor.
"That is my room?!." I said .
All this time it was just A-DOOR-AWAY.
"You d-d-don't like it." the maid said meekly,
"No..no no. I was just surprised I didn't know it was just.. There-"
she nod then she showed me the room, It was gorgeous. The maid told me it was called the flower chamber, Victorian century inspired room with porcelain vases filled with spring flowers, the room was scented with Lavender, It was huge. It has its own parlor and bath with doors separating the rooms, she showed me the huge wooden closet and my six leather-bound suitcases which were neatly stacked on the floor, next she showed me the bathroom, the bath tub with its fixtures was made of porcelain and has a border hand-painted with rose and cherry blossoms. I felt like I was a daughter of a count and this is a gift from my dad. It was all too gorgeous!
"Thank you for showing me" I said to the maid, she then left me.
I sat on the four poster.
"What a nice room. too bad I'm on my way home again. huu.. I didn't even get the chance to sleep here." I said, then I lay down on the bed.
Being comfortable on the bed and the soft mattress along with the fragrance of the room, I slowly closed my eyes, this is "The life" for me.
"Mokuba!! I almost forgot about him!" I stood up quickly,
and went to the next room. (the parlor. almost tripped. I accidentally stepped on my dress.) Mokuba wasn't there..
"oh dear where could he be?" I said.
"He's not here- whoever you're looking for."
Iwas shocked, I didn't know there was somebody there. I walked inside to see who it is, there he is with his back turned (he's facing the window watching as the snow falls.) I took a few steps to get a closer look. He turned.
(Phoemella )
It was Seto. Just then at the peak of the silence my stomach grumbled. He looked at me (glared at me) I blushed a bit. 'geeze this is totally embarrassing.'
"um. Well.- gotta go! The door is waiting- I mean the dong- no the drink- the dog." I said
Seto blinked. Then I turned hurriedly and left the room, walked inside my room and closed the door behind me.
When I got inside, I slapped my forehead.
"since when did I had a dog!. really- a stupid thing to say"
I took a hot shower, change my clothes. (a white turtle neck long sleeves, knee length khaki skirt, and a suede caramel colored high boots.) I went out of my room. By this time I'm really, really hungry.
"I wonder if I could find a map, so I could get to the kitchen. I'm starving."
"Ms. Saotome. is that you?" a girld from behind asked.
I bet she's around 14 or 15 she seemed delighted to see me, she must be one of the guests. She has golden blonde hair tied in half pony and hazel eyes. (she's wearing a red jacket (open), a light blue top inside and a red checkered pleated skirt, a knee high blue socks and a white rubber shoes with a red line sew on both sides) She looks like a school girl.
"Yes, that's me.why?"
"Oh MY GOD! You're "the" Phoemella Saotome!" she piped up and blushed.
"You were the Decembers' cover story of FAME Magazine!"
Yeah. She's right, I remember doing a photo shoot a week ago, before I came here. And an interview. I didn't know that magazine was Big time! (fashion absolutely made easy)
"Yes. I believe that's me." I said.
"ooh. my friend's gonna turn green of envy, when they heard that I met you face to face." she said with a devlish grin on her face. She looked up to me.
"You are really gorgeous, no doubt why many guys are after you. I'm Maikah anywayz."
"Hi Maikah and thank you. Are you heading downstairs for breakfast?" I asked hopefully.
"Oh. Breakfast?. actually I am"
thank God! Finally someone who knows where the kitchen is!
"good! Can I join you on the way."
Her eyes brightened up and stars were on it "Wide" smile spread across her face, Like I've said something of a miracle to her.
"really?." , her eyes widening asked me.
"yup" I said.
"Yay!!" she shouted then she started jumping up and down.
(Phoemella )
I found out that Maikah Smith, is the eldest among the children of John and Angela Smith. (owner of Block Smith trading.)
After breakfast.
Got my coat and went outside. It was still snowing.
I walked down to the backyard of the mansion in my hands are my white pair of ice skates. (I'm not good at it. but at least I know how) down to the lake (which as I have said turned into an instant ice rink) I put on my skates, and stepped on to the lake.
"Nice. Skating while snowing I feel like I'm the snow queen."
I said as I clumsily balanced myself (hah! So good for a snow queen who can't balance on ice!.) I started skating (slowly), and made a turn ( a not so graceful pirouette ) I was half way through the middle of the lake when suddenly, I heard a crack. (like a glass about to break)
"What was that?!" I looked sideways. I was the only one outside.
Before I knew it, the place where I was standing collapsed, I was thrown down into the cold freezing water. I didn't get the chance to grab for a nearby block of ice, I didn't even screamed. The water filled my eyes, I untied my skates and let it sink down the water, the water also filed my mouth to my throat. I was choking, I can't breathe and my legs are aching. I tried to swim, to catch my breath, but I can't feel my legs anymore, then everything went black.
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A bright blinding light, then I saw myself looking out in the sky. It wasn't anything like Domino, all I can see is a wide stretch of sand, pyramids, and sand dunes. I was on the top part of what seemed like a palace of a pharaoh. I seemed to be waiting. but for what? Then a gust of wind, then the blinding light again.
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I coughed and gasped for air, I realized that I was (my half body) lying on Setos' arms with my hair dripping wet, my clothes and no skates just wet socks. I started crying, embraced to Seto and then cried.
"I was so scared.." I sobbed "I thought I- I'm going to die. I fell on the water. it- it started to f-fill my eyes and my mouth and I couldn't move my legs." I cried once more.
I don't care if he's listening or not, I need an outlet and he's the nearest one on sight. Then without warning, he picked me up and started walking towards the mansion. Just being honest here he was warm, and I felt safe in his arms, I embraced him tighter and lay my head on the crook of his neck. I slowly closed my eyes and fell asleep in his arms.
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so. what do you think? Please send reviews ( I'll really appreciate it.
thank you very much! And please send reviews!!!! (
sorry for the delay.. got problem with my connection. (
