Reviews:
Akasha Ravensong: all what times argh! *cries* lol is this going to be continued or is it a one shot?!?! please continue! Blessed Be ^_^
re: It is just a one shot story, all complete! I'm glad you liked it. I added a bit to the confusing bit, so I hope that helps!
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Ripper de la Blackstaff: Sad... but beautiful
Re: Thank you, but kinda happy at the end, I hope.
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Miyu-DeSang: I like how you portray this story.
Re: thank you, I like to take a slightly less soppy approach, as it would be awful coming from me (
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magicstaro: nice, short (at least compared to the other stuff i read), and sweet :) pretty good for a first time writer...i couldn't tell at all you could have said you were a professional lol and you probably want a well rounded critique... um i like the imagery like the 'robes swirling around her' and stuff... nothing i don't like (well if i don't like it i won't be reading it and reviewing) ugh i'm so tired sori can't come up with something better to say but i'm too tired
Re: Thanks for that ( Well rounded indeed, perhaps time to take a break from reading and get some sleep? I know, I suffer the same...
Akasha Ravensong: all what times argh! *cries* lol is this going to be continued or is it a one shot?!?! please continue! Blessed Be ^_^
re: It is just a one shot story, all complete! I'm glad you liked it. I added a bit to the confusing bit, so I hope that helps!
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Ripper de la Blackstaff: Sad... but beautiful
Re: Thank you, but kinda happy at the end, I hope.
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Miyu-DeSang: I like how you portray this story.
Re: thank you, I like to take a slightly less soppy approach, as it would be awful coming from me (
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magicstaro: nice, short (at least compared to the other stuff i read), and sweet :) pretty good for a first time writer...i couldn't tell at all you could have said you were a professional lol and you probably want a well rounded critique... um i like the imagery like the 'robes swirling around her' and stuff... nothing i don't like (well if i don't like it i won't be reading it and reviewing) ugh i'm so tired sori can't come up with something better to say but i'm too tired
Re: Thanks for that ( Well rounded indeed, perhaps time to take a break from reading and get some sleep? I know, I suffer the same...
