I don't own Star Wars. Just this storyline crap below.
This is various crap from other drafts of the story. You see I wrote this story 6 yrs ago and I had worked on it for a year and a half before that. Revising it and revising it. I went through 3 full drafts before I finally settled on this one and never finished it. I wish I had saved my old drafts just to see what type of crap I turned out then, but this file is all that remains. I thought whoever has read the story up until this point might find it interesting to see old workings behind it. Who knows? Maybe I'll finish the story. Maybe you can email me with a continuation to inspire me to finish it. Or you can start writing your own with the stuff here. Just make a little acknowledgment to me when you post it.
Thanks,
Kara Metallium ^_~!
Lana had been summoned to her father's throne room, because there was a new student for Vader to train. Lana was very curious. When she walked into his throne room, there was the other student. He was tall and had blond hair with green eyes.
Ah, Lana, said Palpatine,I glad you finally decided to join us. You will train with Brice in the ways of the force. Escort Brice to his room. Brice and Lana left.
I want Lana to have a force sensitive child, said the Emperor as he turned to Vader in his form chair.
But my master. Why Brice? Do you think that it is-
the Emperor finished,Hah! Vader your mind is like an open book to me. I am aware that you have developed feelings toward my daughter. I would let you, but you are more machine than man. Do you not remember at the ball, when that droid mistook you for one?
Vader turned and left. He passed through the doors of the Emperor's chamber, passed the royal guards, and down the corridor to his shuttle. He boarded it and gazed out the window. He thoughts drifted back to that uneventful evening.
Though, he thought, there was something vaguely familiar about that droid. Never mind, but what about Lana? He asked himself. I have to get her away from here.
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Could I see your room, Lana?
Well, I was going to take a shower, but you can come in if you like.
In Lana's room, Brad explored while Lana took a shower. He looked at her lightsaber. He also found a journal. He read about the latest date Lana had seen Xizor. Where he had asked her to marry him. Brad had been in love with Lana, but now he was not sure. How could she even kiss me? All the while she knew this Xizor had asked to marry her.
Days later, Vader was alone teaching Brad to fight with a lightsaber.
Brad, do you love Lana?
I did.
What happened?
Xizor asked Lana to marry her.
Vader nearly dropped his lightsaber in surprise.
The lesson's over, he said to Brad. Xizor has gone to far this time, he murmured. Vader left Brad and headed toward the shuttle, he again needed to talk again with the Emperor about Xizor.
Xizor, it has come to my attention that you have asked Lana to marry you.
I have my lord, said Xizor with a small bow.
Why did you not see me first on the issue?
I love her, my Emperor.
Well, thankfully for you. I think it is an excellent idea. Have the wedding a month from now.
My lord, do you think that is wise? I mean, shouldn't Lana have her say in it?
Xizor, many cultures force their own offspring to marry, to their own ends or to the family's desire. This is my own desire. Do you wish to marry her or not?
Yes, my lord.
What do you mean I'm getting married? I don't want to marry anyone! Lana exclaimed.
I am sorry Lana, but the Emperor wishes it. And it must be so, said Vader taking a step toward her.
But it wasn't supposed to be this way, she said crying,I wasn't even going to say yes.
Vader stepped close to Lana and hugged her. Lana cried until she at last fell asleep in his arms. I must do something, he thought. Lana, I'm going to miss you, but this is the only way.
Dark Prince, there is a most unusual issue concerning Lord Vader, said Guri, his human replica droid, kneeling.
What is it?
There is an unusual drop in his stock of credits.
That's odd. He hardly ever touches it. Guri, I want you to find out what he's doing.
Yes, my prince.
The next month, Vader was gone. It was said, to a secret planet. Every week he would appear on Coruscant for one day, usually to see Lana. Five days before the wedding, Vader asked Lana to accompany him on his ship to his secret planet.
Lana, pack all your personal things. You will never see any of this again. You won't contact other people. Do not tell anybody about this.
Where are we going?
You will soon find out.
A royal imperial guard entered the Emperor's most private chamber and said,My Emperor, the princess has left a note saying that she has run away. And it says that if you try to find her she will kill herself.
Guri walked into Xizor's private sanctum and said,Lana is missing. She has left a note, saying she ran away. Any attempts to find her and she will kill herself.
On the bridge of the Executor, Lana asked,So Vader, where are we going?
You'll soon find out.
As they approached the planet, Lana stared in awe. They boarded a shuttle and flew down to the planet. They landed, and came down the ramp.
Stay here, said Vader, to the stormtroopers that had accompanied them. As they approached the large door, it opened, revealing a gaping hole. They walked down many long corridors, until they stopped at a particular door. Vader opened it, and they stepped inside. It was lavishly decorated, it was her room. Lana turned to Vader and looked at him for a moment, then suddenly hugged him.
Thank you, Vader.
Your welcome, Lana.
But why?
I love you, and with that Vader took his helmet off. He stepped close and kissed her. They stood there for minutes and finally broke away gasping for breath.
Lana, I've got to go.
Won't I ever see you again?
Lana walked over and sat down on her enormous bed. Vader walked over to her and sat down beside her. Lana started to cry.
What's wrong?
I'm just so happy, cried Lana and hugged him.
Look at me. Lana brought her gaze up to look at Vader. He kissed her again. On her lips, her cheek, her forehead, her neck, and returned to her lips.
Vader, no.
I can't, I, I, I . . . her voice trailed off in silence as he started to kiss her on the neck again.
Vader, this isn't right. He stopped and looked at her.
Very well, but you will soon come to your senses. I shall return within the week, with that he put his helmet back on and stormed out.
Vader, wait! Lana called after him.
But it was too late, he was gone. Now what, Lana thought. Alone in this giant palace built for me, all alone. Well, it's mine, I might as well explore it. And Lana walked toward the door.
Lana was asleep when Vader entered the room. She was in the Jedi Library reading a book on Exar Kun. The most powerful Lord of the Sith. To meet Lana the next time, Vader had donned a new outfit. Which he had already in the castle and had slipped into. When Vader had put it on it was such a strange feeling. He actually felt naked without his armor, though he had dreamed of this moment for so long. But he was the Dark Lord of the Sith, he was one with the dark side, he could withstand anything. Even Lana? Vader had shaken his head and tried to forget it, but the feeling was still there.
His outfit was, of course, black. It was very appropriate: a coarsely woven cloak and cowl, a plain shirt and simple vest, pants and jacket, and knee-high boots. As he had walked in the room, he just looked at her and fell under her spell of beauty. He tried to resist temptation, but he submitted. He dropped his cloak on the floor and walked over to Lana, leaned down and kissed her. Lana's eyes immediately shot open. She brought her legs up and shoved him as hard as she could across the room. She grabbed her lightsaber and chose a fighting stance.
All right, she said,Who are you?
Vader laughed. Lana looked very irritated, suddenly she had a questioning look on her face.
Her expression slid back into irritation,How could you do that?she demanded. I could of hurt you, you have no weapon, and she gestured to his right side.
Vader walked to her again, grabbed her shoulders, and looked into her eyes. Do you really think you could actually hurt me?
I don't know. If it came down to it, maybe, and she turned away. And walked toward a window and looked out.
she spun around,you are everything I ever wanted, but I'm not sure I love you.
Lana, I fell in love with you the first time you were brought to the Emperor. I hadn't felt that way in so long, I couldn't let that feeling go. And I told myself I wouldn't. Lana, I will be here until you give in. Just once, that's all I ask.
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Luke heard a knock on his door, it was Lana.
Luke, I- she began, looking at him. She seemed to find fault in the words. Instead, walked quickly to him. She took his face in her hands and kissed him passionately.
When she finally let go, she said,I have been wanting to do that for so long.
So have I, he replied and bent and kissed her. He felt her arms go around his neck and, responding, slipped his around her waist. They stood there, clung to each other, neither wanting it to end. But when it finally did, she slid her hands around his waist and laid her head on his chest, ever so gently.
Luke, I love you so much. I want to be with you forever.
I love you too.
Luke took Lana's chin and brought it to his face, he kissed her. A long kiss that seemed to go on forever. While this was going on, Luke took a small, black box out of his pocket. When the kiss ended, he said,Lana, will you marry me?
Only if you kiss me again.
Luke smiled and kissed her.
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Okay, new idea. Boba Fett captured Lana to bring her to the Emperor. They talk, Lana gets into Fett's head and asks him about his past. They feel the beginnings of love.
Lana gets delivered. Yadda, yadda, yadda, Lana tells Luke about her past as they search for Fett. Lana gets the planet from Fett, it's his haven that nobody knows about. (He's rich from all those bounties remember.) They have sex, Lana has Michael. Fett and Lana argue, Fett leaves. Wonderful, ain't it?
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K, one more thang, all the crap above in those five pages is all about love or sex or both. None of it actually seems to be genuinely how people act. In fact\ that stuff is so fake, it's DISGUSTING!!! Get my point? LOL.
