I mostly work on this story in school, when I'm bored. By the way, my
friends and me in this story act JUST like we do in real life. Yes. We're
really that insane. (I just put three of them that had read the book with
me, not the ones that just watched the movie)
The number in the little [ ] things lead to an authors note down at the bottom, I figured I'd do that to clarify a few things.
The chapters in this thing are really short, too. I just took every * I made in my notebook and made it start a new chapter.
Mmk? Enjoy!
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CHAPTER 1: Insane.. In the Flesh!
Four girls jumped off a huge yellow bus, squeaking with delight at all the dirt, dust, and tents.
A couple boys with shovels eyed them curiously.
"Oh my gosh, it's just like PARIS!" one of the girls yelled excitedly.
"Grumblesnort," another agreed. The guard with them rolled his eyes and led them into a building. A man sat behind a desk.
"Allyson, it's Mr. Sir!" one of the girls exclaimed, "Camera, Alyce, camera!"
"I'm out of film. I wasted it all on the dirt clods!" Alyce said sadly.
"Well, the dirt clods were very exciting. No worries!" one said sympathetically.
Mr. Sir coughed loudly.
"He's choking on a sunflower seed!"
"Oh no!"
"Call the fire truck!"
"You need people first!"
"I'm NOT choking!" Mr. Sir screamed.
"Alrighty then," one of the girls said. She rocked back and forth.
"Oh, no," another said.
"What, what?" Mr. Sir asked frantically.
"SUGAR RUSH!" the girl that was rocking screamed. All four girls started running in circles for about a minute. Then they stopped. One collapsed to the floor from exhaustion.
"Ok. Can we have our orange suits now?! Can we spray paint a number on them?! I call 12!!" [1]
"Alright," Mr. Sir said uncertainly. He led them into the orange suit place and the girls bit and scratched each other over who got which suit. Finally, after they got their suits on, and Mr. Sir ran off in fright, another man popped his head in the door.
"I want you all to know I respect you," he started. One of the girls screamed, ran up to him, and hugged him.
"Mr. Pendanski!"
"Oooh," Mr. Pendanski said.
"We know your speech by heart! You don't have to repeat it," Alyce said matter-of-factly.
"Alright! I'll show you the D-Tent boys, then!" Mr. Pendanski, obviously glad he had fans, said.
"D-Tent?!" one girl screeched, "We get to be in D-TENT?!"
"Then I suppose you know the boys. I'll be going then, I suppose."
The girls waved to Mr. Pendanski and marched out and to the D-Tent. All the boys were in the tent.
They were Alan, Ricky, Jose, Rex, Theodore, Hector, Brian, and Stanley.
Or Squid, Zigzag, Magnet, X-Ray, Armpit, Zero, Twitch, and Caveman.
The girls introduced themselves to the staring boys. They were Taylor, Alyce, Mary Beth, and Allyson. [2]
Taylor squeaked at Twitch. Twitch squeaked back. It was instant love. [3]
"Alright. Zero isn't supposed to be here. He's supposed to be at home!" Mary Beth declared.
"Oh.. I, um, stole some socks to go with the shoes I stole before and ended up here!" Zero informed everyone.
Alyce fainted, since Zero talked. Mary Beth shrugged.
"Works for me."
Taylor and Twitch kept squeaking at each other. ***
The next part that is supposed to be a chapter is really short, so I'll include it here before I wrap up this chapter.
***
That night they all lay on cots in the crowded tent (there were 12 kids, gosh!).
"Not the luxurious type cots, eh?" Taylor asked Twitch.
"Nope!" Twitch said cheerfully.
Mary Beth leaned off her cot and grabbed a flashlight she had brought.
"It's like that plain place in the ocean," she stuck the flashlight on her head, "The teacher says the fishies use lights to mate," she turned the flashlight on, "I have bioluminescence! I shine my light on you, you fall in love with me!" she shined the flashlight on Magnet. [4]
He fell in love instantly. Literally. He fell off his cot. ***
See? That couldn't have been a chapter.
So I'll do the numbers now.
[1] In gym, we have jerseys. My friends and I always argue over who gets the jersey with 12 on it. I don't know why, it's just some thing we have.
[2] Alright. Taylor is my "fifth cousin by marriage" and.. a good friend. I've known her a long time. Yup. And she is a very slow reader, but she reads everything I write (including this) and loves it. Plus, she faithfully read Holes slowly but surely, and finished. So I HAD to put her in.
Alyce and Allyson are twins. I've known them since second grade. They both read a lot and they're both huge goons. Just like me.
And I'm Mary Beth. I'm just.. odd. Let's put it that way?
[3] Taylor INSISTED she get to fall in love with Twitch. So, much to her unexpectedness, I came up with that silly little easy way out to make them fall in love.
[4] The day I started this (or the day after, I forgot) our teacher taught us about bioluminescence. (for all those Finding Nemo people, the big fish with the light on it when they go down that big black space) She said they use that to mate and whatever ( I forgot what else ) and I told John, William, and Taylor (all who sit nearby) "Oh yea, I'm gonna shine my light on you and you'll fall in loooove" and I HAD to include it somewhere.
Thank you. Have a nice day.
I have plenty more to this story, but I'm not updating till I feel like typing or either I see a sign that at least SOMEBODY likes this.
The number in the little [ ] things lead to an authors note down at the bottom, I figured I'd do that to clarify a few things.
The chapters in this thing are really short, too. I just took every * I made in my notebook and made it start a new chapter.
Mmk? Enjoy!
***
CHAPTER 1: Insane.. In the Flesh!
Four girls jumped off a huge yellow bus, squeaking with delight at all the dirt, dust, and tents.
A couple boys with shovels eyed them curiously.
"Oh my gosh, it's just like PARIS!" one of the girls yelled excitedly.
"Grumblesnort," another agreed. The guard with them rolled his eyes and led them into a building. A man sat behind a desk.
"Allyson, it's Mr. Sir!" one of the girls exclaimed, "Camera, Alyce, camera!"
"I'm out of film. I wasted it all on the dirt clods!" Alyce said sadly.
"Well, the dirt clods were very exciting. No worries!" one said sympathetically.
Mr. Sir coughed loudly.
"He's choking on a sunflower seed!"
"Oh no!"
"Call the fire truck!"
"You need people first!"
"I'm NOT choking!" Mr. Sir screamed.
"Alrighty then," one of the girls said. She rocked back and forth.
"Oh, no," another said.
"What, what?" Mr. Sir asked frantically.
"SUGAR RUSH!" the girl that was rocking screamed. All four girls started running in circles for about a minute. Then they stopped. One collapsed to the floor from exhaustion.
"Ok. Can we have our orange suits now?! Can we spray paint a number on them?! I call 12!!" [1]
"Alright," Mr. Sir said uncertainly. He led them into the orange suit place and the girls bit and scratched each other over who got which suit. Finally, after they got their suits on, and Mr. Sir ran off in fright, another man popped his head in the door.
"I want you all to know I respect you," he started. One of the girls screamed, ran up to him, and hugged him.
"Mr. Pendanski!"
"Oooh," Mr. Pendanski said.
"We know your speech by heart! You don't have to repeat it," Alyce said matter-of-factly.
"Alright! I'll show you the D-Tent boys, then!" Mr. Pendanski, obviously glad he had fans, said.
"D-Tent?!" one girl screeched, "We get to be in D-TENT?!"
"Then I suppose you know the boys. I'll be going then, I suppose."
The girls waved to Mr. Pendanski and marched out and to the D-Tent. All the boys were in the tent.
They were Alan, Ricky, Jose, Rex, Theodore, Hector, Brian, and Stanley.
Or Squid, Zigzag, Magnet, X-Ray, Armpit, Zero, Twitch, and Caveman.
The girls introduced themselves to the staring boys. They were Taylor, Alyce, Mary Beth, and Allyson. [2]
Taylor squeaked at Twitch. Twitch squeaked back. It was instant love. [3]
"Alright. Zero isn't supposed to be here. He's supposed to be at home!" Mary Beth declared.
"Oh.. I, um, stole some socks to go with the shoes I stole before and ended up here!" Zero informed everyone.
Alyce fainted, since Zero talked. Mary Beth shrugged.
"Works for me."
Taylor and Twitch kept squeaking at each other. ***
The next part that is supposed to be a chapter is really short, so I'll include it here before I wrap up this chapter.
***
That night they all lay on cots in the crowded tent (there were 12 kids, gosh!).
"Not the luxurious type cots, eh?" Taylor asked Twitch.
"Nope!" Twitch said cheerfully.
Mary Beth leaned off her cot and grabbed a flashlight she had brought.
"It's like that plain place in the ocean," she stuck the flashlight on her head, "The teacher says the fishies use lights to mate," she turned the flashlight on, "I have bioluminescence! I shine my light on you, you fall in love with me!" she shined the flashlight on Magnet. [4]
He fell in love instantly. Literally. He fell off his cot. ***
See? That couldn't have been a chapter.
So I'll do the numbers now.
[1] In gym, we have jerseys. My friends and I always argue over who gets the jersey with 12 on it. I don't know why, it's just some thing we have.
[2] Alright. Taylor is my "fifth cousin by marriage" and.. a good friend. I've known her a long time. Yup. And she is a very slow reader, but she reads everything I write (including this) and loves it. Plus, she faithfully read Holes slowly but surely, and finished. So I HAD to put her in.
Alyce and Allyson are twins. I've known them since second grade. They both read a lot and they're both huge goons. Just like me.
And I'm Mary Beth. I'm just.. odd. Let's put it that way?
[3] Taylor INSISTED she get to fall in love with Twitch. So, much to her unexpectedness, I came up with that silly little easy way out to make them fall in love.
[4] The day I started this (or the day after, I forgot) our teacher taught us about bioluminescence. (for all those Finding Nemo people, the big fish with the light on it when they go down that big black space) She said they use that to mate and whatever ( I forgot what else ) and I told John, William, and Taylor (all who sit nearby) "Oh yea, I'm gonna shine my light on you and you'll fall in loooove" and I HAD to include it somewhere.
Thank you. Have a nice day.
I have plenty more to this story, but I'm not updating till I feel like typing or either I see a sign that at least SOMEBODY likes this.
