Okay peeps, got some rules for ya! Ya I know, but instead of emailing this
to everyone I'm going to go ahead and post them here (plus it will make my
story look longer! ^_^).
If you would like to get an edited chapter, please email me at sailor_ivy_girl@mail.com with your pen name (or name), the date, the chapter you want edited, and the rating for it to be in. The chapters I post are already rated R but I will edit them so they are rated either PG-13 or PG. I will NOT do G or anything higher then R.
Here are the rules to getting edited chapters: (1) It will take me a while to type another version of a chapter after I have already posted it so please be patient. (2) I will NOT send out any chapters before they are posted. (3) If you are not happy with either my view of ratings or anything I missed (not including spelling or grammar), please email me ASAP and tell me my mistake so I can fix it. (4) If you have a comment, question, etc. you can email me ONLY if it's about the edited chapters. If you read one of my original chapters, you are required to post a review. I will get your email but will probably not respond. (5) Once I edit a chapter, if anyone else asks for that chapter I will give them the same one. I will NOT, under ANY circumstances, write another one. (6) All of the chapters under chapter 5 have been written in PG format. I will NOT edit chapters 1-4 because of this. I also will not edit chapter 5. Nothing is learned in this chapter. The only thing that happens is that Chihiro and Haku have sex.
If you have any other questions, please email me. _______________________________________________ Now on with the story!
Last Time.
"Baby you have to do something! She's your mother!" Lin cried as Yubaba shot energy balls left and right.
"What can I do? She hasn't been listening to me for four years! Ever since Sen left!" Suddenly, it was silent. They all turned to look at Yubaba. She was staring at Chihiro.
She smiled, "Sen. you've come back. Please, save me. Save me from Haku. Please. He's going to kill me. He is I tell you. He and that. that. that blonde." And Yubaba fainted. ____________________________________________________________________________ _
Chapter 7
That Blonde and Maylo
Everyone stared at the sleeping Yubaba. Every now and then she would mutter something about murder, save me, and a blonde.
"I wonder who she's talking about," Chihiro thought aloud.
"Can't you see? It's Cassie. She's the one who brainwashed Haku in the first place. It's got to be her! Plus she brainwashed Baby, which show she's powerful," Maylo protested.
"But we can't accuse her because we don't have any proof. Innocent until proven guilty."
"It's written all over her! Her past, what she's done now, everything points to it!"
"Just because you don't like her Maylo doesn't mean you can blame her for things!"
"Why are you defending her? She tried. no, no, she DID steal Haku away from you! It was a miracle that you broke her spell over him! She's a witch! She's an evil creature!"
"How can you be so unforgiving Maylo! She may have tried to steal Haku from me but she never succeeded and she's not evil! She's just had her heart broken and she now needs some time to herself! She's not bad!" Chihiro was fuming. How could her best friend turn on her? Maylo was quiet. Her head was down and her fists were at her sides; clenched.
Her voice quivered as she asked, "You. you don't believe me do you? Me, the only one who trusted you. and. now you don't trust me?" Chihiro didn't answer. It was silent. Maylo reached up and touched her own cheek. It was cold and wet. wet? Maylo smiled, "You bitch. You're the first one who's made me cry ever since I was little. I promised myself I would never cry again. And now look what you've done. you bitch!" Maylo spun around and dashed out the door.
"Maylo!" Lin cried as she went after her but Baby held her back.
"Let her go. She needs to figure things out by herself."
"Chihiro? Chihiro are you all right?" Haku asked as Chihiro just stood their, staring at where Maylo had just been. She then lowered her head and murmured, "It's over. It's all over."
Cassie smiled a wicked smile as she watched Chihiro and Maylo shout through a mirror. She even started to laugh!
"Oh dear, Maylo's figured it all out. But little Ms. Sen down there thinks I'm just a sweet little girl who not a witch! Ha ha ha! Ya right! How else could I have tricked Haku? And only poor old Maylo realizes the truth! But no one believes her! This is turning out better then I thought!" Cassie cackled with glee, "Oh I must tell Illousa!" And she jumped down off the ledge she was sitting on and hurried to the garden.
When she reached the gardens, she quickly knelt down and pulled a small black gem from her pocket. She dug a small hole in the dirt then placed the gem in hole, then covered it up.
"Caso de mesha for kabast thudeykas moshe day fusa!" Cassie chanted as she raised her hands high and spun in circles. After a moment or two of dancing, she heard the loud crack and quickly dropped to her knees; bowing.
"Hello Master Illousa. I have great news. May I tell you?" Cassie said to the tall dark shadow that had arisen.
"Fine, fine," said a cold, dark, pure evil voice.
Cassie jumped up, "Our plan is going perfectly. Sen has taken the bait. She and Maylo had a huge fight this morning. Sen even got Maylo to cry. Maylo ran off. Sen will be all alone tonight. If we want Maylo to not go after her, we should put our plan into action now."
"Silence! I will tell you when we finish the plan. But you have a good point my servant. We shall do it tonight. But first." The dark creature moved closer to Cassie, "You are starting to break my curse that holds you to me. We'll just have to fix that." A long thin arm stretched out from Illousa and it reached out for Cassie's neck. Cassie slowly backed up, causing the hand to come into the light. It was covered in rings and bracelets. The bracelets dangled together and caused a strange clacking sound. The fingers were long and bony and they slipped around Cassie's neck. Cassie could see Illousa smile evilly before pulling her quickly into the darkness. Up at the bath house, Maylo heard a long, endless scream.
"What was that?" Maylo asked herself. She quickly jumped up and grabbed the bow and arrows that Lin had given her before dashing down towards the bridge. Once there, she scurried towards the forest and when she was halfway in did the scream stopped. Maylo pulled out one arrow and put it next to her bow. She slowly crept forward, listening and watching for any sign of movement. The snap of a twig gave whoever was out in the woods away and Maylo swung around as she saw a large black figure dash through some trees and take to the skies on the back of a giant sphinx. Maylo shot an arrow off at the large creature but it easily dodged it and flew off. Maylo heard someone moan off to her right and while getting out another arrow, slowly crept towards the sound. When she reached a small clearing, she gasped at what the moonlight was showing her. There, in the middle of the moonlit clearing was Cassie, floating. Her eyes were closed and she was much more pale then before. She was so pale that her white dress looked yellow against her skin. The dress clung loosely to her thin body and her curly blonde hair had lost it's curl and was flowing out behind her.
"C-cassie?" Maylo whispered; she found she had lost her voice. Suddenly, Cassie's eyes snapped open. She slowly landed on her feet and turned towards Maylo. Her eyes were dark and an evil smile crossed her face.
"Hello Maylo. Good to see you. I need to go now," and with that Cassie turned and started to walk away.
"Wait a minute!" Maylo cried, "What just happened? Did you scream? Who was that on the sphinx?"
"Too many questions. I have a job to do. And if I don't do it, Master Ill-" Cassie was cut off. She clutched her throat when she found she couldn't breath nor speak.
"Cassie!" Maylo rushed over and dropped her bow and arrow, "Are you okay?"
"Master Illo-" Cassie tried again.
'I've got to tell her. She can save me. She's a priestess,' thought Cassie as she tried once again, "Master Illo-ah!"
'No my dear,' came Illousa's voice, 'You are my puppet. I shall not let you ruin my plan. Say another word and I will kill you on the spot. Now shut up and leave! You have a job to do.'
"Yes. master." Cassie said as she got her breath back.
"Cassie are you alright? What happened? Are you okay? Do I need to call Baby?" Maylo asked as Cassie started breathing again. Suddenly, Cassie stood up and pushed Maylo away.
"Get out of my way. Like I said, I have a job to do. And if anyone interferes they shall die!" Cassie said as she turned to leave (again).
"Wait!" Maylo cried. Cassie turned around only to find a arrow pointed at her chest. Cassie looked from the arrow to Maylo and almost gasped. Maylo's eyes were set, lips pursed, jaw set. She was ready to fire the arrow at any second.
Cassie gulped then said, "Maylo, you think a simple arrow can strike me down? Besides, you wouldn't shoot me even if you had to."
"You can't be to sure about that. And besides, you are not the real Cassie. I could shoot you if I want."
"I'm not the real Cassie? What makes you think that?"
"Because the real Cassie would have broken down by now. Crying and spilling out everything. But you, you started to which means you almost let the real Cassie show. But you're leader, the rider of that sphinx, wouldn't let you even say their name. They have something to hide. And you're going to tell me what."
"I will? I don't see it in my future. And I don't see me telling you in your future so that mean's I'm not supposed to tell." And with that, Cassie disappeared.
Maylo stood there, arrow ready to strike, for a full minute before she let the arrow go and it hit (rather hard) a tree. Maylo fell to her knees.
'Cassie isn't the bad guy. This 'Master Illo' is. She's controlling her. And Cassie was almost able to say her whole name. She's a strong witch. Stronger than I thought. But she's right. I wouldn't shoot her; couldn't shoot her. And now my best friend hates me and we have an evil sorceress on the loose. Oh what am I going to do?!" And Maylo wrapped her arms around her knees, and for the second time since she was little, cried.
To be continued.
Sakura G. FF,SMFA,&G
Sakura G: Well we're going on the 6th page so I think this is a big enough chapter right? I had ~*fun*~ writing this one (usually it's okay but not ~*fun*~). I think you really get to view the. 'real' Maylo. I made it so she got a little emotional but oh well. I hope you guys like it.
Maylo: How could you show my emotions to hundreds of people! I hate you Sakura! ::runs away crying::
Illousa: You made Maylo seem weak, me actually evil for once, and Cassie pretty cool.
Sakura G: ^_^;;;;; Uh Illousa, I don't think I want to be happy about all of that.
Cassie: Am I really a helpless little girl like that?
Illousa and Maylo (who came back): YES!
Sakura G: Okay, okay, let's talk about good things. Now, (1) MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE (or HAPPY HANUKAH!)! YA!!!!! I'M TYPING THIS ON THE 23 BUT YOU WON'T READ IT FOR A WHILE LATER BUT YA!!!!!! (2) I got an email the other day asking how old Cassie is. Well let's see. she can be 13. Chihiro and Maylo are both 14 and Baby's about 500. There ya go star girl! (3) I'm so glad that even though this is an R rated story, people are willing to wait for me to write edited versions! Thank you all so much! I'd just hate to lose you all because of Maylo's big mouth! (Maylo: HEY!) So thank you all!
Well, I guess I'll see you all in chapter 8 (wow, we're on 8 already!)!
***If you have any questions, comments, or flames (but none of you should give me any of those!), please feel free to email me at: sailor_ivy_girl@mail.com or post up a review. Tanks! And if you would like to get any existing chapter edited, just email me!
P.S. This makes it 7 pages! Ya! P.P.S.S. Merry Christmas (or whatever other holidays there are)!
story look longer! ^_^).
If you would like to get an edited chapter, please email me at sailor_ivy_girl@mail.com with your pen name (or name), the date, the chapter you want edited, and the rating for it to be in. The chapters I post are already rated R but I will edit them so they are rated either PG-13 or PG. I will NOT do G or anything higher then R.
Here are the rules to getting edited chapters: (1) It will take me a while to type another version of a chapter after I have already posted it so please be patient. (2) I will NOT send out any chapters before they are posted. (3) If you are not happy with either my view of ratings or anything I missed (not including spelling or grammar), please email me ASAP and tell me my mistake so I can fix it. (4) If you have a comment, question, etc. you can email me ONLY if it's about the edited chapters. If you read one of my original chapters, you are required to post a review. I will get your email but will probably not respond. (5) Once I edit a chapter, if anyone else asks for that chapter I will give them the same one. I will NOT, under ANY circumstances, write another one. (6) All of the chapters under chapter 5 have been written in PG format. I will NOT edit chapters 1-4 because of this. I also will not edit chapter 5. Nothing is learned in this chapter. The only thing that happens is that Chihiro and Haku have sex.
If you have any other questions, please email me. _______________________________________________ Now on with the story!
Last Time.
"Baby you have to do something! She's your mother!" Lin cried as Yubaba shot energy balls left and right.
"What can I do? She hasn't been listening to me for four years! Ever since Sen left!" Suddenly, it was silent. They all turned to look at Yubaba. She was staring at Chihiro.
She smiled, "Sen. you've come back. Please, save me. Save me from Haku. Please. He's going to kill me. He is I tell you. He and that. that. that blonde." And Yubaba fainted. ____________________________________________________________________________ _
Chapter 7
That Blonde and Maylo
Everyone stared at the sleeping Yubaba. Every now and then she would mutter something about murder, save me, and a blonde.
"I wonder who she's talking about," Chihiro thought aloud.
"Can't you see? It's Cassie. She's the one who brainwashed Haku in the first place. It's got to be her! Plus she brainwashed Baby, which show she's powerful," Maylo protested.
"But we can't accuse her because we don't have any proof. Innocent until proven guilty."
"It's written all over her! Her past, what she's done now, everything points to it!"
"Just because you don't like her Maylo doesn't mean you can blame her for things!"
"Why are you defending her? She tried. no, no, she DID steal Haku away from you! It was a miracle that you broke her spell over him! She's a witch! She's an evil creature!"
"How can you be so unforgiving Maylo! She may have tried to steal Haku from me but she never succeeded and she's not evil! She's just had her heart broken and she now needs some time to herself! She's not bad!" Chihiro was fuming. How could her best friend turn on her? Maylo was quiet. Her head was down and her fists were at her sides; clenched.
Her voice quivered as she asked, "You. you don't believe me do you? Me, the only one who trusted you. and. now you don't trust me?" Chihiro didn't answer. It was silent. Maylo reached up and touched her own cheek. It was cold and wet. wet? Maylo smiled, "You bitch. You're the first one who's made me cry ever since I was little. I promised myself I would never cry again. And now look what you've done. you bitch!" Maylo spun around and dashed out the door.
"Maylo!" Lin cried as she went after her but Baby held her back.
"Let her go. She needs to figure things out by herself."
"Chihiro? Chihiro are you all right?" Haku asked as Chihiro just stood their, staring at where Maylo had just been. She then lowered her head and murmured, "It's over. It's all over."
Cassie smiled a wicked smile as she watched Chihiro and Maylo shout through a mirror. She even started to laugh!
"Oh dear, Maylo's figured it all out. But little Ms. Sen down there thinks I'm just a sweet little girl who not a witch! Ha ha ha! Ya right! How else could I have tricked Haku? And only poor old Maylo realizes the truth! But no one believes her! This is turning out better then I thought!" Cassie cackled with glee, "Oh I must tell Illousa!" And she jumped down off the ledge she was sitting on and hurried to the garden.
When she reached the gardens, she quickly knelt down and pulled a small black gem from her pocket. She dug a small hole in the dirt then placed the gem in hole, then covered it up.
"Caso de mesha for kabast thudeykas moshe day fusa!" Cassie chanted as she raised her hands high and spun in circles. After a moment or two of dancing, she heard the loud crack and quickly dropped to her knees; bowing.
"Hello Master Illousa. I have great news. May I tell you?" Cassie said to the tall dark shadow that had arisen.
"Fine, fine," said a cold, dark, pure evil voice.
Cassie jumped up, "Our plan is going perfectly. Sen has taken the bait. She and Maylo had a huge fight this morning. Sen even got Maylo to cry. Maylo ran off. Sen will be all alone tonight. If we want Maylo to not go after her, we should put our plan into action now."
"Silence! I will tell you when we finish the plan. But you have a good point my servant. We shall do it tonight. But first." The dark creature moved closer to Cassie, "You are starting to break my curse that holds you to me. We'll just have to fix that." A long thin arm stretched out from Illousa and it reached out for Cassie's neck. Cassie slowly backed up, causing the hand to come into the light. It was covered in rings and bracelets. The bracelets dangled together and caused a strange clacking sound. The fingers were long and bony and they slipped around Cassie's neck. Cassie could see Illousa smile evilly before pulling her quickly into the darkness. Up at the bath house, Maylo heard a long, endless scream.
"What was that?" Maylo asked herself. She quickly jumped up and grabbed the bow and arrows that Lin had given her before dashing down towards the bridge. Once there, she scurried towards the forest and when she was halfway in did the scream stopped. Maylo pulled out one arrow and put it next to her bow. She slowly crept forward, listening and watching for any sign of movement. The snap of a twig gave whoever was out in the woods away and Maylo swung around as she saw a large black figure dash through some trees and take to the skies on the back of a giant sphinx. Maylo shot an arrow off at the large creature but it easily dodged it and flew off. Maylo heard someone moan off to her right and while getting out another arrow, slowly crept towards the sound. When she reached a small clearing, she gasped at what the moonlight was showing her. There, in the middle of the moonlit clearing was Cassie, floating. Her eyes were closed and she was much more pale then before. She was so pale that her white dress looked yellow against her skin. The dress clung loosely to her thin body and her curly blonde hair had lost it's curl and was flowing out behind her.
"C-cassie?" Maylo whispered; she found she had lost her voice. Suddenly, Cassie's eyes snapped open. She slowly landed on her feet and turned towards Maylo. Her eyes were dark and an evil smile crossed her face.
"Hello Maylo. Good to see you. I need to go now," and with that Cassie turned and started to walk away.
"Wait a minute!" Maylo cried, "What just happened? Did you scream? Who was that on the sphinx?"
"Too many questions. I have a job to do. And if I don't do it, Master Ill-" Cassie was cut off. She clutched her throat when she found she couldn't breath nor speak.
"Cassie!" Maylo rushed over and dropped her bow and arrow, "Are you okay?"
"Master Illo-" Cassie tried again.
'I've got to tell her. She can save me. She's a priestess,' thought Cassie as she tried once again, "Master Illo-ah!"
'No my dear,' came Illousa's voice, 'You are my puppet. I shall not let you ruin my plan. Say another word and I will kill you on the spot. Now shut up and leave! You have a job to do.'
"Yes. master." Cassie said as she got her breath back.
"Cassie are you alright? What happened? Are you okay? Do I need to call Baby?" Maylo asked as Cassie started breathing again. Suddenly, Cassie stood up and pushed Maylo away.
"Get out of my way. Like I said, I have a job to do. And if anyone interferes they shall die!" Cassie said as she turned to leave (again).
"Wait!" Maylo cried. Cassie turned around only to find a arrow pointed at her chest. Cassie looked from the arrow to Maylo and almost gasped. Maylo's eyes were set, lips pursed, jaw set. She was ready to fire the arrow at any second.
Cassie gulped then said, "Maylo, you think a simple arrow can strike me down? Besides, you wouldn't shoot me even if you had to."
"You can't be to sure about that. And besides, you are not the real Cassie. I could shoot you if I want."
"I'm not the real Cassie? What makes you think that?"
"Because the real Cassie would have broken down by now. Crying and spilling out everything. But you, you started to which means you almost let the real Cassie show. But you're leader, the rider of that sphinx, wouldn't let you even say their name. They have something to hide. And you're going to tell me what."
"I will? I don't see it in my future. And I don't see me telling you in your future so that mean's I'm not supposed to tell." And with that, Cassie disappeared.
Maylo stood there, arrow ready to strike, for a full minute before she let the arrow go and it hit (rather hard) a tree. Maylo fell to her knees.
'Cassie isn't the bad guy. This 'Master Illo' is. She's controlling her. And Cassie was almost able to say her whole name. She's a strong witch. Stronger than I thought. But she's right. I wouldn't shoot her; couldn't shoot her. And now my best friend hates me and we have an evil sorceress on the loose. Oh what am I going to do?!" And Maylo wrapped her arms around her knees, and for the second time since she was little, cried.
To be continued.
Sakura G. FF,SMFA,&G
Sakura G: Well we're going on the 6th page so I think this is a big enough chapter right? I had ~*fun*~ writing this one (usually it's okay but not ~*fun*~). I think you really get to view the. 'real' Maylo. I made it so she got a little emotional but oh well. I hope you guys like it.
Maylo: How could you show my emotions to hundreds of people! I hate you Sakura! ::runs away crying::
Illousa: You made Maylo seem weak, me actually evil for once, and Cassie pretty cool.
Sakura G: ^_^;;;;; Uh Illousa, I don't think I want to be happy about all of that.
Cassie: Am I really a helpless little girl like that?
Illousa and Maylo (who came back): YES!
Sakura G: Okay, okay, let's talk about good things. Now, (1) MERRY CHRISTMAS EVERYONE (or HAPPY HANUKAH!)! YA!!!!! I'M TYPING THIS ON THE 23 BUT YOU WON'T READ IT FOR A WHILE LATER BUT YA!!!!!! (2) I got an email the other day asking how old Cassie is. Well let's see. she can be 13. Chihiro and Maylo are both 14 and Baby's about 500. There ya go star girl! (3) I'm so glad that even though this is an R rated story, people are willing to wait for me to write edited versions! Thank you all so much! I'd just hate to lose you all because of Maylo's big mouth! (Maylo: HEY!) So thank you all!
Well, I guess I'll see you all in chapter 8 (wow, we're on 8 already!)!
***If you have any questions, comments, or flames (but none of you should give me any of those!), please feel free to email me at: sailor_ivy_girl@mail.com or post up a review. Tanks! And if you would like to get any existing chapter edited, just email me!
P.S. This makes it 7 pages! Ya! P.P.S.S. Merry Christmas (or whatever other holidays there are)!
