Ok people just a few things to clear up.
The cursing is just because it's in character- we'll keep it down. Sorry if it's offensive to anyone.
Desiree was never bitten by the yellow spotted lizard; it just pounced on her and she fainted from the excitement and sheer terror. Yea.
She wasn't hallucinating at the end of the chapter. The lizard really was sitting next to her. We know. It's weird. You'll see what happens.
And also: this chapter has two parts, so that's why it's extremely short.
And another also: Miss Perfect's Shadow, did you get my email about your character? If you did and sent one to me, I didn't get it. Maybe it got caught in the spam filter.. that happens all the time.
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Chapter 6 (part 1)- Brainstorm
"Where's Desee?" Squid asked, at the beginning of dinner.
"Dunno," said Armpit, though with a mouthful of supposedly food,
it sounded more like: "bdonubno."
"Yeah, I never saw her come back from digging her hole,"
realized Caveman. "I think Armpit scared her away," joked X-ray,
watching Pit chew with an open mouth.
Armpit spit "food" all over the table. Zero happened to be in
the way. Nobody cared. Not even Zero. Weird dude. (A/N sorry
Cookies For Khleo [and other various Zero fans]- no hard feelings,
k?)
"Maybe she's in the tent relaxing," wondered Twitch.
"Maybe she ran away," suggested Magnet.
"If she did I should have gone with her," Squid said dreamily.
"Dream on.." said ZigZag.
"Hey guys, I just thought of something," said Armpit, "We haven't
thought of a nickname for Desiree yet."
"Yeah you're right," said X-ray.
"What should we call her?" asked Caveman.
The boys wondered all the way back to the tent, where they had a
brainstorming session.
X-ray decided that they would go in a circle and say a
nickname each time. He started them off.
X-ray: "Red"
Armpit: "Fire"
Squid: "Angel, hehe 'God? Is that you'"
Magnet: "Música"
Twitch: "Fogg"
ZigZag: "Shortcake (she's a little short)"
Caveman: "Sky, you know, like her eyes"
Zero: "-----"
X-ray: "Pokey" *shrugs*
Armpit: "Taco"
Squid: "Dove"
Magnet: "Robar"
Twitch: "Guard"
ZigZag: "Puzzle"
Caveman: "Catapult"
Zero: "-----"
X-ray: umm.. I can't think of anymore. That's pretty good for now.
"So which one is it, X?" asked ZigZag.
"I'll have to sleep on it," X-ray replied.
When the D-tent boys finally went to bed, they couldn't help
worrying about Desiree. If she wasn't back by morning, the
Warden, Mr. Sir, and Mr. Pendanski would find out that she was
gone.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
alright that was part one of chapter 6. what we're asking is that you guys vote for a nickname for Desiree. If you absolutely DESPISE the choices we thought of, we welcome your ideas.
Remember, its kinda important for you guys to review this time, cuz until we get enough votes, part 2 isn't going up.
Thanks. If your mouse isn't heading for the purple box right now, obviously you must not like the story too much.
Party pooper.
The cursing is just because it's in character- we'll keep it down. Sorry if it's offensive to anyone.
Desiree was never bitten by the yellow spotted lizard; it just pounced on her and she fainted from the excitement and sheer terror. Yea.
She wasn't hallucinating at the end of the chapter. The lizard really was sitting next to her. We know. It's weird. You'll see what happens.
And also: this chapter has two parts, so that's why it's extremely short.
And another also: Miss Perfect's Shadow, did you get my email about your character? If you did and sent one to me, I didn't get it. Maybe it got caught in the spam filter.. that happens all the time.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Chapter 6 (part 1)- Brainstorm
"Where's Desee?" Squid asked, at the beginning of dinner.
"Dunno," said Armpit, though with a mouthful of supposedly food,
it sounded more like: "bdonubno."
"Yeah, I never saw her come back from digging her hole,"
realized Caveman. "I think Armpit scared her away," joked X-ray,
watching Pit chew with an open mouth.
Armpit spit "food" all over the table. Zero happened to be in
the way. Nobody cared. Not even Zero. Weird dude. (A/N sorry
Cookies For Khleo [and other various Zero fans]- no hard feelings,
k?)
"Maybe she's in the tent relaxing," wondered Twitch.
"Maybe she ran away," suggested Magnet.
"If she did I should have gone with her," Squid said dreamily.
"Dream on.." said ZigZag.
"Hey guys, I just thought of something," said Armpit, "We haven't
thought of a nickname for Desiree yet."
"Yeah you're right," said X-ray.
"What should we call her?" asked Caveman.
The boys wondered all the way back to the tent, where they had a
brainstorming session.
X-ray decided that they would go in a circle and say a
nickname each time. He started them off.
X-ray: "Red"
Armpit: "Fire"
Squid: "Angel, hehe 'God? Is that you'"
Magnet: "Música"
Twitch: "Fogg"
ZigZag: "Shortcake (she's a little short)"
Caveman: "Sky, you know, like her eyes"
Zero: "-----"
X-ray: "Pokey" *shrugs*
Armpit: "Taco"
Squid: "Dove"
Magnet: "Robar"
Twitch: "Guard"
ZigZag: "Puzzle"
Caveman: "Catapult"
Zero: "-----"
X-ray: umm.. I can't think of anymore. That's pretty good for now.
"So which one is it, X?" asked ZigZag.
"I'll have to sleep on it," X-ray replied.
When the D-tent boys finally went to bed, they couldn't help
worrying about Desiree. If she wasn't back by morning, the
Warden, Mr. Sir, and Mr. Pendanski would find out that she was
gone.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*
alright that was part one of chapter 6. what we're asking is that you guys vote for a nickname for Desiree. If you absolutely DESPISE the choices we thought of, we welcome your ideas.
Remember, its kinda important for you guys to review this time, cuz until we get enough votes, part 2 isn't going up.
Thanks. If your mouse isn't heading for the purple box right now, obviously you must not like the story too much.
Party pooper.
