I open my eyes
I'm feeling better
Clear is the big sky
The grass is wetter
A gift from Bijou,
A heart charm bracelet,
Tied with ribbon blue,
It's nice to touch it
She loved me, she said
I was glad to hear
So I kissed her head
She tickled my ear.
Thinking of last night,
I am interrupted.
Boss gives me a fright.
My thoughts are disrupted.
He looks very mad,
(Yes, angry he was).
His fur is all bad
Full of dust and fuzz.
"You stole my Bijou!"
He yelled with disgust.
"I can't believe you!
You've betrayed my trust!
"I don't care you're hurt.
Get out of my house!
Go sleep on the dirt!
Board with a mouse!
"Go out on the street!
Good luck with your life.
EARN what you will eat,
Don't steal MY future wife!"
Life was not fair!
I get up to flee
To flee from there.
Now Boss hates me.
Out on the asphalt
I run without sight
It wasn't my fault
She kissed me last night.
I see my friend Maxwell
He had seen me too
He knows I'm not well
Oh how true, how true!
I spill it all out
He listens to it all
He is a friend devout
Helps me when I fall.
Suddenly hands
Come from above!
Suddenly hands
And latex glove!
We attempt to hide
But the hands cup tight
With us inside!
It's dark as night.
We're dropped in a cage
One side is glass though
We're both so afraid
We're in a place we don't know
Then another hamster!
No, two, three, and four!
Three and an elder,
And a baby! One more!
"Where are we?" I say
The elder steps forward
The others make way.
His fur is haggard.
"Utada's Pet Shop"
Is what he replies
'I'm still in some shock'
My scared face implies.
"We must get away!"
I say to my friend
What a bad, bad day
When will it just end?
There's no way out
We're cramped in prison
I sit and I pout
Under sawdust I'm hidden.
(Answering reviews:
G-Unit3: Well, I'm glad to answer your question about what happens next. What happened, in case you didn't catch it because of some bad poetry lines, Boss saw Bijou and Hamtaro kissing and he got really jealous. The next morning, he kicks Hamtaro out, even though the poor dear's just had a terrible experience. On the way from the clubhouse, Hamtaro sees Maxwell, who comforts him. As he is comforting, they are scooped up and put in a pet shop!
Pichu Bros. Fan: Thanks for the thumbs up! If you think it's sad, I've done my job in making a tragedy story! You like the Pichu Brothers? I think they're so cute. Did you watch that mini movie before the Pokemon Movie about Entei? I enjoyed that. Yes, you keep being a Pichu Bros. Fan…yes…*goes into deep thought about when she used to be an extreme Pokemon obsessor*
Sign58: Hi hi, again! The ending seemed mild, but this is gonna be one heck of a bad time for Hamtaro in the next few chapters. He's already lost Laura, been kicked from the clubhouse, and put in a petshop, and in the next chapter-- Atataataaa! You're trying to make me spill the story! Nay, I shan't! ^_^ Meep. I read about half of one of your Lily/James Potter stories, and it's glorious so far! Keep writing! Thanks for your review and your e-mails.
Kera-The-Kero-Lover: Thanks a lot! Yes, I intended it to be sad, and I guess I did an okay job? By the way, I looove your name! Kero the Kero Lover…your name shall be remembered!! If you like Kero, how about reading "Yue: Six Inches" ? It's a comedy featuring Yue, who has been shrunken due to a big accident with the Sakura Cards, and Kero talks a lot, and he even tricks Sakura into being a tree! Er, I'm not too good at explaining it, but if you're interested…
Kyo: Thanks for the compliments! Of course I'll write more! Just give me time, because writing poetry that rhymes is so very frus-ter-ating! And I'm starting to run out of patience because my geometry teacher won't hurry up and grade my test! Once he hands it back, I might be happier, but that's only if I did well. If I didn't, well…I might end up killing Hamtaro in an upcoming chapter. (Hamtaro: Heke?!) Maybe. Well, that's only if I score below a 70%. Yes, that will be the deciding factor of Hamtaro's fate, and I'm serious about that.
butterfly dreaming: Kwee! It's you! Hi hi! I guess my summary did seem like it was talking about a death of one of the Ham Hams, huh? Well, maybe that'll make more people read this. Who knows? I'm happy you are intrigued with my format, and I'll do my best not to disappoint you! I hope you're writing the next chapter of "Take Comfort"! Take care!
Moon Angel5: *eyes sparkle* You were going to put it on your AIM profile? *swoon* That's so nice! Thank you sooooo very much!!! So nice of you!!!!! You're a fan of Hamtaro? I'm kind of a fan. I just started this a long time ago and decided to make a re-make of it in poetry form. I can't count how many times I've needed a rhyming dictionary…
Okay, I'm now taking up space because for some odd reason, there have been giant gaps
between the end of the story and the bottom of the page. I don't like that very much, so I'm taking up a bunch of space. Just in case there is still a gap, I'm sorry in advance.)
