Wow, I'm really moving! hehe. I've been having the opposite of writer's block. lol
Thanks to:
chris-warren876 : Thanks for the review. Brainwashing Ron? There's something I never thought of.
KP Fan(): I updated soon! hehe
KPKrazy400: Yes, I do like to toture Quin. *evil smirk* And yes, you have to stop that evil laughter! You got me doing it!
MC Becky(): I'm glad you like my story. As for romance, yeah, there might be in a certain chapter. (Won't tell ya why. hehe. Gotta read it first - well, that and I gotta write it too!)
On with the long awaited next chapter. (Long awaited? Haha!)
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A sound outside woke Quin. She opened her eyes and discovered she had fallen asleep on the floor underneath the window.
\\How long have I been sleeping here?// Quin asked herself as she stood up, her back cracking as she did.
Another sound made Quin look outside. There she saw a slender figure walking - or rather barley walking - down the sidewalk.
Quin gasped as she ran down the stairs and flung the front door open.
"Kim!" Quin called as she ran up to the other girl. "Kim, what happened?"
"Ron . . ." Kim started as she collapsed in Quin's arms.
"What about Ron?" Quin pressured.
Kim shook her head as she gasped for air.
Quin dragged Kim into her house and struggled up the stairs. Once in her bedroom, Quin set Kim on her bed and grabbed the Kimmunicator out of Kim's pocket.
"Wade." Quin asked.
"Quin? What's wrong?" Wade asked.
"What happened to Kim?!" Quin exclaimed.
"What are you talking about?" Wade asked.
"Well, right at this moment, she's lying on my bed unconscious." Quin told him.
"What happened?" Wade asked.
"I don't know! That's why I called you!" Quin exclaimed angrily. "Didn't you keep in contact with her?!"
"Yeah, but the last time I checked up on her, she was just getting ready to go sneak into a room that she assumed Ron was in." Wade replied. "I didn't want to call her while she was doing it or I could have blown the whole thing!"
Quin hit her head with her hand. "Well something didn't work out! Ron's not here!"
"Quin, settle down." Wade said to her.
"Settle down?! How can I possibly settle down?! Kim's here unconscious, and Ron's still missing! How can I be settle with all that going on?!" Quin yelled.
"It'll be alright, Quin." Wade told her.
"Not if someone doesn't do anything." Quin said. "Wade, where exactly was Ron being kept? Can you give me a map?"
"Sure." Wade replied, then just as the map printed, he looked up. "Wait. You're not going to go try and rescue him are you?"
"I've got to do something!" Quin exclaimed.
"But you agreed that you wouldn't." Wade said.
"That was before Kim came here like she did." Quin replied angrily. "Whether you and Kim like it or not, I'm going to rescue Ron!" she said as she turned off the Kimmunicator and put it back where she got it.
She looked at the map Wade had printed for her. He was in another state, but she wasn't worried about how she was going to get there.
All she had to do was call someone who owed Kim a favor and tell them that she was friends with Kim and that she needed a lift so she could do something for Kim. Easy as that.
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Kim awoke to someone gently shaking her. She opened her eyes and saw Quin's mother standing there.
"Kim? What are you doing here? Where's Quin?" Sarah asked.
Kim rubbed her forehead. "Well, I went to find Ron and I found him. I just wasn't quite able to get him out."
"Well, where's Quin though?" Sarah repeated.
"When I feel asleep, she was here." Kim said.
"Well she's not here now." Sarah replied. "Do you know where she is?"
Kim thought for a moment.
\\No! She didn't . . .// Kim thought, but interrupted herself as she pulled out the Kimmunicator.
"Wade!"
"Kim. I'm glad to see that you're alright." Wade said.
"Do you know where Quin went?" Kim asked.
Wade looked at her hesitantly.
"Wade . . ." Kim warned.
"Well, she decided to go rescue Ron." Wade replied.
"What?! Why didn't you stop her?!" Kim exclaimed.
"I didn't realize what she was doing until she asked me to print a map out for her." Wade said.
"What map?" Kim asked.
"The same map you followed . . ."
". . . to find Ron." Kim finished. "Wade! You're a super-genius! Why didn't you catch on to what she was doing before?!"
"Hey, it's hard to be smart at two A.M.!" Wade retorted. "She'll be alright. I mean, she had to get to Mississippi anyway."
"Um, excuse me." Sarah interrupted. "But I thought I heard her talking to someone about that."
Kim slapped her forehead. "Oh great. She called on a favor! Wade, we've got to stop her now! Drakken's not going to give up Ron when he gets a hold of Quin! He's going to get rid of them both!"
"Alright." Wade said as he worked quickly - faster than he had ever before. "I got you a quick ride. Be ready in like five minutes."
"Thanks Wade." Kim said as she shut off the Kimmunicator. She looked up and saw the worried look on Sarah's face. "Don't worry, I'll get to them."
"Good luck and be careful." Sarah replied.
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Quin crept into the building that was on the map. Ron was here, and she was going to save him . . . or die trying.
She felt a lump rise in her throat. Had it been a mistake to come here alone?
\\Knock it off. You're here. Ron's here. So deal with it.// she scolded herself as she walked quietly inside.
Inside, she could hear Drakken complaining about something.
"How could you let Kim Possible just stroll through here and almost let her take the buffoon?!" he exclaimed.
"Hey, I didn't see you help." Shego retorted.
Quin rolled her eyes and shook her head. \\Were they always this bad? How did I manage to put up with their bickering?//
She sneaked over to a shadowy corner of the room, hoping to catch sight of Ron.
But of course, he wasn't there.
"So, Dr. D., what are we going to do now?" Shego asked.
"What do you mean?" he asked.
"Well, now Kim knows where we're hiding her dopy sidekick and she can come back." Shego explained.
Doctor Drakken didn't seem to comprehend what she meant.
Shego gave an angry sigh and muttered something about how she should have been the evil genius instead of the sidekick. "Listen, Dr. D., Kim can come back . . . she knows where we're at. Are we going to leave?"
"Oh." Drakken replied as he now understood what she was saying. "No, no. She knows that we have the buffoon here and she'll come back - perhaps even with Quin. Even if she doesn't bring Quin, we destroy Kimberly and the buffoon. Then Quin won't have anyone to protect her and we can get her. Besides, she'll feel awful for not helping Kimberly." Drakken said with an evil smirk.
\\Oh, that's low.// Quin thought to herself as she shifted her weight from one foot to the other.
Meanwhile, Shego began to file her nails as Drakken kept blabbing on and on about how brilliant his plan was.
Quin watched Shego file those nails. She put a hand up to the right side of her face, where the scars from her last encounter with Shego were. Those same nails injured Kim and scarred Quin.
Quin felt her blood boil. She knew Drakken and Shego wanted revenge on her, but no one except Quin knew that she wanted revenge on them - and not just them getting thrown into prison. She wanted them to suffer like she had.
"Shego! Go check up on the buffoon." Drakken commanded Shego, breaking Quin's thoughts.
\\Ron. You need to stop thinking about revenge and start thinking about how you're going to help Ron!// Quin thought to herself.
"Go check on him yourself. He's your hostage." Shego replied, not looking up from her hands.
"Fine!" Drakken said as he walked into a room.
\\Well, at least now I know where Ron's at.// Quin commented to herself. She kept a close eye on Drakken until he disappeared completely into the room.
Quin decided to move so that she could see if she could see Ron in that room. Unfortunately, when she moved, she knocked into a long piece of wood that crashed to the floor. Quin ducked into another dark corner and help her breath, waiting for Shego to come at her.
But no one came.
\\Something's not right.// she thought as she peeked out from behind the boxes. Shego wasn't there. \\Where is she?//
Quin soon had her answer. Shego jumped from the top of the boxes and stood in the same direction Quin's back had just been facing.
"Welcome Quin." Shego snarled.
"Let Ron go." Quin replied. Shego laughed. "What's so funny?"
Shego got into a fighting stance. Quin did the same.
But what Shego did next totally caught Quin off guard.
Shego took a couple steps forward and grabbed Quin by the back of the head.
"What are you doing?!" Quin exclaimed as she tried to struggled out of Shego's firm grip.
"Just making sure you're going to be comfortable for your little nap." Shego replied.
"What are you talking about?" Quin asked. Shego's response was to put a rag over her mouth and nose.
"Just take a deep breath." Shego taunted.
Quin knew she couldn't take in a deep breath - if she did, whatever was on the rag would make her pass out. But she had to breath. Quin tried to pull away from the rag, but Shego held it up against her face.
Her lungs burning from the lack of oxygen, Quin took a breath in . . .
. . . then she passed out.
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Oh no. Now what's gonna happen? Is Drakken going to get away with his evil scheme? *in teasing voice* nah na nah na nah nah. I'm not tellin'! *ducks from flying objects thrown toward her by the readers.* Alright! Enough! *brushes herself off. One rotten tomatoe gets thrown at her and hits her in the face* Who threw that?! *sees Liz laughing* It better not have been you! And if it was, don't try to blame your hand! lol
Okay, enough with my weirdness.
Until my next update . . .
Thanks to:
chris-warren876 : Thanks for the review. Brainwashing Ron? There's something I never thought of.
KP Fan(): I updated soon! hehe
KPKrazy400: Yes, I do like to toture Quin. *evil smirk* And yes, you have to stop that evil laughter! You got me doing it!
MC Becky(): I'm glad you like my story. As for romance, yeah, there might be in a certain chapter. (Won't tell ya why. hehe. Gotta read it first - well, that and I gotta write it too!)
On with the long awaited next chapter. (Long awaited? Haha!)
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A sound outside woke Quin. She opened her eyes and discovered she had fallen asleep on the floor underneath the window.
\\How long have I been sleeping here?// Quin asked herself as she stood up, her back cracking as she did.
Another sound made Quin look outside. There she saw a slender figure walking - or rather barley walking - down the sidewalk.
Quin gasped as she ran down the stairs and flung the front door open.
"Kim!" Quin called as she ran up to the other girl. "Kim, what happened?"
"Ron . . ." Kim started as she collapsed in Quin's arms.
"What about Ron?" Quin pressured.
Kim shook her head as she gasped for air.
Quin dragged Kim into her house and struggled up the stairs. Once in her bedroom, Quin set Kim on her bed and grabbed the Kimmunicator out of Kim's pocket.
"Wade." Quin asked.
"Quin? What's wrong?" Wade asked.
"What happened to Kim?!" Quin exclaimed.
"What are you talking about?" Wade asked.
"Well, right at this moment, she's lying on my bed unconscious." Quin told him.
"What happened?" Wade asked.
"I don't know! That's why I called you!" Quin exclaimed angrily. "Didn't you keep in contact with her?!"
"Yeah, but the last time I checked up on her, she was just getting ready to go sneak into a room that she assumed Ron was in." Wade replied. "I didn't want to call her while she was doing it or I could have blown the whole thing!"
Quin hit her head with her hand. "Well something didn't work out! Ron's not here!"
"Quin, settle down." Wade said to her.
"Settle down?! How can I possibly settle down?! Kim's here unconscious, and Ron's still missing! How can I be settle with all that going on?!" Quin yelled.
"It'll be alright, Quin." Wade told her.
"Not if someone doesn't do anything." Quin said. "Wade, where exactly was Ron being kept? Can you give me a map?"
"Sure." Wade replied, then just as the map printed, he looked up. "Wait. You're not going to go try and rescue him are you?"
"I've got to do something!" Quin exclaimed.
"But you agreed that you wouldn't." Wade said.
"That was before Kim came here like she did." Quin replied angrily. "Whether you and Kim like it or not, I'm going to rescue Ron!" she said as she turned off the Kimmunicator and put it back where she got it.
She looked at the map Wade had printed for her. He was in another state, but she wasn't worried about how she was going to get there.
All she had to do was call someone who owed Kim a favor and tell them that she was friends with Kim and that she needed a lift so she could do something for Kim. Easy as that.
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Kim awoke to someone gently shaking her. She opened her eyes and saw Quin's mother standing there.
"Kim? What are you doing here? Where's Quin?" Sarah asked.
Kim rubbed her forehead. "Well, I went to find Ron and I found him. I just wasn't quite able to get him out."
"Well, where's Quin though?" Sarah repeated.
"When I feel asleep, she was here." Kim said.
"Well she's not here now." Sarah replied. "Do you know where she is?"
Kim thought for a moment.
\\No! She didn't . . .// Kim thought, but interrupted herself as she pulled out the Kimmunicator.
"Wade!"
"Kim. I'm glad to see that you're alright." Wade said.
"Do you know where Quin went?" Kim asked.
Wade looked at her hesitantly.
"Wade . . ." Kim warned.
"Well, she decided to go rescue Ron." Wade replied.
"What?! Why didn't you stop her?!" Kim exclaimed.
"I didn't realize what she was doing until she asked me to print a map out for her." Wade said.
"What map?" Kim asked.
"The same map you followed . . ."
". . . to find Ron." Kim finished. "Wade! You're a super-genius! Why didn't you catch on to what she was doing before?!"
"Hey, it's hard to be smart at two A.M.!" Wade retorted. "She'll be alright. I mean, she had to get to Mississippi anyway."
"Um, excuse me." Sarah interrupted. "But I thought I heard her talking to someone about that."
Kim slapped her forehead. "Oh great. She called on a favor! Wade, we've got to stop her now! Drakken's not going to give up Ron when he gets a hold of Quin! He's going to get rid of them both!"
"Alright." Wade said as he worked quickly - faster than he had ever before. "I got you a quick ride. Be ready in like five minutes."
"Thanks Wade." Kim said as she shut off the Kimmunicator. She looked up and saw the worried look on Sarah's face. "Don't worry, I'll get to them."
"Good luck and be careful." Sarah replied.
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Quin crept into the building that was on the map. Ron was here, and she was going to save him . . . or die trying.
She felt a lump rise in her throat. Had it been a mistake to come here alone?
\\Knock it off. You're here. Ron's here. So deal with it.// she scolded herself as she walked quietly inside.
Inside, she could hear Drakken complaining about something.
"How could you let Kim Possible just stroll through here and almost let her take the buffoon?!" he exclaimed.
"Hey, I didn't see you help." Shego retorted.
Quin rolled her eyes and shook her head. \\Were they always this bad? How did I manage to put up with their bickering?//
She sneaked over to a shadowy corner of the room, hoping to catch sight of Ron.
But of course, he wasn't there.
"So, Dr. D., what are we going to do now?" Shego asked.
"What do you mean?" he asked.
"Well, now Kim knows where we're hiding her dopy sidekick and she can come back." Shego explained.
Doctor Drakken didn't seem to comprehend what she meant.
Shego gave an angry sigh and muttered something about how she should have been the evil genius instead of the sidekick. "Listen, Dr. D., Kim can come back . . . she knows where we're at. Are we going to leave?"
"Oh." Drakken replied as he now understood what she was saying. "No, no. She knows that we have the buffoon here and she'll come back - perhaps even with Quin. Even if she doesn't bring Quin, we destroy Kimberly and the buffoon. Then Quin won't have anyone to protect her and we can get her. Besides, she'll feel awful for not helping Kimberly." Drakken said with an evil smirk.
\\Oh, that's low.// Quin thought to herself as she shifted her weight from one foot to the other.
Meanwhile, Shego began to file her nails as Drakken kept blabbing on and on about how brilliant his plan was.
Quin watched Shego file those nails. She put a hand up to the right side of her face, where the scars from her last encounter with Shego were. Those same nails injured Kim and scarred Quin.
Quin felt her blood boil. She knew Drakken and Shego wanted revenge on her, but no one except Quin knew that she wanted revenge on them - and not just them getting thrown into prison. She wanted them to suffer like she had.
"Shego! Go check up on the buffoon." Drakken commanded Shego, breaking Quin's thoughts.
\\Ron. You need to stop thinking about revenge and start thinking about how you're going to help Ron!// Quin thought to herself.
"Go check on him yourself. He's your hostage." Shego replied, not looking up from her hands.
"Fine!" Drakken said as he walked into a room.
\\Well, at least now I know where Ron's at.// Quin commented to herself. She kept a close eye on Drakken until he disappeared completely into the room.
Quin decided to move so that she could see if she could see Ron in that room. Unfortunately, when she moved, she knocked into a long piece of wood that crashed to the floor. Quin ducked into another dark corner and help her breath, waiting for Shego to come at her.
But no one came.
\\Something's not right.// she thought as she peeked out from behind the boxes. Shego wasn't there. \\Where is she?//
Quin soon had her answer. Shego jumped from the top of the boxes and stood in the same direction Quin's back had just been facing.
"Welcome Quin." Shego snarled.
"Let Ron go." Quin replied. Shego laughed. "What's so funny?"
Shego got into a fighting stance. Quin did the same.
But what Shego did next totally caught Quin off guard.
Shego took a couple steps forward and grabbed Quin by the back of the head.
"What are you doing?!" Quin exclaimed as she tried to struggled out of Shego's firm grip.
"Just making sure you're going to be comfortable for your little nap." Shego replied.
"What are you talking about?" Quin asked. Shego's response was to put a rag over her mouth and nose.
"Just take a deep breath." Shego taunted.
Quin knew she couldn't take in a deep breath - if she did, whatever was on the rag would make her pass out. But she had to breath. Quin tried to pull away from the rag, but Shego held it up against her face.
Her lungs burning from the lack of oxygen, Quin took a breath in . . .
. . . then she passed out.
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Oh no. Now what's gonna happen? Is Drakken going to get away with his evil scheme? *in teasing voice* nah na nah na nah nah. I'm not tellin'! *ducks from flying objects thrown toward her by the readers.* Alright! Enough! *brushes herself off. One rotten tomatoe gets thrown at her and hits her in the face* Who threw that?! *sees Liz laughing* It better not have been you! And if it was, don't try to blame your hand! lol
Okay, enough with my weirdness.
Until my next update . . .
