-Yes! I made it to chapter 2, (it's better than chapter 1, I swear!)
***part 2***
It was later that day, a lot later, actually. That evening, I guess.*sigh*, I'm actually not that sure. Well, anyway, I was still at the bar, and it was getting late. That girl, Jaime, plopped down next to me "Hey, um, sorry about back there. I'm not usually like that!" she grinned an enormous grin "but thanks a lot for you're help, I really needed it!" I smiled "No problem." "Uh, well, I hope to see you later. You will be in town for a bit, right?" "I dunno." I said "It depends, I guess. "Well, ok." she said "I'll see be back, Phil." Phil popped up from behind the bar. "Wait a sec, Jaime." he said "Here." He shoved a little piece of paper into her hand. Jaime nodded and ran out of the bar. "It's been a long day" Phil muttered "Long and hot, eh bud!" I looked at him and said. "Oh yeah, it's been a real scorcher, hottest I've ever felt it here." "Yeah, same here." Phil laughed loudly. "I had a bit much too much to drink! Ahahahahahahahahahahaha.." I laughed. Yeah, I was drunk too, but not really drunk. We laughed at nothing for a few minutes, then, I gave him a huge hug "Ghahahahahahahaha.. I love ya, man!" (I told you I was drunk!) We both started sobbing loudly. "Well, maybe I should just leave you two alone for a minute, see if you can pull yourselves together." I looked up. Jaime was standing in the door, stifling a laugh. She had a grocery bag slung over her shoulder, and in her hand was a box of.of.of."DONUTS!!!!!" I screamed. I snatched the box from her hands and started scarfing down the contents. "Hey!" she yelled "Those were MINE!!! Miserable drunk.you owe me $$5!"
I woke up the next morning in a warm bed. I got up and looked around. Apparently I was drunker than I thought. There was puke on the floor near the door. I ran into the bathroom and puked again. After I finally got myself together I went to the door and started down the steps. "'Bout time you woke up!" said a very familiar voice. Jaime. She laughed. "You passed out on the floor in the bar, blondie, so I threw you in the other bedroom. Here," She handed me a mug. "Its coffee, so you can get over that hang- over." I laughed cheerfully. "Thanks a lot, Jaime!" "Phil's still asleep, huh." she asked. "He's here?" I asked. "Yup." she nodded. "Phil, you dummy! You gotta business to run! Get your lazy ass outta bed!" I was wondering for a while how old she was. "Just out of curiosity," I asked "How old are you anyway?" She looked at me kind of surprised. "Oh, that's right," she said "You're not from here." She laughed. "I completely forgot! Oh, well, um, to answer your question, I'm only 15." She grinned. It was my turn to look surprised. "Fif-fifteen!" I shouted, kind of louder than I meant to. "Well, yeah." Jaime said, kind of insulted. "I have to go." She walked out stiffly. "And I want my $$5 for my donuts, you jerk!"
I decided to stay until the next evening. That afternoon I went out into the town. I was extremely surprised to see how tiny that town was. There was only a few houses, a couple of shops, the bar, and a grocery store. I sat down on a bench in the square. "HIYA!!" I jumped up in fear and turned around behind me. Jaime and two other kids her age, 1 boy, 1 girl, were standing behind me. Jaime started laughing. "Hi blondie!" she said. She was holding a ball in her hands. "You look bored. First, I want my money for the donuts, then, we'll let you play, unless you're afraid to get beaten by a few kids." "Me! Get beaten by you three!" I said, mock harshly. I reached in my pocket and handed her the money. "You've got yourself a bet."
Well, that's it for part two. Didja like! Give me your reviews, comments, and most importantly advice! I could really need it!
***part 2***
It was later that day, a lot later, actually. That evening, I guess.*sigh*, I'm actually not that sure. Well, anyway, I was still at the bar, and it was getting late. That girl, Jaime, plopped down next to me "Hey, um, sorry about back there. I'm not usually like that!" she grinned an enormous grin "but thanks a lot for you're help, I really needed it!" I smiled "No problem." "Uh, well, I hope to see you later. You will be in town for a bit, right?" "I dunno." I said "It depends, I guess. "Well, ok." she said "I'll see be back, Phil." Phil popped up from behind the bar. "Wait a sec, Jaime." he said "Here." He shoved a little piece of paper into her hand. Jaime nodded and ran out of the bar. "It's been a long day" Phil muttered "Long and hot, eh bud!" I looked at him and said. "Oh yeah, it's been a real scorcher, hottest I've ever felt it here." "Yeah, same here." Phil laughed loudly. "I had a bit much too much to drink! Ahahahahahahahahahahaha.." I laughed. Yeah, I was drunk too, but not really drunk. We laughed at nothing for a few minutes, then, I gave him a huge hug "Ghahahahahahahaha.. I love ya, man!" (I told you I was drunk!) We both started sobbing loudly. "Well, maybe I should just leave you two alone for a minute, see if you can pull yourselves together." I looked up. Jaime was standing in the door, stifling a laugh. She had a grocery bag slung over her shoulder, and in her hand was a box of.of.of."DONUTS!!!!!" I screamed. I snatched the box from her hands and started scarfing down the contents. "Hey!" she yelled "Those were MINE!!! Miserable drunk.you owe me $$5!"
I woke up the next morning in a warm bed. I got up and looked around. Apparently I was drunker than I thought. There was puke on the floor near the door. I ran into the bathroom and puked again. After I finally got myself together I went to the door and started down the steps. "'Bout time you woke up!" said a very familiar voice. Jaime. She laughed. "You passed out on the floor in the bar, blondie, so I threw you in the other bedroom. Here," She handed me a mug. "Its coffee, so you can get over that hang- over." I laughed cheerfully. "Thanks a lot, Jaime!" "Phil's still asleep, huh." she asked. "He's here?" I asked. "Yup." she nodded. "Phil, you dummy! You gotta business to run! Get your lazy ass outta bed!" I was wondering for a while how old she was. "Just out of curiosity," I asked "How old are you anyway?" She looked at me kind of surprised. "Oh, that's right," she said "You're not from here." She laughed. "I completely forgot! Oh, well, um, to answer your question, I'm only 15." She grinned. It was my turn to look surprised. "Fif-fifteen!" I shouted, kind of louder than I meant to. "Well, yeah." Jaime said, kind of insulted. "I have to go." She walked out stiffly. "And I want my $$5 for my donuts, you jerk!"
I decided to stay until the next evening. That afternoon I went out into the town. I was extremely surprised to see how tiny that town was. There was only a few houses, a couple of shops, the bar, and a grocery store. I sat down on a bench in the square. "HIYA!!" I jumped up in fear and turned around behind me. Jaime and two other kids her age, 1 boy, 1 girl, were standing behind me. Jaime started laughing. "Hi blondie!" she said. She was holding a ball in her hands. "You look bored. First, I want my money for the donuts, then, we'll let you play, unless you're afraid to get beaten by a few kids." "Me! Get beaten by you three!" I said, mock harshly. I reached in my pocket and handed her the money. "You've got yourself a bet."
Well, that's it for part two. Didja like! Give me your reviews, comments, and most importantly advice! I could really need it!
