Hello! My name (penname) is silverfey. I'm MilleniumFalcon's older sister
and editor. Isn't his story great so far? We want to thank Thrawns Girl
for being our first reviewer. Don't worry, Grand Admiral Thrawn is going to
come into play soon enough. *wink*
SF: I totally agree with you, Chiss are completely awesome... I love their blue skin! And their dark hair, and red eyes, and -
MF: Hold it! Chiss are total GEEKS! How can you go on so much about them?!
SF: Chiss are so GORGEOUS!
MF: DON'T LISTEN TO HER!
SF: I think chiss are awesome. Why don't you?
MF: BECAUSE they're BLUE.
SF: SO?
MF: So so?
SF: Da- I mean, MilleniumFalcon, you're just weird. *raspberry*
MF: Oh, great. Very mature.
SF: Moreso than you.
MF: *takes out machine gun* *grins evilly* I know.
SF: AAAHHHH!!! MOM!!!! DANNY'S CRACKED!!!! I MEAN, MILLENIUMFALCON'S CRACKED!!! AHHHHH!!!
*pause*
SF: Wait a minute. Where'd you get a machine gun? *karate chop*
MF: owww... be careful! Are you trying to kill me? I bought it at the dollar store. It was run by bin Ladin's men.
SF: *stares* You're insane. Hiyah!
*crack!*
MF: No, it's true!! I - I'm serious! Wait - what are you doing with that?! No - no, I didn't mean it - I'll never strangle your cheetah rat again, I swear - please - AAAHHHHH!!!
*chair flies off the stage*
*whimper*
SF: Ahem. I'm sorry. Due to technical difficulties, you, the reader, shall not hear from MilleniumFalcon again until the next chapter. Luckily, I know where he hides his manuscript, so you can still read the story while he's... recuperating.
CHISS RULE!
MF: *weakly* Twi'lek are better...
SF: aaarrrrggghhh! YOU'RE STILL ALIVE?!?! Excuse me.
*flamethrower goes off in MF's direction*
*explosion*
Chapter 2
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The place where they landed was a forested area with trees all around them.
(Load your weapons." Zeron said grimly, "The people on this planet are hostile.(
Taking a deep, he finally announced, "Ok, let's go."
They all climbed out of the ship.
(Grand admiral Tisaris, how long will it be until we reach the mountain?(
(About one hour. There is a village before it, so be prepared to blast your way through.(
(Yes, Ma'am.( He said. They walked for miles until finally, they came to the gates that lead to the village.
(Remember, keep your blaster at the ready." Tisaris snapped, drawing her gun from the holster on her side.
"Let's get going."
They entered slowly and cautiously. The place looked deserted; not a soul stirred outside. Suddenly, a door to one of the houses opened and a man with a spear came out growling,
(We don't like strangers in our village. Leave and we might spare your life.( She sneered at the villager. (I am grand admiral Tisaris and I have come to see the mountain that is behind your village.(
(I tell you again, woman of outer worlds, leave now, or we will kill you - and your companions as well." he said menacingly, lifting his spear a little higher. Tisaris realized that more people had come, some armed with bows and some with axes.
(No,( she said flatly.
(Fine. Fool!" He yelled.
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Haha, it's a cliffhanger. ( I'm mean, aren't I? But don't worry, MilleniumFalcon will still post the next chapter. I'm sorry that it's been so long... school's been a bit of a drag for both of us. But he'll be back! (unfortunately) BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
SF: I totally agree with you, Chiss are completely awesome... I love their blue skin! And their dark hair, and red eyes, and -
MF: Hold it! Chiss are total GEEKS! How can you go on so much about them?!
SF: Chiss are so GORGEOUS!
MF: DON'T LISTEN TO HER!
SF: I think chiss are awesome. Why don't you?
MF: BECAUSE they're BLUE.
SF: SO?
MF: So so?
SF: Da- I mean, MilleniumFalcon, you're just weird. *raspberry*
MF: Oh, great. Very mature.
SF: Moreso than you.
MF: *takes out machine gun* *grins evilly* I know.
SF: AAAHHHH!!! MOM!!!! DANNY'S CRACKED!!!! I MEAN, MILLENIUMFALCON'S CRACKED!!! AHHHHH!!!
*pause*
SF: Wait a minute. Where'd you get a machine gun? *karate chop*
MF: owww... be careful! Are you trying to kill me? I bought it at the dollar store. It was run by bin Ladin's men.
SF: *stares* You're insane. Hiyah!
*crack!*
MF: No, it's true!! I - I'm serious! Wait - what are you doing with that?! No - no, I didn't mean it - I'll never strangle your cheetah rat again, I swear - please - AAAHHHHH!!!
*chair flies off the stage*
*whimper*
SF: Ahem. I'm sorry. Due to technical difficulties, you, the reader, shall not hear from MilleniumFalcon again until the next chapter. Luckily, I know where he hides his manuscript, so you can still read the story while he's... recuperating.
CHISS RULE!
MF: *weakly* Twi'lek are better...
SF: aaarrrrggghhh! YOU'RE STILL ALIVE?!?! Excuse me.
*flamethrower goes off in MF's direction*
*explosion*
Chapter 2
+++++
The place where they landed was a forested area with trees all around them.
(Load your weapons." Zeron said grimly, "The people on this planet are hostile.(
Taking a deep, he finally announced, "Ok, let's go."
They all climbed out of the ship.
(Grand admiral Tisaris, how long will it be until we reach the mountain?(
(About one hour. There is a village before it, so be prepared to blast your way through.(
(Yes, Ma'am.( He said. They walked for miles until finally, they came to the gates that lead to the village.
(Remember, keep your blaster at the ready." Tisaris snapped, drawing her gun from the holster on her side.
"Let's get going."
They entered slowly and cautiously. The place looked deserted; not a soul stirred outside. Suddenly, a door to one of the houses opened and a man with a spear came out growling,
(We don't like strangers in our village. Leave and we might spare your life.( She sneered at the villager. (I am grand admiral Tisaris and I have come to see the mountain that is behind your village.(
(I tell you again, woman of outer worlds, leave now, or we will kill you - and your companions as well." he said menacingly, lifting his spear a little higher. Tisaris realized that more people had come, some armed with bows and some with axes.
(No,( she said flatly.
(Fine. Fool!" He yelled.
+++++
Haha, it's a cliffhanger. ( I'm mean, aren't I? But don't worry, MilleniumFalcon will still post the next chapter. I'm sorry that it's been so long... school's been a bit of a drag for both of us. But he'll be back! (unfortunately) BWAHAHAHAHA!!!
