Finding Nemo - At A loss

I thought of a depressing idea for a fanfic and it wasn't leaving me alone, so I decided to write it out and maybe even post it.

After the fishnet incedent, Nemo was found under the net. Marlin hurried over and asked after his son. Nemo was injured by the force of the impact. Marlin was scared that Nemo was not okay, but then Nemo opened his eyes after coughing and looked at his father. "Daddy?" Nemo asked. Marlin was releieved to see that his son was okay.

Little did he know.

Nemo then said "I'm tired." He closed his eyes and went to sleep, Marlin gathered his son and headed home.

Nemo went belly-up the next morning, apparently Nemo had sustained heavy internal damage. Dory was the first to find out about this. Dory tried to shake Nemo awake to go home to the Reef, only to find that nemo wasn't moving.

Then he turned upside-down in the water and Dory knew then what was wrong. When Marling saw his son dead. He shattered and was supposedly never to be the same again. He and Dory took Nemo's body back to the reef and had his funeral the next day.

Two weeks later found a much depressed Marlin in his anemone. Sleepless, and unhappy. Marli couldn't stand living in his anemone anymore. He left his anemone for good the next day, and left with Dory to a new home on the Great Barrier Reef. Marlin found himself in a position he felt he cou;d not escape. But Dory was there for him when he needed cheering up.

Dory and Marlin lived in a small hole on the edge of the Reef. Big enough for the two. Protected by the FEA sharks, Dory and Marlin would never be the same again.

To Marlin Dory was not love, but friendship. Marlin felt since he had already lost Coral and his only surviving son, he was ready to just live secluded from his already unlved live.

Marlin and Dory were friends up to the day they died. They both lived to a ripe old age, with Dory being in a better disposition than Marlin. But somewhere, deep in Marlin's heart. He knew he loved and appreciated Dory for staying with a bitter old fish like himself. He only lived three days after Dory. Marlin, the unhappy and seemingly fruitless old fish, died visiting his son's grave.

THE (very depressing) END

R/r please. I know this was NOT very Finding Nemo, or Pixar-like. (Not Disney-like, but remember that Disney didn't actually make the movie from any aspect. See my site later for why.)

This also seemed to be a very short fic, but its hard to write a fic like this and have it last. I ahve two other fanfics to worry about and this was mostly an idea I wanted to run. Sorry to any Finding Nemo fans who were offended by this fic. I happen to be a very big fan of Finding Nemo, I just wanted to test this idea out. Maybe I should write another Finding Nemo fanfic that will take a lighter tone and be much more humorous. Anyway I apologize again for this fic.