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Professor Servus Snape View (book one)

"O My," thought Servus. Mr. Potter is here at school. As he sat at the dining hall, flash backs of James Potter teasing, bullying and harassing him whenever possible moment occurred. This just made him even angrier the
more he thought of it.
(A day (or two) later in double potions class with Gryffrendor)
"Okay class, I will teach you how to bottle flame, brew glory and put a
stopper in death. But it seems that some of us "ARE NOT PAYING A ATTENTION!" My god thought Servus. What an idiot. Exactly like his father.
"Why Harry Potter, our newest celebrity."
This is great thought Servus.
(After class)
"Mirvea" said Servus "Why hello Servus" said Mirvea.
"Did you see Mr. Potter? He looks exactly like his father."
"O yes, I know" "He obviously didn't study over the summer. He was writing everything that
was important in my class." "O Really" said Mirvea. He did study but he just didn't have that feeling
of his acceptance into the Wizarding world. She knew exactly the reason why. His "family" in the muggle world was quite horrible. The Dursleys were very harsh and very anti-magic. She knew this because of her watching of
Harry over the years. She was right about them fourteen years ago.

"Good Day Mirvea"

"And to you also"
(A couple of months later at midnight)
"Quarrel, I know you're up to something."
"I don't know what you're talking about," said Professor Quarrel
"Just remember where your loyalties lay" Servus commented.
"I...I" said Professor Quarrel.
"Quite" Servus said interrupted
Servus looked around and saw nothing but he swore he heard footsteps.
He reached his hand out to feel for something.
He didn't know that Harry accidentally opposed on them.
"Where do you think your going" Servus said to Quarrel
"I will find what your up to" "Professors I found this in the library. It's still hot. There's a student
out after hours." Filch said.

Later that night

"Did you find anyone" Flitch said to Servus

"No, but I have a gut feeling of who it is"
"What was that Sir?' said Flitch
" Don't worry about it" Servus said

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