I'm just writing to say thanks for everyone's advise and I appreciate it.
I'm reviewing my character and my plot, so hopefully my reviewed version
will come out better and I'm going to work on Tori, the Mary-sue.
Thanks again for the reviews and help.
Helen88126
I'm reviewing my character and my plot, so hopefully my reviewed version
will come out better and I'm going to work on Tori, the Mary-sue.
Thanks again for the reviews and help.
Helen88126
