Hi all, back again. I'm going to try to continue with the story so does any
one want to beta read the first chapter and any later ones if they actually
get written? This is the poem that will go in the 2nd chapter its not quite
done but mostly.
I am a shattered memory Laying low in wait I am the one you look for Rising from the deep I am the queen of legend Waking from my sleep
Shards of me are flying Searching for a place The future is erasing From the last remaining taint An end itself is coming And it might be to late
TO canonkeeper I do apologize for having to use the asterisks to make line breaks but ffn would not keep in the ones I had, so it was that or having it be one huge group of sentences. The grammar part, yes I know grammar is not my strong point that is why I was looking for someone to help me with that. Yes, I did read the third book; I did mention they were married, and well I think I summed up what had happened but I'll do so again, over time after the third book they still loved each other but they were not in love anymore. Ok next thing, the If you don't like it, don't read it was as a if you are against such a pairing (as it definitely seems like you are) not yell at me for it, as you just did. And this is just the first chapter so......
**Isisandshiva**
I am a shattered memory Laying low in wait I am the one you look for Rising from the deep I am the queen of legend Waking from my sleep
Shards of me are flying Searching for a place The future is erasing From the last remaining taint An end itself is coming And it might be to late
TO canonkeeper I do apologize for having to use the asterisks to make line breaks but ffn would not keep in the ones I had, so it was that or having it be one huge group of sentences. The grammar part, yes I know grammar is not my strong point that is why I was looking for someone to help me with that. Yes, I did read the third book; I did mention they were married, and well I think I summed up what had happened but I'll do so again, over time after the third book they still loved each other but they were not in love anymore. Ok next thing, the If you don't like it, don't read it was as a if you are against such a pairing (as it definitely seems like you are) not yell at me for it, as you just did. And this is just the first chapter so......
**Isisandshiva**
