Author Notes for Darkness Unnamed Chapter Five (Please read):
Ohayou readers! Welcome back for chapter five of Darkness Unnamed. I'm a little disappointed with the amount of reviews that I received for chapter Four, I happened to love that chapter and I had to redo the stupid thing so many times…Wahhh I think that I got a total of 6 reviews for that chapter, when on average for the other three I received 15-17 reviews for the first and second ones…I don't know maybe I'm whining but Still... :: sniffles :: I liked that chapter and hoped that you would to.
I'm sick with the flu right now, so don't kill me if this chapter is sent out later than this weekend, I'm just starting on it and its Friday night…so keep your fingers crossed ok! Because you know it takes time to write good stuff…LOL. Oh and another thing, The people in my story will talk some what funny ok since not all people back then were educated on proper speaking patterns. Ex: "I Enishi wills take you backs with I to the shop." Instead of, "I Enishi will take you back with me to the shop." And one more thing or at least I hope, There is what you will most likely call 'lime' in this Chapter so please read responsibly and I'm not one for rape in a story or in real life, it is nothing to be taken lightly and should not be thought of anything else other than evil. The reason Kaoru acts the way she does will slowly be explained in the following chapters as the plot of the story takes shape.
Disclaimer: I do not own Rurouni Kenshin nor do I own any of the other Characters that appear in the Anime, Manga, or OVA's I'm merely a authoress who writes for personal enjoyment and for the enjoyment of my readers. (What few I have) so please don't sue me I'm poor.
~Disturbed Demon Gurl~
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Story Index of Font Styles:
'Italics'- Thinking (other little things in the story)
Bold Italics- Dreams
_________ (across the page) – Scene changes
Some Japanese Words To Know For This Chapter:
Koneko: Kitty/ little cat
Onegai: Please
Kami (Kami-sama): God
Iie: No (if you didn't know this one, I suggest you get some help)
Gomen: Sorry
Gomen Nasai: Very sorry
"Let us endeavor so to live that when we
come to die even the undertaker will be sorry"
-Mark Twain
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Darkness Unnamed Chapter Five
By Disturbed Demon Gurl
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Simple smiles in the dark, little things so new to me…
Darkness all around even if I open my eyes…
Golden glow in front of me, sent of sandalwood invades my mind…
Hardness beneath me, I twist and turn inside myself…
Gasping now for my breath, whispers just beyond my reach…
I lay here now, eyes wide closed, unknown to me the whispers…
Darkness Unnamed
Kaoru groaned and rolled over the hard wood floor beneath her rough against bare skin. She groaned again and reached up to place a cold and damp hand on her throbbing forehead. "Kami-sama what happened to me?" Kaoru's eyes where still closed her head bursting with pain. She squeezed her eyes closed a little tighter as little dots of color swam just inside her vision.
She opened her eyes with a great sigh only to be met with darkness within the space Kaoru was at. The feel of rough wood under Kaoru filtered past the painful haziness in her head and a thought appeared. 'Oh Kami-sama I'm naked, just what the hell happened?' she groped the floor around her before fisting the cotton towel in her hand.
Standing up, a dizzy spell came over Kaoru and she swayed in place, small colorful dots dancing before her eyes. Clutching the towel around her lymph body Kaoru waited for the dizziness to pass, 'I remember taking a bath after saving that woman then I remember getting scared over something…' a small gasp of horror echoed in the dark space around Kaoru.
'Molten gold eyes, emotionless golden eyes Battousai…that's right he was there in the bath house with me he wanted something what I'm not so sure, but what ever it is he has got the wrong person.' Kaoru scrunched up her face, sapphire eyes partly widened. 'Oh Kami-sama did he kill me like I said for him too? Oh Iie Sanosuke-kun what will he think, papa…Gomen.' A solitary tear rolled down her pale face before she wiped it away, now was not the time for tears they could come later.
Looking around in the Darkness of what Kaoru guessed to be a room she whispered, "Is this what it's like in hell?" Her voice was small, scared, and alone in the Dark. The Darkness she could not give name too…Darkness Unnamed. A deep laugh came from somewhere to Kaoru's right the sound echoing loudly in the dark room. "I see that you have wakened up my koneko." The voice was smiling Kaoru decided, just like the greasy face containing it was undoubtedly doing as well.
"Wh…who's there?" her voice was quite, scared.
"Shh koneko don't worry I'm coming to you, it won't be long now." His voice was deep and rough, so unlike Battousai's
"Iie stay back I will not hesitate to hurt you." Kaoru was lying and the man knew it.
"I'm coming for you koneko, don't worry Battousai-san will not mind me playing with you first." It was closer now.
'He said Battousai-san; does that mean this person works for Battousai? Maybe I can use that to my advantage.'
"I don't think that Battousai-san will be happy about you Playing with…" she hesitated, what if he already had one? "With his woman."
The man scoffed, "Battousai's Woman you say? Ha! Battousai-san does not have a woman." He was getting closer the sound of his voice giving Kaoru chills down her spine. "I assure you I am his woman." Kaoru's voice was strong and steady despite the fear she felt inside. 'Kami-sama what am I doing? I shouldn't be telling this person that I'm Battousai's woman, what if tells him that? Oh Kami-sama I should just shut up before I get myself into more trouble.'
The man could smell fear radiating off the young woman before him the smell making him excited. "Well Battousai's Woman tells Battousai-san that I, Enishi Matisheto had fun with you koneko." A deep laughter filled the room as Enishi reached out and grabbed Kaoru's hair yanking her to his chest; his arms securely wrapped around her waist.
Kaoru was breathing hard against Enishi chest the cotton towel around her body barely covering Kaoru's soft pale skin. She felt like a loose woman, like a whore here only for the pleasures of this man, 'for the pleasures of Battousai' Kaoru thought idly as the man kissed the hollow of her throat. Kaoru was trembling from the fear and strange feelings Enishi was causing her body.
The naïve girl in his arms was exciting Enishi even more as he drawled the supple skin of her throat into his mouth. Drawing back some he sucked on her tender flesh to enlighten a soft suppressed moan from Kaoru.
'This shouldn't be happening what are you doing Kaoru, your better than this don't let this man do these things to you, come on Kaoru fight back.' Her thoughts where running wild as Enishi's hands ran down Kaoru's back to cup her bottom. Again Kaoru moaned no matter how hard she tried not too. She could feel a knot start to build in her stomach the ache of it steadily growing.
Enishi smiled against the skin of Kaoru's throat, She was so innocent and yet so responsive to his touch. He flicked out his tongue and ran it along Kaoru's throat to her ear lobe. "I know you want me Koneko, don't hold back just let it all go." Enishi's breath on her sensitive skin sent shivers down Kaoru's spine. She swallowed and whispered in a hoarse voice. "Iie I don't want this I want you to leave me alone Matisheto-san onegai."
He chuckled next to Kaoru's ear, "I'm afraid that your body, that your power says differently my Koneko." Kaoru felt light-head as she tried to push herself away from Enishi. The real Kaoru was starting to show, the Kaoru who didn't like to be pushed around. "Iie Matisheto-san leave me alone you are all crazy, Battousai and you, you're crazy I don't have any power." Heat was flowing from Kaoru but she didn't notice, and she didn't notice she was yelling so loud at Enishi until the shoji on the far side of the room slid open with a violent snap. It was then that Kaoru realized how bad things where really going for her, and how mad Battousai looked as he made his way across the room towards a still Enishi and a very upset Kaoru.
Battousai's eyes glowed gold in the dark room, the light from the hall barely lighting the room enough to see much of anything other than the outline of Kaoru and Enishi's faces and the dark silhouette and glowing eyes of Battousai. He was mad Kaoru could tell by the color of Battousai's eyes they were deep molten gold not the solemn amber his eyes usually were. She blinked, 'How do I know what color Battousai's eyes usually are? Oh right duh Kaoru you only see them almost every night in your dreams.' Kaoru focused her sights on Battousai as he stopped in front of her and Enishi.
Enishi's arms where still wrapped tightly around Kaoru's waist his face part way hidden by her dark hair when Battousai stopped in front of them. Battousai didn't even look at Kaoru as his golden gaze fixed onto Enishi's startled green one. "Why are you in here Enishi? I don't remember giving you permission to be in here with my guest." He tone was clipped and completely unfriendly.
Enishi grinned "Oh so she is only your guest Battousai-san that is strange she told me she was your woman." Kaoru's eyes bulged and she turned her head to try and hide the blush rising on her cheeks with little success. Battousai's face didn't even change and his gaze stayed locked on Enishi. "That doesn't answer my question Enishi, why are you in here?" Battousai's voice sounded colder if that where possible.
Kaoru could feel herself let out a sigh, 'At least Battousai didn't say anything about me telling Enishi I'm his woman.' Battousai's gaze flickered to Kaoru when her soft sigh resounded throughout the room. "I suggest you leave now Enishi before I am forced to find a new vampire to call friend and do tell the rest of the Hitokiri that this woman is off-limits to anyone unless they have a death wish." Kaoru's sapphire stare stayed locked with Battousai's golden one as Enishi released her and hurried out of the room, shoji clicking shut behind him.
Again Kaoru was enveloped in Darkness and again she felt her dreams come back only this time the object of her dreams was standing not three feet in front of the young mortal girl. Battousai blinked in the dark room his eyes adjusting easily enough to the darkness. He could see the fearful looking human in front of him, her large sapphire eyes gazing wonderingly into his. It was perfect, Enishi had somehow gotten the young mortals power to show and he the Hitokiri Battousai intended on finding out how himself.
"I wish to know what Enishi did to you woman." Again his voice was clipped and careless.
Kaoru shivered a little the small cotton bath towel doing nothing to help with the chill of the dark room or the sound of Battousai's cold voice. "I have no reason to tell you what Matisheto-san did to me; it is none of your concern." Her voice came out bitterer than Kaoru had wanted and apparently the same was true for Battousai when his calloused hand reached out and grabbed the dark tresses of Kaoru's hair.
"You are testing my patience woman, tell me what he did now or you will be forced to act upon him what he was to you before I entered." Battousai's voice sounded amused as Kaoru clutched at his hand trying to loosen his grip on her hair. "Iie don't make me, I will tell you…just onegai don't make me…" Kaoru's tough act fell about her as she helplessly pleaded with Battousai.
Battousai smirked and released Kaoru's hair causing the young woman to slam into the wall behind her. "Then speak woman I haven't time for your little games." Kaoru glared at Battousai through the tangled hair covering her face. "I have a name Battousai-san and I expect you to address me properly before I tell you anything."
He gritted his teeth to keep from lashing out at the young woman before him. 'Kami-sama this girl knows how to get on my bad side, damn her for having the power I need if it wasn't for that her blood would have been spilt upon my blade back in that bath house.' Battousai took a deep breath to calm himself before speaking to Kaoru.
"Then tell me girl what is your name?" Battousai's voice still sounded cold but not as much as when he was speaking to Enishi. Kaoru swallowed and stood a little straighter the fabric of the cotton towel catching a little on the wood of the rice paper wall behind her. "My name is Kamiya Kaoru." Battousai could feel his eyes widen a little before he glared at the human before him. "You lie you are not the daughter of Saitou Kamiya captain of the Shinsengumi." His voice was emotionless but his eyes where pools of golden anger.
Kaoru felt nervous, no that didn't even cover it she felt scared, she felt completely venerable too the man before her, to Battousai. "No I do not lie it is true I am the Daughter of Saitou Kamiya of the Shinsengumi and of Tomoe Kamiya of the Inshin Shishi also known as Tomoe Himura." Her strong voice echoed throughout the darkness of the room as Battousai's golden eyes burned into Kaoru's deep hatred just below the surface.
TBC….
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Well I must say I bet you didn't see that one coming now did you? Haha I told you I had some evil twist and turns coming up in the story. I must ask you to totally forget everything about Kenshin's or Battousai past if you are reading my story because this is AU now isn't it? Well isn't it?? Hai it is so nothing will really apply in this story as it does in Rurouni Kenshin Okay. That means Tomoe being Kenshin's dead wife, Enishi being Tomoe brother, Battousai working for the Ishin Shishi, Saitou being Kaoru and Kenshin's worst enemy (really) and a few other things that will be coming up okay. And the connection between Battousai, Saitou, and Tomoe will be explained in Chapter Six. Sorry that this chapter is so damn short, but I was sick and then got Writer's Block and then as I was going over my outline of Chapter Five I noticed that I didn't put in a scene with Sanosuke and Megumi till next chapter, I'm sorry but you will just have to live with this for now okay. I know it isn't much for waiting two damn weeks but It is the best I can do for now. Work, School, homework, and other things get in the way of my writing so please do forgive me. Also I would like to say pay attention to name's of characters including last names okay.
~Disturbed Demon Gurl~
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Review Responses: (What few I have for this Chapter, is my writing really that bad?)
Nanakilover/Brukaoru: I'm really trying with the chapter a week I really am, but I've been sick, and work, along with school…I so sorry that this chapter took so long, it was done last weekend, but I couldn't get it Uploaded till today, I'm so sorry. Thanks for caring But I have a sleeping disorder…I can't sleep easily LOL…
Supersaiyanchicken: Hai Battousai is an evil one…ku ku ku ku ku ku…but we all know that I am too don't we Btousai-kun :: winks :: anyway thanks for reviewing this chapter at least I got one more out of the total of six for chapter four.
Chibi Battousai: LOL Thanks so much and I will congratulate you on a great new review thank you very much Chibi-san ^_^x and I'm glad I could satisfy your Fan fiction needs. That I am!
Wolfgirl13: Wahh Don't sue me please :: begs on the floor :: Look look I have more story see see :: point up at story and sweat drops :: I know it isn't much for waiting two weeks but Chapter six will come out sooner I promise okay…and about the cliffy this time…Well Go ahead and call me evil okay cause I'm the Demon of Cliff Hangers. :: beams ::
Angela: I like it when Kenshin is all evil too (Battousai) that is why I write about him like that… :: grins :: Yeah all kawaii guys are ^^' I will keep writing I promise you that okay so don't worry.
Dragontamer101: That I can not tell you as of yet it would ruin one of the many main plots of the story, lets just say that it is Kaoru he wants….
End Of Review Responses Please Review Again!
You know I was really considering not posting up this chapter for lack of response to Chapter Four…I just don't want to waist my time putting it on FF.net if no one is really reading it…and for the few that are I'm sure that would have been horrible news…but I would of e-mailed the new chapters out…^_^ so please review if you wish to see this story continue on FF.net or else I will stop it.
~Disturbed Demon Gurl~
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Chapter Last Modified On December 26, 2003 @ 10:14 p.m.
