A/N Thank You ,Thank You sooooo much you are all to kind for your reviews
especially superdebook, and treanz-alyce. I am sorry I have been taking so
long to update but evil schoolwork attacked me and I have just got it
tamed. I also apologize for my spelling and the fact that in the chapters
have been hard to read because they were all scrunched up I will change
that here. Once again thank you all for your reviews. I am extremely
grateful Now for the annoying yet necessary disclaimer.
Disclaimer: Ok ,Ok I do not own anything you recognize but the plot is mine don't sue
Alanna mounted her strong tall black mare, which she had named Midnight. It was dawn and a perfect day for the road. . Alanna could hear the birds wake up call as she waited for her mother and father. Finally they came out,
"Finally I was beginning to think that you might have reconsidered taking me to Corus."
"Keep taking and that's what we will do." Kel threatened. Alanna just sighed at this.
"Come on Da we don't have all day!"
"All right I'm coming! Do you have everything you need?" Alanna nodded solemnly "All right then let's go."
It took four uneventful days to get to Corus they spent their nights at inns though once they camped out. All in all it went to slowly for Alanna to bear. On their fourth day before they reached Corus. Kel tried once more to persuade her daughter against her pursuit to become Shang.
"Alanna can we talk please?"
"Sure Ma, what do you want to talk to me about?" Alanna asked suspiciously
"About Shang." Alanna interrupted
"Mama what is so wrong with me going to Shang, if I make it I'll be one of the greatest warriors in the world. Mama please this is what I want to do with my life and I have a feeling that I'm not going to regret this decision." With that she urged Midnight into a gallop to catch up with Dom.
Kel just shook her head with a feeling of pride but also disappointment " Yes but I have a feeling I am."
Kel didn't have time to ponder the situation because after a few minutes Alanna called out.
"Look the palace Da."
"Yes, Yes it's a sight but come on but come on or have you changed your mind about Shang."
"No sir come on I'll race you."
A/N Well what do you think I would love to have suggestions.
Disclaimer: Ok ,Ok I do not own anything you recognize but the plot is mine don't sue
Alanna mounted her strong tall black mare, which she had named Midnight. It was dawn and a perfect day for the road. . Alanna could hear the birds wake up call as she waited for her mother and father. Finally they came out,
"Finally I was beginning to think that you might have reconsidered taking me to Corus."
"Keep taking and that's what we will do." Kel threatened. Alanna just sighed at this.
"Come on Da we don't have all day!"
"All right I'm coming! Do you have everything you need?" Alanna nodded solemnly "All right then let's go."
It took four uneventful days to get to Corus they spent their nights at inns though once they camped out. All in all it went to slowly for Alanna to bear. On their fourth day before they reached Corus. Kel tried once more to persuade her daughter against her pursuit to become Shang.
"Alanna can we talk please?"
"Sure Ma, what do you want to talk to me about?" Alanna asked suspiciously
"About Shang." Alanna interrupted
"Mama what is so wrong with me going to Shang, if I make it I'll be one of the greatest warriors in the world. Mama please this is what I want to do with my life and I have a feeling that I'm not going to regret this decision." With that she urged Midnight into a gallop to catch up with Dom.
Kel just shook her head with a feeling of pride but also disappointment " Yes but I have a feeling I am."
Kel didn't have time to ponder the situation because after a few minutes Alanna called out.
"Look the palace Da."
"Yes, Yes it's a sight but come on but come on or have you changed your mind about Shang."
"No sir come on I'll race you."
A/N Well what do you think I would love to have suggestions.
