Okay, I'm goin' to try to update more often, and make my chapters a little
longer. I happy that people actually muh story.
Kellie: lol. Thanks, and your new story is really cool. You better update it soon!
Natalie: Sorry, this isn't a Will/You. It's a Will's Son/You. It's kinda the same though.
hiya: Nah, Harrington is my attempted at a made up character.
Anna: Thanks, and I hope you got my email.
Lunawolf: I'm not too sure about the storyline myself. –grins- In my visualization, Will's son is quite hot indeed. Heehee. I'm goin' to try to make the chappies longer.
Christina: thanks, I haven't seen much of 'em either.
Sparrows sparrow: I'm sorry I sunk the Pearl, but I had to too go along with my story. I'm thinkin' that Will's son is hot, heehee.
Jessie Rose: Yeah, I'm gonna make em' longer. Thankie.
Tweetyiscool: I'm tryin' to update more, but I'm just lazy.
Spikezblackfire0: Ewwy!! Incestial relationships!!
Now on with the story!
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You and you're father are walking with Will up to his house. You are completely lost on what is happening, but you don't want to ask anything in front of a man you don't know. You begin wondering when you are going to get there, when you see a large house coming up on a hill. As you all walk in, you stare in all around the large foyer.
"Would you like something to drink, miss?" a butler asks as he walks up to you.
"They will not be needing drinks right now, Winston. You are dismissed," Will says as he leads you and your father into a parlor. You see a young woman sitting there on the couch, and she gets up when she sees Will come in. She is looks very beautiful, and is wearing a very elegant gown.
"Hello Will. Hello Jack, what are you doing here?" she asks a little skeptically.
"Me Pearl was attacked in the harbor. Will an' me are talkin' about how we can get back at the bastard who did it."
"William Turner! How could you even think about turning back to piracy? We have a family now! I'm sorry Jack, but I just don't think that Will will be accompanying on this little 'adventure,'" she says in a huff.
"Elizabeth, are you forgetting about how Jack saved your life?" Will replied to his overreacting wife.
"Nah, it be alright Will. I guess me and me daughter will be headed off by ourselves," your father cuts in before any arguing could begin. You're happy to finally be acknowledged in this conversation. The Elizabeth lady looks down at you, and you stare back.
"I didn't even notice her! Jack, I didn't know you had a daughter. Hello, my name is Elizabeth Turner. I'm sorry for my rudeness," she says in a hurry.
"It's alright. It's nice to meet ya Ms. Turner. And don't worry 'bout the rudeness thing. I live on a pirate ship," you reply kindly. You kind of like this lady. She seems nice.
"Elizabeth, please. Jack's our friend, and he needs our help. I'm sure the children won't mind if there father is gone out for a few months," he says. You begin wondering if the boy you were dueling is one of their sons.
"Will! You know that they would mind. They love you, and would feel hurt if you weren't here," Elizabeth seems to be getting angrier with Will.
"I think maybe we should be goin'. It was nice seein' you two," your father says as he takes your arm and drags you toward the door.
"You don't have to leave. You may stay here if you would like. I'm sure the children would love too meet you daughter, Jack. We will discuss the business about your boat later. I will have one of the maids show you two too your quarters," says Elizabeth.
"I'll try to convince her to let me help," you hear Will say hushedly to your father as he ollows Elizabeth.
A young woman comes in and asks your father and you to follow her. As you walk along the hallways, you notice all the paintings and things hanging on the walls. It was a very nice, very large house. The maid stops you and shows you into your room. She and your father walk out, and you stare wide- eyed around your room. It's huge! You had to share part of the Captain's Quarters on the Pearl with your father. You couldn't believe you had your own room.
After a half an hour of jumping around on your bed, you decide to go and look around the house. You weren't sure if you were supposed too, but hey. You're a pirate!
You begin walking through the hallways, hoping you won't get lost. You begin to get bored, so you attempt to find your way into there kitchen. As you are looking, you don't notice a figure approaching you from the opposite direction. You look up, but it's too late.
BAM!
You fall too the ground and rub your head. You're not sure who you ran into, so you look up.
It's the boy you were dueling with earlier!
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Yep, that would be my sad excuse for a cliffhanger. Well, I know it's not very long, and I'm sorry. I promise that the next chapter will be longer.
I hope ya'll like it.
Review!!
Kellie: lol. Thanks, and your new story is really cool. You better update it soon!
Natalie: Sorry, this isn't a Will/You. It's a Will's Son/You. It's kinda the same though.
hiya: Nah, Harrington is my attempted at a made up character.
Anna: Thanks, and I hope you got my email.
Lunawolf: I'm not too sure about the storyline myself. –grins- In my visualization, Will's son is quite hot indeed. Heehee. I'm goin' to try to make the chappies longer.
Christina: thanks, I haven't seen much of 'em either.
Sparrows sparrow: I'm sorry I sunk the Pearl, but I had to too go along with my story. I'm thinkin' that Will's son is hot, heehee.
Jessie Rose: Yeah, I'm gonna make em' longer. Thankie.
Tweetyiscool: I'm tryin' to update more, but I'm just lazy.
Spikezblackfire0: Ewwy!! Incestial relationships!!
Now on with the story!
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You and you're father are walking with Will up to his house. You are completely lost on what is happening, but you don't want to ask anything in front of a man you don't know. You begin wondering when you are going to get there, when you see a large house coming up on a hill. As you all walk in, you stare in all around the large foyer.
"Would you like something to drink, miss?" a butler asks as he walks up to you.
"They will not be needing drinks right now, Winston. You are dismissed," Will says as he leads you and your father into a parlor. You see a young woman sitting there on the couch, and she gets up when she sees Will come in. She is looks very beautiful, and is wearing a very elegant gown.
"Hello Will. Hello Jack, what are you doing here?" she asks a little skeptically.
"Me Pearl was attacked in the harbor. Will an' me are talkin' about how we can get back at the bastard who did it."
"William Turner! How could you even think about turning back to piracy? We have a family now! I'm sorry Jack, but I just don't think that Will will be accompanying on this little 'adventure,'" she says in a huff.
"Elizabeth, are you forgetting about how Jack saved your life?" Will replied to his overreacting wife.
"Nah, it be alright Will. I guess me and me daughter will be headed off by ourselves," your father cuts in before any arguing could begin. You're happy to finally be acknowledged in this conversation. The Elizabeth lady looks down at you, and you stare back.
"I didn't even notice her! Jack, I didn't know you had a daughter. Hello, my name is Elizabeth Turner. I'm sorry for my rudeness," she says in a hurry.
"It's alright. It's nice to meet ya Ms. Turner. And don't worry 'bout the rudeness thing. I live on a pirate ship," you reply kindly. You kind of like this lady. She seems nice.
"Elizabeth, please. Jack's our friend, and he needs our help. I'm sure the children won't mind if there father is gone out for a few months," he says. You begin wondering if the boy you were dueling is one of their sons.
"Will! You know that they would mind. They love you, and would feel hurt if you weren't here," Elizabeth seems to be getting angrier with Will.
"I think maybe we should be goin'. It was nice seein' you two," your father says as he takes your arm and drags you toward the door.
"You don't have to leave. You may stay here if you would like. I'm sure the children would love too meet you daughter, Jack. We will discuss the business about your boat later. I will have one of the maids show you two too your quarters," says Elizabeth.
"I'll try to convince her to let me help," you hear Will say hushedly to your father as he ollows Elizabeth.
A young woman comes in and asks your father and you to follow her. As you walk along the hallways, you notice all the paintings and things hanging on the walls. It was a very nice, very large house. The maid stops you and shows you into your room. She and your father walk out, and you stare wide- eyed around your room. It's huge! You had to share part of the Captain's Quarters on the Pearl with your father. You couldn't believe you had your own room.
After a half an hour of jumping around on your bed, you decide to go and look around the house. You weren't sure if you were supposed too, but hey. You're a pirate!
You begin walking through the hallways, hoping you won't get lost. You begin to get bored, so you attempt to find your way into there kitchen. As you are looking, you don't notice a figure approaching you from the opposite direction. You look up, but it's too late.
BAM!
You fall too the ground and rub your head. You're not sure who you ran into, so you look up.
It's the boy you were dueling with earlier!
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Yep, that would be my sad excuse for a cliffhanger. Well, I know it's not very long, and I'm sorry. I promise that the next chapter will be longer.
I hope ya'll like it.
Review!!
