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Veil of Light
Chapter two: A twisting trail
The next day I slept tell noon. When I finally got up I felt supremely guilty about my sloth ness.
My mother, seeing the guilt written clearly on my face, suggested a walk in the woods near our new house. I thought that a walk would invigorate some energy out of myself.
I smiled gratefully, packed a daypack with the necessities and set of on my bike. Near the trail I parked my bike and locked it onto a near by tree. I walked down the path determined to walk of any sloth I might possess.
Soon I became bored walking on an all to familiar path and stepped of into the green foliage. I made sure to mark stones on the ground so I wouldn't become lost on my way back.
I thought I was so smart marking my path. Boy was I a fool!
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As I proceeded along the trees became more and more dense around me. It was becoming so dark because of the dense treetops that if I hadn't had a watch on I wouldn't have thought it was a little after 2:00P.M. Ahead of me I saw a bright splotch of light I assumed to be the entrance to a clearing.
That clearing became my goal. I was so intent on reaching it at some point that I failed to notice the sudden silence in the treetops around me. If I had noticed this I would have realized something was horribly wrong.
Reaching that patch of sunlight became a desperate race against time. I walked for what felt like hours without coming any closer to that brilliantly bright patch of light. Then all of the sudden it was right before me, like I had passed some test with my determination to reach the sunlight.
What I had thought was an entrance to a clearing turned out to be a very thin veil of sheer material. Behind this veil was the light it was a bright as the sun and as beautiful.
I was about to walk through this thin veil of light, as I decided to call it, when a voice that sounded amused and serious at the same time, a voice that held hope and despair and a voice that held above all power, shouted out "You will do Kelly. You will do!"
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Note: I hope you liked it remember criticism is accepted R/R.
Thanks in advance
Thanks in advance
Veil of Light
Chapter two: A twisting trail
The next day I slept tell noon. When I finally got up I felt supremely guilty about my sloth ness.
My mother, seeing the guilt written clearly on my face, suggested a walk in the woods near our new house. I thought that a walk would invigorate some energy out of myself.
I smiled gratefully, packed a daypack with the necessities and set of on my bike. Near the trail I parked my bike and locked it onto a near by tree. I walked down the path determined to walk of any sloth I might possess.
Soon I became bored walking on an all to familiar path and stepped of into the green foliage. I made sure to mark stones on the ground so I wouldn't become lost on my way back.
I thought I was so smart marking my path. Boy was I a fool!
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
As I proceeded along the trees became more and more dense around me. It was becoming so dark because of the dense treetops that if I hadn't had a watch on I wouldn't have thought it was a little after 2:00P.M. Ahead of me I saw a bright splotch of light I assumed to be the entrance to a clearing.
That clearing became my goal. I was so intent on reaching it at some point that I failed to notice the sudden silence in the treetops around me. If I had noticed this I would have realized something was horribly wrong.
Reaching that patch of sunlight became a desperate race against time. I walked for what felt like hours without coming any closer to that brilliantly bright patch of light. Then all of the sudden it was right before me, like I had passed some test with my determination to reach the sunlight.
What I had thought was an entrance to a clearing turned out to be a very thin veil of sheer material. Behind this veil was the light it was a bright as the sun and as beautiful.
I was about to walk through this thin veil of light, as I decided to call it, when a voice that sounded amused and serious at the same time, a voice that held hope and despair and a voice that held above all power, shouted out "You will do Kelly. You will do!"
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Note: I hope you liked it remember criticism is accepted R/R.
Thanks in advance
