Author's Note: Once again thanks to those of you dedicated readers to
review my troubled works. I really appreciate it. Remember critisism is
greatly appreciated. Tell me if you want anything in specific to happen to
Kelly. I need some suggestions badly I am sorta' stumped.
Thanks in advance
Veil of Light
Chapter Three: Falling from light to darkness
I was about to turn back to turn back, this voice kind of freaked me out a little, when a force pulled me through the veil into light.
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All I saw was light.
I fell through light.
I saw light, breathed light and consumed light.
I had a glow from all the light I had absorbed but I couldn't tell in all the ethereal brightness.
At some point all I felt was light and knew nothing but it.
All my hurts were gone taken and healed by the light until I was made anew.
When I felt I would always be encased in light I fell out of it.
I hit the ground in the center of the clearing as the portal I had fallen through disappeared in a flash of light. That was the last thing I saw before darkness claimed my vision completely.
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Once the darkness had surrounded me completely a figure dressed in clothing strange to me appeared in front of me. He said, in that same powerful voice that had told me not so long ago that I would do, "Hello Kelly I am glad you survived the cleansing very few do but you see a friend of mine needs your help. She is being closed-minded and dose not see what is straight in front of her."
" You! It's you! That Trickster god in the story I was reading. But that is impossible." The last was more to convince myself that him.
"I assure you it is not impossible and Aly needs your help!"
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Note: hope you liked it R/R.
Thanks in advance
Veil of Light
Chapter Three: Falling from light to darkness
I was about to turn back to turn back, this voice kind of freaked me out a little, when a force pulled me through the veil into light.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
All I saw was light.
I fell through light.
I saw light, breathed light and consumed light.
I had a glow from all the light I had absorbed but I couldn't tell in all the ethereal brightness.
At some point all I felt was light and knew nothing but it.
All my hurts were gone taken and healed by the light until I was made anew.
When I felt I would always be encased in light I fell out of it.
I hit the ground in the center of the clearing as the portal I had fallen through disappeared in a flash of light. That was the last thing I saw before darkness claimed my vision completely.
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Once the darkness had surrounded me completely a figure dressed in clothing strange to me appeared in front of me. He said, in that same powerful voice that had told me not so long ago that I would do, "Hello Kelly I am glad you survived the cleansing very few do but you see a friend of mine needs your help. She is being closed-minded and dose not see what is straight in front of her."
" You! It's you! That Trickster god in the story I was reading. But that is impossible." The last was more to convince myself that him.
"I assure you it is not impossible and Aly needs your help!"
*~*~*~*~*~*~*
Note: hope you liked it R/R.
