Alright here's the second chapter. I again am really sorry it took so long
to update. But I promise that it won't be too long between chapters. It'll
be two weeks max., and if I have a chapter done and edited, then it'll
probably be two chapters. Anyway, I hope you enjoy it and do review, its
awesome when readers to that, it makes the author feel wanted.
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter. I'm just a simple teenager who writes as a hobbie and doesn't have any money so don't sue. I don't like Peter so he won't be in the story, and if he does show up it will be brief. The plot is mine and so are the characters you don't recognize. This is my first story so please be nice. R&R plz
Lily Evans
Last time on chapter 1:
"Go, remember, not one step into my room. And whatver you do don't come in here if you hear something fall"
"But why?"
"Just promise me that Rose"
"I...I promise Lily"
"GO"
Chapter 2
"Why is Lily sending her sister outta her room, she looks scared doesn't she?"
"What do you mean Cecile?"
"You guys don't pay attetion to what I say do you? Look at lily's face. She looks like she was expecting something to happen"
"Can anyone hear what she's saying?"
"I can use this so we can hear what they're saying"
"What's that Evelyn?"
"Its a microphone, we can hear what they're saying if you shut up"
"Is it that time again Evelyn?"
"SHUT UP SIRIUS. That's not funny"
"Yeah, Padfoot. You shouldn't bug her when its her time of the month. OWWWWWW, sheez, what did I do Bella?"
"You know what it was about Potter"
"Be careful James. She's getting fed up"
"REMUS"
"What? What did I do?"
"You can't fool anyone with that face Moony"
"And why not PADFOOT?"
"People, we came to surprise Lily not scare her to death."
"Cecile is right guys. I bet Lily's freaked out because of the noise outside her window"
"I agree with Liz. I think we should tell Lily know"
"You guys are no fun."
"Yeah"
"Especially you Bella"
"THAT´S IT POTTER. YOU´RE DEAD!!!"
"Shut up Bella. If Lily hears you you're dead meat do you hear me?"
"Tell him to stop bugging me C!"
"Honestly, you're a bunch of 5 year olds reencarnated in 15 year olds."
"I think you're right Liz. They don't know how to act their age"
"Hey, that's not true!"
"Sure Sirius, whatever"
(A/N: This is Lily's toughts ok? It'll probably be like this: "..." talking and ´...´ thoughts)
´Calm down Lily, its probably nothing. It can't be him can it? No!!! Calm down. Deep breaths. Its not him. He knows its too risky. How can you be so sure? You know he won't, calm down or you're parents will start to suspect.´
Lily took out her wand and walked slowly toward the window, her hand was on the handle when she heard a distinctive voice cry out her name.
"Look at that, Lilykins is coming to the window"
"WHAT????", six voices cried out
"Its true, see, she's walking to the window with her wand in her hand"
"Why didn't you tell us before Elizabeth?"
"Don't call me Elizabeth Sirius, besides, you guys were too busy fighting and when I tried to tell you, you yelled at me"
"Why is she retreating?"
"Don't know, maybe she heard something"
"What's that shadow doing on her doorstep?"
"What shadow?"
"Its gone now I guess"
"What did you see Bella?"
"I just saw a shadow Cecile, its nothing"
"It is something Bella"
"Like what Sirius"
"It could be a robber or something"
"Lets just get into the house and surprise her already, its freezing out here"
"I think Liz is right"
"Since when do you agree with her Remus?"
"Starting today Padfoot my friend"
"How could you Remus??? You knew I was in love with her!!!!!"
"Oh shut up Sirius"
"No, I won't sister dear. OWWWWWWWWWW, ok...ok... I'll stop"
"Are you sure you're Sirius' sister Cecile?"
"Last time I checked but I think my parents adopted him"
"Very funny"
"But its true"
"Whatever, so Jamsie, when are you gonna tell Lils you like her?"
"What????", six pair of voices cried out and turned to look at James, meanwhile, James was ready to kill Sirius for what he was doing.
"What do you mean you like Lily?Why didn't you tell me before?When are you gonna tell her?"
"Whoa, hold it Liz. First of all, I DON´T like her, ok? Sirius is just being Sirius"
"but..."
"WILL YOU PEOPLE SHUT UP ALREADY"
"Jeez, ok"
"Sirius?"
"Fine"
"Bella?"
"ok"
"Remus?"
"sure"
"Evelyn?"
"I wasn't making any noise if you didn't notice"
"I'll take that as a yes, Liz?"
"..."
"uh, Liz?"
"..."
"Earth to Elizabeth Parker"
"huh, w...what?"
"Why didn't you answer?"
"I...uh...I didn't hear you"
"what's up Elizabeth?"
"nothing James why?"
(A/N: I haven't forgotten about Vernon in the room, ok? I'm just trying to find a way to get outta there. Haven't got any ideas yet. If you guys have any please tell me in your reviews.)
"It looks like you were lost in your thoughts, what's the problem now Sirius"
"Nothing Evelyn"
"Uh...Ev, do you have a mirror near you?"
"Yeah, why?"
"I think you should take it out and take a look at your hair"
The words had no longered came out of Cecile's mouth when Evelyn took her mirror out of the pockets of her jacket, she opened and let out a short scream.
"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU GUYS DO TO MY HAIR?"
Evelyn´s beautiful blond hair was no longer blond, instead blue locks were there instead.
"WHO DID IT?"
At this point, James, Sirius, and Remus couldn't stand it any longer and they burst out laughing.
"Which spell did you use this time Sirius?"
"I...I...I used the Pelogeo Viola curse"
"Why me?? God...don't you think I've had enough punishments for tonight. UGH, THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT"
"I think you better let go of James, Evelyn, before he puts another curse on you", Elizabeth whispered in Evelyn´s ear while Evelyn was holding James' robes and was ready to kill him.
"If you want to hurt somebody I suggest you hurt Sirius not James"
"Fine Remus"
"Look on the bright side Ev, Lily will help you IF we ever get to see her"
"When´s she coming back? Do you think Lily will give us something to eat, I'm hungry"
"Is food all you think about Sirius?"
"No, I also think about girls, jokes,quidditch..."
"We get the point Siri, dear"
"Lily?"
"What is it mom?"
"Can you come down for a second, we have something to show you"
"Sure"
Lily backed away from the window and got out of her room quickly, she put her wand in her pocket before she entered the living room. When she got there, she saw the top of a man's head in the chair in front of her, her parents were talking about her and by the look on the conversation, the man knew quite a lot about Lily.
"Lily honey, why didn't you tell us one of your professors were coming today?"
"Uh...I...I guess I forgot"
"Why Lily, are you always like this at school or just at home"
"If you were one of my professors you would know"
"Quite right Lily, quite right"
The stranger stood up and turned around, Lily gasped in surprise when she saw that it was...
"What the hell is taking her so long?"
"Why do you care? You worried or something?"
"No...its... its just that she's been gone for 30 minutes."
"So what"
"Padfoot, Prongs, I think you better pay attention to Eve before she blows"
Sirius and James stopped fighting to look at Evelyn, she was red in the face and there was anger in her eyes.
"Will you listen to my idea now or do you gentleman want more time?"
"That's ok Evelyn darling"
"I agree with Sirius"
"ok, listen up, Bella just got down to see what was taking so long. Meanwhile, one of us has to get into Lily's room and look at what she was laughing about"
"And who is that person that's going to get into Lily's room sister dearest?"
"You of course Sirius."
"Why is that I'm the one that always has to do the dangerous things??"
"Cause you're just so brave and so handsome and so smart Siri darling"
Everyone looks at Evelyn in surprise, mouths hanging open. She just looks at them and smirks, only to blush deeply after realizing what she had just said.
"Anything you want to tell us Eve sweetie?", asks Cecile looking at Evelyn with a wicked glint in her eyes which makes the poor girl shift backwards.
"I...uh...did I say that out loud?"
No sooner had the words left Evelyn's mouth when everyone started laughing. Evelyn pouted and stuck her tongue out at Sirius which started the tongue war while the others watched with amusement.
That's it so far guys. Yes I know, another cliffy *ducks flying tomatoes* I can't help it, I always end chapters like that. I promise that next chapter will be filled with lots of action and you'll know who the mystery person was. Everything will be explained on later chapters. And Lily will soon realize what's so special about her.
*lilykins*
Disclaimer: I don't own Harry Potter. I'm just a simple teenager who writes as a hobbie and doesn't have any money so don't sue. I don't like Peter so he won't be in the story, and if he does show up it will be brief. The plot is mine and so are the characters you don't recognize. This is my first story so please be nice. R&R plz
Lily Evans
Last time on chapter 1:
"Go, remember, not one step into my room. And whatver you do don't come in here if you hear something fall"
"But why?"
"Just promise me that Rose"
"I...I promise Lily"
"GO"
Chapter 2
"Why is Lily sending her sister outta her room, she looks scared doesn't she?"
"What do you mean Cecile?"
"You guys don't pay attetion to what I say do you? Look at lily's face. She looks like she was expecting something to happen"
"Can anyone hear what she's saying?"
"I can use this so we can hear what they're saying"
"What's that Evelyn?"
"Its a microphone, we can hear what they're saying if you shut up"
"Is it that time again Evelyn?"
"SHUT UP SIRIUS. That's not funny"
"Yeah, Padfoot. You shouldn't bug her when its her time of the month. OWWWWWW, sheez, what did I do Bella?"
"You know what it was about Potter"
"Be careful James. She's getting fed up"
"REMUS"
"What? What did I do?"
"You can't fool anyone with that face Moony"
"And why not PADFOOT?"
"People, we came to surprise Lily not scare her to death."
"Cecile is right guys. I bet Lily's freaked out because of the noise outside her window"
"I agree with Liz. I think we should tell Lily know"
"You guys are no fun."
"Yeah"
"Especially you Bella"
"THAT´S IT POTTER. YOU´RE DEAD!!!"
"Shut up Bella. If Lily hears you you're dead meat do you hear me?"
"Tell him to stop bugging me C!"
"Honestly, you're a bunch of 5 year olds reencarnated in 15 year olds."
"I think you're right Liz. They don't know how to act their age"
"Hey, that's not true!"
"Sure Sirius, whatever"
(A/N: This is Lily's toughts ok? It'll probably be like this: "..." talking and ´...´ thoughts)
´Calm down Lily, its probably nothing. It can't be him can it? No!!! Calm down. Deep breaths. Its not him. He knows its too risky. How can you be so sure? You know he won't, calm down or you're parents will start to suspect.´
Lily took out her wand and walked slowly toward the window, her hand was on the handle when she heard a distinctive voice cry out her name.
"Look at that, Lilykins is coming to the window"
"WHAT????", six voices cried out
"Its true, see, she's walking to the window with her wand in her hand"
"Why didn't you tell us before Elizabeth?"
"Don't call me Elizabeth Sirius, besides, you guys were too busy fighting and when I tried to tell you, you yelled at me"
"Why is she retreating?"
"Don't know, maybe she heard something"
"What's that shadow doing on her doorstep?"
"What shadow?"
"Its gone now I guess"
"What did you see Bella?"
"I just saw a shadow Cecile, its nothing"
"It is something Bella"
"Like what Sirius"
"It could be a robber or something"
"Lets just get into the house and surprise her already, its freezing out here"
"I think Liz is right"
"Since when do you agree with her Remus?"
"Starting today Padfoot my friend"
"How could you Remus??? You knew I was in love with her!!!!!"
"Oh shut up Sirius"
"No, I won't sister dear. OWWWWWWWWWW, ok...ok... I'll stop"
"Are you sure you're Sirius' sister Cecile?"
"Last time I checked but I think my parents adopted him"
"Very funny"
"But its true"
"Whatever, so Jamsie, when are you gonna tell Lils you like her?"
"What????", six pair of voices cried out and turned to look at James, meanwhile, James was ready to kill Sirius for what he was doing.
"What do you mean you like Lily?Why didn't you tell me before?When are you gonna tell her?"
"Whoa, hold it Liz. First of all, I DON´T like her, ok? Sirius is just being Sirius"
"but..."
"WILL YOU PEOPLE SHUT UP ALREADY"
"Jeez, ok"
"Sirius?"
"Fine"
"Bella?"
"ok"
"Remus?"
"sure"
"Evelyn?"
"I wasn't making any noise if you didn't notice"
"I'll take that as a yes, Liz?"
"..."
"uh, Liz?"
"..."
"Earth to Elizabeth Parker"
"huh, w...what?"
"Why didn't you answer?"
"I...uh...I didn't hear you"
"what's up Elizabeth?"
"nothing James why?"
(A/N: I haven't forgotten about Vernon in the room, ok? I'm just trying to find a way to get outta there. Haven't got any ideas yet. If you guys have any please tell me in your reviews.)
"It looks like you were lost in your thoughts, what's the problem now Sirius"
"Nothing Evelyn"
"Uh...Ev, do you have a mirror near you?"
"Yeah, why?"
"I think you should take it out and take a look at your hair"
The words had no longered came out of Cecile's mouth when Evelyn took her mirror out of the pockets of her jacket, she opened and let out a short scream.
"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU GUYS DO TO MY HAIR?"
Evelyn´s beautiful blond hair was no longer blond, instead blue locks were there instead.
"WHO DID IT?"
At this point, James, Sirius, and Remus couldn't stand it any longer and they burst out laughing.
"Which spell did you use this time Sirius?"
"I...I...I used the Pelogeo Viola curse"
"Why me?? God...don't you think I've had enough punishments for tonight. UGH, THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT"
"I think you better let go of James, Evelyn, before he puts another curse on you", Elizabeth whispered in Evelyn´s ear while Evelyn was holding James' robes and was ready to kill him.
"If you want to hurt somebody I suggest you hurt Sirius not James"
"Fine Remus"
"Look on the bright side Ev, Lily will help you IF we ever get to see her"
"When´s she coming back? Do you think Lily will give us something to eat, I'm hungry"
"Is food all you think about Sirius?"
"No, I also think about girls, jokes,quidditch..."
"We get the point Siri, dear"
"Lily?"
"What is it mom?"
"Can you come down for a second, we have something to show you"
"Sure"
Lily backed away from the window and got out of her room quickly, she put her wand in her pocket before she entered the living room. When she got there, she saw the top of a man's head in the chair in front of her, her parents were talking about her and by the look on the conversation, the man knew quite a lot about Lily.
"Lily honey, why didn't you tell us one of your professors were coming today?"
"Uh...I...I guess I forgot"
"Why Lily, are you always like this at school or just at home"
"If you were one of my professors you would know"
"Quite right Lily, quite right"
The stranger stood up and turned around, Lily gasped in surprise when she saw that it was...
"What the hell is taking her so long?"
"Why do you care? You worried or something?"
"No...its... its just that she's been gone for 30 minutes."
"So what"
"Padfoot, Prongs, I think you better pay attention to Eve before she blows"
Sirius and James stopped fighting to look at Evelyn, she was red in the face and there was anger in her eyes.
"Will you listen to my idea now or do you gentleman want more time?"
"That's ok Evelyn darling"
"I agree with Sirius"
"ok, listen up, Bella just got down to see what was taking so long. Meanwhile, one of us has to get into Lily's room and look at what she was laughing about"
"And who is that person that's going to get into Lily's room sister dearest?"
"You of course Sirius."
"Why is that I'm the one that always has to do the dangerous things??"
"Cause you're just so brave and so handsome and so smart Siri darling"
Everyone looks at Evelyn in surprise, mouths hanging open. She just looks at them and smirks, only to blush deeply after realizing what she had just said.
"Anything you want to tell us Eve sweetie?", asks Cecile looking at Evelyn with a wicked glint in her eyes which makes the poor girl shift backwards.
"I...uh...did I say that out loud?"
No sooner had the words left Evelyn's mouth when everyone started laughing. Evelyn pouted and stuck her tongue out at Sirius which started the tongue war while the others watched with amusement.
That's it so far guys. Yes I know, another cliffy *ducks flying tomatoes* I can't help it, I always end chapters like that. I promise that next chapter will be filled with lots of action and you'll know who the mystery person was. Everything will be explained on later chapters. And Lily will soon realize what's so special about her.
*lilykins*
