Ok, for once I'm gonna reply to my reviews! GASP! SHOCK! ^^;; So uh...
anyway...
~ fire goddess5: Wh00t! A fellow Rinku fan! Oh, and you got the character!
~ fireygoddess: Well, see now I have chapter 3. So HA! O_o Er anyway, thanks. ^^
~ Flying Whippet: NOOOO! Shishi! Get back! I'll save you! ::pots and pans as armor::
Shishi: Uh... Who's the samurai here? I THINK I can handle myself.
I wouldn't be too sure. These reviewers, try to sway you with there compliments... and they will even sometimes try to intimidate you with flames! ::rereads review:: Oh! You like my story! Yeah, Chuu in an apron was funny. I had fun writing it, so of course I'm going to update it. Yeah, I hope I can get it finished soon... ::blabbers on randomly::
Shishi: Witness the power of reviews...
Disclaimer: I forgot a disclaimer last time, so this counts for both. If anyone tells you they own Yu Yu Hakusho, don't listen to them. They're either fakes, or Yoshihiro Togashi trying to get you to work for him. So don't listen- just tell me where you last saw him. ^.~
Title: Rinku's Slumber Party
Chapter: 3 []
Original Characters: Minako (normally my characters names have meaning, but I just love the sound of this ^^), and
By: Hiei_mi
~~~
I decided to see what was going on. My hand reached out for the table so I could pull myself out of my chair. Containing my curiousity really wasn't my strong point. But it was just some ningen girls. How much trouble could they be? I Walked around the corner to the living room. I had to look up to see one of the girls. I wasn't sure how old she was, maybe 13 or 14? Probably. She had vrown wavy hair. I noticed a glint from the light, showing off her perfectly straight red hilights. Her eyes and shirt matched the dark red to a tee. Her pants were baggy and black. From one of her shoulders hung a gray duffel bag. She was chewing gum and smiling at Mendoo. She turned around, stuck her tongue out at the other girl, and ran up to Mendoo's room, probably to put her stuff away. The other girl looked like the exact oppisite of the first! Her hair was almost white, and it was very long. It was in a braid, similar to Younger Genkai's. She was shorter than me, and probably younger. Her royal blue eyes were wide and bright. She was holding a leather bag in front of her, both hands gripping it tightly. She wore a pale pink, flowing dress that went down to her knees. I had a VERY hard time beleiving that SHE had taken part in the previous argument. She seemed much too sweet and innocent.
"I'll just wait here until Jessie comes back," So the other girl's name was Jessie. I heard a door slam shut from upstairs. It wasn't hard, but enough to be noticed. 'Jessie' came down calm, but she had a glint in her eyes, too.
"What, too afraid to be in the same room as me, huh Lili?!" Obviosuly, Jessie had taken offense in Lili trying to keep the peace.
"NO! Not afraid! More like disgusted, you little bitch!" ...Or not. Maybe Lili wasn'y quite so innocent.
"LITTLE!? You're the size of an 8-year-old!"
"That's because I AM an 8-year-old, baka!"
"Then you'd better wash your mouth out, little lady!" I had stopped paying attention at this point. It was getting pretty stupid, ya know? I glanced over at Mendoo. Our eyes met. She gave an apologetic smile, and ushered the two away. Personally, I wasn't up for getting a bunch of questions asked by the now bustling guest that were slowly filling the old- fashioned living room.
I knocked on the door to Mendoo's room. The other girls had followed me up. I was beginning to feel like I was being stalked. They followed me everywhere. Why don't they make up there mind on there OWN for once. The door sprung open to reveal three girls. Jessie, Lili and Mendoo were staring at us. Actually, only Mendoo was. The other two had moved to the side, and only Mendoo was blocking the way. Jessie leaned down and cupped her hand around Mendoo's ear. She whispered something that sounded like 'move'. That would make sense, so that's probably it. She blinked twice then gasped. She laughed like an idiot. Which, if you haven't figured it out yet, she is.
"Heh heh, sorry about that," Her hand was scratching the back of her neck. I ruled my eyes. She stuck her tongue out and dissapeared. Ok, so she really just ducked down, but didn't realize that. DON'T say it, unless you want to be forever bound with yo-yo strings. My eyes met with a sickeniningly familiar pair of gray ones. I don't think I ever wanted to see another shade of gray for the rest of my life. It was so dull. It's kind of weird, though. HER eyes don't look dull or boring to me. Actually, they're pretty lively. They remind me of a cloud during a thunder storm. You're probably thinking, 'What's so great about a thunder storm?'. Well, don't you think the unpredictability and shock of the lightning zapping a nearby area is interesting, even if it is kinda scarey? Or the rumble and lullaby of the thunder? Or the coolness and agility of the rain? Actually, you're probably right. There's nothing neat about thunder storms, 'cuz there's nothing neat about Mendoo!
"YAY! You don't hate me! Rinku doesn't hate me," Mendoo's perky voice changed my vizion from thunder and lightning and rain to dull, boring eyes. Either way I didn't like the scenery.
"What makes you think that?"
"You didn't push me, or hit me, or anything, so you don't hate me, right!?" Why did she always have to be so happy?!
"Wrong!" I lightly pushed her away from me. She started pouting from behind me. I could feel a lump go down my throat. I realized I was outnumbered. Even if I HAD the sense to have brought my yo-yo's with me, you should never underestimate the power of dumb people in large groups. And ALL girls were dumb. They probably had cooties and other nasty diseases. I didn't want to get sick or killed or tortured. Hey, I'm too young to die! I turned around with reluctance.
"What can I do to make it up to you...?" My voice was monotone. I would really regret this later in my life. Like 15 minutes. Despite my mood, Mendoo and plenty of other girls brightened at all the evil thoughts going through their deprived, sick minds. I gulped, for the second time that night. Lili kind of started a group huddle between the girls. I really DIDN'T want to know what they were saying. Apparently they had decided on what evil torture method to use, because the huddle broke away. Every single face I looked to had a grin on it that could reach from Mercury to Pluto. It reminded me of some american horror movie, the bad-guy some kind of psycho-path. I winced, expecting a chainsaw to appear out of hammer- space. What WAS hammer-space anyway? Actually, I found that out years later, but that's another story. I heard the light padding of only-socked feet walking across the plush white carpet. Mendoo's black hair bounced as she walked up to me. The lighting showed the true blueish shade of her shoulder length hair. Besides a two loose strands in the front, her hair was back in a high pony-tail. The ribbon was dark blue, as was her shirt, which had an orange vest over it. Her shorts were obviously from the boys department. The were knee-length with pockets near the bottom, top and back. They were black and orange with blue zipper-tags. I suddenly blushed at the amount of attention I was paying her.
"Thinking naughty thoughts, rinku?" Jessie hooted from the back. I noticed Mendoo now had a light pink dusting on her nose, too.
"Shut up!" I snapped at her. She yelped but not from my attitude. Apparently Lili had hit her on the back of the head. Jessie was now glaring at her 'friend'.
"Guys, he still has a deal to fulfill, remember?" Mendoo said, for the first time being the reminder, not the reminded. I was half-hopeing they would all forget. But of course, just my luck. They didn't. Then again, with so many people, I had... what, a 10% chance of getting of scotch-free. I think Chuu's sayings are rubbing of on me. Great. I bet he planned this all. Hadn't HE read to see this was 'Unsupervised'? And he wanted to be RESPONSIBLE. I KNEW he couldn't do it. I sighed. When- IF I get back home, there will be nothing but... umm... well, there will be nothing left of my so-called-gaurdian. I'm beginning to think we don't even have citizenship here. I don't think he would have bothered with it. Then again, you probably need papers to enroll in a school. I don't know. My head was starting to hurt. It didn't matter to me anymore. I could see it now. It would be all over the news.
'Rinku Makai - Honor Roll Student... Until He Was Killed By CRAZY
SCHOOLGIRLS! It happened November 2nd at the Rikoona residence. An unsupervised sleepover was being held that night for Mendoo Rikoona's 10th birthday. The only boy, Rinku was already suspicious of the girls. He tried to protect himself from the rampaging girls, but he was unarmed, and outnumbered. His death was undescribable, and tragic. All 13 atandents will be sent to various Juvinile Halls. Mendoo will be sent to the Medical Asylum of Tokyo.'
I'm sure she'd fit in perfectly. Ok, maybe I'm overreacting. I DOUBT she'd want to kill me. I had to remember, this is the same girl that gave me those dreamy looks. Right? Right... I hope.
"You look worried. I have something to calm your nerves. How about... a game of truth or dare?"
~~~
Ok, ok. I know, 'Makai' is a stupid last name. It's all I could think of... -_- Anyway, I don't own Jessie. She's owned by fire goddess5. ^^ Sorry, I couldn't get her personality perfectly. It's hard to have a hiei/yusuke mix. I'm not that skilled.
Shishi: That's just an excuse.
But it's a GOOD excuse. At least I never told my teachers that 'My dog ate my homework'. You don't even have a dog!
Shishi: Hey... it was a last minute thing.
Mm-hmm. That's just what you WANT us to think...!
The Town Idiot,
Ki
~ fire goddess5: Wh00t! A fellow Rinku fan! Oh, and you got the character!
~ fireygoddess: Well, see now I have chapter 3. So HA! O_o Er anyway, thanks. ^^
~ Flying Whippet: NOOOO! Shishi! Get back! I'll save you! ::pots and pans as armor::
Shishi: Uh... Who's the samurai here? I THINK I can handle myself.
I wouldn't be too sure. These reviewers, try to sway you with there compliments... and they will even sometimes try to intimidate you with flames! ::rereads review:: Oh! You like my story! Yeah, Chuu in an apron was funny. I had fun writing it, so of course I'm going to update it. Yeah, I hope I can get it finished soon... ::blabbers on randomly::
Shishi: Witness the power of reviews...
Disclaimer: I forgot a disclaimer last time, so this counts for both. If anyone tells you they own Yu Yu Hakusho, don't listen to them. They're either fakes, or Yoshihiro Togashi trying to get you to work for him. So don't listen- just tell me where you last saw him. ^.~
Title: Rinku's Slumber Party
Chapter: 3 []
Original Characters: Minako (normally my characters names have meaning, but I just love the sound of this ^^), and
By: Hiei_mi
~~~
I decided to see what was going on. My hand reached out for the table so I could pull myself out of my chair. Containing my curiousity really wasn't my strong point. But it was just some ningen girls. How much trouble could they be? I Walked around the corner to the living room. I had to look up to see one of the girls. I wasn't sure how old she was, maybe 13 or 14? Probably. She had vrown wavy hair. I noticed a glint from the light, showing off her perfectly straight red hilights. Her eyes and shirt matched the dark red to a tee. Her pants were baggy and black. From one of her shoulders hung a gray duffel bag. She was chewing gum and smiling at Mendoo. She turned around, stuck her tongue out at the other girl, and ran up to Mendoo's room, probably to put her stuff away. The other girl looked like the exact oppisite of the first! Her hair was almost white, and it was very long. It was in a braid, similar to Younger Genkai's. She was shorter than me, and probably younger. Her royal blue eyes were wide and bright. She was holding a leather bag in front of her, both hands gripping it tightly. She wore a pale pink, flowing dress that went down to her knees. I had a VERY hard time beleiving that SHE had taken part in the previous argument. She seemed much too sweet and innocent.
"I'll just wait here until Jessie comes back," So the other girl's name was Jessie. I heard a door slam shut from upstairs. It wasn't hard, but enough to be noticed. 'Jessie' came down calm, but she had a glint in her eyes, too.
"What, too afraid to be in the same room as me, huh Lili?!" Obviosuly, Jessie had taken offense in Lili trying to keep the peace.
"NO! Not afraid! More like disgusted, you little bitch!" ...Or not. Maybe Lili wasn'y quite so innocent.
"LITTLE!? You're the size of an 8-year-old!"
"That's because I AM an 8-year-old, baka!"
"Then you'd better wash your mouth out, little lady!" I had stopped paying attention at this point. It was getting pretty stupid, ya know? I glanced over at Mendoo. Our eyes met. She gave an apologetic smile, and ushered the two away. Personally, I wasn't up for getting a bunch of questions asked by the now bustling guest that were slowly filling the old- fashioned living room.
I knocked on the door to Mendoo's room. The other girls had followed me up. I was beginning to feel like I was being stalked. They followed me everywhere. Why don't they make up there mind on there OWN for once. The door sprung open to reveal three girls. Jessie, Lili and Mendoo were staring at us. Actually, only Mendoo was. The other two had moved to the side, and only Mendoo was blocking the way. Jessie leaned down and cupped her hand around Mendoo's ear. She whispered something that sounded like 'move'. That would make sense, so that's probably it. She blinked twice then gasped. She laughed like an idiot. Which, if you haven't figured it out yet, she is.
"Heh heh, sorry about that," Her hand was scratching the back of her neck. I ruled my eyes. She stuck her tongue out and dissapeared. Ok, so she really just ducked down, but didn't realize that. DON'T say it, unless you want to be forever bound with yo-yo strings. My eyes met with a sickeniningly familiar pair of gray ones. I don't think I ever wanted to see another shade of gray for the rest of my life. It was so dull. It's kind of weird, though. HER eyes don't look dull or boring to me. Actually, they're pretty lively. They remind me of a cloud during a thunder storm. You're probably thinking, 'What's so great about a thunder storm?'. Well, don't you think the unpredictability and shock of the lightning zapping a nearby area is interesting, even if it is kinda scarey? Or the rumble and lullaby of the thunder? Or the coolness and agility of the rain? Actually, you're probably right. There's nothing neat about thunder storms, 'cuz there's nothing neat about Mendoo!
"YAY! You don't hate me! Rinku doesn't hate me," Mendoo's perky voice changed my vizion from thunder and lightning and rain to dull, boring eyes. Either way I didn't like the scenery.
"What makes you think that?"
"You didn't push me, or hit me, or anything, so you don't hate me, right!?" Why did she always have to be so happy?!
"Wrong!" I lightly pushed her away from me. She started pouting from behind me. I could feel a lump go down my throat. I realized I was outnumbered. Even if I HAD the sense to have brought my yo-yo's with me, you should never underestimate the power of dumb people in large groups. And ALL girls were dumb. They probably had cooties and other nasty diseases. I didn't want to get sick or killed or tortured. Hey, I'm too young to die! I turned around with reluctance.
"What can I do to make it up to you...?" My voice was monotone. I would really regret this later in my life. Like 15 minutes. Despite my mood, Mendoo and plenty of other girls brightened at all the evil thoughts going through their deprived, sick minds. I gulped, for the second time that night. Lili kind of started a group huddle between the girls. I really DIDN'T want to know what they were saying. Apparently they had decided on what evil torture method to use, because the huddle broke away. Every single face I looked to had a grin on it that could reach from Mercury to Pluto. It reminded me of some american horror movie, the bad-guy some kind of psycho-path. I winced, expecting a chainsaw to appear out of hammer- space. What WAS hammer-space anyway? Actually, I found that out years later, but that's another story. I heard the light padding of only-socked feet walking across the plush white carpet. Mendoo's black hair bounced as she walked up to me. The lighting showed the true blueish shade of her shoulder length hair. Besides a two loose strands in the front, her hair was back in a high pony-tail. The ribbon was dark blue, as was her shirt, which had an orange vest over it. Her shorts were obviously from the boys department. The were knee-length with pockets near the bottom, top and back. They were black and orange with blue zipper-tags. I suddenly blushed at the amount of attention I was paying her.
"Thinking naughty thoughts, rinku?" Jessie hooted from the back. I noticed Mendoo now had a light pink dusting on her nose, too.
"Shut up!" I snapped at her. She yelped but not from my attitude. Apparently Lili had hit her on the back of the head. Jessie was now glaring at her 'friend'.
"Guys, he still has a deal to fulfill, remember?" Mendoo said, for the first time being the reminder, not the reminded. I was half-hopeing they would all forget. But of course, just my luck. They didn't. Then again, with so many people, I had... what, a 10% chance of getting of scotch-free. I think Chuu's sayings are rubbing of on me. Great. I bet he planned this all. Hadn't HE read to see this was 'Unsupervised'? And he wanted to be RESPONSIBLE. I KNEW he couldn't do it. I sighed. When- IF I get back home, there will be nothing but... umm... well, there will be nothing left of my so-called-gaurdian. I'm beginning to think we don't even have citizenship here. I don't think he would have bothered with it. Then again, you probably need papers to enroll in a school. I don't know. My head was starting to hurt. It didn't matter to me anymore. I could see it now. It would be all over the news.
'Rinku Makai - Honor Roll Student... Until He Was Killed By CRAZY
SCHOOLGIRLS! It happened November 2nd at the Rikoona residence. An unsupervised sleepover was being held that night for Mendoo Rikoona's 10th birthday. The only boy, Rinku was already suspicious of the girls. He tried to protect himself from the rampaging girls, but he was unarmed, and outnumbered. His death was undescribable, and tragic. All 13 atandents will be sent to various Juvinile Halls. Mendoo will be sent to the Medical Asylum of Tokyo.'
I'm sure she'd fit in perfectly. Ok, maybe I'm overreacting. I DOUBT she'd want to kill me. I had to remember, this is the same girl that gave me those dreamy looks. Right? Right... I hope.
"You look worried. I have something to calm your nerves. How about... a game of truth or dare?"
~~~
Ok, ok. I know, 'Makai' is a stupid last name. It's all I could think of... -_- Anyway, I don't own Jessie. She's owned by fire goddess5. ^^ Sorry, I couldn't get her personality perfectly. It's hard to have a hiei/yusuke mix. I'm not that skilled.
Shishi: That's just an excuse.
But it's a GOOD excuse. At least I never told my teachers that 'My dog ate my homework'. You don't even have a dog!
Shishi: Hey... it was a last minute thing.
Mm-hmm. That's just what you WANT us to think...!
The Town Idiot,
Ki
