Hey people, here's the third chapter, hope you enjoy. Please review!
So far, it says I only have 3. O_o; 3?! I mean, Jeez, people. My WORST
story ever got at least 8 reviews! And this is a million times better
than THAT story [Kagume]. I would of cut off my story by now, but I
already have 28 pages written up manually. [Right now I'm writing a
fluffy part in the story. /\ _ /\ hehe. Yay for Fluffy-ness. ] I
suppose it's the short length. I'm not that worried, considering that
there shall be a lot of chapters. Well, thank you anyway, loyal
reviews. [3!?] Better than no one, hm? I need to advertise my story a
little more. Mew.
I was really expecting more since this is a Sesshoumaru x Rin fic..
Anyways.
Okay, now something to explain would be that now, Sesshoumaru has 2
arms. Remember when InuYasha first got the Tetsusaiga? Yes, poor,
poor, poor, Sesshoumaru. And you figure Kagome and InuYasha ran off
who knows where with the Shikon no Tama completed, and Sesshoumaru
can't hold together a fake arm with a shard. Let's just all say that a
youkai* like Sesshoumaru regenerates. How on Earth will we be able to
have our so-called "Fluffy" moments when Fluffy only has one arm!?
.okay. Yeah. I'm done.
*Translations for words below:
Youkai: Demon(s)
Yukata: A lighter summer kimono, made from cotton.
Hai: Yes [You should know this one] Baka: Stupid, idiot, etc. [You should most definitely know this one]
Sama: Lord, Lady, depending on gender [Also one you should know,
especially in Sesshoumaru fics!!]
Daimyo: A feudal lord(s)
Chan: Suffix for when referring to [mainly] girls of equal or lower
status. Used for friends that are girls, or a girlfriend. It can also
be used to mean 'Little Girl'. Like "Neko-Chan", meaning "Little cat-
girl."
Miko: priestess(s)
Sakura: Cherry Blossom(s)
Extra note: Japanese words don't have plurals. The plural of kimono is
kimono. Same with all of the words.
=====================================================
Chapter 3: Impending Decisions Under the Cherry Blossoms
Part 5: Push: Rin
Rin walked down the path through the village, watching the children
play, young men practice their hunting skills, and the young women
talking amongst themselves up ahead. Rin looked tiredly at the happy
and carefree villagers her age. She wasn't jealous anymore, just sick
of it. She approached three girls that she knew and decided to not
bring anything up.
'Just walk Rin.' she thought. The three girls had known Rin since the
first day she arrived, and they still acted all the same.
'Like little brats.' Rin thought. Today they wore simple and plain
blue yukata* with their hair tied back. For girls such as Yomi, Haru,
and Usa, the peach silk kimono was a fabulous luxury, as was marrying
Taroku. Rin was now within a meter of the girls, who had their arms
crossed, and a disgusted look upon their faces. Rin kept looking
forward and started to walk past them when, Yomi spoke.
"Rin," she spat. Rin looked to the ground as she paused.
".Hai*?" Rin asked. She looked over at them. The girls glared with
jealousy and absolute hatred.
"What the hell do you think you're doing?" Yomi said. Rin glared back
just as well.
"Taking a walk, baka*." She said, her eyes gleamed icy, very odd for
Rin; she was usually a very optimistic girl.
"You know what I mean! Someone like you doesn't deserve to have
someone like Taroku-Sama*!" Rin scoffed at Yomi's comment.
"You're right," Rin smirked, "I deserve better than that lowly
Daimyo*, you can go ahead and have him. But, oh, wait. You're too
ugly." She finished and walked off. Another girl spoke up this time,
it was Usa.
"You're lower than anything else! Lower than humans and youkai*,
alike! And you think you belong with either! How.pathetic!" Usa
finished, while Rin just kept on walking. Little comments like that
would usually have no effect on her, while the next one would. She
didn't know who said it, but she most definitely heard it.
"Filthy and ugly youkai wannabe.like that mangy mutt, Sesshoumaru, how
sad."
The words made Rin stop in her tracks immediately. She heard them
snicker behind her back. Rin turned.
"Ooh. Scary." Haru laughed as the others did. Rin glared.
"You bet I am!" Rin yelled as she ran at Haru, as fast as she could
anyway in the kimono, anyway. Rin jumped and nearly tackled Haru, but
didn't fall as Haru did, in which Haru crashed into Yomi and Usa,
causing them all to fall over. They all screamed as they hit the
ground with a 'thud'. Rin kicked her foot forward, rustling up some
dirt, and looked down at the girls. Not only the girls, but the
surrounding villagers as well, gaped at Rin, but the villagers soon
scowled and turned their backs.
"Y-You're insane!" Haru shrieked as Rin rolled her eyes.
"No. I'm Rin." She mocked and walked off, now extremely pissed off.
Part 6: Refuse: Rin
Rin stomped angrily into the forest until the village was out of
sight. She came across a small boulder and sat on it, once deep enough
into the forest. She looked down at her kimono which had patched of
dirt on it. Rin stared at it plainly.
"Wedding's ruined. Oh well." She mumbled as an idea came to her mind.
Could she avoid the wedding by just sitting here, and hide? No, the
wedding was unavoidable.
"I have to be strong." Rin said to herself. "Because I promised
Sesshoumaru-Sama." She pulled her fist up to her chest lowered her
head, hair falling over her eyes. There was faint rustle in the trees.
"Kyaa!" She screamed out quickly as she realized Taroku faced her,
leaning against a tree about three meters away. He smirked. He was the
only person in the entire village that was taller Rin, nearly six
foot, and she hated looking up at him.
"Rin-Chan*! You shouldn't be out here." he said, nicely. Rin knew
better than to trust Taroku for even one second, and then she walked
away, arms crossed. Taroku followed close behind and it wasn't long
before he noticed the shine of the red ribbon. His eyes narrowed as he
wrapped his arm around her neck pulling her close. Rin looked the
other way.
"Rin-Chan!" he sang happily, "the wedding is in an hour!"
"I know. You don't need to remind me." She replied and tried to worm
herself away from him.
"Then why do you keep promises from that bastard!?" Taroku grabbed the
ribbon and untied it quickly, yanking it away from her quickly. Rin
gasped as she was pushed back against a tree, her hand flying up to
her neck. Taroku clenched the fabric and stepped up to Rin. She
flinched back against the tree.
"Shut-up!" Rin cried. "Don't you dare talk about him like that!" She
gathered up her courage and her promise to be strong.
"Bitch. Who do you think you are? You listen to me, you are mine." He
pushed her back by the shoulders and leaned into her face.
"I said, SHUT-UP!" Rin said and kicked him in his stomach, grabbed her
ribbon and ran.
"I refuse to listen to anything you say!" She yelled as she tied the
ribbon around her neck while running. Taroku glared as he turned,
catching his breath, since Rin had knocked it out of him. Rin was now
too far, no doubt she knew the forest better than anyone, and had
taken some hidden short cut and was almost to the village by now.
Part 7: Approach: Sesshoumaru
Golden orbs scanned the area, although his senses already told him
that there was not even a 1% chance of a threat for kilometers. Silver
hair brushed the youkai lord's cheek softly, as the wind picked up
ever-so-slightly. His cold stare sliced through the heavy fog that was
now lifting, it being almost noon.
The green toad youkai called Jakken ran up behind his youkai
lord of the west. Jakken looked up at his master questioningly.
"Sesshoumaru-Sama? You realize something? What is it?" Sesshoumaru
didn't respond, golden hues staring forward, almost as if searching
for something.or someone.
He thought he had noticed the scent a kilometer back, but now he was
sure. The scent was very distinct, unforgettable, in fact. The sweet
scent of a young human girl named Rin, that he had left behind on his
travels years before. Seven years, to be exact. To a youkai such as
himself, seven years was nothing; a blink of an eye. But when Rin was
on his mind, time slowed down and then, seven years felt like an
eternity. He heard Jakken's incoherent babble about.something.
Something unimportant, most likely. What ever it was, it blurred in
the back of his mind.
Now, he stood on a hill, the hill in which he first told Rin
what would become of her once they reached the village, seven years
before. It was that village, which he left Rin, was the one the hill
overlooked, as now, Sesshoumaru did.
'Rin would be sixteen now', he thought,' grown up.' He pondered
a bit on what her appearance would be. Her scent was still the same,
and was thoroughly relieved when he could detect her scent at all. The
only path to take to head further east was through the village. But if
Rin found him. it could stir up several conflicts. Would she ignore
him? Maybe the opposite? The horrifying thought of Rin not remembering
him at all crossed his mind. Could that be possible? His thoughts
continued to swirl as he looked on.
He then looked down at his arm and removed his sleeve back,
revealing a small, faded, green ribbon that was still tied around his
wrist and had never even once been removed. He lowered his arms and
took a step forward. He was Sesshoumaru. A human girl would not stop
him. He would continue into the village as planned, regardless of Rin
or not. Jakken's mouth still moved as his words once again became
clear to Sesshoumaru.
"And that's why I believe that my ancestors were actually, in fact,
insect youkai!"
Sesshoumaru decided to block Jakken's comments out from now on.
Sesshoumaru remembered something that he had procrastinated to do, in
which he didn't do very often.
"Jakken." Sesshoumaru spoke, voice smooth as silk.
"H-Hai Mi'Lord?"
"Rin apologizes for breaking your Staff of Heads." Sesshoumaru said
simply and walked on, as Jakken did as well, only now, more confused
by his master's oddness.
Part 8: Rush: Rin
Rin ran down the sandy path as quickly as she could. She brushed off
the dirt on her kimono as she ran, and tried to look as presentable as
she could, hoping that no one would find out about her confrontation
with Taroku. She brought her fingertips up to her ribbon around her
neck and touched it lightly. She didn't care. She wouldn't listen to
him. She would make his life like hell for marrying her. She would
make sure of it.
Rin dashed into the hut, panting, wiping the sweat from her
forehead. She looked ahead into the room.
"Kyaa! Sayume-Baba!" Rin shrieked as the old miko* stood there,
staring at her. It was hard to notice her when Rin was so tall and
Sayume was so short. Sayume looked at Rin's kimono with distaste and
decided to not even ask what had happened. The wedding would start
shortly and the village had already begun to arrive to attend the
ceremony.
Part 9: Sight: Sesshoumaru
As soon as the youkai entered the town the disgusting,
overwhelming scent of humans rushed around him. Sesshoumaru lightly
padded on the outskirts of the village, the village seemingly
deserted, by just the sight of his eyes. He lingered a little closer,
detecting that nearly the whole village must have been gathered at the
center of the little town.
Jakken mumbled something about humans, thought it wasn't clear,
most likely an insult upon them. The smell of Rin was so distinct and
clear to him, unmistakable. The smell of wildflowers, particularly
that of the Sakura*, and the earth, fresh rain, and. he paused. The
smell of human, a male human, lingered around her scent. Damn. Rin had
a mate, then.
A few Sakura petals fluttered by, being carried off by the
gentle breeze. As long as he was unnoticed, then he would be able to
perhaps watch her.Perhaps. It was ridiculous, he thought. He was
starting to accumulate a headache over Rin and what to do. Maybe he
could kill the human and kidnap..? No! He departed from her seven
years before and that was final. The last thing a great youkai lord
needed was a sniveling brat following him and WORSE, having mixed
emotions for that human, sniveling brat child.
He jumped to a roof overlooking the crowd, leaving Jakken and
his previous thoughts behind him. He immediately spotted Rin and could
almost not believe his eyes. A beautiful young woman with long dark
hair and shimmering, yet somewhat melancholy chocolate eyes, and a
perfect figure wearing an amazingly designed kimono. That scent was
hers.bas was it really Rin? In a mere seven years, a human could
change THAT much? She looked so graceful, quiet and beautiful. Not all
like the klutzy, talkative, and sloppy little girl he once knew. Then
he noticed. The human standing next to her, it was a wedding! Irony
was pitifully and excruciatingly annoying to Sesshoumaru as he watched
the human girl intently. Her eyes searched the ground before they
darted to meet his own. Rin's eyes widened and she blinked in awe but
Sesshoumaru dashed backwards gracefully, out of sight. Sesshoumaru
then turned his back on the crows to find Jakken staring at him.
Sesshoumaru stared back.
"Ah. Sesshoumaru-Sama? What are we.?" Jakken tilted his head.
Sesshoumaru forced away anything in his mind about Rin and resumed his
cold expression, walking away, moving away from the crowd.
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Alright. How's that for a chapter? You might want to check out my other stories as well, they're good too you know [Except for Kagume, STAY AWAY FROM KAGUME!. ;_; bleh.] Anyways. Review please. Chapter four will be up by Monday. Y'see, the library closes early on the weekends, so it's difficult to get chapters online. Be patient, tell your friends, and please review!! ~Sakura
So far, it says I only have 3. O_o; 3?! I mean, Jeez, people. My WORST
story ever got at least 8 reviews! And this is a million times better
than THAT story [Kagume]. I would of cut off my story by now, but I
already have 28 pages written up manually. [Right now I'm writing a
fluffy part in the story. /\ _ /\ hehe. Yay for Fluffy-ness. ] I
suppose it's the short length. I'm not that worried, considering that
there shall be a lot of chapters. Well, thank you anyway, loyal
reviews. [3!?] Better than no one, hm? I need to advertise my story a
little more. Mew.
I was really expecting more since this is a Sesshoumaru x Rin fic..
Anyways.
Okay, now something to explain would be that now, Sesshoumaru has 2
arms. Remember when InuYasha first got the Tetsusaiga? Yes, poor,
poor, poor, Sesshoumaru. And you figure Kagome and InuYasha ran off
who knows where with the Shikon no Tama completed, and Sesshoumaru
can't hold together a fake arm with a shard. Let's just all say that a
youkai* like Sesshoumaru regenerates. How on Earth will we be able to
have our so-called "Fluffy" moments when Fluffy only has one arm!?
.okay. Yeah. I'm done.
*Translations for words below:
Youkai: Demon(s)
Yukata: A lighter summer kimono, made from cotton.
Hai: Yes [You should know this one] Baka: Stupid, idiot, etc. [You should most definitely know this one]
Sama: Lord, Lady, depending on gender [Also one you should know,
especially in Sesshoumaru fics!!]
Daimyo: A feudal lord(s)
Chan: Suffix for when referring to [mainly] girls of equal or lower
status. Used for friends that are girls, or a girlfriend. It can also
be used to mean 'Little Girl'. Like "Neko-Chan", meaning "Little cat-
girl."
Miko: priestess(s)
Sakura: Cherry Blossom(s)
Extra note: Japanese words don't have plurals. The plural of kimono is
kimono. Same with all of the words.
=====================================================
Chapter 3: Impending Decisions Under the Cherry Blossoms
Part 5: Push: Rin
Rin walked down the path through the village, watching the children
play, young men practice their hunting skills, and the young women
talking amongst themselves up ahead. Rin looked tiredly at the happy
and carefree villagers her age. She wasn't jealous anymore, just sick
of it. She approached three girls that she knew and decided to not
bring anything up.
'Just walk Rin.' she thought. The three girls had known Rin since the
first day she arrived, and they still acted all the same.
'Like little brats.' Rin thought. Today they wore simple and plain
blue yukata* with their hair tied back. For girls such as Yomi, Haru,
and Usa, the peach silk kimono was a fabulous luxury, as was marrying
Taroku. Rin was now within a meter of the girls, who had their arms
crossed, and a disgusted look upon their faces. Rin kept looking
forward and started to walk past them when, Yomi spoke.
"Rin," she spat. Rin looked to the ground as she paused.
".Hai*?" Rin asked. She looked over at them. The girls glared with
jealousy and absolute hatred.
"What the hell do you think you're doing?" Yomi said. Rin glared back
just as well.
"Taking a walk, baka*." She said, her eyes gleamed icy, very odd for
Rin; she was usually a very optimistic girl.
"You know what I mean! Someone like you doesn't deserve to have
someone like Taroku-Sama*!" Rin scoffed at Yomi's comment.
"You're right," Rin smirked, "I deserve better than that lowly
Daimyo*, you can go ahead and have him. But, oh, wait. You're too
ugly." She finished and walked off. Another girl spoke up this time,
it was Usa.
"You're lower than anything else! Lower than humans and youkai*,
alike! And you think you belong with either! How.pathetic!" Usa
finished, while Rin just kept on walking. Little comments like that
would usually have no effect on her, while the next one would. She
didn't know who said it, but she most definitely heard it.
"Filthy and ugly youkai wannabe.like that mangy mutt, Sesshoumaru, how
sad."
The words made Rin stop in her tracks immediately. She heard them
snicker behind her back. Rin turned.
"Ooh. Scary." Haru laughed as the others did. Rin glared.
"You bet I am!" Rin yelled as she ran at Haru, as fast as she could
anyway in the kimono, anyway. Rin jumped and nearly tackled Haru, but
didn't fall as Haru did, in which Haru crashed into Yomi and Usa,
causing them all to fall over. They all screamed as they hit the
ground with a 'thud'. Rin kicked her foot forward, rustling up some
dirt, and looked down at the girls. Not only the girls, but the
surrounding villagers as well, gaped at Rin, but the villagers soon
scowled and turned their backs.
"Y-You're insane!" Haru shrieked as Rin rolled her eyes.
"No. I'm Rin." She mocked and walked off, now extremely pissed off.
Part 6: Refuse: Rin
Rin stomped angrily into the forest until the village was out of
sight. She came across a small boulder and sat on it, once deep enough
into the forest. She looked down at her kimono which had patched of
dirt on it. Rin stared at it plainly.
"Wedding's ruined. Oh well." She mumbled as an idea came to her mind.
Could she avoid the wedding by just sitting here, and hide? No, the
wedding was unavoidable.
"I have to be strong." Rin said to herself. "Because I promised
Sesshoumaru-Sama." She pulled her fist up to her chest lowered her
head, hair falling over her eyes. There was faint rustle in the trees.
"Kyaa!" She screamed out quickly as she realized Taroku faced her,
leaning against a tree about three meters away. He smirked. He was the
only person in the entire village that was taller Rin, nearly six
foot, and she hated looking up at him.
"Rin-Chan*! You shouldn't be out here." he said, nicely. Rin knew
better than to trust Taroku for even one second, and then she walked
away, arms crossed. Taroku followed close behind and it wasn't long
before he noticed the shine of the red ribbon. His eyes narrowed as he
wrapped his arm around her neck pulling her close. Rin looked the
other way.
"Rin-Chan!" he sang happily, "the wedding is in an hour!"
"I know. You don't need to remind me." She replied and tried to worm
herself away from him.
"Then why do you keep promises from that bastard!?" Taroku grabbed the
ribbon and untied it quickly, yanking it away from her quickly. Rin
gasped as she was pushed back against a tree, her hand flying up to
her neck. Taroku clenched the fabric and stepped up to Rin. She
flinched back against the tree.
"Shut-up!" Rin cried. "Don't you dare talk about him like that!" She
gathered up her courage and her promise to be strong.
"Bitch. Who do you think you are? You listen to me, you are mine." He
pushed her back by the shoulders and leaned into her face.
"I said, SHUT-UP!" Rin said and kicked him in his stomach, grabbed her
ribbon and ran.
"I refuse to listen to anything you say!" She yelled as she tied the
ribbon around her neck while running. Taroku glared as he turned,
catching his breath, since Rin had knocked it out of him. Rin was now
too far, no doubt she knew the forest better than anyone, and had
taken some hidden short cut and was almost to the village by now.
Part 7: Approach: Sesshoumaru
Golden orbs scanned the area, although his senses already told him
that there was not even a 1% chance of a threat for kilometers. Silver
hair brushed the youkai lord's cheek softly, as the wind picked up
ever-so-slightly. His cold stare sliced through the heavy fog that was
now lifting, it being almost noon.
The green toad youkai called Jakken ran up behind his youkai
lord of the west. Jakken looked up at his master questioningly.
"Sesshoumaru-Sama? You realize something? What is it?" Sesshoumaru
didn't respond, golden hues staring forward, almost as if searching
for something.or someone.
He thought he had noticed the scent a kilometer back, but now he was
sure. The scent was very distinct, unforgettable, in fact. The sweet
scent of a young human girl named Rin, that he had left behind on his
travels years before. Seven years, to be exact. To a youkai such as
himself, seven years was nothing; a blink of an eye. But when Rin was
on his mind, time slowed down and then, seven years felt like an
eternity. He heard Jakken's incoherent babble about.something.
Something unimportant, most likely. What ever it was, it blurred in
the back of his mind.
Now, he stood on a hill, the hill in which he first told Rin
what would become of her once they reached the village, seven years
before. It was that village, which he left Rin, was the one the hill
overlooked, as now, Sesshoumaru did.
'Rin would be sixteen now', he thought,' grown up.' He pondered
a bit on what her appearance would be. Her scent was still the same,
and was thoroughly relieved when he could detect her scent at all. The
only path to take to head further east was through the village. But if
Rin found him. it could stir up several conflicts. Would she ignore
him? Maybe the opposite? The horrifying thought of Rin not remembering
him at all crossed his mind. Could that be possible? His thoughts
continued to swirl as he looked on.
He then looked down at his arm and removed his sleeve back,
revealing a small, faded, green ribbon that was still tied around his
wrist and had never even once been removed. He lowered his arms and
took a step forward. He was Sesshoumaru. A human girl would not stop
him. He would continue into the village as planned, regardless of Rin
or not. Jakken's mouth still moved as his words once again became
clear to Sesshoumaru.
"And that's why I believe that my ancestors were actually, in fact,
insect youkai!"
Sesshoumaru decided to block Jakken's comments out from now on.
Sesshoumaru remembered something that he had procrastinated to do, in
which he didn't do very often.
"Jakken." Sesshoumaru spoke, voice smooth as silk.
"H-Hai Mi'Lord?"
"Rin apologizes for breaking your Staff of Heads." Sesshoumaru said
simply and walked on, as Jakken did as well, only now, more confused
by his master's oddness.
Part 8: Rush: Rin
Rin ran down the sandy path as quickly as she could. She brushed off
the dirt on her kimono as she ran, and tried to look as presentable as
she could, hoping that no one would find out about her confrontation
with Taroku. She brought her fingertips up to her ribbon around her
neck and touched it lightly. She didn't care. She wouldn't listen to
him. She would make his life like hell for marrying her. She would
make sure of it.
Rin dashed into the hut, panting, wiping the sweat from her
forehead. She looked ahead into the room.
"Kyaa! Sayume-Baba!" Rin shrieked as the old miko* stood there,
staring at her. It was hard to notice her when Rin was so tall and
Sayume was so short. Sayume looked at Rin's kimono with distaste and
decided to not even ask what had happened. The wedding would start
shortly and the village had already begun to arrive to attend the
ceremony.
Part 9: Sight: Sesshoumaru
As soon as the youkai entered the town the disgusting,
overwhelming scent of humans rushed around him. Sesshoumaru lightly
padded on the outskirts of the village, the village seemingly
deserted, by just the sight of his eyes. He lingered a little closer,
detecting that nearly the whole village must have been gathered at the
center of the little town.
Jakken mumbled something about humans, thought it wasn't clear,
most likely an insult upon them. The smell of Rin was so distinct and
clear to him, unmistakable. The smell of wildflowers, particularly
that of the Sakura*, and the earth, fresh rain, and. he paused. The
smell of human, a male human, lingered around her scent. Damn. Rin had
a mate, then.
A few Sakura petals fluttered by, being carried off by the
gentle breeze. As long as he was unnoticed, then he would be able to
perhaps watch her.Perhaps. It was ridiculous, he thought. He was
starting to accumulate a headache over Rin and what to do. Maybe he
could kill the human and kidnap..? No! He departed from her seven
years before and that was final. The last thing a great youkai lord
needed was a sniveling brat following him and WORSE, having mixed
emotions for that human, sniveling brat child.
He jumped to a roof overlooking the crowd, leaving Jakken and
his previous thoughts behind him. He immediately spotted Rin and could
almost not believe his eyes. A beautiful young woman with long dark
hair and shimmering, yet somewhat melancholy chocolate eyes, and a
perfect figure wearing an amazingly designed kimono. That scent was
hers.bas was it really Rin? In a mere seven years, a human could
change THAT much? She looked so graceful, quiet and beautiful. Not all
like the klutzy, talkative, and sloppy little girl he once knew. Then
he noticed. The human standing next to her, it was a wedding! Irony
was pitifully and excruciatingly annoying to Sesshoumaru as he watched
the human girl intently. Her eyes searched the ground before they
darted to meet his own. Rin's eyes widened and she blinked in awe but
Sesshoumaru dashed backwards gracefully, out of sight. Sesshoumaru
then turned his back on the crows to find Jakken staring at him.
Sesshoumaru stared back.
"Ah. Sesshoumaru-Sama? What are we.?" Jakken tilted his head.
Sesshoumaru forced away anything in his mind about Rin and resumed his
cold expression, walking away, moving away from the crowd.
========================================== ===============
Alright. How's that for a chapter? You might want to check out my other stories as well, they're good too you know [Except for Kagume, STAY AWAY FROM KAGUME!. ;_; bleh.] Anyways. Review please. Chapter four will be up by Monday. Y'see, the library closes early on the weekends, so it's difficult to get chapters online. Be patient, tell your friends, and please review!! ~Sakura
