Alternate chapter 5

This is the begging of the sad ending.

CHARICTER DEATH IN THIS CHAPTER

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The next day Rain and Rex go to the hospital to see Weevil. They go into the room and find it empty, but the sheets are strewn carlessly across the bed. Distress fills Rain's face. "....Rex? What happened?" "I....don't know, Rain...." A nurse walks by. "Ma'am, do you know what happened to Weevil Underwood?" "Who?" "Weevil Underwood, you know, that small, green- haired boy that was in this room." "Oh! I'm sorry,sweety, but he died last night," Rain's face fills with shock then depression. "Yeah, his heart just stopped....he said...'Tell Rain I love her.' before he died. I'm really sorry." Rain begins to sob uncontrollably and Rex puts his arms around her, this time she doesn't fight. Rex cries,too but silently. He knows he has to be strong for Rain now.

Later that evening after she calms down enough, Rain hunts Stephen down. She finds him at a steak house. "Mr. Underwood, I need to speek to you." "What fer?" "It's about your son." Stephen turns to the whores sitting around him, "Excuse me ladies, but I have some important buisness to attend to, I'll see you gals later." Stephen follows Rain outside, she leads him to an alley. She corners the man and forces him aginst a wall, she pulls a dagger and presses it aginst Steve's throat. The man flinches as the black Obsidian blade touches his slightly tanned skin. "I know what the fuck you did to Weevil Goddamnit. You'd best go confess or I'll turn you in. Weevil's body gives people enough reason to beleive you murdered him. If you go free,motherfucker, then I swear I'll hunt your ass down and kill you." Stephen sees the dark intent in Rain's silver eyes. He knew about Rain from Weevil, He'd often ask the boy 'Where the hell'd he been all damn day long'. He knew she was tough and if you pissed her off, she'd hurt you. He'd hurt her enough to make her kill him and he knew it. The Obsidian blade only sealed this beleif. Rain tosses the man down.

Later that eveining, Steve goes to a hotel. He wasn't about to make himself sleep in that hell-hole his son was forsed to sleep in. 'Maby I should turn myself in...I might get off easyer. I'll sleep on it.' and with that, Stephen Underwood lays down and goes to sleep.

Meanwhille in Heaven:

Weevil Everet Underwood opens his soft blue eyes. His glasses are gone. He sits up and sweeps blonde bangs out of his eyes. 'Why is my hair blonde? Where am I?' He sits up for a second and pulls back the sleeve of the white robe he's found himself in. His arm is pure, devoid of scars. He hears singing in the distance. Feminin voices. He walks through the forest, barefoot, and comes to two women, both with black hair. They turn to him. "Hello Weevil. We've been expecting you." The older woman says. Weevil realises at once that these women are his mother and sister, Oliandir and Klayre. Tears well up in his sapphire eyes as he runs to his mother. She puts her arms around him. "My sweet little boy is the way he should be. No scars, so pain." "Mother!" --------------------

Should that bastard turn himself in or not? Reveiw but no flame.