Alternate Chapter 6
Two days later Weevil's funeral is held. Rain talks Yugi and Co. to go. She doesn't have to ask Joey, she and Joe are already close friends. She wears the black dress and black italian highheels that Weevil always enjoyed seeing her in. She stands and sings, tears running down her pale cheeks, her maskara runs, leaving black streaks on her face. When she fnishes her song, se sits next to Rex. The brown-haired boy puts his arms around her, her cring is much worse than it was when Weevil died. She has been thinking about him being dead. Being turned into wormshit. HER boyfriend
Rain Connors walks to the woods where Stephen Underwood sits, staring at the dirt floor of his only son's former bedroom. Tears well up in the man's emrald eyes and run down his tanned cheeks, he is beginning to feel remorse for murdering his son, his child...."Damnit....I killed Klayre six years ago and I killed my boy three months ago...I killed my whole damn family...." The screen door bursts open, Rain Niccollette Connors comes through, weilding the same black Obsidian blade that she had threatened Stephen with preiviously. She goes to Steve and kicks him in the chest, sending him backwards, onto his ass. She places the dagger aginst the man's neck. "You motherfucker! Weevil isn't here to stop me now! I'm sendin' you ta hell, you murderin' bastard!" "Go on...you have every right...." "QUIT PLAYIN' MIND GAMES WITH ME YOU SONUVABITCH!" Rain yells as she grinds the heel of her black leather boots into the man's face. "Weevil stopped me from shootin' yer ass in da head with a shot gun before, but, thanks to you, the love of my life is dead now and can't stop me from slitin' yer miserable throat." Rain stuck the dagger deep into Stephen's throat. She had kept her promise. Steve had walked free. She killed him. She stands and cleans the blood from her blade. Stephen was unnimportant. Noone would notice him being gone.
Three weeks later, Rain returns to America, finding it unpossible to stay in Domino. She is never able to love again. She dies alone.
What did you think?
Two days later Weevil's funeral is held. Rain talks Yugi and Co. to go. She doesn't have to ask Joey, she and Joe are already close friends. She wears the black dress and black italian highheels that Weevil always enjoyed seeing her in. She stands and sings, tears running down her pale cheeks, her maskara runs, leaving black streaks on her face. When she fnishes her song, se sits next to Rex. The brown-haired boy puts his arms around her, her cring is much worse than it was when Weevil died. She has been thinking about him being dead. Being turned into wormshit. HER boyfriend
Rain Connors walks to the woods where Stephen Underwood sits, staring at the dirt floor of his only son's former bedroom. Tears well up in the man's emrald eyes and run down his tanned cheeks, he is beginning to feel remorse for murdering his son, his child...."Damnit....I killed Klayre six years ago and I killed my boy three months ago...I killed my whole damn family...." The screen door bursts open, Rain Niccollette Connors comes through, weilding the same black Obsidian blade that she had threatened Stephen with preiviously. She goes to Steve and kicks him in the chest, sending him backwards, onto his ass. She places the dagger aginst the man's neck. "You motherfucker! Weevil isn't here to stop me now! I'm sendin' you ta hell, you murderin' bastard!" "Go on...you have every right...." "QUIT PLAYIN' MIND GAMES WITH ME YOU SONUVABITCH!" Rain yells as she grinds the heel of her black leather boots into the man's face. "Weevil stopped me from shootin' yer ass in da head with a shot gun before, but, thanks to you, the love of my life is dead now and can't stop me from slitin' yer miserable throat." Rain stuck the dagger deep into Stephen's throat. She had kept her promise. Steve had walked free. She killed him. She stands and cleans the blood from her blade. Stephen was unnimportant. Noone would notice him being gone.
Three weeks later, Rain returns to America, finding it unpossible to stay in Domino. She is never able to love again. She dies alone.
What did you think?
