Heh, with the threat of no updates, I get record reviews in record time. I
was only kidding people. Anyway, this and the last few chapters were
created with humour in mind, I wanted to get this story back to what it's
supposed to be.
D14852001 - I already had that idea you fool! You spoiled my story! j/k
Also, I've got complaints about spelling mistakes. I glance over the chapters before I post them, so if there are some they must be very minor. Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I take all comments to heart, good and bad. I'll try and improve my spelling.
-Chapter 17-
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Cupid hid near one of the entrances to NERV and waited until a chance for him to enter the base presented itself.
Lucky for him, he didn't have to wait long, as he spotted a technician making his way to the entrance. Knowing that the worker would be admitted in to the base, Cupid stealthily started trailing behind him, hoping to enter at the same time he did.
---
The door opened admitting the NERV tech in to the building. As soon as he entered the complex, the large gate sealed itself shut behind him. Now that the man was in, he headed down the corridor to his usual work place.
Some strange sounding footsteps began to echo, the sound emanating from behind him. Despite himself, the NERV technician felt unnerved.
As soon as he stopped walking, the footsteps ceased as well. He turned around expecting to see someone, but found that the dark corridor was empty.
"Hmm." He looked suspicious.
Again, as he began walking, he heard those same footsteps coming from behind. This time, with no warning, the man quickly swung around, sure that he'd catch his would-be stalker in the act.
He saw no one.
"Is anyone there?"
No answer.
"I know someone's there!" His voice rose. "Show yourself!"
Still no answer.
More confused and scared than ever, the tech continued on to his destination. All was quiet for a moment, but then the echo of those same strange footsteps interrupted his walk, forcing him to break in to a run in his fright.
"I hate this place!" He yelled as he ran down the corridor at full speed.
Had the man looked down at his feet, before he broke in to a run, he would have seen the miniature figure.
---
"What a sap." Cupid chuckled as he continued on his way around the NERV base. "This is going to be a whole lot of fun."
---
Back in Misato's humble home, Shinji and Asuka were watching TV.
Well, they weren't really watching it, as they were currently too involved in their kissing. To the casual observer, the kiss looked like one of those you get in them cheesy romance movies.
Okay, in all honesty: it was indistinguishable. The only difference was the fact that the feelings behind this particular kiss were real.
As they broke apart, both teens were blushing and smiling softly. Asuka rested her head on Shinji's shoulder and their attention turned back to the program they were watching.
"So." Shinji broke the quiet. "You didn't hurt Touji and Kensuke too much did you?"
"Not really." She replied casually. "I still haven't decided how to repay the four-eyed geek."
"Oh." Shinji wondered what she could possibly do to get back at his friends.
"And that bitch Sakuya!" She suddenly said, raising her voice. "Who the hell does she think she is kissing you without my permission?!"
"Um, wh-?"
"I swear I'll get her back." She interrupted him. Shinji felt her hands tighten in to fists. "I swear."
---
Back in the Geo-Front, Cupid was casually exploring the gigantic NERV complex when, by complete chance, he found himself at the main control room.
Hiding behind one of the computer terminals, he surveyed the interaction between the three 'Bridge Bunnies.'
As Cupid observed a conversation between Maya and Shigero, he began to feel strong feeling directed at the female tech coming from the long-haired man, feelings that can be compared to the beginnings of love.
When Cupid tried to see what feelings and emotions Maya was going through as she talked with her co-worker, he couldn't find anything that resembled love. Only friendship.
"We'll soon change that!" He said to himself excitedly, and took aim with one of his magic arrows.
Of course, these arrows were invisible to normal humans, so it went completely unnoticed as it soared across the room and dodged out of the way of people who passed by, adjusting it's aim accordingly.
Maya was half way through her conversation with Shigero when she felt a small prick, followed by the warming sensation running through her body.
She looked around the room for a moment, but then on retrospect turned back to Shigero.
"You okay?" He asked.
"Yeah." She replied. "I just felt strange for a moment there."
"I bet." He smiled. "You work too hard."
"I guess so." She turned around and continued typing stuff in to her computer.
Across the room, Cupid stood agape.
"What the?" He couldn't believe it. "My arrow had no effect?"
At that exact moment, Ritsuko Akagi came up in the elevator. As the blond haired doctor approached Maya and leaned over her shoulder to examine the data on her computer, Cupid began to feel some strange feelings coming from the short-haired young woman.
"Wait a second." The action figure now wore an expression of suspicion. "She likes-?" He realized what was going on.
"No way."
---
Kensuke, who was no practically dragging Touji behind him, made good on his promise and carried the Jock all the way back to his house.
*Ding Dong*
He rang the bell, and it wasn't long before Touji's father came to answer the door.
"Oh, hey guys." He paused and looked at his son. "What the?"
Kensuke gave him a false smile. "It's a long story."
"Touji, what happened to you?" His father was now concerned.
Touji struggled to get the two words out. "Red." He coughed dramatically. "Devil."
"What?!"
-To be Continued-
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Sorry about the delay in this chapter people. I think I just experienced my first ever case of writers block when writing it, lol. Don't worry though; the next chapter will be along soon
I felt as though the writing and descriptive quality in this update was not as good as the last. Is this the case?
Till Later.
D14852001 - I already had that idea you fool! You spoiled my story! j/k
Also, I've got complaints about spelling mistakes. I glance over the chapters before I post them, so if there are some they must be very minor. Anyway, thanks for the feedback. I take all comments to heart, good and bad. I'll try and improve my spelling.
-Chapter 17-
---
Cupid hid near one of the entrances to NERV and waited until a chance for him to enter the base presented itself.
Lucky for him, he didn't have to wait long, as he spotted a technician making his way to the entrance. Knowing that the worker would be admitted in to the base, Cupid stealthily started trailing behind him, hoping to enter at the same time he did.
---
The door opened admitting the NERV tech in to the building. As soon as he entered the complex, the large gate sealed itself shut behind him. Now that the man was in, he headed down the corridor to his usual work place.
Some strange sounding footsteps began to echo, the sound emanating from behind him. Despite himself, the NERV technician felt unnerved.
As soon as he stopped walking, the footsteps ceased as well. He turned around expecting to see someone, but found that the dark corridor was empty.
"Hmm." He looked suspicious.
Again, as he began walking, he heard those same footsteps coming from behind. This time, with no warning, the man quickly swung around, sure that he'd catch his would-be stalker in the act.
He saw no one.
"Is anyone there?"
No answer.
"I know someone's there!" His voice rose. "Show yourself!"
Still no answer.
More confused and scared than ever, the tech continued on to his destination. All was quiet for a moment, but then the echo of those same strange footsteps interrupted his walk, forcing him to break in to a run in his fright.
"I hate this place!" He yelled as he ran down the corridor at full speed.
Had the man looked down at his feet, before he broke in to a run, he would have seen the miniature figure.
---
"What a sap." Cupid chuckled as he continued on his way around the NERV base. "This is going to be a whole lot of fun."
---
Back in Misato's humble home, Shinji and Asuka were watching TV.
Well, they weren't really watching it, as they were currently too involved in their kissing. To the casual observer, the kiss looked like one of those you get in them cheesy romance movies.
Okay, in all honesty: it was indistinguishable. The only difference was the fact that the feelings behind this particular kiss were real.
As they broke apart, both teens were blushing and smiling softly. Asuka rested her head on Shinji's shoulder and their attention turned back to the program they were watching.
"So." Shinji broke the quiet. "You didn't hurt Touji and Kensuke too much did you?"
"Not really." She replied casually. "I still haven't decided how to repay the four-eyed geek."
"Oh." Shinji wondered what she could possibly do to get back at his friends.
"And that bitch Sakuya!" She suddenly said, raising her voice. "Who the hell does she think she is kissing you without my permission?!"
"Um, wh-?"
"I swear I'll get her back." She interrupted him. Shinji felt her hands tighten in to fists. "I swear."
---
Back in the Geo-Front, Cupid was casually exploring the gigantic NERV complex when, by complete chance, he found himself at the main control room.
Hiding behind one of the computer terminals, he surveyed the interaction between the three 'Bridge Bunnies.'
As Cupid observed a conversation between Maya and Shigero, he began to feel strong feeling directed at the female tech coming from the long-haired man, feelings that can be compared to the beginnings of love.
When Cupid tried to see what feelings and emotions Maya was going through as she talked with her co-worker, he couldn't find anything that resembled love. Only friendship.
"We'll soon change that!" He said to himself excitedly, and took aim with one of his magic arrows.
Of course, these arrows were invisible to normal humans, so it went completely unnoticed as it soared across the room and dodged out of the way of people who passed by, adjusting it's aim accordingly.
Maya was half way through her conversation with Shigero when she felt a small prick, followed by the warming sensation running through her body.
She looked around the room for a moment, but then on retrospect turned back to Shigero.
"You okay?" He asked.
"Yeah." She replied. "I just felt strange for a moment there."
"I bet." He smiled. "You work too hard."
"I guess so." She turned around and continued typing stuff in to her computer.
Across the room, Cupid stood agape.
"What the?" He couldn't believe it. "My arrow had no effect?"
At that exact moment, Ritsuko Akagi came up in the elevator. As the blond haired doctor approached Maya and leaned over her shoulder to examine the data on her computer, Cupid began to feel some strange feelings coming from the short-haired young woman.
"Wait a second." The action figure now wore an expression of suspicion. "She likes-?" He realized what was going on.
"No way."
---
Kensuke, who was no practically dragging Touji behind him, made good on his promise and carried the Jock all the way back to his house.
*Ding Dong*
He rang the bell, and it wasn't long before Touji's father came to answer the door.
"Oh, hey guys." He paused and looked at his son. "What the?"
Kensuke gave him a false smile. "It's a long story."
"Touji, what happened to you?" His father was now concerned.
Touji struggled to get the two words out. "Red." He coughed dramatically. "Devil."
"What?!"
-To be Continued-
---
Sorry about the delay in this chapter people. I think I just experienced my first ever case of writers block when writing it, lol. Don't worry though; the next chapter will be along soon
I felt as though the writing and descriptive quality in this update was not as good as the last. Is this the case?
Till Later.
