~*Author Babblings*~
Here is chapter 9! OMG!! I got over 100 reviews!!!!! I was so excited when I saw that! Thanks to all of my super, crazy awesome reviewers! I LOVE U GUYS!! Thanks so much for all of your support!
Speaking of reviews, I'm actually gonna answer your reviews this time! Last time I kinda skipped that part! ^_^'
I cant wait till December 17! For those of you who don't know why I'll tell you! That's when Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King comes to theaters!!! I have been going crazy seeing all the previews on TV! Cant wait!!!!
Back to the story now! Once again this chapter will NOT have the Badgirls in it. Hopefully I will know how to advance on them before I do the next chapter! So please be patient with me, I had to redo some of the stuff on them b/c I didn't like how it fit in the story and currently I am still working the kinks out! Soon, I say! Soon! Anyways here chapter 9! Enjoy and please review and tell me what you think! Thanks!
~*Review Answers*~
Freeko the Penguin- that was a great idea but unfortunately I already had something planned and if I changed that, then I would have to change the whole chapter! Thanks for the idea anyways! But believe me, they will be having nightmares or something of the sort all b/c of Hiei!
Queen of Koorime- I'm really happy you liked that chapter! This one should be pretty funny, so please tell me what you think after! I am happy too that I updated b/c then I would have never gotten my 100+ reviews! I have you to thank for part of that!
|-Steph-chan-|- I'm sorry it took me so long! Please don't yell anymore! :( J/k! Yeh, last chapter I think Yusuke had sleep induced clumsiness, if that makes any sense! And things are just going to get worse for Keiko and Botan! Read to find out what happens to the little angels!
YkkGrl- I have tried to scare my little brother with scary stories, but it never worked! Stupid little brothers! Anyways, thanks for loving my story even though sometimes I don't! ;) I really like think chapter though! And I hope you do too!
Sorrowful-angel12- Oh! Not the big, wide eyes! I can never resist! So, heres an update for ya! I think you will find this chapter very, very, interesting too! Review and tell me what ya think!
PassionateAngel- Oh, spaghetti sauce, who hasn't spilled that on a white rug at least once? Lol! I know that I have! Maybe even more than once! Kurama wasn't too happy to have to clean it! I actually feel bad for Keiko and Botan in this chapter! You'll see why!
Deity of death1- yeh I had some writers block. I think most of it is gone now though! The Badgirls aren't in this chapter either, but it should be good! Hopefully I'll get my act together and have the Badgirls in one of the upcoming chapters!
Meiko M- Thank you for forgiving me for not updating sooner! You don't like the Badgirls? Oh well! At least you like the story! That's all that matters to me! Oh and I love your long reviews! They are so fun to read!
Amanda- Sorry but I don't think that I can find a way to add your character in! Really sorry! Its just too late in the story! Aw. now I feel bad! But I am glad that you like the story! Please tell me what you think about this chapter!
I'm-A-Shady-Gurl- Here ya go! Read this! And a sugar high? Those are tons of fun to have at school! Teachers get so mad! Lol! Good times, if you ask me! I just wish I could have one everyday! Then I know that I would update more!
Unicorn of the flame- I'm really glad you like my story and think its funny! I updated as soon as I could! Hope you enjoy!
Randall Flagg2- Oh, the ideas! As always thank you so much for them! Yeh, I added that little joke into the end right before I saved! And b/c of it I had to write even more! Oh, well, it got a good response! Lol! Hope you like this chapter! ~*Chapter 9*~
Downstairs, in the living room, Hiei was the only one awake. The only reason he was awake, was laying halfway on the couch, with his head off the couch and on the floor, in a puddle of drool. Hiei was disgusted.
"Stupid human." He mumbled.
He glanced around the room to see if there was anything that could help him shut the orange headed human up. Then he spotted it. Next to Yusuke's shoes was a large roll of duck tape. He got up and grabbed it. Pulling a good sized piece from the roll,he bit it so he could tear it.
He went over to the couch that Kuwabara was occupying. Now that Hiei was closer he could hear that Kuwabara was mumbling incoherant things inbetween snores.
"*snort* Oysters. in the back of the car? No.zzzzzz."
Hiei quickly slapped the piece of tape onto Kuwabara's mouth, hoping it will stop the noise so he could get some sleep.
Thankfully it did. Hiei went back to his chair and got comfortable. Yusuke was still sleeping on the other couch. After a few minutes Hiei's eyes drooped shut. He was almost asleep when THUMP.
His eyes snapped open at the sound. He looked around to find the source. When he realized it was only Kuwabara falling the rest of the way of the couch he shrugged and closed his eyes again.
Meanwhile, upstairs two little girls were wide awake. They were both sitting up in bed, staring at the closet door, just waiting for something to jump out and eat them. They glanced at each other and then at Yukina, who was sleeping at the other side of the bed.
"Do you weally think ders a monster in der?" Keiko asked in a whisper.
"I dunno." Botan answered the same way.
Suddenly, they heard a loud THUMP come from somewhere. Not sure of the location the sound came from they scooted farther away from the closet. They huddled together in the blankets and shook with fear.
"Do you think its da monster?" Keiko asked.
"I dunno, maybe."
They both jumped about a foot in the air when they heard a voice behind them.
"Whatchu' two doin?" Yukina asked, rubbing her eyes.
"Ders a monster in, in da closet!" Keiko explained.
"Huh?"
"A monster. The short, big guy said there was one in der!" Botan said.
"I don't think a monster is in da closet, I don't." Yukina said, but there was a little bit of doubt in her eyes.
Then there was a very loud bang that came this time from the closet. All three girls screamed and jumped on the floor, on the other side of the bed farthest from the closet. Botan grabbed one of her shoes that was on the floor next to them as a weapon. Keiko and Yukina followed suit.
There was another loud clatter from the closet and what sounded like a metal hanger hitting the floor. They heard a loud moan and another bang.
"What is it?!" Yukina asked.
"Its gotta be da monster!" Keiko said.
"Its gonna eat us!" Botan added, fearfully.
"Oww! Get off me you ogre!" came from the closet, causing the girls to freeze.
"Sorry sir." Said another voice.
"Oh, forget it! Just where the hell are we?"
"I think, Kurama's house sir."
"It doesn't sound like one monster! I think there two!" Yukina said.
"Why are you so close to me? Back off!" there was an 'ooof" and a thump again the door.
"Sorry, but I think I found a door!"
"Well, open it!"
The girls heard the jiggle of the door knob and it squeaking as it turned.
"Ok, when da door opens, throw da shoes at 'em!" Botan ordered. The other two girls nodded and got ready. They crawled to the other end of the bed, still making sure they were out of site. The door opened slowly and revealed a large, blue thing, with one horn on its head. The girls all gasped.
Botan was the first to react. She stood up and threw her shoe as hard as she could. It found its mark right in the middle of the monster's face. It covered its injured nose with its hands and it eyes crossed.
"Owww!" and the blue thing fell forward, revealing Koenma, in his teenage form.
"Ogre, what are you doing!?" he managed before two shoes hit him; one in the forehead and one in the stomach. "Ouch!"
He fell on top of Orge and it seemed that the girls all read each others mind, because they all jumped on top of them at the same time, yelling. Koenma yelled as Botan landed right on his already sore stomach.
At this point Kurama raced into the room in only a pair of dark green boxers. (I had to! ^_^') He flicked on the light and was surprised at what he saw.
Koenma was currently fighting off Botan, who was biting his arm.
"Kurama! Get this maggot off of me!" Koenma yelled when he noticed Kurama standing dumbfounded at the door.
Ogre was holding up Keiko and Yukina, who were clinging to his arms with their eyes shut tight.
Kurama ran over to Koenma and pried Botan off of him. This only made Botan bite down harder. Koenma's eyes buldged and he screamed like a little girl.
"AHHHHHH!" Koenma shook his arm vigorously, trying to free his poor arm. Kurama had Botan around the waist and he got an idea. He began to tickle her. She squealed with surprise and leg her death bite on Koenma's arm go.
"Oh, my dear, dear arm! I better not get rabies from that insane cat!" he had yet to notice that it was Botan.
Already Keiko and Yukina had opened their eyes and seen that they were not about to be anythings dinner so they calmed down. They were pulling on Ogre's horn and trying to see if his blue skin could change color.
"You won't get rabies, and this isn't a cat. It's Botan." Kurama said, holding Botan so she didn't get away and attack Koenma again. She was glaring at him and trying to wiggle free from Kurama's hold on her.
"Botan? No way! She wouldn't bite me! I'm her boss!" Koenma said squinting at Botan to make sure it really was her. He would have taken a stepcloser, but he was pretty sure he heard her growl and hiss at him.
"She probably doesn't remember you, although, I don't know why she would attack you anyways."
"Hm, it doesn't matter. Where is everyone, holy shit! I mean, is that Keiko and Yukina?!" he exclaimed.
He went over to Ogre and Yukina looked over at him. She studied his face and then giggled.
"What is so funny?" Koenma asked defensively.
"Who drew on your head?" she said between laughs.
Koenma's hand went to the Jr. marking on his forehead.
"It's supposed to be there!"
Ogre set Keiko and Yukina down and they immediately went to Koenma to investigate. Keiko pulled on his cape and Yukina started stepping on his shoes.
"Hey! No! Not the shoes!" he bent down to pick up Yukina but got pulled back by Keiko pulling on his cape. He toppled over, losing balance. The girls managed to scramble out of the way before he landed on them.
"Oh! Sir, let me help you!" Ogre rushed to his side.
Kurama had accidently loosened is hold on Botan and she jumped down and ran over to Koenma, causing Ogre to nearly step on her. She ran to Koenma's head and began tugging on his hair.
"Botan! NO!" Kurama yelled.
"AHHHHHHHHHH! Why does she hate me?" Koenma screamed.
"What the hell is all the racket about up here?!" Yusuke said, entering the room. He stopped at the sight and his jaw dropped.
Kurama had managed to pull Botan from Koenma again and he carried her over to a confused, half awake Yusuke.
"Whatever you do, DON'T let her go!" he ordered.
"Wait, Fox, why is Toddler here?" Yusuke asked.
Now that Koenma was up and patting his sore head, he turned to Yusuke.
"I'm here to tell you what we found out about this whole situation."
"Oh, well in that case." Yusuke started and he turned around and dropped Botan on the floor of the hallway, and slammed the door shut. "Tell us what you found out!"
Kurama quickly set Keiko and Yukina on the ground in the hall too, shutting the door again.
"Ok, now, what did you fint out about the girls?" Kurama asked.
Koenma sighed.
"Well..."
There ya go! Chapter 9! I like this chapter! I really do! It been the first chapter I have liked in a while! I really hope you like it too!
Review and tell me what you think and leave ideas or whatever you want! Thanks for reading!
Lobsterblue22
Here is chapter 9! OMG!! I got over 100 reviews!!!!! I was so excited when I saw that! Thanks to all of my super, crazy awesome reviewers! I LOVE U GUYS!! Thanks so much for all of your support!
Speaking of reviews, I'm actually gonna answer your reviews this time! Last time I kinda skipped that part! ^_^'
I cant wait till December 17! For those of you who don't know why I'll tell you! That's when Lord of the Rings: The Return of the King comes to theaters!!! I have been going crazy seeing all the previews on TV! Cant wait!!!!
Back to the story now! Once again this chapter will NOT have the Badgirls in it. Hopefully I will know how to advance on them before I do the next chapter! So please be patient with me, I had to redo some of the stuff on them b/c I didn't like how it fit in the story and currently I am still working the kinks out! Soon, I say! Soon! Anyways here chapter 9! Enjoy and please review and tell me what you think! Thanks!
~*Review Answers*~
Freeko the Penguin- that was a great idea but unfortunately I already had something planned and if I changed that, then I would have to change the whole chapter! Thanks for the idea anyways! But believe me, they will be having nightmares or something of the sort all b/c of Hiei!
Queen of Koorime- I'm really happy you liked that chapter! This one should be pretty funny, so please tell me what you think after! I am happy too that I updated b/c then I would have never gotten my 100+ reviews! I have you to thank for part of that!
|-Steph-chan-|- I'm sorry it took me so long! Please don't yell anymore! :( J/k! Yeh, last chapter I think Yusuke had sleep induced clumsiness, if that makes any sense! And things are just going to get worse for Keiko and Botan! Read to find out what happens to the little angels!
YkkGrl- I have tried to scare my little brother with scary stories, but it never worked! Stupid little brothers! Anyways, thanks for loving my story even though sometimes I don't! ;) I really like think chapter though! And I hope you do too!
Sorrowful-angel12- Oh! Not the big, wide eyes! I can never resist! So, heres an update for ya! I think you will find this chapter very, very, interesting too! Review and tell me what ya think!
PassionateAngel- Oh, spaghetti sauce, who hasn't spilled that on a white rug at least once? Lol! I know that I have! Maybe even more than once! Kurama wasn't too happy to have to clean it! I actually feel bad for Keiko and Botan in this chapter! You'll see why!
Deity of death1- yeh I had some writers block. I think most of it is gone now though! The Badgirls aren't in this chapter either, but it should be good! Hopefully I'll get my act together and have the Badgirls in one of the upcoming chapters!
Meiko M- Thank you for forgiving me for not updating sooner! You don't like the Badgirls? Oh well! At least you like the story! That's all that matters to me! Oh and I love your long reviews! They are so fun to read!
Amanda- Sorry but I don't think that I can find a way to add your character in! Really sorry! Its just too late in the story! Aw. now I feel bad! But I am glad that you like the story! Please tell me what you think about this chapter!
I'm-A-Shady-Gurl- Here ya go! Read this! And a sugar high? Those are tons of fun to have at school! Teachers get so mad! Lol! Good times, if you ask me! I just wish I could have one everyday! Then I know that I would update more!
Unicorn of the flame- I'm really glad you like my story and think its funny! I updated as soon as I could! Hope you enjoy!
Randall Flagg2- Oh, the ideas! As always thank you so much for them! Yeh, I added that little joke into the end right before I saved! And b/c of it I had to write even more! Oh, well, it got a good response! Lol! Hope you like this chapter! ~*Chapter 9*~
Downstairs, in the living room, Hiei was the only one awake. The only reason he was awake, was laying halfway on the couch, with his head off the couch and on the floor, in a puddle of drool. Hiei was disgusted.
"Stupid human." He mumbled.
He glanced around the room to see if there was anything that could help him shut the orange headed human up. Then he spotted it. Next to Yusuke's shoes was a large roll of duck tape. He got up and grabbed it. Pulling a good sized piece from the roll,he bit it so he could tear it.
He went over to the couch that Kuwabara was occupying. Now that Hiei was closer he could hear that Kuwabara was mumbling incoherant things inbetween snores.
"*snort* Oysters. in the back of the car? No.zzzzzz."
Hiei quickly slapped the piece of tape onto Kuwabara's mouth, hoping it will stop the noise so he could get some sleep.
Thankfully it did. Hiei went back to his chair and got comfortable. Yusuke was still sleeping on the other couch. After a few minutes Hiei's eyes drooped shut. He was almost asleep when THUMP.
His eyes snapped open at the sound. He looked around to find the source. When he realized it was only Kuwabara falling the rest of the way of the couch he shrugged and closed his eyes again.
Meanwhile, upstairs two little girls were wide awake. They were both sitting up in bed, staring at the closet door, just waiting for something to jump out and eat them. They glanced at each other and then at Yukina, who was sleeping at the other side of the bed.
"Do you weally think ders a monster in der?" Keiko asked in a whisper.
"I dunno." Botan answered the same way.
Suddenly, they heard a loud THUMP come from somewhere. Not sure of the location the sound came from they scooted farther away from the closet. They huddled together in the blankets and shook with fear.
"Do you think its da monster?" Keiko asked.
"I dunno, maybe."
They both jumped about a foot in the air when they heard a voice behind them.
"Whatchu' two doin?" Yukina asked, rubbing her eyes.
"Ders a monster in, in da closet!" Keiko explained.
"Huh?"
"A monster. The short, big guy said there was one in der!" Botan said.
"I don't think a monster is in da closet, I don't." Yukina said, but there was a little bit of doubt in her eyes.
Then there was a very loud bang that came this time from the closet. All three girls screamed and jumped on the floor, on the other side of the bed farthest from the closet. Botan grabbed one of her shoes that was on the floor next to them as a weapon. Keiko and Yukina followed suit.
There was another loud clatter from the closet and what sounded like a metal hanger hitting the floor. They heard a loud moan and another bang.
"What is it?!" Yukina asked.
"Its gotta be da monster!" Keiko said.
"Its gonna eat us!" Botan added, fearfully.
"Oww! Get off me you ogre!" came from the closet, causing the girls to freeze.
"Sorry sir." Said another voice.
"Oh, forget it! Just where the hell are we?"
"I think, Kurama's house sir."
"It doesn't sound like one monster! I think there two!" Yukina said.
"Why are you so close to me? Back off!" there was an 'ooof" and a thump again the door.
"Sorry, but I think I found a door!"
"Well, open it!"
The girls heard the jiggle of the door knob and it squeaking as it turned.
"Ok, when da door opens, throw da shoes at 'em!" Botan ordered. The other two girls nodded and got ready. They crawled to the other end of the bed, still making sure they were out of site. The door opened slowly and revealed a large, blue thing, with one horn on its head. The girls all gasped.
Botan was the first to react. She stood up and threw her shoe as hard as she could. It found its mark right in the middle of the monster's face. It covered its injured nose with its hands and it eyes crossed.
"Owww!" and the blue thing fell forward, revealing Koenma, in his teenage form.
"Ogre, what are you doing!?" he managed before two shoes hit him; one in the forehead and one in the stomach. "Ouch!"
He fell on top of Orge and it seemed that the girls all read each others mind, because they all jumped on top of them at the same time, yelling. Koenma yelled as Botan landed right on his already sore stomach.
At this point Kurama raced into the room in only a pair of dark green boxers. (I had to! ^_^') He flicked on the light and was surprised at what he saw.
Koenma was currently fighting off Botan, who was biting his arm.
"Kurama! Get this maggot off of me!" Koenma yelled when he noticed Kurama standing dumbfounded at the door.
Ogre was holding up Keiko and Yukina, who were clinging to his arms with their eyes shut tight.
Kurama ran over to Koenma and pried Botan off of him. This only made Botan bite down harder. Koenma's eyes buldged and he screamed like a little girl.
"AHHHHHH!" Koenma shook his arm vigorously, trying to free his poor arm. Kurama had Botan around the waist and he got an idea. He began to tickle her. She squealed with surprise and leg her death bite on Koenma's arm go.
"Oh, my dear, dear arm! I better not get rabies from that insane cat!" he had yet to notice that it was Botan.
Already Keiko and Yukina had opened their eyes and seen that they were not about to be anythings dinner so they calmed down. They were pulling on Ogre's horn and trying to see if his blue skin could change color.
"You won't get rabies, and this isn't a cat. It's Botan." Kurama said, holding Botan so she didn't get away and attack Koenma again. She was glaring at him and trying to wiggle free from Kurama's hold on her.
"Botan? No way! She wouldn't bite me! I'm her boss!" Koenma said squinting at Botan to make sure it really was her. He would have taken a stepcloser, but he was pretty sure he heard her growl and hiss at him.
"She probably doesn't remember you, although, I don't know why she would attack you anyways."
"Hm, it doesn't matter. Where is everyone, holy shit! I mean, is that Keiko and Yukina?!" he exclaimed.
He went over to Ogre and Yukina looked over at him. She studied his face and then giggled.
"What is so funny?" Koenma asked defensively.
"Who drew on your head?" she said between laughs.
Koenma's hand went to the Jr. marking on his forehead.
"It's supposed to be there!"
Ogre set Keiko and Yukina down and they immediately went to Koenma to investigate. Keiko pulled on his cape and Yukina started stepping on his shoes.
"Hey! No! Not the shoes!" he bent down to pick up Yukina but got pulled back by Keiko pulling on his cape. He toppled over, losing balance. The girls managed to scramble out of the way before he landed on them.
"Oh! Sir, let me help you!" Ogre rushed to his side.
Kurama had accidently loosened is hold on Botan and she jumped down and ran over to Koenma, causing Ogre to nearly step on her. She ran to Koenma's head and began tugging on his hair.
"Botan! NO!" Kurama yelled.
"AHHHHHHHHHH! Why does she hate me?" Koenma screamed.
"What the hell is all the racket about up here?!" Yusuke said, entering the room. He stopped at the sight and his jaw dropped.
Kurama had managed to pull Botan from Koenma again and he carried her over to a confused, half awake Yusuke.
"Whatever you do, DON'T let her go!" he ordered.
"Wait, Fox, why is Toddler here?" Yusuke asked.
Now that Koenma was up and patting his sore head, he turned to Yusuke.
"I'm here to tell you what we found out about this whole situation."
"Oh, well in that case." Yusuke started and he turned around and dropped Botan on the floor of the hallway, and slammed the door shut. "Tell us what you found out!"
Kurama quickly set Keiko and Yukina on the ground in the hall too, shutting the door again.
"Ok, now, what did you fint out about the girls?" Kurama asked.
Koenma sighed.
"Well..."
There ya go! Chapter 9! I like this chapter! I really do! It been the first chapter I have liked in a while! I really hope you like it too!
Review and tell me what you think and leave ideas or whatever you want! Thanks for reading!
Lobsterblue22
