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TO KILL A PART OF YOUR HEART: chapter 5
See, the Earth is gone!
No land, no water, no sun
No one!
And all that matters is the wind.
Two days after their dinner at the Blue Jasmine, the BladeBreakers were staying at a 4-star hotel somewhere in the city. (A.N: I've never been to New York, so pardon my vagueness.) Tyson was sharing a room with Max and Kenny while Kai shared a room with Rei. It was because of such an arrangement did Rei notice Kai's departure from the hotel that evening.
"Yo Kai, where are you going?"
Kai turned around. "Chinatown." Ok, he wondered. Why the hell did he say that? He didn't mean to go to Chinatown, and now Rei was going to ask stupid questions.
"Why'd you want to go there for?"
"Dunno. Now fuck off and quit asking questions."
"Yeah, fine, whatever." Then something stuck him, and he added. "We're going over to Cali's house tomorrow. They're planning to send a spy to look after the Stormhawks or something like that. You'd better be there, kay?"
Kai didn't answer and headed out.
He wondered if the BladeBreakers would believe it if someone told them he was going to look for the Stormhawks.
~~~~~~~Somewhere else~~~~~~~~
Flyer finally slowed down when he reached the Stormhawk-inhibited neighborhood. Running a hand through his hair, which was such a dark blue it was almost black, he let the other hand rest on the stolen Harley. Oh man, he thought, I'm gonna have fun with this baby.
The wind informed him of his presence even before he heard his footsteps. By the time Kai was close enough to see the Harley, Flyer was beyond sight, in the shadows.
Knew he wouldn't stay away after he met Kylie. He grinned mischievously.
Flyer breathed out purposely, and ran away from his corner into another, making sure Kai noticed a darting shadow. To his satisfaction, the guy followed.
And so they continued hunting each other through the alleys, until at last Flyer knew Kylie's place was near. He rapped at her window and disappeared.
Kylie, upon hearing his knock, headed to the window. She peered through it but didn't see a thing.
"Must have been a bird." She muttered. Then she saw Kai emerge from the shadows.
Strange, she thought. Judging from his expression, it was unlikely that he was the one who knocked. In fact, she could have sworn that was Flyer's knock.
Kai began to walk away, clearly confused. It didn't give Kylie time to think, so she ran up to the door and practically tore it open.
Kai turned.
Although the outfit she wore today was not exactly like his the other day, it was obviously an adaptation. Instead of the tank top, she had a black tube on. Her white scarf was tied around her hair, and her pants, although still dark blue, had several pockets on them.
She couldn't help smiling. Clueless, she said the only thing that she could think of. "Hi. What're you here for?"
Kai had no idea what to say. "I.uhhh.I."
Kylie moved out of the doorway and closer to him. Damn, she had no idea what to do!
"Uhhh. Wanna come in?" She asked, without thinking.
"If you don't mind." Kai replied, glad to have finally managed to string a sentence together.
When Kai did go inside, the first thing he noticed was Havoc. "You beyblade?" He asked, suddenly curious.
"The Stormhawks aren't only a gang, you know. We're beybladers too." She picked the beyblade up.
Kai looked at the unusual coloring. Kylie handed the blade to him, and he peered at the bitbeast. They gray hawk had a tail that had resemblance to Dranzer's. "What's it called?"
"To tell you the truth, I have no idea. I call him Havoc. You mind if I see Dranzer?" She sounded hopeful. Kai took his blue blade out and gave it to her.
He could swear he heard her breathe in sharply as she held it. She looked up with a glint in her eyes. "Wanna battle?"
Kai answered, his own eyes shining as well. "Fucking sure I do." (A.N: Should I raise the rating? Pls advise.)
~~~~~~~A little while later~~~~~~~
Leo heard Kylie's laugh and headed towards it. He stopped dead in his tracks before she saw him. There was someone with her. Not a Stormhawk. His eyes grew round as he began to recognize Kai Hiwatari.
They were going to battle. Cool, that'd be interesting, he thought. If only the others were here.
They launched their blades at the same time although neither had said anything. Kai knew Kylie had an advantage: He had never seen her blade before. As he looked at Havoc, he was surprised to find that the beyblade's stripes made it hard to concentrate.
Neither of them wasted time. Dranzer moved in on Havoc just as the hawk was gaining speed. Kai noticed that Havoc did not spin standing on one spot like Dranzer, but moved in a small circle.
The beyblades crashed and both birds shot out at once. Dranzer at Kai's cry, and Havoc at Kylie's strange bird-like shriek.
Both hawk and phoenix seemed to be showing off: Havoc was making way to many battle shrieks than necessary, and Kai was sure he'd never seen Dranzer this bright. It was as if she was really made of fire. (A.N: I think Dranzer is female. Personal opinion only, so don't mind me.)
As the bitbeasts dove at each other, the beyblades, spinning below, crashed and collided. Sparks flew and dust was raised.
Kylie let out another shriek, and Havoc dove down, below Dranzer. At another shriek, he turned upwards and Kai's blade was flipped into the air. Kai flinched, but it landed back on the ground and continued spinning.
Kai cried out to Dranzer and she burst into flames. The fire reached out to Havoc, and, before Kylie could make a sound, the great hawk flapped his wings and warded the flames of.
Kai was sure it was the best beybattle he'd ever had. The ending wasn't spectacular: Both beyblades were worn out and started to wobble at the same time. The birds disappeared. But he knew it would be a long time until another battle like that. He was amazed when he saw how Havoc worked sometimes without Kylie's commands, and even those commands. he had heard commands in other languages, but never animal sounds. He was breathless.
Kylie was equally amazed.
From the shadows, Leo left to find Flyer and Wraithe. He just had to tell them about this battle.
The fact that Kylie was now very close to him was not helping Kai get his breath back, but as their lips met he did not care about the need for air anymore. Dranzer and Havoc lay at their feet as they melted into each other's arms.
END OF CHAPTER 5
Oooo. I swear I didn't mean for that to happen! But oh well, since it has, don't leave me now; their little evening is not over! REVIEW! Tell me what you think about the battle scene and the ending.
Scarlet Diamonds: Thanx. Great to know my story applies to more than just Kai fans.
Dark-Soul78: Thanks. I never get irritated by reviewers!
Oh well, only two reviewers. I gotta admit, I expected more. Nvm, pls REVIEW!
Note: Help! What is Lee's bitbeast called?
-DranzerDemonBikrGal
TO KILL A PART OF YOUR HEART: chapter 5
See, the Earth is gone!
No land, no water, no sun
No one!
And all that matters is the wind.
Two days after their dinner at the Blue Jasmine, the BladeBreakers were staying at a 4-star hotel somewhere in the city. (A.N: I've never been to New York, so pardon my vagueness.) Tyson was sharing a room with Max and Kenny while Kai shared a room with Rei. It was because of such an arrangement did Rei notice Kai's departure from the hotel that evening.
"Yo Kai, where are you going?"
Kai turned around. "Chinatown." Ok, he wondered. Why the hell did he say that? He didn't mean to go to Chinatown, and now Rei was going to ask stupid questions.
"Why'd you want to go there for?"
"Dunno. Now fuck off and quit asking questions."
"Yeah, fine, whatever." Then something stuck him, and he added. "We're going over to Cali's house tomorrow. They're planning to send a spy to look after the Stormhawks or something like that. You'd better be there, kay?"
Kai didn't answer and headed out.
He wondered if the BladeBreakers would believe it if someone told them he was going to look for the Stormhawks.
~~~~~~~Somewhere else~~~~~~~~
Flyer finally slowed down when he reached the Stormhawk-inhibited neighborhood. Running a hand through his hair, which was such a dark blue it was almost black, he let the other hand rest on the stolen Harley. Oh man, he thought, I'm gonna have fun with this baby.
The wind informed him of his presence even before he heard his footsteps. By the time Kai was close enough to see the Harley, Flyer was beyond sight, in the shadows.
Knew he wouldn't stay away after he met Kylie. He grinned mischievously.
Flyer breathed out purposely, and ran away from his corner into another, making sure Kai noticed a darting shadow. To his satisfaction, the guy followed.
And so they continued hunting each other through the alleys, until at last Flyer knew Kylie's place was near. He rapped at her window and disappeared.
Kylie, upon hearing his knock, headed to the window. She peered through it but didn't see a thing.
"Must have been a bird." She muttered. Then she saw Kai emerge from the shadows.
Strange, she thought. Judging from his expression, it was unlikely that he was the one who knocked. In fact, she could have sworn that was Flyer's knock.
Kai began to walk away, clearly confused. It didn't give Kylie time to think, so she ran up to the door and practically tore it open.
Kai turned.
Although the outfit she wore today was not exactly like his the other day, it was obviously an adaptation. Instead of the tank top, she had a black tube on. Her white scarf was tied around her hair, and her pants, although still dark blue, had several pockets on them.
She couldn't help smiling. Clueless, she said the only thing that she could think of. "Hi. What're you here for?"
Kai had no idea what to say. "I.uhhh.I."
Kylie moved out of the doorway and closer to him. Damn, she had no idea what to do!
"Uhhh. Wanna come in?" She asked, without thinking.
"If you don't mind." Kai replied, glad to have finally managed to string a sentence together.
When Kai did go inside, the first thing he noticed was Havoc. "You beyblade?" He asked, suddenly curious.
"The Stormhawks aren't only a gang, you know. We're beybladers too." She picked the beyblade up.
Kai looked at the unusual coloring. Kylie handed the blade to him, and he peered at the bitbeast. They gray hawk had a tail that had resemblance to Dranzer's. "What's it called?"
"To tell you the truth, I have no idea. I call him Havoc. You mind if I see Dranzer?" She sounded hopeful. Kai took his blue blade out and gave it to her.
He could swear he heard her breathe in sharply as she held it. She looked up with a glint in her eyes. "Wanna battle?"
Kai answered, his own eyes shining as well. "Fucking sure I do." (A.N: Should I raise the rating? Pls advise.)
~~~~~~~A little while later~~~~~~~
Leo heard Kylie's laugh and headed towards it. He stopped dead in his tracks before she saw him. There was someone with her. Not a Stormhawk. His eyes grew round as he began to recognize Kai Hiwatari.
They were going to battle. Cool, that'd be interesting, he thought. If only the others were here.
They launched their blades at the same time although neither had said anything. Kai knew Kylie had an advantage: He had never seen her blade before. As he looked at Havoc, he was surprised to find that the beyblade's stripes made it hard to concentrate.
Neither of them wasted time. Dranzer moved in on Havoc just as the hawk was gaining speed. Kai noticed that Havoc did not spin standing on one spot like Dranzer, but moved in a small circle.
The beyblades crashed and both birds shot out at once. Dranzer at Kai's cry, and Havoc at Kylie's strange bird-like shriek.
Both hawk and phoenix seemed to be showing off: Havoc was making way to many battle shrieks than necessary, and Kai was sure he'd never seen Dranzer this bright. It was as if she was really made of fire. (A.N: I think Dranzer is female. Personal opinion only, so don't mind me.)
As the bitbeasts dove at each other, the beyblades, spinning below, crashed and collided. Sparks flew and dust was raised.
Kylie let out another shriek, and Havoc dove down, below Dranzer. At another shriek, he turned upwards and Kai's blade was flipped into the air. Kai flinched, but it landed back on the ground and continued spinning.
Kai cried out to Dranzer and she burst into flames. The fire reached out to Havoc, and, before Kylie could make a sound, the great hawk flapped his wings and warded the flames of.
Kai was sure it was the best beybattle he'd ever had. The ending wasn't spectacular: Both beyblades were worn out and started to wobble at the same time. The birds disappeared. But he knew it would be a long time until another battle like that. He was amazed when he saw how Havoc worked sometimes without Kylie's commands, and even those commands. he had heard commands in other languages, but never animal sounds. He was breathless.
Kylie was equally amazed.
From the shadows, Leo left to find Flyer and Wraithe. He just had to tell them about this battle.
The fact that Kylie was now very close to him was not helping Kai get his breath back, but as their lips met he did not care about the need for air anymore. Dranzer and Havoc lay at their feet as they melted into each other's arms.
END OF CHAPTER 5
Oooo. I swear I didn't mean for that to happen! But oh well, since it has, don't leave me now; their little evening is not over! REVIEW! Tell me what you think about the battle scene and the ending.
Scarlet Diamonds: Thanx. Great to know my story applies to more than just Kai fans.
Dark-Soul78: Thanks. I never get irritated by reviewers!
Oh well, only two reviewers. I gotta admit, I expected more. Nvm, pls REVIEW!
Note: Help! What is Lee's bitbeast called?
-DranzerDemonBikrGal
