Hello one and all. Thanx for the reviews.
Puppetmonkey: I agree, it was kind of rushed. But have no fear this chapter is longer and no rushing. Thanx for reading.
Blueseedfan: Thanx for reviewing! I am glad you liked it.
Man: Thanx for reading and reviewing. Sorry this took awhile, been busy with other stuff.
Now, all of you that have been reading this and not reviewing.*dramatic music starts* please, please, please review. It is the only way I can get better. I feel rejected when I don't get reviews. (j/k) *dramatic music ends*
Now onto chapter 6 *a chorus of ooooo and ahhhhhhhh's *:
"IT IS SO OVER!" The words I said made a mark. After all Rei has done for me and what I have done for him, it is over. I called Harumi.
"Hello?" said a friendly voice.
"Oh Harumi! It's awful!" I blurted out.
"Kira? What's wrong?" asked Harumi worried.
"I just broke up with Rei."
"WHAT? Really? Why?"
I explained what happened today, starting from the note to the break up. It seemed like forever until I was done. By the end I was crying, but I stopped. I remembered Rei's words about me being a wimp. It wasn't his exact words but basically that's what he meant.
"Kira.I am so sorry. I feel sorry for you. I hope this goes by." Harumi tried to be sympathetic. She really wasn't good at the sympathy thing.
"I am such a wimp. All I do is cry, cry, and cry. That's all I do. Poor little Kira needs Rei to help her get by. Kira, poor, pathetic, week Kira. I am so sick of it. But no more! For now on, I shall not shed one tear. I am going to fend for myself."
I thought to myself that very thing.
"Hey Harumi, do you want to go shopping tomorrow?" I asked my friend in mid- sentence. I really wasn't listening to her.
"Sure." She said being kind of taken back. "Okay cool."
"Hey Kira. You should cut your hair." Harumi told me.
"Why?" I asked her, looking at my hair. I had never cut it in my life. I was kind of attached to it.
"Because, it is a tradition for split up couples to cut there hair." She explained to me.
"Um.I don't know."
"Oh come on! It will be fun!" Harumi insisted.
"Okay. I will come over." I told her.
"Okay. How about you just stay over." She offered. I could tell she wanted me to take my mind off of Rei.
"Okay. I'll be there in a few minutes." I told her.
"Bye." And we hung up. I got a few things packed and I headed out the door telling my parents I was going over to Harumi's house to stay over. I walked over to the closed McDonald's to get the station wagon from the parking lot. There was a piece of paper on it. It said that I needed to move the car or it would be towed. I threw the paper away and drove off. I reached Harumi's house in record time. Her family greeted me and she and I went up stairs.
"Hey Harumi." I started while Harumi was cutting my hair.
"Yah?"
"Can I borrow some of your clothes?"
"What for?" she asked.
"Well.I was just thinking about what Rei said about me being a wimp." I said to her.
"Oh please! Don't listen to what that cheater has to say!" she told me sniping off a chunk of hair. I hadn't realized I had so much hair.
"I know, but still. He is right. All I do is cry and wait on others to save me. So I was thinking about a makeover. Hopefully soon I can take a karate class. I really don't want to depend on people for protection and I want to try to a different look." I explained.
"Oh! I get it now!" she said, "Okay Kira.want to look at your hair now?"
My hair felt a lot of liter than it was. Harumi gave me a mirror and I looked into it. I had looked a lot different. My hair has shoulder length and it was wavy.
"Wow Harumi! You did a great job!" I told her.
"Thanks. Now lets get started on that makeover you where talking over."
Harumi put in a CD and we listened to rock music while we worked over my appearance and attitude. ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ Thanx for reading my story. Hopefully this was better. Please review and tell me what ya think about it. Chapter 7 is on the way.
Puppetmonkey: I agree, it was kind of rushed. But have no fear this chapter is longer and no rushing. Thanx for reading.
Blueseedfan: Thanx for reviewing! I am glad you liked it.
Man: Thanx for reading and reviewing. Sorry this took awhile, been busy with other stuff.
Now, all of you that have been reading this and not reviewing.*dramatic music starts* please, please, please review. It is the only way I can get better. I feel rejected when I don't get reviews. (j/k) *dramatic music ends*
Now onto chapter 6 *a chorus of ooooo and ahhhhhhhh's *:
"IT IS SO OVER!" The words I said made a mark. After all Rei has done for me and what I have done for him, it is over. I called Harumi.
"Hello?" said a friendly voice.
"Oh Harumi! It's awful!" I blurted out.
"Kira? What's wrong?" asked Harumi worried.
"I just broke up with Rei."
"WHAT? Really? Why?"
I explained what happened today, starting from the note to the break up. It seemed like forever until I was done. By the end I was crying, but I stopped. I remembered Rei's words about me being a wimp. It wasn't his exact words but basically that's what he meant.
"Kira.I am so sorry. I feel sorry for you. I hope this goes by." Harumi tried to be sympathetic. She really wasn't good at the sympathy thing.
"I am such a wimp. All I do is cry, cry, and cry. That's all I do. Poor little Kira needs Rei to help her get by. Kira, poor, pathetic, week Kira. I am so sick of it. But no more! For now on, I shall not shed one tear. I am going to fend for myself."
I thought to myself that very thing.
"Hey Harumi, do you want to go shopping tomorrow?" I asked my friend in mid- sentence. I really wasn't listening to her.
"Sure." She said being kind of taken back. "Okay cool."
"Hey Kira. You should cut your hair." Harumi told me.
"Why?" I asked her, looking at my hair. I had never cut it in my life. I was kind of attached to it.
"Because, it is a tradition for split up couples to cut there hair." She explained to me.
"Um.I don't know."
"Oh come on! It will be fun!" Harumi insisted.
"Okay. I will come over." I told her.
"Okay. How about you just stay over." She offered. I could tell she wanted me to take my mind off of Rei.
"Okay. I'll be there in a few minutes." I told her.
"Bye." And we hung up. I got a few things packed and I headed out the door telling my parents I was going over to Harumi's house to stay over. I walked over to the closed McDonald's to get the station wagon from the parking lot. There was a piece of paper on it. It said that I needed to move the car or it would be towed. I threw the paper away and drove off. I reached Harumi's house in record time. Her family greeted me and she and I went up stairs.
"Hey Harumi." I started while Harumi was cutting my hair.
"Yah?"
"Can I borrow some of your clothes?"
"What for?" she asked.
"Well.I was just thinking about what Rei said about me being a wimp." I said to her.
"Oh please! Don't listen to what that cheater has to say!" she told me sniping off a chunk of hair. I hadn't realized I had so much hair.
"I know, but still. He is right. All I do is cry and wait on others to save me. So I was thinking about a makeover. Hopefully soon I can take a karate class. I really don't want to depend on people for protection and I want to try to a different look." I explained.
"Oh! I get it now!" she said, "Okay Kira.want to look at your hair now?"
My hair felt a lot of liter than it was. Harumi gave me a mirror and I looked into it. I had looked a lot different. My hair has shoulder length and it was wavy.
"Wow Harumi! You did a great job!" I told her.
"Thanks. Now lets get started on that makeover you where talking over."
Harumi put in a CD and we listened to rock music while we worked over my appearance and attitude. ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ ~~ Thanx for reading my story. Hopefully this was better. Please review and tell me what ya think about it. Chapter 7 is on the way.
