Chapter 9
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Chichi5: thanx for reading, glad you like it.
Lala()- Don't worry about it, I haven't either.
Kirarie: thanx for the ideas and remarks. They help so I know what to write so that you and others keep reading and reviewing (*hint hint to all of you who haven't reviewed yet*
Thanx for the people who have read it and reviewed it. Any ways, here is Chapter 9 and I hope you like it. WARNING: Has language and evil, meanies trying to get there way. Disclaimer: Me no own Mars
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"What the hell are you doing here? And how the hell did you find out where I lived?" I asked him. He laughed simply and smiled at me, "its funny how simple minded. It's easy. I just followed you."
"Okay, second question answered. Now answer the first one, shit head." I demanded. I was getting madder by the second.
"Why such the language? Are still mad about that, Rei? It's not like I did anything? Besides, I didn't do anything to you, did I?" he asked.
My temper rose. He was really pissing me off. Ever since I first met him, I didn't like him. He gave me the creeps, and that doesn't happen often.
"BUT YOU DID SOMETHING TO KIRA! And that's why I will NEVER forgive you!!" I yelled at Ien.
He just stood there.he still had that same smirk on. It was the kind of smirk that made you want the punch his face in. I clenched my fist; it was the only thing that would keep me from doing that exact thing.
"That's too bad. I had hoped you felt differently and we could work things out." Ien told me. He shrugged and said, "Oh well." He looked over his shoulder and yelled out, "Okay boys take him in."
Three big thugs came out of the parked limo (author's note: Remember, I told you in chapter one that he was a famous painter) and smothered me with a cloth that had a fume that made me pass out.
I hoped Rei could forgive me. I felt like a dumb-ass. I had to explain things to him. I hade to tell him the truth, for I don't I know I will do something drastic. I don't know what, but I know something drastic. I rushed threw Tokyo's crowded city, trying to reach Rei's apartment.
"Kira?" a voice behind me asked. I turned around and it was Harumi.
"What?" I snapped.
"Oh sorry! Didn't know you were still in bitchy mode." Harumi snorted.
"I am sorry Harumi; I am just trying to get to Rei's place. I need to tell him something." I said apologetic.
"It's okay. Wow! You're a lot nicer about this!" she stated heading closer to me (a/n: she behind her a little distance).
"What do you mean?" I asked, a little confused.
"Are you forgetting that he cheated on you for a slut?" she asked me.
I thought.oh ya.he did. I forgot about that...
"Oh.ya.But that doesn't matter now. I need to tell him something. "I explained.
"Oh.so have you read the note yet?" she asked me. I knew that she knew that I forgot about it.
"Huh?"
"You scatter brain, you might want to read it before you do anything." She explained.
"I will later." I told her.
There was some silence. Then Harumi looked at her watch, "Oh shit! I have to meet Tatsuya in 5 minutes!" she exclaimed and rushed off, "See ya later Kira." She waved at the last moment.
I waved back and continued on.
"Kira?" another voice said behind me.
"What now!?" I exclaimed, getting impatient.
As I turned around, I got slugged in the face by a hard fist. All I remember is hitting the floor.
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So what do ya think? Sorry, but she reads the note in a different chapter. Something to tease you to read the other chapters. I know where the story is going to go and end. So I can build to it. ^_^
Please REVIEW NOW!!!
Hello! Please read and review! It really does help. Please tell me any ideas you may have and I will give you credit for it if I use it. I can take bad reviews. I just want your honest opinion. It really helps.
Answering reviews:
Chichi5: thanx for reading, glad you like it.
Lala()- Don't worry about it, I haven't either.
Kirarie: thanx for the ideas and remarks. They help so I know what to write so that you and others keep reading and reviewing (*hint hint to all of you who haven't reviewed yet*
Thanx for the people who have read it and reviewed it. Any ways, here is Chapter 9 and I hope you like it. WARNING: Has language and evil, meanies trying to get there way. Disclaimer: Me no own Mars
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"What the hell are you doing here? And how the hell did you find out where I lived?" I asked him. He laughed simply and smiled at me, "its funny how simple minded. It's easy. I just followed you."
"Okay, second question answered. Now answer the first one, shit head." I demanded. I was getting madder by the second.
"Why such the language? Are still mad about that, Rei? It's not like I did anything? Besides, I didn't do anything to you, did I?" he asked.
My temper rose. He was really pissing me off. Ever since I first met him, I didn't like him. He gave me the creeps, and that doesn't happen often.
"BUT YOU DID SOMETHING TO KIRA! And that's why I will NEVER forgive you!!" I yelled at Ien.
He just stood there.he still had that same smirk on. It was the kind of smirk that made you want the punch his face in. I clenched my fist; it was the only thing that would keep me from doing that exact thing.
"That's too bad. I had hoped you felt differently and we could work things out." Ien told me. He shrugged and said, "Oh well." He looked over his shoulder and yelled out, "Okay boys take him in."
Three big thugs came out of the parked limo (author's note: Remember, I told you in chapter one that he was a famous painter) and smothered me with a cloth that had a fume that made me pass out.
I hoped Rei could forgive me. I felt like a dumb-ass. I had to explain things to him. I hade to tell him the truth, for I don't I know I will do something drastic. I don't know what, but I know something drastic. I rushed threw Tokyo's crowded city, trying to reach Rei's apartment.
"Kira?" a voice behind me asked. I turned around and it was Harumi.
"What?" I snapped.
"Oh sorry! Didn't know you were still in bitchy mode." Harumi snorted.
"I am sorry Harumi; I am just trying to get to Rei's place. I need to tell him something." I said apologetic.
"It's okay. Wow! You're a lot nicer about this!" she stated heading closer to me (a/n: she behind her a little distance).
"What do you mean?" I asked, a little confused.
"Are you forgetting that he cheated on you for a slut?" she asked me.
I thought.oh ya.he did. I forgot about that...
"Oh.ya.But that doesn't matter now. I need to tell him something. "I explained.
"Oh.so have you read the note yet?" she asked me. I knew that she knew that I forgot about it.
"Huh?"
"You scatter brain, you might want to read it before you do anything." She explained.
"I will later." I told her.
There was some silence. Then Harumi looked at her watch, "Oh shit! I have to meet Tatsuya in 5 minutes!" she exclaimed and rushed off, "See ya later Kira." She waved at the last moment.
I waved back and continued on.
"Kira?" another voice said behind me.
"What now!?" I exclaimed, getting impatient.
As I turned around, I got slugged in the face by a hard fist. All I remember is hitting the floor.
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So what do ya think? Sorry, but she reads the note in a different chapter. Something to tease you to read the other chapters. I know where the story is going to go and end. So I can build to it. ^_^
Please REVIEW NOW!!!
