*Thanks for the reviews Surfer-Gurl and Soho Joe. ^.^
Surfer-Gurl: Er...I know it is confusing and I have to work on the whole paragraph thing because
it was annoying
me..and I'm going to explain a lot more in this chapter about why Kit was mad at Peter. It just
sort of came to me and
I started writing and I wasn't exactly sure why she was mad at Peter or why she was being so
calm about Hook.
But...I'll work on it well at least about Hook. ^.^
Soho Joe: Thanks for the comment. ^.^...
Alright I'm done. I was going to do a smiley but I already did too many....Alright here it goes. I
hope this explains a
lot more.*
Peter curled up on his bed. He never slept. His eyes surveyed over everything in his room
carefully. A key
was being twiddled between his fingers. It looked like any ordinary silver house key. We'll just
guess it's Kit's.
The first time he met her he dismissed her as if she was no one. With her soft scared eyes and
her lips in the
form of a heart. But like all the other girls she fell for him. His mysterious voice and ways. His
curiosity. He came
to hear her stories. She told herself stories at night when she was bored. Out loud she thought
other people were
listening and other people were listening. Sometimes they were about pirates and how they
showed their nice sides to
women and begged them for love. It made Peter wonder for a split second. He never did invite
her to Neverland. He
never knew how she arrived in Neverland.
The Lost Boys moved around him laughing and talking. "Where's mother?"said Twist
innocently.
"Who?"questioned Peter. "You know mother."said Red, submissively. "I don't have a
mother."growled Peter.
"Kit."said Thorn. "I know no such person." "But, Peter, you lov-"started Mint. "Don't say
another word!"bellowed
Peter. The Lost Boys, Ramsy, Sweep, Holes, Red, Thorn, and Mint, stared solemnly at Peter.
Peter stormed off and
flew off into the night.
It was the darkest night it had ever been in a long while. Ramsy, for one, figured Peter had
finally cracked
and decided to grow up. While Sweep, Holes, and Red thought he died. And well Thorn and
Mint were kind of
oblivious to the whole thing for they were having their own innocent conversation on fighting.
You can't really say
they are conceited though. Rain had begun to fall like pellets onto the ground.
Hook stood in the doorway of the room Kit was in. She had curled up on the bed and
fallen
asleep. It was
really about time. Hook thought she was never going to get to sleep. She was worried the ship
was going to sink or
something. He was a bit surprised she didn't try escaping. He knew for a fact that Peter taught her
to fly without pixie
dust. But maybe just from happy thoughts. And Kit, probably had none. He turned and left the
room.
Only to be met by the pirates. "Yes?"asked Hook. "We saw Peter!"said Starky. "Let him be.
When he
realizes we have what he wants he will come forward." "But, capt'n!"cried Smee. "Smee, I
suggest you keep one
hand over your gossiping mouth." Smee, when Hook had been eaten, went around saying Hook
only feared Smee.
And that he had beaten Hook with only a small dagger and both hands behind his back. Which
we know is almost
impossible unless you hold it in your mouth but it's quite hard to maneuver it if so. But Hook
spared Smee waiting
for the precise moment to kill him. Hook had been eaten by the croc and then had killed the croc
from the inside. His
new crew bore the same names as his former crew as not to bring any confusion towards Smee
and Hook. Also it
made Peter think that maybe they didn't do a good job killing the pirates.
Kit awoke with a start. She only remembered blood. Blood had bestowed her dreams. But
slowly the dream
was coming to a rest and her mind rewound to it. She had been just twelve years old in her dream
and her mother
was cooking dinner when a man bursted in. He held a dagger and poised it over Kit's dear
mother. Kit ran into the
room and cried to her mother and her mother turned and in return a dagger flew into her heart.
The man turned and
Kit saw it was a boy. It was Peter..... Peter fled and Kit called the police. Nestling herself next to
her mother and
comforting her. Blood was all over Kit but her name had been cleared when the police saw her
fingerprints were not
on the dagger. And it was an unknown person.
But it wasn't a dream it was reality. And four years later Peter came back and became known to
Kit when she some how got to Neverland. Then told her the
event and telling her it was him. She slapped him and fled. Crying the whole way home. When
Peter finally had
caught up to her. She dismissed him. Telling him never to come near her again. She really did not
have the heart to
tell the police that this was the boy they spent the last four years searching for. Peter in jail was
not something even
Kit wanted.
Kit's mother was also Marlette Darling. John's great-great-great-great grand daughter. Marlette
was so ever
gay and innocent and heartless. As the days are young. She was Peter's favorite out of everyone
he brought to
Neverland. Marlette wove beautiful stories. But Peter couldn't stand it that Marlette grew old and
her daughter was
born. Such a heartless daughter. Not gay and innocent. Just heartless. It really tore Peter. So Peter
killed Marlette.
And when Marlette spun around and saw him. She didn't blame him. She blamed herself and
hoped her death would
be fast and painless. But let me tell you something a bit comforting. Marlette lived just barely.
But she lived. Now,
when you look at Marlette's house. You can see Marlette curled up on a swinging bench in the
screened porch.
Writing the stories she so often told Peter. A man about her age stands by her trying to comfort
her as well. "It is not
your fault."he whispers. She tells him he is wrong and more fiercely she writes. Sometimes she
comes upon the
pictures Kit took of Neverland and she cries aloud. She hopes Kit will find the stories in time and
will be able to tell
them to Peter. Make sure Peter forgives both of them for their wrong doing.
*I still haven't figured out how I'm going to explain why Hook is being nice to Kit. But I hoped it
explained at least a
little about why Kit was mad at Peter...even if Marlette didn't die... Kit was just scared of him
mainly..Alright.....er..I'll write more later. ^.^*
Surfer-Gurl: Er...I know it is confusing and I have to work on the whole paragraph thing because
it was annoying
me..and I'm going to explain a lot more in this chapter about why Kit was mad at Peter. It just
sort of came to me and
I started writing and I wasn't exactly sure why she was mad at Peter or why she was being so
calm about Hook.
But...I'll work on it well at least about Hook. ^.^
Soho Joe: Thanks for the comment. ^.^...
Alright I'm done. I was going to do a smiley but I already did too many....Alright here it goes. I
hope this explains a
lot more.*
Peter curled up on his bed. He never slept. His eyes surveyed over everything in his room
carefully. A key
was being twiddled between his fingers. It looked like any ordinary silver house key. We'll just
guess it's Kit's.
The first time he met her he dismissed her as if she was no one. With her soft scared eyes and
her lips in the
form of a heart. But like all the other girls she fell for him. His mysterious voice and ways. His
curiosity. He came
to hear her stories. She told herself stories at night when she was bored. Out loud she thought
other people were
listening and other people were listening. Sometimes they were about pirates and how they
showed their nice sides to
women and begged them for love. It made Peter wonder for a split second. He never did invite
her to Neverland. He
never knew how she arrived in Neverland.
The Lost Boys moved around him laughing and talking. "Where's mother?"said Twist
innocently.
"Who?"questioned Peter. "You know mother."said Red, submissively. "I don't have a
mother."growled Peter.
"Kit."said Thorn. "I know no such person." "But, Peter, you lov-"started Mint. "Don't say
another word!"bellowed
Peter. The Lost Boys, Ramsy, Sweep, Holes, Red, Thorn, and Mint, stared solemnly at Peter.
Peter stormed off and
flew off into the night.
It was the darkest night it had ever been in a long while. Ramsy, for one, figured Peter had
finally cracked
and decided to grow up. While Sweep, Holes, and Red thought he died. And well Thorn and
Mint were kind of
oblivious to the whole thing for they were having their own innocent conversation on fighting.
You can't really say
they are conceited though. Rain had begun to fall like pellets onto the ground.
Hook stood in the doorway of the room Kit was in. She had curled up on the bed and
fallen
asleep. It was
really about time. Hook thought she was never going to get to sleep. She was worried the ship
was going to sink or
something. He was a bit surprised she didn't try escaping. He knew for a fact that Peter taught her
to fly without pixie
dust. But maybe just from happy thoughts. And Kit, probably had none. He turned and left the
room.
Only to be met by the pirates. "Yes?"asked Hook. "We saw Peter!"said Starky. "Let him be.
When he
realizes we have what he wants he will come forward." "But, capt'n!"cried Smee. "Smee, I
suggest you keep one
hand over your gossiping mouth." Smee, when Hook had been eaten, went around saying Hook
only feared Smee.
And that he had beaten Hook with only a small dagger and both hands behind his back. Which
we know is almost
impossible unless you hold it in your mouth but it's quite hard to maneuver it if so. But Hook
spared Smee waiting
for the precise moment to kill him. Hook had been eaten by the croc and then had killed the croc
from the inside. His
new crew bore the same names as his former crew as not to bring any confusion towards Smee
and Hook. Also it
made Peter think that maybe they didn't do a good job killing the pirates.
Kit awoke with a start. She only remembered blood. Blood had bestowed her dreams. But
slowly the dream
was coming to a rest and her mind rewound to it. She had been just twelve years old in her dream
and her mother
was cooking dinner when a man bursted in. He held a dagger and poised it over Kit's dear
mother. Kit ran into the
room and cried to her mother and her mother turned and in return a dagger flew into her heart.
The man turned and
Kit saw it was a boy. It was Peter..... Peter fled and Kit called the police. Nestling herself next to
her mother and
comforting her. Blood was all over Kit but her name had been cleared when the police saw her
fingerprints were not
on the dagger. And it was an unknown person.
But it wasn't a dream it was reality. And four years later Peter came back and became known to
Kit when she some how got to Neverland. Then told her the
event and telling her it was him. She slapped him and fled. Crying the whole way home. When
Peter finally had
caught up to her. She dismissed him. Telling him never to come near her again. She really did not
have the heart to
tell the police that this was the boy they spent the last four years searching for. Peter in jail was
not something even
Kit wanted.
Kit's mother was also Marlette Darling. John's great-great-great-great grand daughter. Marlette
was so ever
gay and innocent and heartless. As the days are young. She was Peter's favorite out of everyone
he brought to
Neverland. Marlette wove beautiful stories. But Peter couldn't stand it that Marlette grew old and
her daughter was
born. Such a heartless daughter. Not gay and innocent. Just heartless. It really tore Peter. So Peter
killed Marlette.
And when Marlette spun around and saw him. She didn't blame him. She blamed herself and
hoped her death would
be fast and painless. But let me tell you something a bit comforting. Marlette lived just barely.
But she lived. Now,
when you look at Marlette's house. You can see Marlette curled up on a swinging bench in the
screened porch.
Writing the stories she so often told Peter. A man about her age stands by her trying to comfort
her as well. "It is not
your fault."he whispers. She tells him he is wrong and more fiercely she writes. Sometimes she
comes upon the
pictures Kit took of Neverland and she cries aloud. She hopes Kit will find the stories in time and
will be able to tell
them to Peter. Make sure Peter forgives both of them for their wrong doing.
*I still haven't figured out how I'm going to explain why Hook is being nice to Kit. But I hoped it
explained at least a
little about why Kit was mad at Peter...even if Marlette didn't die... Kit was just scared of him
mainly..Alright.....er..I'll write more later. ^.^*
