Cinn: Hopefully I won't cut any of this. But chappie 11 is my fave chappie, and also the longest. Well anyways, just R&R.
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People can change and not everyone around them can notice or realise in what way they've changed. Sometimes `you` don't even know you've changed. Trinity's p.o.v.
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Wed,
Maths, what's the point in it? There is no point. I'd much sooner be home trying to crack the IRSD-base or something. O.K. maybe not the IRSD-base `just` yet. But whatever.
Break, O.K. my friends wann play soccer. Hm, alright sounds better than nothing.
10 minutes later.....
O.K. who tripped who up? Well he quickly stood and helped me stand. Then something weird happened. Something in me just compelled me to stand there, I just didn't wanna move.
" Hey Zoë, you alright? If you are you're taking the penalty. "
" Lindz, I wasn't tripped up. "
" Zoë, I tripped you up. Everyone saw. "
" Well it was me who fell, and I don't know who tripped who up. "
" Hey Zoë what's gotton into you? Why are you sticking up for geek? "
I shruged.
" You `do` like him! " Lindz exclaimed triumphantly.
" I don't. "
The bell went.
" We coulda won then! "
" I know, but we didn't deserve a penalty. "
" So? You normally use `any` excuse for a penalty! "
" Well maybe I've changed a bit! "
" Yeah, you've changed into liking geeks! "
" Not true! "
Bio,
Evolution, what!?! Confusing. Why do we need to study evolution!?! We've evolved enough, havn't we? So why do we need to study evolution? Well O.K. geek here might wanna, but who else? Speaking of geek, reimnds me of what I heard Dan say to him after playing soccer. Dan is insisting that I like him and that even if I did I wouldn't admit it.
" Zoë? "
" Yeah? "
" Are you mad at me or you're friends? "
" My friends. Why would I be mad at you? "
" I tripped you up remember. "
" I remember. " Couldn't forget easily. To be honest, I'm glad. I don't know why, but I am. Doesn't mean anything though, does it?
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Cinn: Whatever. please just R&R the best chappie's next. Well in my opinion anyways. Please feel free to point out anything, sugest stuff. Oh, feel free to flame too. I won't mind.
Trinity04: I will be, and I don't mean to be. O.K.? Read and you'll see it gets less geekist as I go on. Thanks for the review or was it a flame? I don't care which so... Thanks.
Protectress of Dalidon: Well duh! Who else would he be? No offence, I'm just crazy. I do try to make it clear, but it's not always. Sorry to all about the unclearness. And thanks to you for the review. Yes, there will be a `little` bit more than clarrification on the images. Enter the matrix tells you their ages. Can't remember them right now. But it's a diffrence of about 8yrs. the hacking comes in better later. Get used to her being mean. Anyone can be mean. You'll see why later. What's with chickens??? I can't remember anything about chickens... Thanks for all your reviews.
leeloo_dalas_multipass84: I would make 'em longer if I could. I try. The next chappie is moderatly long. Thanks for the review.
richard the pedantic: you're mean! I can't reply to the review without spoiling the entire fic. Anyways, thanks. I'll reply more next chappie. Thanks for the review.
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Unknown changes.
People can change and not everyone around them can notice or realise in what way they've changed. Sometimes `you` don't even know you've changed. Trinity's p.o.v.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Wed,
Maths, what's the point in it? There is no point. I'd much sooner be home trying to crack the IRSD-base or something. O.K. maybe not the IRSD-base `just` yet. But whatever.
Break, O.K. my friends wann play soccer. Hm, alright sounds better than nothing.
10 minutes later.....
O.K. who tripped who up? Well he quickly stood and helped me stand. Then something weird happened. Something in me just compelled me to stand there, I just didn't wanna move.
" Hey Zoë, you alright? If you are you're taking the penalty. "
" Lindz, I wasn't tripped up. "
" Zoë, I tripped you up. Everyone saw. "
" Well it was me who fell, and I don't know who tripped who up. "
" Hey Zoë what's gotton into you? Why are you sticking up for geek? "
I shruged.
" You `do` like him! " Lindz exclaimed triumphantly.
" I don't. "
The bell went.
" We coulda won then! "
" I know, but we didn't deserve a penalty. "
" So? You normally use `any` excuse for a penalty! "
" Well maybe I've changed a bit! "
" Yeah, you've changed into liking geeks! "
" Not true! "
Bio,
Evolution, what!?! Confusing. Why do we need to study evolution!?! We've evolved enough, havn't we? So why do we need to study evolution? Well O.K. geek here might wanna, but who else? Speaking of geek, reimnds me of what I heard Dan say to him after playing soccer. Dan is insisting that I like him and that even if I did I wouldn't admit it.
" Zoë? "
" Yeah? "
" Are you mad at me or you're friends? "
" My friends. Why would I be mad at you? "
" I tripped you up remember. "
" I remember. " Couldn't forget easily. To be honest, I'm glad. I don't know why, but I am. Doesn't mean anything though, does it?
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Cinn: Whatever. please just R&R the best chappie's next. Well in my opinion anyways. Please feel free to point out anything, sugest stuff. Oh, feel free to flame too. I won't mind.
Trinity04: I will be, and I don't mean to be. O.K.? Read and you'll see it gets less geekist as I go on. Thanks for the review or was it a flame? I don't care which so... Thanks.
Protectress of Dalidon: Well duh! Who else would he be? No offence, I'm just crazy. I do try to make it clear, but it's not always. Sorry to all about the unclearness. And thanks to you for the review. Yes, there will be a `little` bit more than clarrification on the images. Enter the matrix tells you their ages. Can't remember them right now. But it's a diffrence of about 8yrs. the hacking comes in better later. Get used to her being mean. Anyone can be mean. You'll see why later. What's with chickens??? I can't remember anything about chickens... Thanks for all your reviews.
leeloo_dalas_multipass84: I would make 'em longer if I could. I try. The next chappie is moderatly long. Thanks for the review.
richard the pedantic: you're mean! I can't reply to the review without spoiling the entire fic. Anyways, thanks. I'll reply more next chappie. Thanks for the review.
