Author's Note ( Just love making these don't I?):
Yet! It's done! It's done! I hope you liked it. Here ends my short and (un)successful career as a Hercules fanfic writer. I know, I know. I totally copied off Mr. Kurt Vonnegut Jr. there didn't I? I'm sorry if I made anyone feel bad about what I did. Plagiarizing and all that. At least I mentioned that is was mostly his story right? I'm just a poor pathetic struggling writer and I have no money so you'll get nothing out of suing me.
I do hope you review it. Especially the last chapter. I loved making that the best. The last one and the first one actually. I think I had fun writhing all of them really.
Anyway, I hope you review. It feels weird posting stories on the net and not get any feedback. Half the time I feel like a moron for doing this because it's stupid, posting stories up that no one reads. Just write something, like maybe 'I read this and it sucked.' It doesn't matter. As long as I know some people read it. I mean, some others besides the four people who reviewed and the wonderful solitaire_one who gave a review for every chapter.
I'm posting an alternate ending to my last chapter. It's for all the Meg lovers out there and those who do not like Helen. I cannot blame them for their preference of Megara or whoever else they wish to be with our dear hero. I, after all, did not make the story long enough to make character developments and explain a lot of things. I'm messed up, I know. Oh and to Carmerethiel, thanks for correcting me but when I rechecked there was a Thebes in Greece too (^_^)
So here it is. For everyone's reading pleasure:
Child of a Different God
Alternate ending to the Last Chapter
by: pOtHeAd
She stood, stretched groaningly. "A very nice walk." She said.
"I thought so." He said.
"Part company here?" she said.
"Where will you go?" he said.
"Back to Hades, home." She said
"Good luck." He said,
"You too." She said. "Come with me Hercules?"
"No." He said.
She looked away.
He stepped back and stared at her for a moment, then quickly began to make his way back to his villa.
She watched him go. Stared as he grew smaller in the long perspective of shadows in the horizon, hoping that for just the slightest moment he would hesitate, then she would call him. If she called him, she knew that he would come to her. They had no choice.
She looked on as he slowly became a tiny speck in the horizon. He did not hesitate but she wanted to call him, wanted to cry out for him to stop.
She opened her mouth to call, but no sound came out.
Tears began to form in her eyes and she cried out desperately realizing that no sound would ever come out from her while she saw him disappear from her view.
She fell to her knees and tears flowed down her cheeks in silence. She could not speak.
Yet! It's done! It's done! I hope you liked it. Here ends my short and (un)successful career as a Hercules fanfic writer. I know, I know. I totally copied off Mr. Kurt Vonnegut Jr. there didn't I? I'm sorry if I made anyone feel bad about what I did. Plagiarizing and all that. At least I mentioned that is was mostly his story right? I'm just a poor pathetic struggling writer and I have no money so you'll get nothing out of suing me.
I do hope you review it. Especially the last chapter. I loved making that the best. The last one and the first one actually. I think I had fun writhing all of them really.
Anyway, I hope you review. It feels weird posting stories on the net and not get any feedback. Half the time I feel like a moron for doing this because it's stupid, posting stories up that no one reads. Just write something, like maybe 'I read this and it sucked.' It doesn't matter. As long as I know some people read it. I mean, some others besides the four people who reviewed and the wonderful solitaire_one who gave a review for every chapter.
I'm posting an alternate ending to my last chapter. It's for all the Meg lovers out there and those who do not like Helen. I cannot blame them for their preference of Megara or whoever else they wish to be with our dear hero. I, after all, did not make the story long enough to make character developments and explain a lot of things. I'm messed up, I know. Oh and to Carmerethiel, thanks for correcting me but when I rechecked there was a Thebes in Greece too (^_^)
So here it is. For everyone's reading pleasure:
Child of a Different God
Alternate ending to the Last Chapter
by: pOtHeAd
She stood, stretched groaningly. "A very nice walk." She said.
"I thought so." He said.
"Part company here?" she said.
"Where will you go?" he said.
"Back to Hades, home." She said
"Good luck." He said,
"You too." She said. "Come with me Hercules?"
"No." He said.
She looked away.
He stepped back and stared at her for a moment, then quickly began to make his way back to his villa.
She watched him go. Stared as he grew smaller in the long perspective of shadows in the horizon, hoping that for just the slightest moment he would hesitate, then she would call him. If she called him, she knew that he would come to her. They had no choice.
She looked on as he slowly became a tiny speck in the horizon. He did not hesitate but she wanted to call him, wanted to cry out for him to stop.
She opened her mouth to call, but no sound came out.
Tears began to form in her eyes and she cried out desperately realizing that no sound would ever come out from her while she saw him disappear from her view.
She fell to her knees and tears flowed down her cheeks in silence. She could not speak.
