I just got to the reviews today so I couldn't respond but now:
Kelst- I will write as soon as my hands can type. I have written it in my notebook up to 5 but I need time to type it up.
Icygurl- Thank you for your opinion that it was bland but it is only the first chapter and I hope you know that that was just a teaser of the real story and it more of a prologue than a chapter. Hope it gets better for you!
Selphie- Glad you think it is interesting hope you love the rest!
Thank you for reading my story!
Chapter 3
"So why are you here?" John asked.
"I just had a C-section," she said appalled.
"No, not that here, in this city," he said.
"I was kicked out," Color was back in her cheeks. It had been a few days since she had come into the ER.
"You were?" asked John almost unbelieving.
"Yeah, for some reason mom and dad weren't too happy when their overachieving only daughter told them she was knocked up. That's crazy, right," she said. " They gave me the 'you had such a bight future speech',"
"You did,"
"I still do,"
"Yeah with help,"
"Why do you think I came here John?" she asked. "To hear you tell me what I had and now don't. Too many people have told me that. My friends, mom, dad, even Ryan, I guess that's how I knew he wouldn't stick around. John I want to tell you a story when I was about 4 ½ months along I almost ended it. I was waiting and they called my name, then do you know what happened,"
"No,"
"He kicked for the first time. That's when I knew everything was going to work out and I was going to be okay because I love Alec he is me,"
"It's going it be hard,"
"Does look like a face that cares?"
Kelst- I will write as soon as my hands can type. I have written it in my notebook up to 5 but I need time to type it up.
Icygurl- Thank you for your opinion that it was bland but it is only the first chapter and I hope you know that that was just a teaser of the real story and it more of a prologue than a chapter. Hope it gets better for you!
Selphie- Glad you think it is interesting hope you love the rest!
Thank you for reading my story!
Chapter 3
"So why are you here?" John asked.
"I just had a C-section," she said appalled.
"No, not that here, in this city," he said.
"I was kicked out," Color was back in her cheeks. It had been a few days since she had come into the ER.
"You were?" asked John almost unbelieving.
"Yeah, for some reason mom and dad weren't too happy when their overachieving only daughter told them she was knocked up. That's crazy, right," she said. " They gave me the 'you had such a bight future speech',"
"You did,"
"I still do,"
"Yeah with help,"
"Why do you think I came here John?" she asked. "To hear you tell me what I had and now don't. Too many people have told me that. My friends, mom, dad, even Ryan, I guess that's how I knew he wouldn't stick around. John I want to tell you a story when I was about 4 ½ months along I almost ended it. I was waiting and they called my name, then do you know what happened,"
"No,"
"He kicked for the first time. That's when I knew everything was going to work out and I was going to be okay because I love Alec he is me,"
"It's going it be hard,"
"Does look like a face that cares?"
