Othe
A/N: :sniffs: some people are just mean, they like yell at you for writing
"basic cannon words" incorrectly. My most recent review basically said my
story sucked, and pointed out all the flaws, which is why I've been unable
to find the strength to update till now, so no more flames, and if you feel
obligated to point out flaws add in some 'sorry's and 'I don't mean to be
annoying's. Many thanks!
5 minutes before ***LPOV***
Who did this bitch think she was? Then she took a swing at me. Big mistake,
as I work out during the summer, no, I'm not a huge bookworm. Not thinking
to take out my wand, I punched her hard in the stomach. We continued
fighting for another three minutes until we both drew our wand at the same
time, I however was a bit faster than her and stunned her. The force of the
spell however was so strong it caused me to fall back and hit my head hard
on the stone floor of the classroom.
The next thing I knew I was in a dark room, with the only source of light
being far off in the distance. "James" I asked into the darkness. I was
afraid, remembering the fight between Courtney, and me, and how she hit on
James, and how he didn't do anything about it. What if he didn't really
love me? What if I was just another girl to him, like Serene, he said he
lived her too when he was dating her. I felt so alone, when the light in
the distance seemed to be coming closer.
"Lily?" it said in some ethereal voice.
"Yes? Who is it?" I asked back. I came right up to me. It looked just like
a human, aside from the fact that it was glowing. As a matter of fact it
looked just like my mother. "Mom?"
"No, dear child, I am not your mother. I am your Othe." My Othe replied.
"What's an Othe?" I asked.
"An Othe is the part of your mind that helps you make decisions. Now I am
here to help you make the decision of staying here in coma, or returning to
the world of the living, as now you are doubting weather you have anything
to live for." My Othe answered
"How did you know that?" I asked quite astonished.
"I told you dear, I am a part of your mind, I know your thoughts, and I
rationalize them." Wow did I feel stupid for asking that.
"There is no reason to feel incompetent, the shock of all this can make you
forget certain things, such as rationality." Creepy.
***JPOV***
I can't believe Courtney couldn't take a hint. 'We' as in her and me no
longer existed; as a matter of fact it never existed! Then she had to go
and put my girlfriend, and the love of my life into coma. Wait, do you put
someone in coma, or do you knock someone into coma? Wait, getting off
track, I was so going to kill her when I found her, then a thought struck
me. What if, Lily was waking up out of her coma and I wasn't there with
her. AH! I ran as fast as I could to the hospital wing and up to Lily's
bed. She was still out cold. I then vowed that I would never leave her
side, except for lessons, as I would most likely be forced out for lessons
by most of the staff. Just then Sirius, Remus, Peter, Serene, and Jess came
in. Jess and Serene rushed to Lily's bed and knelt by her side, while
Sirius Remus and Peter walked over to my side.
"What's wrong with her?" Serene snapped at me.
"She's in comma," I said simply staring at the lifeless face of my
girlfriend.
"It's all your fault Potter, if you had done something to stop that
Courtney from flirting with you, Lily wouldn't have felt obligated to stick
up for you, resulting in no fight, and no Lily in coma!" Serene yelled at
me. A wave of guilt coursed through me. It was my entire fault that Lily
was here in the Hospital wing, in a semi-dead state. Why didn't I do
something about Courtney? I felt like shit.
"Now, Serene, it's not nice to go blaming James when the real culprit is
Courtney. She's the one who started harassing my best mate, and she's the
one who tried to screw up their relationship, so if you're going to blame
someone Serene, blame Courtney." Sirius said. At this there was a moment of
silence, then the bell rang to signal the start of lunch. "Well, I'm
hungry, why don't we all go have some lunch, and check up on Lily later?"
Sirius asked.
"Yeah." everyone except me said in halfhearted unison.
"Coming James?" Sirius asked as everyone left to the Great hall, and he
stood in the doorway of the Hospital wing.
"Nah, you go ahead. I just want to stay here with Lily." I responded, still
looking at Lily's face.
"Don't beat yourself up about it, it wasn't your fault." Sirius said seeing
that I was close to tears.
"Yeah." I said then he left. Somehow though, I couldn't seem to stop
feeling guilty about this, and spent the entirety of lunch watching over
Lily.
A/N: So whatcha think? Review, and remember, no flames! Now, for people
that reviewed, which reminds me, I can't seem to review when I'm logged in!
So answers to reviewers:
M*andy, luvin yah: nah, he's just going to sit around feeling guilty while
Lily decides to come back or not.
J.E.A.R.K.Potter: maybe latter in the fic, but right now we need a villain.
Jessie xxx: maybe, as long as there are no more flames, I'll post again
soon
xxGinnyxx: talk about modest, you are the best reviewer, you actually
listen to me! And Lily needs to be in comma to work some things out. And it
makes for a more interesting story
Wo Ai Ni16: yea parents are embarrassing aren't they? Well, I hope you like
this chapter!
Ciara : I found it to be fairly mean what you said in your review, it's
genetic for me to be a bad speller, I come from a long line of bad
spellers. Not only that, but you put me off writing for a week, it hurt
that much. Please, next time, be more cautious of people's feelings.
A/N: :sniffs: some people are just mean, they like yell at you for writing
"basic cannon words" incorrectly. My most recent review basically said my
story sucked, and pointed out all the flaws, which is why I've been unable
to find the strength to update till now, so no more flames, and if you feel
obligated to point out flaws add in some 'sorry's and 'I don't mean to be
annoying's. Many thanks!
5 minutes before ***LPOV***
Who did this bitch think she was? Then she took a swing at me. Big mistake,
as I work out during the summer, no, I'm not a huge bookworm. Not thinking
to take out my wand, I punched her hard in the stomach. We continued
fighting for another three minutes until we both drew our wand at the same
time, I however was a bit faster than her and stunned her. The force of the
spell however was so strong it caused me to fall back and hit my head hard
on the stone floor of the classroom.
The next thing I knew I was in a dark room, with the only source of light
being far off in the distance. "James" I asked into the darkness. I was
afraid, remembering the fight between Courtney, and me, and how she hit on
James, and how he didn't do anything about it. What if he didn't really
love me? What if I was just another girl to him, like Serene, he said he
lived her too when he was dating her. I felt so alone, when the light in
the distance seemed to be coming closer.
"Lily?" it said in some ethereal voice.
"Yes? Who is it?" I asked back. I came right up to me. It looked just like
a human, aside from the fact that it was glowing. As a matter of fact it
looked just like my mother. "Mom?"
"No, dear child, I am not your mother. I am your Othe." My Othe replied.
"What's an Othe?" I asked.
"An Othe is the part of your mind that helps you make decisions. Now I am
here to help you make the decision of staying here in coma, or returning to
the world of the living, as now you are doubting weather you have anything
to live for." My Othe answered
"How did you know that?" I asked quite astonished.
"I told you dear, I am a part of your mind, I know your thoughts, and I
rationalize them." Wow did I feel stupid for asking that.
"There is no reason to feel incompetent, the shock of all this can make you
forget certain things, such as rationality." Creepy.
***JPOV***
I can't believe Courtney couldn't take a hint. 'We' as in her and me no
longer existed; as a matter of fact it never existed! Then she had to go
and put my girlfriend, and the love of my life into coma. Wait, do you put
someone in coma, or do you knock someone into coma? Wait, getting off
track, I was so going to kill her when I found her, then a thought struck
me. What if, Lily was waking up out of her coma and I wasn't there with
her. AH! I ran as fast as I could to the hospital wing and up to Lily's
bed. She was still out cold. I then vowed that I would never leave her
side, except for lessons, as I would most likely be forced out for lessons
by most of the staff. Just then Sirius, Remus, Peter, Serene, and Jess came
in. Jess and Serene rushed to Lily's bed and knelt by her side, while
Sirius Remus and Peter walked over to my side.
"What's wrong with her?" Serene snapped at me.
"She's in comma," I said simply staring at the lifeless face of my
girlfriend.
"It's all your fault Potter, if you had done something to stop that
Courtney from flirting with you, Lily wouldn't have felt obligated to stick
up for you, resulting in no fight, and no Lily in coma!" Serene yelled at
me. A wave of guilt coursed through me. It was my entire fault that Lily
was here in the Hospital wing, in a semi-dead state. Why didn't I do
something about Courtney? I felt like shit.
"Now, Serene, it's not nice to go blaming James when the real culprit is
Courtney. She's the one who started harassing my best mate, and she's the
one who tried to screw up their relationship, so if you're going to blame
someone Serene, blame Courtney." Sirius said. At this there was a moment of
silence, then the bell rang to signal the start of lunch. "Well, I'm
hungry, why don't we all go have some lunch, and check up on Lily later?"
Sirius asked.
"Yeah." everyone except me said in halfhearted unison.
"Coming James?" Sirius asked as everyone left to the Great hall, and he
stood in the doorway of the Hospital wing.
"Nah, you go ahead. I just want to stay here with Lily." I responded, still
looking at Lily's face.
"Don't beat yourself up about it, it wasn't your fault." Sirius said seeing
that I was close to tears.
"Yeah." I said then he left. Somehow though, I couldn't seem to stop
feeling guilty about this, and spent the entirety of lunch watching over
Lily.
A/N: So whatcha think? Review, and remember, no flames! Now, for people
that reviewed, which reminds me, I can't seem to review when I'm logged in!
So answers to reviewers:
M*andy, luvin yah: nah, he's just going to sit around feeling guilty while
Lily decides to come back or not.
J.E.A.R.K.Potter: maybe latter in the fic, but right now we need a villain.
Jessie xxx: maybe, as long as there are no more flames, I'll post again
soon
xxGinnyxx: talk about modest, you are the best reviewer, you actually
listen to me! And Lily needs to be in comma to work some things out. And it
makes for a more interesting story
Wo Ai Ni16: yea parents are embarrassing aren't they? Well, I hope you like
this chapter!
Ciara : I found it to be fairly mean what you said in your review, it's
genetic for me to be a bad speller, I come from a long line of bad
spellers. Not only that, but you put me off writing for a week, it hurt
that much. Please, next time, be more cautious of people's feelings.
