"So soon?" You ask, and all I say to that is: HA! I actually updated, so
aren't you happy now? PLEASE REVIEW! You guys, I need to know if people are
actually reading this fic, and it's kind of upsetting if I go to all this
work and nobody reads it (. So please give me any advice on making my fic
better or my summary more interesting if you have suggestions. They will be
welcome! ^_^ Here's the 2nd chappie:
"Trying to do well and trying to beat others are 2 different things- Alfie
Kohn"
Kinogu, Kinogu, and Harris
The Lateness 8:45-9:00 Tokyo Executive Apartment Block
"Mmm-mm.." Tyson stretched out between his luxurious percale sheets, giving his girlfriend a squeeze. "I love you so much Tyson.." she mumbled "Quite a night, wasn't it?" he mumbled in a sultry voice. "Oh, Tyson, you're such a riot!" his brown-haired goddess gave him a playful whap as he looked over at his bedside clock '8:45' blaring in a bold red. "GAHHHHH! I'm gonna be late!" he yowled, leaving the warmth of his sheets and girlfriend and scrambled over to his closet. Quickly choosing a yellow dress shirt and grey pants, he pulled them on, then loped into the washroom where he splashed water on his face and started combing his unruly mane.
Meanwhile, Lily, Tyson's girlfriend pulled on her robe and pulled her hair into a scrunchie. After proceeding to the kitchen, she brewed some coffee, a morning staple for her boyfriend of 4 years. They were very in love, and she had just recently moved into his condo. How she wished that he would just relieve them both of their family problems by popping that question! If they were married, her parents wouldn't be so freaked out about them living together. It was always "It's not right for such a young lady to be living with a man. You both haven't even finished university yet!" or "What if he gets you pregnant? He could just kick you out of his house and you would be forced to live the rest of your life as a waitress because of the disgrace!" She was honestly quite tired with it, and often considered it, but loved Tyson too much to leave him. She didn't like the thought of looking back on her 20's when she was an old granny and regretting her choice. No, leaving Tyson would not be a good thing to do.
Our lovable and clumsy man came out of the bedroom, fully dressed and toting a briefcase so stuffed with paper it was practically half-open. His hair was in a ponytail, and it swished from side to side as he grabbed his coffee in its Thermos cup and jumped into his shoes. He pecked his love on the cheek, and dashed out into the hall. "Sayonara Lily-koi!" he yelled "Sayonara Tyson-koi!" She opened the door a little and watched him scurry to the elevator, leaving paper in his wake and shoelaces akimbo, practically spilling his coffee as he turned sharply into the small moving room as the doors closed. She smiled, and sighed. A typical morning in the Kinogu condo.
Bubyes, 'til next time! And just to let you know, this fic will be lots of short chapters, not a small amount of long chapters. PLEASE REVIEW! P.S: Those weird tags in the other fic were me TRYING to show italics. If anyone knows how to put italics, bold, or underlined in a ficcie, please e-mail me. You can find my address in my writer profile.
"Trying to do well and trying to beat others are 2 different things- Alfie
Kohn"
Kinogu, Kinogu, and Harris
The Lateness 8:45-9:00 Tokyo Executive Apartment Block
"Mmm-mm.." Tyson stretched out between his luxurious percale sheets, giving his girlfriend a squeeze. "I love you so much Tyson.." she mumbled "Quite a night, wasn't it?" he mumbled in a sultry voice. "Oh, Tyson, you're such a riot!" his brown-haired goddess gave him a playful whap as he looked over at his bedside clock '8:45' blaring in a bold red. "GAHHHHH! I'm gonna be late!" he yowled, leaving the warmth of his sheets and girlfriend and scrambled over to his closet. Quickly choosing a yellow dress shirt and grey pants, he pulled them on, then loped into the washroom where he splashed water on his face and started combing his unruly mane.
Meanwhile, Lily, Tyson's girlfriend pulled on her robe and pulled her hair into a scrunchie. After proceeding to the kitchen, she brewed some coffee, a morning staple for her boyfriend of 4 years. They were very in love, and she had just recently moved into his condo. How she wished that he would just relieve them both of their family problems by popping that question! If they were married, her parents wouldn't be so freaked out about them living together. It was always "It's not right for such a young lady to be living with a man. You both haven't even finished university yet!" or "What if he gets you pregnant? He could just kick you out of his house and you would be forced to live the rest of your life as a waitress because of the disgrace!" She was honestly quite tired with it, and often considered it, but loved Tyson too much to leave him. She didn't like the thought of looking back on her 20's when she was an old granny and regretting her choice. No, leaving Tyson would not be a good thing to do.
Our lovable and clumsy man came out of the bedroom, fully dressed and toting a briefcase so stuffed with paper it was practically half-open. His hair was in a ponytail, and it swished from side to side as he grabbed his coffee in its Thermos cup and jumped into his shoes. He pecked his love on the cheek, and dashed out into the hall. "Sayonara Lily-koi!" he yelled "Sayonara Tyson-koi!" She opened the door a little and watched him scurry to the elevator, leaving paper in his wake and shoelaces akimbo, practically spilling his coffee as he turned sharply into the small moving room as the doors closed. She smiled, and sighed. A typical morning in the Kinogu condo.
Bubyes, 'til next time! And just to let you know, this fic will be lots of short chapters, not a small amount of long chapters. PLEASE REVIEW! P.S: Those weird tags in the other fic were me TRYING to show italics. If anyone knows how to put italics, bold, or underlined in a ficcie, please e-mail me. You can find my address in my writer profile.
