Deleted Reviews
Oh yea, and these were the Reviews I got before I went and deleted everything. Before, I had everything as a different story and I had different reviews for each, but I thought (also since it was suggested) that it would be nice if everything was a different chapter that branched off of one page. So, in the process, all of my reviews were deleted. I really appreciate all the work one sends into reviewing my work, and I did not wish to lose them, therefore, I put them here. I did not edit them, this how they came in my email. Oh and I have them listed chronologically, so...
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Mother of Chaos Chapter: 1
From: KittyHorse You should make one on Nayru and Farore, too. I love how Din has such a cynical personality in this. It shows such true, deep feelings. But what I'd really like to see is you making one of Nayru and Farore, like I said before. I'm sure they would be great. Keep up the good work. And I'm glad you didn't make it rhyme...some pieces of writing sound better without the rhyming, and this is one of them! Good job!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Opposite Side Chapter: 1
From: KittyHorse another great piece of writing made by you! (I reviewed another one of your writing pieces, too, and you seem to be very good at this type of writing!) I just noticed one thing...I just used the Megaton Hammer to defeat Dark Link, not Nayru's Love, Din's Fire, or Farore's Wind. It uses less MP. HAHAHA! JUST KIDDING! Sorry about that...I couldn't help myself. But that part about using the goddess powers was without a doubt, my favorite line. Very good!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Child Of Wisdom Chapter: 1
From: Ara Laothen pretty and well-written. I like how you call them "child of...". Very poetic!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: A Life of Servitude Chapter: 1
From: KittyHorse is the 3rd poem of yours I have reviewed, and they just keep getting better! But I must make one suggestion: instead of making a bunch of different poems separately, you might want to put them all in the same thing, but make them in different chapters. That way, you could read all your reviews at once, and eveything would have more simplicity. But getting back to the poem, it was very good. Great job!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Do Not Forget Me Chapter: 1
From: Quueenie I am the good-advice lady! No wait, I'm Queenie. Anyway, I saw that you wrote a nice amount of poems. So why don't you put them together to one poetry collection? easier to look at, easier to read... well, my opinion, never mind ^^; nice poem by the way!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Marked Chapter: 1
From: wolfodonnell(hambone1166@AOL.com)
Hey. Thought it was nice, very poetic. ^_^
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Zelda's Letter Chapter: 1
From: Hylian good, though I doubt Zelda would do a thing like this. Let me ask you: what was the reason you posted 26 stories on the same day?
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: King Of Red Lions Chapter: 1
From: Chibi Tetra nice. make a story, expand your talent! ._. O_O yup.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Opposite Side Chapter: 1
From: Kriiz never come on the Zelda page before and I noticed that you had alot of stuff up, but I read this one because Dark Link is my favorite mini-boss. I think it's interesting to get a peek into Link's mind and show that he actually does have human emotion and curiousity. I never considered his emotional facet, that he could ask questions about his foes,
just that he'd kill them. Nice work, I'm impressed that you could make me think like you did.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Zelda's Letter Chapter: 1
From: anime-link job!I like it!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: The Addiction Chapter: 1
From: Steeple333()
o_O
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Marked Chapter: 1
From: Navi* Star*()
Wow, nice job! Kind of sad, actually.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: The Addiction Chapter: 1
From: Navi* Star*()
Wow, this is great as well! Great Job!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: I Fell For You Chapter: 1
From: Keilyuu TThis is beautiful. I'm surprised that it doesn't have any reviews...definetly going in my favs. I'm off to read your other work now.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Opposite Side Chapter: 1
From: Black thoughtful. But about the last part... was Link thinking Dark Link was Yaoi? (glares at author)
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Oh yea, and these were the Reviews I got before I went and deleted everything. Before, I had everything as a different story and I had different reviews for each, but I thought (also since it was suggested) that it would be nice if everything was a different chapter that branched off of one page. So, in the process, all of my reviews were deleted. I really appreciate all the work one sends into reviewing my work, and I did not wish to lose them, therefore, I put them here. I did not edit them, this how they came in my email. Oh and I have them listed chronologically, so...
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Mother of Chaos Chapter: 1
From: KittyHorse You should make one on Nayru and Farore, too. I love how Din has such a cynical personality in this. It shows such true, deep feelings. But what I'd really like to see is you making one of Nayru and Farore, like I said before. I'm sure they would be great. Keep up the good work. And I'm glad you didn't make it rhyme...some pieces of writing sound better without the rhyming, and this is one of them! Good job!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Opposite Side Chapter: 1
From: KittyHorse another great piece of writing made by you! (I reviewed another one of your writing pieces, too, and you seem to be very good at this type of writing!) I just noticed one thing...I just used the Megaton Hammer to defeat Dark Link, not Nayru's Love, Din's Fire, or Farore's Wind. It uses less MP. HAHAHA! JUST KIDDING! Sorry about that...I couldn't help myself. But that part about using the goddess powers was without a doubt, my favorite line. Very good!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Child Of Wisdom Chapter: 1
From: Ara Laothen pretty and well-written. I like how you call them "child of...". Very poetic!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: A Life of Servitude Chapter: 1
From: KittyHorse is the 3rd poem of yours I have reviewed, and they just keep getting better! But I must make one suggestion: instead of making a bunch of different poems separately, you might want to put them all in the same thing, but make them in different chapters. That way, you could read all your reviews at once, and eveything would have more simplicity. But getting back to the poem, it was very good. Great job!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Do Not Forget Me Chapter: 1
From: Quueenie I am the good-advice lady! No wait, I'm Queenie. Anyway, I saw that you wrote a nice amount of poems. So why don't you put them together to one poetry collection? easier to look at, easier to read... well, my opinion, never mind ^^; nice poem by the way!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Marked Chapter: 1
From: wolfodonnell(hambone1166@AOL.com)
Hey. Thought it was nice, very poetic. ^_^
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Zelda's Letter Chapter: 1
From: Hylian good, though I doubt Zelda would do a thing like this. Let me ask you: what was the reason you posted 26 stories on the same day?
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: King Of Red Lions Chapter: 1
From: Chibi Tetra nice. make a story, expand your talent! ._. O_O yup.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Opposite Side Chapter: 1
From: Kriiz never come on the Zelda page before and I noticed that you had alot of stuff up, but I read this one because Dark Link is my favorite mini-boss. I think it's interesting to get a peek into Link's mind and show that he actually does have human emotion and curiousity. I never considered his emotional facet, that he could ask questions about his foes,
just that he'd kill them. Nice work, I'm impressed that you could make me think like you did.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Zelda's Letter Chapter: 1
From: anime-link job!I like it!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: The Addiction Chapter: 1
From: Steeple333()
o_O
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: Marked Chapter: 1
From: Navi* Star*()
Wow, nice job! Kind of sad, actually.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: The Addiction Chapter: 1
From: Navi* Star*()
Wow, this is great as well! Great Job!
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: I Fell For You Chapter: 1
From: Keilyuu TThis is beautiful. I'm surprised that it doesn't have any reviews...definetly going in my favs. I'm off to read your other work now.
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Green-Beauty,
The following review has been submitted to: My Opposite Side Chapter: 1
From: Black thoughtful. But about the last part... was Link thinking Dark Link was Yaoi? (glares at author)
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