"Where!" Sirius shouted, He was breathing very heavily.

"There!" Courtney pointed to a very shiny yet watery looking place in the trees. "I put my hands in it and I felt bushes instead of trees."

"It must be some sort of portal or such." Harry said.

They all stared at the portal not one of them knew what to do. Just then Erin popped down from the tree she was sitting on. Sirius watched as Erin's skirt flew right up. They both blushed.

"Well lets go then." Erin shouted

Courtney looked uncertain. "I don't know Erin we don't even know what's in here and we………………"

"Nonsense," As she pushed Courtney, Edmund, Sirius, Harry, and Ron in through the portal. "And besides ministry is on our tail anyway, so what the heck, duronimoe ." And with that she jumped in the portal.

.

As they were getting through they seemed to go through several thousand mirrors it seemed to happen so fast they didn't a feel thing They could see the world pass right through their eyes. And they all knew they were not going to be in the same world they knew. There was a sudden flash of light.

When Erin finally arrived the others were looking all around them. There were tall beautiful trees and bushes surrounding them. And flowered fields, and singing birds, and pebbled paths. But the biggest and best attraction was a little cottage straight right in front of them.

They were dreadfully tired of running from the ministry so they went into the cottage

To get some rest.

"Hello!" Courtney said. "Anyone one in here, Ok we can go in."

In this house there were seven small plates on a table, along with seven small lanterns, and seven small jackets, and seven small hats, but in another room there were seven small beds.

"Whoever lived here had one large yet small family." Sirius said.

Then Erin and Courtney looked in at each other in shock and both shouted, "Snow

White!"

Their companions looked confused. Sirius Blinked several times and asked the age old question of… "What the Hell are you talking about?"

Erin looked at the animagis with confusion. "You've never heard of Snow White?" she asked. "Your mother never read you any fairy tales consisting the Great honored Snow White!?"

Sirius looked at the girl with an eyebrow raised to show his lack of Knowledge on this subject. He scratched his head and looked at the teen with disbelief. "No, and do you really think my mum loved me?"

"Well of coarse." Courtney replied. "Was  your mother abusive or something?"

"I'll never be able to describe it. The pain was unbelievable. Even Worse than Azkaban." Sirius sighed dejected.

Erin looked at him sympathetically and then abruptly stated that they should get back on track. Worrying about the past was insane unless you wished to use a time turner and change it to turn in your favor. But even then it was risky. That's what she always said anyway.

Erin and Courtney's sharp dangerous looking Blue eyes turned on the group. Fire that was never there seemed to stir and awaken within the depths of the four iris's. They seemed to burn with uncalled for intensity.  They flashed and rounded on the group.

"Are you ready to hear the greatest story of your young lives?" Erin asked.

"We never thought it was true until now." Courtney finished the introduction without much talking. Edmund seemed to admire that.

"Once there was a Queen. She was Pregnant with a baby. The Queen one day pricked herself on a needle and a few drops of blood fell onto the newly laden snow. Over the day she thought about it and came to realize that she would die giving birth to her Daughter who they named snow white later for her pale completion. The King was in grief for a long time after his dearly loved wife died and was buried. But eventually he moved on to another woman.

Now the new Queen was very very conscious of how she looked. So conscious that each day after lunch she would go to her room and ask her magic mirror . "Mirror, Mirror on the wall who is the fairest of them all?" and the enchanted mirror would answer "You are." But one day when Snow White was seven The mirror instead of answering "You are" answered "Snow White is the fairest of them all."

The Queen sent the royal huntsman out to kill Snow White and take her heart to put in a box. But instead the Man killed a pig and The Queen didn't know until her mirror informed her. But Snow White escaped to This very cottage and stayed with the dwarfs there. She just had to do all of the cooking and cleaning.

The Queen eventually asked who was the fairest again and the mirror still said it was Snow White." Erin finished

"Unfortunately The rest of the story was lost many years back. Mum never told us." Courtney said.

Sirius looked at us and said then "I guess We're going to research the story personally then."

Short Chapie. Sorry School is draining up time like a black hole.

There was a Person that I got a very rude review from. And from now on you have to be signed on to give me reviews. Here it is.

One way to vigorously scare off readers is to have multiple spelling

 and grammar errors in your summary. It shows that you do not care enough about

 this particular work to put in the effort of proofreading it. Why then, would any reader

 bother to take the effort to read it? Many readers find this most discourteous, even offensive behavior.
A good way to set your self up for massive flaming and really alienate any

 potential readers is to proselytize *one* particular religion,

 (it doesn't matter what religion) and not warn your readers in the summary. Many readers find this *highly* offensive.
If you set out to write a fiction to offend as many people as possible in as short a

 time as possible, you have done a good job. If, however, you actually wanted to write a fan fiction,

 you have failed profoundly.
Aside from the major flaw of a supposed christian committing suicide - in a church

 no less - you randomly toss out major plot points with no explaination. You state

 Character A is this Character B is that, but there is no depth to thes

e statements. There is no characterization at all - no actions, no development,

 no backstory - nothing! You are not telling a story, you are giving a dry recital of unconnected statements.
For example, the letter falling out of the bible is trite and overused. You could

 have a prologue with a well developed scene of the pastor waking from his 'vision',

 describing it to his wife/assistant/whatever as appropriate to the denomination,

then, after some discussion, with trembling hand, recording this for Sirius

 to find. When you get to the Sirius in church scene, you need to show his

 desperation. How did he get there? Why is he so close to capture? What happened to

 Harry? As far as his supposed conversion X many years ago, as there is

 no canon to support this, you need to give the backstory, what happened, when did it

 happen, why did it happen. You are in clear AU territory, and Sirius appears quite out of character, so you

*must* explain this.
Your readers cannot get into your head to know what you are thinking, you must

 show them! If a characters actions seem perfectly reasonable to you

, you need to be sure the actions make sense to the readers by giving

 them the characters thoughts and feelings behind the actions.
A final note: There is nothing inherently wrong with writing proselytization stori

es. Or poetry or Mary Sues either. But like any other form of masturbation, they

should only be performed the the privacy of your own room, kept to the privacy

 of your own harddrive, and you should wash your hands thoroughly afterword.

If I ever get another review like this again I will tell the Fanfiction team and alert them of the discouraging problem they have with that particular user. I'm sorry for being bold but this is just plain rude junk-mail review thingies. This One in particular pissed me of.

Now to answer or alert you of my "good" reviews.

Linda: this was a whole lot better though, than your first attempt. but it was sad that harry died. /// Yes well I like righting sad things. But your right my first attempt sucked.

um...: wow...the man-whore of all man-whores a christian? never heard that one before...hm... /// I like being Creative J

Nicole Black: differrent i must say, and am so glad to hear you've not given up writing, this time of year can really swomp you, even i'm having trouble getting the lines together to bring Siri back i know exactly where i'm going with the story it's just filling in the bits thats taking all the time...Luv Nik ps i Hope and pray to have a chapt. up in a couple of days with Sirius Yeah /// Yep This is one I really like. Thanks for the encouragement Niki!

Like I said before if you review 16 or fifteen times I'll write a poem in honor of you.

AND LASTLY HARRY POTTER DOES NOT BELONG TO ME, NITHER DOES 10TH KINGDOM OR SNOW WHITE. ONLY ERIN, COURTNEY, FATHER HIGGS, AND JOHN DO.

BYE!!!