disclaimer: i do not own Dragonball Z or is characters.
Legolas Luver - im glad you like the story! ill try to be more descriptive, thats one of my flaws.
Leea - i tried not to cuss to much in this chapter and thanks for the support!
Bloodlust Night - yes, this chapter is more about Marron, glad u like the story! ^_^
A/N i am very very glad that you guys like this story. and very excited about all the reviews i got. as i mentioned before, i wrote this 4 months ago. the whole story and everything. but while i was reading the rest of the chapters, i thought it was a little bit far fetched and focused to much on Trunks' point of view (i need Marron in it more.) so, i've decided that i'm working off the first chapter and i'm going to make this story brand new. well, enough of this, time for the story!
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Marron sighed as she waited for her dad to pick her up. ~He always seems to loose track of time.~ A small smile crept across her face, even when her dad wasn't there, he still made her smile.
The blond looked around, the wind caught her hair and blew it about softly, making her look like a model off a magazine. Most kids had gone home already, just the football players and their girlfriends were left. Marron felt a sudden pain in her heart, she missed all of her friends that she had to leave behind in Kyoto. Saying "Goodbye" was one thing, but never being able to see them again was another.
"Hey babe." Marron thoughts were scattered as she looked up to see a wild haired boy with a goofy grin.
"Hi Goten!" Marron said cheerfully.
"Wow, you looked depresses a few seconds ago, why the sudden change?" Goten sat down next to Marron on the bench. Marron didn't have an answer, so she just kept smiling. Goten looked at her, then his eyes darted lower, towards Marron's chest. He licked his lips softly. "So, how are you getting home?" He asked Marron, his eyes meeting hers.
"My dad should be picking me up." She answered.
"Do just want me to give you a ride?"
"Umm...." Just then a blue car pulled up with a blond haired woman in it. "Oh! Thats my mom!" Marron said as she jumped up.
"Oh." Goten stood up also. "Well, I guess I'll see you tomorrow then." Marron nodded. Goten bent down and picked up her stuff. "Here." Marron smiled as she took her stuff from Goten.
"Thanks." Goten nodded.
"Tell your mom I said hi." Marron smiled and walked to the car. She got in on the passenger side and buckled up.
"Well he sure seemed nice." Juuhatchi said as she backed the car up. Marron shrugged.
"I don't know.....theres just something about him." Marron said, running her fingers through her lush hair.
"Well you should be lucky having him fawn over you like that." Marron frowned. "I mean, look at you!!" Marron looked down. "I'm surprised someone hasn't shot you for how ugly you are!" Marron felt tears coming, but she didn't let them fall. "You're a fucking pig!! I can't believe your my daughter!! God, what did I do to deserve such a stupid daughter like you?!?!" 18's nagging went on, while Marron's pride was being broken.
The poor girl looked out the window, trying to block out her mother's voice. The car came to a light. "You stupid slut! You can't even appreciate the fact that we moved all the way from Kyoto, just so that you could get away from those freaks--."
"MY FRIENDS AREN'T FREAKS!!!!!!" Marron screamed at her mother. Juuhatchi glared at Marron, then smacked her across the face.
"Don't you dare try to correct me!!" 18 snarled. Marron's hand came up to her face where a red mark was being formed.
"I hate you." Marron hissed.
"What did you say?" 18 glared menacingly at her daughter.
"I said I hate you." Juuhatchi's lips thinned. She raised her hand to smack Marron again, but the girl threw open the car door and got out. She stood on the pavement, ready to slam the door.
"Get back in here right now!!!" 18 yelled.
"Make me." Marron slammed shut the car door and began walking off.
"Fine then!!" 18 yelled at Marron through the open car window. "Go ahead and walk home!!! See if I care! Your father is on a business trip so I'll be home waiting!!" Marron kept walking as her mother drove off.
The tears flowed freely down her cheeks and the wind stung her skin. ~I knew I should have worn a coat today.~ She kept walking, even though she wasn't so sure where her house was or what street she was on. ~Ugh, I shouldn't have done that. I should have just let her talk.~ Marron turned and looked across the street, only to see another kid walking. Then she saw who it was. "Trunks!" She called out.
The blue eyed boy turned and saw who had called out his name. Marron walked across the street and approached him. "Hey." She said. Trunks gave her a small smile and continued walking with her alongside him. "So...where do you live?" Marron asked, trying to make friendly conversation. Trunks pointed down the road to a gigantic, yellow house. Marron's eyes got wide. "You live in Capsule Corps?!?!" She exclaimed.
"Yeah, its no big deal though."
"No big deal?!?! That is like the biggest corporation in Japan!!! And you're saying its no big deal?!?!" Trunks had to smile, Marron was being cute. "God, you know how lucky you are?!" Trunks' smile slowly disappeared. He looked down at the ground.
"So, wheres your house?" Trunks asked.
"Um....." Marron looked around, trying to figure out if her house was around here. "I'm not so sure...." Trunks frowned.
"I saw a moving truck a couple of days ago go down that street." Trunks pointed down 80th Avenue. Marron smiled.
"Thats the street!!! Oh you're a life saver!!!" She hugged Trunks, then started towards 80th Avenue. "Thank you!!!" She called over her shoulder.
"No problem." Trunks waved and watched Marron for a little while. ~That whelp on her face didn't look to good.~ He shrugged. ~It's none of my business so I don't need to stick my nose into it.~
Trunks walked up to Capsule Corps and opened the door. "There you are, boy!!!" Vegeta rushed towards Trunks. "We need to get to the hospital, your mom is about to have her baby!!" Trunks' eyes went wide.
"But its only been 8 months!!!" Trunks sat his backpack on the ground.
"It's going to be premature, now hurry up and lets go!!!!" Trunks turned around and went back outside, Vegeta right behind him.
"Should we chance flying or should we drive???" Trunks asked.
"Fly!!" The two men lifted off into the sky and sped off towards the hospital.
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wow, that turned out totally different than the original. please review and tell me what you think!! was it descriptive enough or do i still need to work on that?? only constructive flames aloud!! oh, another question, should i change the summary?? just wondering. well, hope you liked it so far!!!!
Legolas Luver - im glad you like the story! ill try to be more descriptive, thats one of my flaws.
Leea - i tried not to cuss to much in this chapter and thanks for the support!
Bloodlust Night - yes, this chapter is more about Marron, glad u like the story! ^_^
A/N i am very very glad that you guys like this story. and very excited about all the reviews i got. as i mentioned before, i wrote this 4 months ago. the whole story and everything. but while i was reading the rest of the chapters, i thought it was a little bit far fetched and focused to much on Trunks' point of view (i need Marron in it more.) so, i've decided that i'm working off the first chapter and i'm going to make this story brand new. well, enough of this, time for the story!
~~ = thinking
Marron sighed as she waited for her dad to pick her up. ~He always seems to loose track of time.~ A small smile crept across her face, even when her dad wasn't there, he still made her smile.
The blond looked around, the wind caught her hair and blew it about softly, making her look like a model off a magazine. Most kids had gone home already, just the football players and their girlfriends were left. Marron felt a sudden pain in her heart, she missed all of her friends that she had to leave behind in Kyoto. Saying "Goodbye" was one thing, but never being able to see them again was another.
"Hey babe." Marron thoughts were scattered as she looked up to see a wild haired boy with a goofy grin.
"Hi Goten!" Marron said cheerfully.
"Wow, you looked depresses a few seconds ago, why the sudden change?" Goten sat down next to Marron on the bench. Marron didn't have an answer, so she just kept smiling. Goten looked at her, then his eyes darted lower, towards Marron's chest. He licked his lips softly. "So, how are you getting home?" He asked Marron, his eyes meeting hers.
"My dad should be picking me up." She answered.
"Do just want me to give you a ride?"
"Umm...." Just then a blue car pulled up with a blond haired woman in it. "Oh! Thats my mom!" Marron said as she jumped up.
"Oh." Goten stood up also. "Well, I guess I'll see you tomorrow then." Marron nodded. Goten bent down and picked up her stuff. "Here." Marron smiled as she took her stuff from Goten.
"Thanks." Goten nodded.
"Tell your mom I said hi." Marron smiled and walked to the car. She got in on the passenger side and buckled up.
"Well he sure seemed nice." Juuhatchi said as she backed the car up. Marron shrugged.
"I don't know.....theres just something about him." Marron said, running her fingers through her lush hair.
"Well you should be lucky having him fawn over you like that." Marron frowned. "I mean, look at you!!" Marron looked down. "I'm surprised someone hasn't shot you for how ugly you are!" Marron felt tears coming, but she didn't let them fall. "You're a fucking pig!! I can't believe your my daughter!! God, what did I do to deserve such a stupid daughter like you?!?!" 18's nagging went on, while Marron's pride was being broken.
The poor girl looked out the window, trying to block out her mother's voice. The car came to a light. "You stupid slut! You can't even appreciate the fact that we moved all the way from Kyoto, just so that you could get away from those freaks--."
"MY FRIENDS AREN'T FREAKS!!!!!!" Marron screamed at her mother. Juuhatchi glared at Marron, then smacked her across the face.
"Don't you dare try to correct me!!" 18 snarled. Marron's hand came up to her face where a red mark was being formed.
"I hate you." Marron hissed.
"What did you say?" 18 glared menacingly at her daughter.
"I said I hate you." Juuhatchi's lips thinned. She raised her hand to smack Marron again, but the girl threw open the car door and got out. She stood on the pavement, ready to slam the door.
"Get back in here right now!!!" 18 yelled.
"Make me." Marron slammed shut the car door and began walking off.
"Fine then!!" 18 yelled at Marron through the open car window. "Go ahead and walk home!!! See if I care! Your father is on a business trip so I'll be home waiting!!" Marron kept walking as her mother drove off.
The tears flowed freely down her cheeks and the wind stung her skin. ~I knew I should have worn a coat today.~ She kept walking, even though she wasn't so sure where her house was or what street she was on. ~Ugh, I shouldn't have done that. I should have just let her talk.~ Marron turned and looked across the street, only to see another kid walking. Then she saw who it was. "Trunks!" She called out.
The blue eyed boy turned and saw who had called out his name. Marron walked across the street and approached him. "Hey." She said. Trunks gave her a small smile and continued walking with her alongside him. "So...where do you live?" Marron asked, trying to make friendly conversation. Trunks pointed down the road to a gigantic, yellow house. Marron's eyes got wide. "You live in Capsule Corps?!?!" She exclaimed.
"Yeah, its no big deal though."
"No big deal?!?! That is like the biggest corporation in Japan!!! And you're saying its no big deal?!?!" Trunks had to smile, Marron was being cute. "God, you know how lucky you are?!" Trunks' smile slowly disappeared. He looked down at the ground.
"So, wheres your house?" Trunks asked.
"Um....." Marron looked around, trying to figure out if her house was around here. "I'm not so sure...." Trunks frowned.
"I saw a moving truck a couple of days ago go down that street." Trunks pointed down 80th Avenue. Marron smiled.
"Thats the street!!! Oh you're a life saver!!!" She hugged Trunks, then started towards 80th Avenue. "Thank you!!!" She called over her shoulder.
"No problem." Trunks waved and watched Marron for a little while. ~That whelp on her face didn't look to good.~ He shrugged. ~It's none of my business so I don't need to stick my nose into it.~
Trunks walked up to Capsule Corps and opened the door. "There you are, boy!!!" Vegeta rushed towards Trunks. "We need to get to the hospital, your mom is about to have her baby!!" Trunks' eyes went wide.
"But its only been 8 months!!!" Trunks sat his backpack on the ground.
"It's going to be premature, now hurry up and lets go!!!!" Trunks turned around and went back outside, Vegeta right behind him.
"Should we chance flying or should we drive???" Trunks asked.
"Fly!!" The two men lifted off into the sky and sped off towards the hospital.
!!!!~!!!!~!!!!
wow, that turned out totally different than the original. please review and tell me what you think!! was it descriptive enough or do i still need to work on that?? only constructive flames aloud!! oh, another question, should i change the summary?? just wondering. well, hope you liked it so far!!!!
