"Hey what are you doing" said Tommy as he pulled back from Kioko
"I'm...sorry" she said before rushing back to were Dil was.
Tommy left it at that and went to find some wood. Kioko sat next to Dil and began to cry.
"Hey what's wrong?"
"My...parents..."
Dil nodded as a tear left his eye
"I know...the same happened to me and Tommy"
"You are...friends?"
"Brothers...ta gege"
She nodded
"Kimi?"
"Pengyou"
She pointed at Dil. He shook his head
"Tommy's Pengyou"
She put her hand against her head "Baka, baka, baka" she kept repeating
"Baka? That's Japanese right?"
"Yes...I'm Japanese"
"You speak good chinese for a japanese person. And good english to"
She smiled and blushed a little
"Thank you Dil"
Dil noticed her necklace again
"Your necklace..."
She looked at him blankly. He pointed to it. She looked down and remembered Tommy had a similar one on.
"This?" she asked taking it in her hand
"Yes. where did you get it?"
"My...mother gave it to me"
"Where did she get it?"
She smiled "Nainai, she gave one to...all the girls in her...family"
"Did your mother have a sister...jiejie, miemie?"
"Yes, but they never...huihua"
"Talk?"
"YES!"
"What is her name?"
"Kira" (Dundundun)
"Kira Watanabe?"
"Yes" (DUNDUNDUN!!!)
About then Tommy came back with a few broken branches and some grass
"Tommy you wont believe this"
"What is it little bro?"
"Kioko is Kimis cousin!"
"What?"
"Yes...what?"
Dil strugled to his feet and took Tommys necklace and showed it to her. He looked back at Tommy
"She said her grandmother gave all the girls in her family a necklace. Kiokos mother got one and so did her sister Kira"
"Well maybe Kira is a popular name"
"Watanabe is Kiokos family name"
"Well wouldn't they know her. She is family after all"
"Well Kira and Kiokos mother wern't talking, so they just never met"
Tommy looked at Kioko, she did look a lot like Kimi now he thought about it.
"So does she have any other family?"
"No I don't" she emphasised on the 'I'
"Sorry Kioko, so what will you do now?"
"I have no where"
"Couldn't she live with the Finsters?"
"We'd have to call and ask. HEY MY CELL!! I totally forgot about it. What's 911 in China?"
"It's 110 for the police try them"
He pulled his cell out and nearly burst into tears when he saw it. It was completelt smashed, It even sparked. In a fit of rage he threw it against a near by rockface as hard as he could.
"It's broke then?" asked Dil smirking
"THIS IS NOT A JOKE DIL! WE COULD DIE OUT HERE. NO-ONE KNOWS WHERE WE ARE!!"
"WELL SHOUTING AIN'T GONNA HELP!"
"Please stop" said Kioko obviously starting to get scared
"WELL NEITHER IS CRACKING JOKES!!"
"VORREI ROMPERE QUALCOSA! POSSO PRENDE IN PRESTITO IL VOSTRO NASO"
"STOP!!!!!!" Kioko shouted. The brothers looked at her, suprised. Just then they heard voices above them.
"Hey people. HEY DOWN HERE! HELP!!!"
"No!!!" screamed Kioko, but it was to late they knew they were there. A few began to climb down the rock face to were the 3 were stranded
"Oh thank god you've come. Theres been a crash lot's of people have died. There are only us 3 left..." before he could finish one of the men pulled a gun out and aimed it at Tommys head. "...Let me guess your the Gorrilaz"
The man smiled and was about to fire when someone from above shouted down something. The gunman made a frustrated groan turned the gun around and struck Tommy on the side of his head.
=======USA=======
Kimi is sat on the sofa and is starting to flick through the channels when a emergency news belletin
"We interupt your scheduled programming for an emergancy new bulletin..."
"BORING" she siad as she was about to press to turn over a picture of China came into the background. She dropped the remote and sat up straight and listened intently.
"...there has been a coach crash in the mountain region of Xinjang, China..."
"Please don't be Tommy. Please don't be Tommy. Please don't be Tommy." She kept repeating
"...Several American citizens have died. What is not known is the whereabouts of 2 American brothers..."
"PLEASE DON'T BE TOMMY AND DIL. PLEASE DON'T BE TOMMY AND DIL. PLEASE DON'T BE TOMMY AND DIL." she began to shout now
"...Thomas and Dillan Pickles"
"NO!!!!!!" she screamed as she fell onto the ground and began crying histerically.
"Hey what's up Kimi" asked her brother running into the room
She couldn't say it. She just pointed at the screen and burst into tears again. There was a picture of the 2 brothers on the screen smiling
"No..." said Chuckie looking at the TV. He began to shake. Had his best friend died? Then he remembered Kimi and rushed over to her and hugged her
"He's dead isn't he?" She asked still crying
"No he isn't don't think that, he's missing. If I know Tommy, and I do, he'll be building a shelter or something right now"
His words comforted her a little, but she knew there was something wrong
=====China=====
Dil was sat in the corner of a room his head in his hands. He pulled them away and looked at the blood stained on his hands. His brother was still unconcious. It had been nearly 2 days since they were taken by the Gorillaz. He had no idea what had happened to Kioko. He put his head in his hands again and began crying once more.
A man came into the room and walked over to Dil. He grabbed his face in one hand and pulled him to his feet. He started to push bread into Dils mouth
"Eat!" He shouted as he pushed more in. He let go of Dil and he fell straight to the floor again. The man laughed and walked out the room and locked the door again. Dil spat all the bread out and looked at his leg
It was in bad shape now. Even after Tommy treated it. The way he has been beaten and starved all his injuries had got worse. He struggled over to Tommy and started to shake him
"You got to wake up now Tommy. I need your help. I'm gonna die if you don't wake up."
Tommy cracked an eye open and looked at Dil
"What hit me?"
"A guy with a gun"
Tommy sat up. His head was pounding and even the dim light hurt his eyes.
"How long have I been out?"
"Nearly 2 days"
"Hey where is Kioko?"
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So is this any good? It's my most dramatic story so far, and I'm not to sure if I'm doing it well. So at least Tommy is awake now huh? lol. So what do you think about Kioko being Kimis cousin? crazy huh? Before you ask Dil can speak loads of languages so he could talk to aliens incase they didn't speak English. That's a great excuse eh? Anyway hope your enjoying please R/R
"I'm...sorry" she said before rushing back to were Dil was.
Tommy left it at that and went to find some wood. Kioko sat next to Dil and began to cry.
"Hey what's wrong?"
"My...parents..."
Dil nodded as a tear left his eye
"I know...the same happened to me and Tommy"
"You are...friends?"
"Brothers...ta gege"
She nodded
"Kimi?"
"Pengyou"
She pointed at Dil. He shook his head
"Tommy's Pengyou"
She put her hand against her head "Baka, baka, baka" she kept repeating
"Baka? That's Japanese right?"
"Yes...I'm Japanese"
"You speak good chinese for a japanese person. And good english to"
She smiled and blushed a little
"Thank you Dil"
Dil noticed her necklace again
"Your necklace..."
She looked at him blankly. He pointed to it. She looked down and remembered Tommy had a similar one on.
"This?" she asked taking it in her hand
"Yes. where did you get it?"
"My...mother gave it to me"
"Where did she get it?"
She smiled "Nainai, she gave one to...all the girls in her...family"
"Did your mother have a sister...jiejie, miemie?"
"Yes, but they never...huihua"
"Talk?"
"YES!"
"What is her name?"
"Kira" (Dundundun)
"Kira Watanabe?"
"Yes" (DUNDUNDUN!!!)
About then Tommy came back with a few broken branches and some grass
"Tommy you wont believe this"
"What is it little bro?"
"Kioko is Kimis cousin!"
"What?"
"Yes...what?"
Dil strugled to his feet and took Tommys necklace and showed it to her. He looked back at Tommy
"She said her grandmother gave all the girls in her family a necklace. Kiokos mother got one and so did her sister Kira"
"Well maybe Kira is a popular name"
"Watanabe is Kiokos family name"
"Well wouldn't they know her. She is family after all"
"Well Kira and Kiokos mother wern't talking, so they just never met"
Tommy looked at Kioko, she did look a lot like Kimi now he thought about it.
"So does she have any other family?"
"No I don't" she emphasised on the 'I'
"Sorry Kioko, so what will you do now?"
"I have no where"
"Couldn't she live with the Finsters?"
"We'd have to call and ask. HEY MY CELL!! I totally forgot about it. What's 911 in China?"
"It's 110 for the police try them"
He pulled his cell out and nearly burst into tears when he saw it. It was completelt smashed, It even sparked. In a fit of rage he threw it against a near by rockface as hard as he could.
"It's broke then?" asked Dil smirking
"THIS IS NOT A JOKE DIL! WE COULD DIE OUT HERE. NO-ONE KNOWS WHERE WE ARE!!"
"WELL SHOUTING AIN'T GONNA HELP!"
"Please stop" said Kioko obviously starting to get scared
"WELL NEITHER IS CRACKING JOKES!!"
"VORREI ROMPERE QUALCOSA! POSSO PRENDE IN PRESTITO IL VOSTRO NASO"
"STOP!!!!!!" Kioko shouted. The brothers looked at her, suprised. Just then they heard voices above them.
"Hey people. HEY DOWN HERE! HELP!!!"
"No!!!" screamed Kioko, but it was to late they knew they were there. A few began to climb down the rock face to were the 3 were stranded
"Oh thank god you've come. Theres been a crash lot's of people have died. There are only us 3 left..." before he could finish one of the men pulled a gun out and aimed it at Tommys head. "...Let me guess your the Gorrilaz"
The man smiled and was about to fire when someone from above shouted down something. The gunman made a frustrated groan turned the gun around and struck Tommy on the side of his head.
=======USA=======
Kimi is sat on the sofa and is starting to flick through the channels when a emergency news belletin
"We interupt your scheduled programming for an emergancy new bulletin..."
"BORING" she siad as she was about to press to turn over a picture of China came into the background. She dropped the remote and sat up straight and listened intently.
"...there has been a coach crash in the mountain region of Xinjang, China..."
"Please don't be Tommy. Please don't be Tommy. Please don't be Tommy." She kept repeating
"...Several American citizens have died. What is not known is the whereabouts of 2 American brothers..."
"PLEASE DON'T BE TOMMY AND DIL. PLEASE DON'T BE TOMMY AND DIL. PLEASE DON'T BE TOMMY AND DIL." she began to shout now
"...Thomas and Dillan Pickles"
"NO!!!!!!" she screamed as she fell onto the ground and began crying histerically.
"Hey what's up Kimi" asked her brother running into the room
She couldn't say it. She just pointed at the screen and burst into tears again. There was a picture of the 2 brothers on the screen smiling
"No..." said Chuckie looking at the TV. He began to shake. Had his best friend died? Then he remembered Kimi and rushed over to her and hugged her
"He's dead isn't he?" She asked still crying
"No he isn't don't think that, he's missing. If I know Tommy, and I do, he'll be building a shelter or something right now"
His words comforted her a little, but she knew there was something wrong
=====China=====
Dil was sat in the corner of a room his head in his hands. He pulled them away and looked at the blood stained on his hands. His brother was still unconcious. It had been nearly 2 days since they were taken by the Gorillaz. He had no idea what had happened to Kioko. He put his head in his hands again and began crying once more.
A man came into the room and walked over to Dil. He grabbed his face in one hand and pulled him to his feet. He started to push bread into Dils mouth
"Eat!" He shouted as he pushed more in. He let go of Dil and he fell straight to the floor again. The man laughed and walked out the room and locked the door again. Dil spat all the bread out and looked at his leg
It was in bad shape now. Even after Tommy treated it. The way he has been beaten and starved all his injuries had got worse. He struggled over to Tommy and started to shake him
"You got to wake up now Tommy. I need your help. I'm gonna die if you don't wake up."
Tommy cracked an eye open and looked at Dil
"What hit me?"
"A guy with a gun"
Tommy sat up. His head was pounding and even the dim light hurt his eyes.
"How long have I been out?"
"Nearly 2 days"
"Hey where is Kioko?"
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So is this any good? It's my most dramatic story so far, and I'm not to sure if I'm doing it well. So at least Tommy is awake now huh? lol. So what do you think about Kioko being Kimis cousin? crazy huh? Before you ask Dil can speak loads of languages so he could talk to aliens incase they didn't speak English. That's a great excuse eh? Anyway hope your enjoying please R/R
