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Kels P.O.V
Kel stared dreamily out of her window. She sighed, :her 7 year crush for Domitan of Masbolle still hasn't gone, her heart still yearned for him. She wanted to tell him she loved him with all her heart but what if he didn't love her back? If she admitted to him her feelings and he didn't return them she would feel like a fool. But if he did like her, she would never know: "Life is just difficult, you can't admit you love someone to the person without them coming up to you" "What's this, you, admitting love I never thought I'd see the day" Neal had waltzed into the room unannounced of course. "Shut up meathead" was the only reply Kel could think of "Using my cousins name now are you" he said raising an eyebrow "You aren't saying you like him are you?" "I've always called you meathead" Kel said feebly, feeling a blush creep onto her face. "Whatever" Neal said rolling his eyes "I've got to go cya" And with that he waltzed back out of the room with a smile on his face.
Doms POV
Dom was walking down the hall on the way to kel's room. On the way he bumped into "MEATHEAD, what the HELL are you doing" He yelled, Neal who was staring at Dom with a smirk on his face and an empty glass of water said calmly "For the last time it's SIR meathead, what can I do for you" Dom, who was staring at Neal, dripping in ice cold water, said irratantly "You COULD get me a towel" "Well where were you going that you were in such a hurry and weren't looking?" Neal said smirking as he had a pretty good idea where Dom was going. "I was going to see Kel; we just got back from an assignment" "Uhuh, Right I get you, go along" Dom started moving when Neal yelled out "You hurt her and I'll kill you" Dom walked out of Neal's sight thinking about what he had just said. :I love her, but how can I tell her:
Kels POV The soft knocking on her door brought her back to reality. She walked over to open the door to see Dom standing there looking as Hot, cute and handsome as ever. Dressed in a light blue tunic that brought out his eyes and black breeches. "Hey" Said Dom, leaning against the door post in a casual way. "Hey, come in" Kel replied, urging the blush that was creeping up her face to go away. "Does anyone actually live in here?" Asked Dom jokingly. "It's so hard to find something when your rooms messy" She replied looking into his eyes, blue eyes piercing hers. She looked away "What's wrong?" Asked Dom concerned "Nothing" She replied in disbelief "Look at me" He replied, putting his finger under her chin, forcing her head up. She looked into his eyes and was lost in the blue depths of his eyes. Suddenly his lips were on hers, for a split second. After that kiss Kel looked up "S-S-S-Sorry I-I-I didn't mean to" He stammered She turned her head up for another kiss, and ended up in pure bliss. His lips were warm. :Cleon wasn't this good: He eased his lips over hers sharing the passion. He broke the kiss to find that he was a magnet to kel's lips. He put his lips on hers and softly kissing her while holding her. He broke the kiss and said "I love you Kel" Kel's only reply was to throw her arms around him and bring him into a tight hug
Please Review if you want another chapter (Even though it wasn't good) OK pplz I read the reviews I'll try to redo it with some ideas Keep reviewing I'll try and get a chapter up once I've finished stupid English homework
: Indicates thoughts: Getting on with the story
Here we go
Kels P.O.V
Kel stared dreamily out of her window. She sighed, :her 7 year crush for Domitan of Masbolle still hasn't gone, her heart still yearned for him. She wanted to tell him she loved him with all her heart but what if he didn't love her back? If she admitted to him her feelings and he didn't return them she would feel like a fool. But if he did like her, she would never know: "Life is just difficult, you can't admit you love someone to the person without them coming up to you" "What's this, you, admitting love I never thought I'd see the day" Neal had waltzed into the room unannounced of course. "Shut up meathead" was the only reply Kel could think of "Using my cousins name now are you" he said raising an eyebrow "You aren't saying you like him are you?" "I've always called you meathead" Kel said feebly, feeling a blush creep onto her face. "Whatever" Neal said rolling his eyes "I've got to go cya" And with that he waltzed back out of the room with a smile on his face.
Doms POV
Dom was walking down the hall on the way to kel's room. On the way he bumped into "MEATHEAD, what the HELL are you doing" He yelled, Neal who was staring at Dom with a smirk on his face and an empty glass of water said calmly "For the last time it's SIR meathead, what can I do for you" Dom, who was staring at Neal, dripping in ice cold water, said irratantly "You COULD get me a towel" "Well where were you going that you were in such a hurry and weren't looking?" Neal said smirking as he had a pretty good idea where Dom was going. "I was going to see Kel; we just got back from an assignment" "Uhuh, Right I get you, go along" Dom started moving when Neal yelled out "You hurt her and I'll kill you" Dom walked out of Neal's sight thinking about what he had just said. :I love her, but how can I tell her:
Kels POV The soft knocking on her door brought her back to reality. She walked over to open the door to see Dom standing there looking as Hot, cute and handsome as ever. Dressed in a light blue tunic that brought out his eyes and black breeches. "Hey" Said Dom, leaning against the door post in a casual way. "Hey, come in" Kel replied, urging the blush that was creeping up her face to go away. "Does anyone actually live in here?" Asked Dom jokingly. "It's so hard to find something when your rooms messy" She replied looking into his eyes, blue eyes piercing hers. She looked away "What's wrong?" Asked Dom concerned "Nothing" She replied in disbelief "Look at me" He replied, putting his finger under her chin, forcing her head up. She looked into his eyes and was lost in the blue depths of his eyes. Suddenly his lips were on hers, for a split second. After that kiss Kel looked up "S-S-S-Sorry I-I-I didn't mean to" He stammered She turned her head up for another kiss, and ended up in pure bliss. His lips were warm. :Cleon wasn't this good: He eased his lips over hers sharing the passion. He broke the kiss to find that he was a magnet to kel's lips. He put his lips on hers and softly kissing her while holding her. He broke the kiss and said "I love you Kel" Kel's only reply was to throw her arms around him and bring him into a tight hug
Please Review if you want another chapter (Even though it wasn't good) OK pplz I read the reviews I'll try to redo it with some ideas Keep reviewing I'll try and get a chapter up once I've finished stupid English homework
