DarkAngel456: hi everyone I am here again and I know what your thinking he forgot Dorcas And Bartre well I did it's ok though but I need some commentators and helpers with the story ok well e-mail me if you want to help at music567neoman@yahoo.com thanks oh and R&R

Eliwood and his group were on their way to Santauraz to ask if the Marques knew anything about the disappearance of his father. "Well I am sure glad that we left Dorcas and Bartre" Eliwood said but un fortunate for them they could here their voices in the clearing "why me" "hi Eliwood almost forgot us huh?" "Yeah sorry about that" "it is ok" "well lets get...." He was cut off a sharp arrow had just nearly killed him Eliwood turned around took out his Rapier and said "Bandits shit" and yes there were bandits and a lot of them too. Lets get them (A/N Lots of violence now)

Coming

"YAH!!!!!!!!" Eliwood screamed he jumped up with his sword and shot it down straight through the archer's skull he walked up and started slashing the Brigands. Rebecca started shooting left and right killing brigands by the second (A/N As you can tell I think Archers rock) Bartre and Dorcas started to do some hack and slash with their axes but more and more came and it was too much Marcus was even helping even though he normally held back until Eliwood saw Hector "Hector come and help" "OK" Hector jumped up and started running with his wolf biel slashing anything in his way Oswin just let them all come to him and he would stick his spear through every single one. Only the boss was left Rebecca was hidden in a tree she shot wam right through the head and the rest left.

End of violence

"Well thank you Hector" "your welcome Eliwood" "Why are you here in the first place Hector?" "I am here because I heard of your father and I wanted to help" "Ok well thank you" "your ever so welcome" "Well lets go see the king" "Yes lets"

DarkAngel456:Yay I did it whoo hoo.