Eum... I dunno why, but I started writing a bit slower...but I'm still
writing, I just came to 35 and I lost all of my inspiration. But I have to
finish the story so, here comes chapter 7. Let's start with Kyota shall we?
Disclaimer: leave me alone
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The search and the hunt
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Kyota was looking at the rest of the bladebreakers. She saw Tyson, Max and Rai but she noticed Kenny and Hilary were also there to help. She shook her head and wondered how Kai had so many friends while he was always his own rude self. Everyone was ready, Hilary even had a broomstick to fight evil enemies. Kyota almost smiled when she saw the team lined up and ready for battle but almost wasn't complete. She just couldn't smile. Right now, kai was alone and maybe he was frightened. He didn't have any money and she didn't know how many food he had taken with him and how long he would be able to last with that.
Tyson noticed Kyota was worrying about Kai and layed a hand on her shoulder. "It will all be okay, don't worry" said Tyson, wondering how many times he had to say it, but he noticed the rest was worrying too. Tyson sighed and just stood back on his spot in the line. Kyota smiled a little, appreciating Tyson's concern and tured around. "let's go to the trainstation" said Kyota and she walked out of Tyson's house, followed by the rest of the team with Hilary and the broomstick as back-up.
People looked up as soon as they saw the famous bladebreakers walking over the street, lined up and walking after a girl that acted like a general. They all laughed at the sight of it but didn't notice the serious look on their faces. The children all wanted to show their blades but failed in this cause they weren't fast enough and they were scared of Hilary who was walking behind them with a broomsick.
When they arrived at the trainstation, they immediatly showed their money and asked for 6 tickets to Phoenix lake. But their plans were disturbed because there wouldn't leave another train to there for another 3 weeks. You were lucky if you were able to go there. The people were almost always closing everything because of their legend. That legend wouldn't allow anyone to come there cause it would ruïn their fun or something. The team was very dissapointed with this news, they wanted to get Kai back but they would have to wait for another 3 weeks...
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Kai was starting to enjoy this town. The people were nice to him, it had a very nice legend and he got good food without getting beaten first. The only thing he missed was the girl he loved. She had created an emptiness in his heart that couldn't be filled. But Kai felt really loved in the family he was staying with, even though he would never admit this. Kai was starting to get a little annoyed by the legend and he was wondering what his dream meant and he was scared, to lose his Dranzer. But Kai knew it only was a dream so he just ignored it. Besides, he wanted to do something back for the people in this town. He had learned totrust in the kindness of strangers and in the kindness of a simple man with a simple job.
Kai wanted to get rid of the empty feeling he felt so he was starting to write poëms for this town. He had become an expert in love poëms so everyone came to him to see his writing. His first poëm had become a very popular one:
The day you were born, it was a rainy day. But it was no rain, The heaven was crying, Cause it lost his most beatifull angel.
That poëm had made a lot of people come together to express their love. Someone had even married because of that poëm. They even remembered it when ther were getting married. The weeks flew by and soon... there were allready three weeks over. The time had gone faster then he had ever imagined and he began to think about the legend again and what he was gonna do afterwards.
Kai just searched for comfort in his poëms, it would never heal his wounds but it would soften his pain to see other couples almost in tears for his wonderful writings. Another poëm had become very succesfull too...
There are 20 angels, 10 are sleeping calmly in heaven, 9 fly around you with love and trust, and 1 is reading this poëm just now.
Kai's poëms were always very short but they were loved and that's how Kai became the love expert in this town. He even created his own little book with poëms... a few of them were...
If you were a tear, I would never cry, Cause I would be to affraid, To loose you.
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When you see a falling star, Make a wish and it'll come true, Cause I made a wish, And I found you.
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Kai was populair and that was exactly what he hated the most. He loved his poëms but he wished he didn't get all this credit. He started to get relieved he was almost ready to go. Only one week remained...
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Kyota and the bladebreakers were chearing loudly. Three weeks had passed and they would finally be able to find their teammate. If only...
Tyson was snoring loudly and he just didn't understand the train was about to leave. When everyone finally managed to get Tyson in his clothes, they tilted him up and they ran to the trainstation, but Tyson was starting to get haevy so they had to rest several times. When they finally arrived, they saw the train leave before their very own eyes, and Tyson woke up by the sound of the raging train.
The train was gone, Kyota almost started crying and she started chouting at Tyson. Everyone just choke their heads and when Kyota was finished chouting, she left Tyson standing there and she asked information about the next train... it would leave the next week.
Kyota sighed, next week, she would be ready for this, next week, she would be in time, with or without Tyson.
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Kai just waited and waited... he just couldn't stand it anymore. People were all around him to ask for poëms and everything so he just went in the forest to train. He stopped by the lake and released his blade. He saw how the sun was shining on the lake while Dranzer flew out and spread his giant, red wings.
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woohoo, chapter 7 is up...finally ^^
You shouldn't expect chapter 8 really soon, I just bought ffX-2 and it's way too exiting to stop now but I just had to write chapter 7, it was my duty, right? Well, I'm on vacation so maybe chapter 8 will be out in a few days.
Please review
Disclaimer: leave me alone
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
The search and the hunt
....................................
Kyota was looking at the rest of the bladebreakers. She saw Tyson, Max and Rai but she noticed Kenny and Hilary were also there to help. She shook her head and wondered how Kai had so many friends while he was always his own rude self. Everyone was ready, Hilary even had a broomstick to fight evil enemies. Kyota almost smiled when she saw the team lined up and ready for battle but almost wasn't complete. She just couldn't smile. Right now, kai was alone and maybe he was frightened. He didn't have any money and she didn't know how many food he had taken with him and how long he would be able to last with that.
Tyson noticed Kyota was worrying about Kai and layed a hand on her shoulder. "It will all be okay, don't worry" said Tyson, wondering how many times he had to say it, but he noticed the rest was worrying too. Tyson sighed and just stood back on his spot in the line. Kyota smiled a little, appreciating Tyson's concern and tured around. "let's go to the trainstation" said Kyota and she walked out of Tyson's house, followed by the rest of the team with Hilary and the broomstick as back-up.
People looked up as soon as they saw the famous bladebreakers walking over the street, lined up and walking after a girl that acted like a general. They all laughed at the sight of it but didn't notice the serious look on their faces. The children all wanted to show their blades but failed in this cause they weren't fast enough and they were scared of Hilary who was walking behind them with a broomsick.
When they arrived at the trainstation, they immediatly showed their money and asked for 6 tickets to Phoenix lake. But their plans were disturbed because there wouldn't leave another train to there for another 3 weeks. You were lucky if you were able to go there. The people were almost always closing everything because of their legend. That legend wouldn't allow anyone to come there cause it would ruïn their fun or something. The team was very dissapointed with this news, they wanted to get Kai back but they would have to wait for another 3 weeks...
...............................
Kai was starting to enjoy this town. The people were nice to him, it had a very nice legend and he got good food without getting beaten first. The only thing he missed was the girl he loved. She had created an emptiness in his heart that couldn't be filled. But Kai felt really loved in the family he was staying with, even though he would never admit this. Kai was starting to get a little annoyed by the legend and he was wondering what his dream meant and he was scared, to lose his Dranzer. But Kai knew it only was a dream so he just ignored it. Besides, he wanted to do something back for the people in this town. He had learned totrust in the kindness of strangers and in the kindness of a simple man with a simple job.
Kai wanted to get rid of the empty feeling he felt so he was starting to write poëms for this town. He had become an expert in love poëms so everyone came to him to see his writing. His first poëm had become a very popular one:
The day you were born, it was a rainy day. But it was no rain, The heaven was crying, Cause it lost his most beatifull angel.
That poëm had made a lot of people come together to express their love. Someone had even married because of that poëm. They even remembered it when ther were getting married. The weeks flew by and soon... there were allready three weeks over. The time had gone faster then he had ever imagined and he began to think about the legend again and what he was gonna do afterwards.
Kai just searched for comfort in his poëms, it would never heal his wounds but it would soften his pain to see other couples almost in tears for his wonderful writings. Another poëm had become very succesfull too...
There are 20 angels, 10 are sleeping calmly in heaven, 9 fly around you with love and trust, and 1 is reading this poëm just now.
Kai's poëms were always very short but they were loved and that's how Kai became the love expert in this town. He even created his own little book with poëms... a few of them were...
If you were a tear, I would never cry, Cause I would be to affraid, To loose you.
................
When you see a falling star, Make a wish and it'll come true, Cause I made a wish, And I found you.
............................
Kai was populair and that was exactly what he hated the most. He loved his poëms but he wished he didn't get all this credit. He started to get relieved he was almost ready to go. Only one week remained...
............................................................................ .
Kyota and the bladebreakers were chearing loudly. Three weeks had passed and they would finally be able to find their teammate. If only...
Tyson was snoring loudly and he just didn't understand the train was about to leave. When everyone finally managed to get Tyson in his clothes, they tilted him up and they ran to the trainstation, but Tyson was starting to get haevy so they had to rest several times. When they finally arrived, they saw the train leave before their very own eyes, and Tyson woke up by the sound of the raging train.
The train was gone, Kyota almost started crying and she started chouting at Tyson. Everyone just choke their heads and when Kyota was finished chouting, she left Tyson standing there and she asked information about the next train... it would leave the next week.
Kyota sighed, next week, she would be ready for this, next week, she would be in time, with or without Tyson.
.......................................................................
Kai just waited and waited... he just couldn't stand it anymore. People were all around him to ask for poëms and everything so he just went in the forest to train. He stopped by the lake and released his blade. He saw how the sun was shining on the lake while Dranzer flew out and spread his giant, red wings.
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woohoo, chapter 7 is up...finally ^^
You shouldn't expect chapter 8 really soon, I just bought ffX-2 and it's way too exiting to stop now but I just had to write chapter 7, it was my duty, right? Well, I'm on vacation so maybe chapter 8 will be out in a few days.
Please review
