The tenth chapter ^^ I was amazed because you were all reviewing so fast.
I'm touched, not one bad review. I'll try to end the story here but I can't
promise a thing. Anyways, i never wrote a story that was this long before,
I'm sooo happy. Oh well, i'll quit saying stupid thing sand write the next
chappie. Final chappie? Dunno, don't care, you'll see...
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chapter 10: the death of a legend
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The people were all going to the forest, holding torches and videocameras. The moon was full again and any time now, Blizzard would appear for the last time. The people would miss her but it was the best. The trees weren't catching any wind and they were standing still, not a single leaf was moving as if they could sense the tention. In the middle of the group stood Kai. He had his eyes closed and eyes crossed, hiding that he was a little nervous for what might happen, he just hoped his dream wouldn't come true.
The lake was sparkling again and the moon was shining on it as if it was the last night she could shine. The stars were coming out as well but not one of them was as bright as the moon. A few children sat themselves on the ground without moving their eyes away from kai. A few other people were putting on sad faces as if they would miss this, but most of them looked happy and calm.
Kai turned around so he would face the lake. He waited for the sparkles to become brighter and he pointed his blade at the water, ready to attack, ready to make sure the legend would go away and he would be able to go away. He had been preparing this for a month and he wouldn't dissapoint the people here. Kai stood ready and the moon was shining harder then ever. The lake lit up and Kai launched his blade...
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Kyota woke up because the train was slowing down and the brakes were making a horrible sound. She looked around a little confused and sleepy and noticed Max and Kenny had been asleep as well cause they looked as sleepy as her, Tyson and Hilary were kissing again with their eyes closed and Rai was looking forward blushing heavilly. Kyota giggled a little when she saw Rai's face. All she really did was using him as a pillow. She sat herselg completely up and stretched a little. She looked out of the window and noticed it was dark allready and the sky was sparkling in a strange way. The moon was big and round and calmed her down.
Kyota was waiting calmly until the train would finally stop. Rai's face was turning a little less red now and Tyson and Hilary had stopped kissing. Now, they were just arguing about how to go look for Kai. Max and kenny looked as if they could almost fall asleep again and Kyota crawled over rai to go wake them up completely, making Rai blush again. That boy was used to nothing. Kyota shoke Kenny and max completely awake and threatened to throw some water over them what woke them up really good. When the train finally stopped completely, Kyota ran out of the train. The night was a little dark but the town looked so peacefull, she couldn't imagine how Kai could survive in a place like this.
When finally, everyone had climbed, or fallen out of the train, and everyone had got their luggage, they left for their search and they didn't even notice, how a big, blue phoenix rose up out of the sparkling lake, next to the forest.
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Kai watched in amazement how the fast phoenix Blizzard rose up and covered the light of the moon with her wings. At this moment, kai made Dranzer appear and send him towards Blizzard. Dranzer flew towards the blue phoenix of ice and almost looked surprised. Blizzard was looking at Dranzer with a confused look and she produced a silent sound in the back of her troath. It almost sounded depressed and caring.
Eventually, the two phoenixes flew round each other, mixing the red and blue into a purple wave that was reaching over the entire lake, producing a shiny light and amazing all people. When their little dance was done, Dranzer flew back to his blade and Blizzard rose into the sky. When she was almost completly vanished, she suddenly flew downwards, towards the ground and landing with a flash and a loud sound making Kai's blade lit up for a few seconds...
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The bladebreakers and Kyota had seen how the lake became purple somehow and then, they saw how a red phoenix landed in the forest. Everyone understood emidiatly it had been kai but they couldn't understand what had happened. Suddenly, they noticed how another phoenix was flying above them and they watched how it's sparkling feathers were litting up the sky. Suddenly, the phoenix dived towards them and they all ran away, screaming. Only Kyota stayed where she was. She had tears in her eyes and a smile on her face. She waited for a few seconds and she put out her blade. As soon as Blizzard hit her blade, the bit showed the phoenix, it glowed a few seconds and then it calmed down. A few tears fell on the blade and Kyota smiled again. Her bitbeast had returned to her somehow. She had thought she would never see her again but she was wrong and what was most important, kaiwas still here and they would be able tosee him again soon.
The bladebreakers came out of the shadows again, amazed for what had just happened. They saw Kyota had captured the bitbeast in her blade, it looked as if it belonged there and they smiled when they saw her smile. They stood there for a few seconds and suddenly remembered why they were here. They just knew kai was still here, they had seen Dranzer appear and where Dranzer was, there was Kai. They ran towards the forest against a high speed. Only two people stayed behind. Tyson and Hilary didn't feel like running now. The moon and the lake were so romantic, they would just stay here, enjoy the view and maybe even a little bit more. So they sat themselves there, watching how the rest of the group dissapeared into the shadows...
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Kai knew someone had captured Blizzard, he just knew it, he just couldn't imagine who it was. He thought about it for a moment and then he just sighed. He didn't know and he really didn't care right now. He only wanted to leave this place as fast as possible. He had allready packed his bags and brought them with him so he could leave immediatly. He said goodbye to Cid and his family, thanking them for their good cares. After doing this, he put Dranzer in his pocket and swong his bag over his choulder. He looked at the town one last time and then walked away with his head pointing towards the ground and the shadow of his hair covering his teary eyes.
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Kyota and the others had reached the edge of the forest and ran inside. They saw a few owls and foxes, they even saw a wolf but they didn't really care at the moment. Soon, they came to a huge fire and they saw some people dancing around it. Kyota ran towards a man who was sitting against a tree calmly while smiling at the dancing people. Kyota managed to find out from the man where kai went and she ran in the direction the man had pointed her. The rest of the group wanted to stay next to the fire for a while for some reason.
Kyota ran faster and faster. She felt how the adrenaline came up and she couldn't stop running. After a while, she saw a boy from about her age with gray hair who had swung a bag over his choulder. She ran a bit faster and felt how angryness came up too. She jumped and grabbed Kai's bag, pulling him to the ground. A surprised kai fell on his back and looked up at his attacker with an angry look. When he saw it was Kyota, he quikly stood up, not knowing what was happening. Kyota sat against a tree and motioned Kai to come sit next to her. Kai obeyed and Kyota started her story.
When Kyota was finished, telling the whole thing, she showed her blade to Kai and Kai showed his Dranzer. This made their bitbeasts lit up and they put them away again a little surprised. Kai was blushing madly, he didn't realize that his friends were doing all this for him. He sighed and told Kyota his story too. When he was ready, Kyota looked a little confused and she asked him why he had done it. Kai sighed a bit and explained Kyota everything. About his grandfather, his feelings for her and his fears that Volatire would hurt Kyota.
Kyota was a little scared afer hearing this but she said nothing and hugged Kai. She kissed him a few times and noticed he was warming up. Kai kissed Kyota too and noticed she didn't care a bit about his grandfather. Kyota had told Kai her father was a policeman and if they would tell everything to him, he would have enough proove to lock him away for many jears. Kai smiled and closed his eyes while embracing Kyota. She felt Kai was calming down a bit and felt like it was too serious so she started telling him about Tyson and Hilary...
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Tyson and Hilary had reached the group with the campfire and they went to sit with them. They were done kissing and they were cold so they wanted to enjoy the fire too. They sat there a few minutes and finally, they noticed two people wlking towards them. Kyota and Kai were holding each other and they walked towards the group. They explained everything and finally, they walked towards the trainstation again, knowing their train still had to leave while Kai was giving tyson and Hilary strange looks.
They left the little town. The moon had vanished behind a cloud and the water had stopped sparkling. All there could be heared were a few happy voices in the distance, who were celebrating around the fire.
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I think the story is finished, right? I hope you all enjoyed it.
Please review
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chapter 10: the death of a legend
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The people were all going to the forest, holding torches and videocameras. The moon was full again and any time now, Blizzard would appear for the last time. The people would miss her but it was the best. The trees weren't catching any wind and they were standing still, not a single leaf was moving as if they could sense the tention. In the middle of the group stood Kai. He had his eyes closed and eyes crossed, hiding that he was a little nervous for what might happen, he just hoped his dream wouldn't come true.
The lake was sparkling again and the moon was shining on it as if it was the last night she could shine. The stars were coming out as well but not one of them was as bright as the moon. A few children sat themselves on the ground without moving their eyes away from kai. A few other people were putting on sad faces as if they would miss this, but most of them looked happy and calm.
Kai turned around so he would face the lake. He waited for the sparkles to become brighter and he pointed his blade at the water, ready to attack, ready to make sure the legend would go away and he would be able to go away. He had been preparing this for a month and he wouldn't dissapoint the people here. Kai stood ready and the moon was shining harder then ever. The lake lit up and Kai launched his blade...
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Kyota woke up because the train was slowing down and the brakes were making a horrible sound. She looked around a little confused and sleepy and noticed Max and Kenny had been asleep as well cause they looked as sleepy as her, Tyson and Hilary were kissing again with their eyes closed and Rai was looking forward blushing heavilly. Kyota giggled a little when she saw Rai's face. All she really did was using him as a pillow. She sat herselg completely up and stretched a little. She looked out of the window and noticed it was dark allready and the sky was sparkling in a strange way. The moon was big and round and calmed her down.
Kyota was waiting calmly until the train would finally stop. Rai's face was turning a little less red now and Tyson and Hilary had stopped kissing. Now, they were just arguing about how to go look for Kai. Max and kenny looked as if they could almost fall asleep again and Kyota crawled over rai to go wake them up completely, making Rai blush again. That boy was used to nothing. Kyota shoke Kenny and max completely awake and threatened to throw some water over them what woke them up really good. When the train finally stopped completely, Kyota ran out of the train. The night was a little dark but the town looked so peacefull, she couldn't imagine how Kai could survive in a place like this.
When finally, everyone had climbed, or fallen out of the train, and everyone had got their luggage, they left for their search and they didn't even notice, how a big, blue phoenix rose up out of the sparkling lake, next to the forest.
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Kai watched in amazement how the fast phoenix Blizzard rose up and covered the light of the moon with her wings. At this moment, kai made Dranzer appear and send him towards Blizzard. Dranzer flew towards the blue phoenix of ice and almost looked surprised. Blizzard was looking at Dranzer with a confused look and she produced a silent sound in the back of her troath. It almost sounded depressed and caring.
Eventually, the two phoenixes flew round each other, mixing the red and blue into a purple wave that was reaching over the entire lake, producing a shiny light and amazing all people. When their little dance was done, Dranzer flew back to his blade and Blizzard rose into the sky. When she was almost completly vanished, she suddenly flew downwards, towards the ground and landing with a flash and a loud sound making Kai's blade lit up for a few seconds...
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The bladebreakers and Kyota had seen how the lake became purple somehow and then, they saw how a red phoenix landed in the forest. Everyone understood emidiatly it had been kai but they couldn't understand what had happened. Suddenly, they noticed how another phoenix was flying above them and they watched how it's sparkling feathers were litting up the sky. Suddenly, the phoenix dived towards them and they all ran away, screaming. Only Kyota stayed where she was. She had tears in her eyes and a smile on her face. She waited for a few seconds and she put out her blade. As soon as Blizzard hit her blade, the bit showed the phoenix, it glowed a few seconds and then it calmed down. A few tears fell on the blade and Kyota smiled again. Her bitbeast had returned to her somehow. She had thought she would never see her again but she was wrong and what was most important, kaiwas still here and they would be able tosee him again soon.
The bladebreakers came out of the shadows again, amazed for what had just happened. They saw Kyota had captured the bitbeast in her blade, it looked as if it belonged there and they smiled when they saw her smile. They stood there for a few seconds and suddenly remembered why they were here. They just knew kai was still here, they had seen Dranzer appear and where Dranzer was, there was Kai. They ran towards the forest against a high speed. Only two people stayed behind. Tyson and Hilary didn't feel like running now. The moon and the lake were so romantic, they would just stay here, enjoy the view and maybe even a little bit more. So they sat themselves there, watching how the rest of the group dissapeared into the shadows...
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Kai knew someone had captured Blizzard, he just knew it, he just couldn't imagine who it was. He thought about it for a moment and then he just sighed. He didn't know and he really didn't care right now. He only wanted to leave this place as fast as possible. He had allready packed his bags and brought them with him so he could leave immediatly. He said goodbye to Cid and his family, thanking them for their good cares. After doing this, he put Dranzer in his pocket and swong his bag over his choulder. He looked at the town one last time and then walked away with his head pointing towards the ground and the shadow of his hair covering his teary eyes.
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Kyota and the others had reached the edge of the forest and ran inside. They saw a few owls and foxes, they even saw a wolf but they didn't really care at the moment. Soon, they came to a huge fire and they saw some people dancing around it. Kyota ran towards a man who was sitting against a tree calmly while smiling at the dancing people. Kyota managed to find out from the man where kai went and she ran in the direction the man had pointed her. The rest of the group wanted to stay next to the fire for a while for some reason.
Kyota ran faster and faster. She felt how the adrenaline came up and she couldn't stop running. After a while, she saw a boy from about her age with gray hair who had swung a bag over his choulder. She ran a bit faster and felt how angryness came up too. She jumped and grabbed Kai's bag, pulling him to the ground. A surprised kai fell on his back and looked up at his attacker with an angry look. When he saw it was Kyota, he quikly stood up, not knowing what was happening. Kyota sat against a tree and motioned Kai to come sit next to her. Kai obeyed and Kyota started her story.
When Kyota was finished, telling the whole thing, she showed her blade to Kai and Kai showed his Dranzer. This made their bitbeasts lit up and they put them away again a little surprised. Kai was blushing madly, he didn't realize that his friends were doing all this for him. He sighed and told Kyota his story too. When he was ready, Kyota looked a little confused and she asked him why he had done it. Kai sighed a bit and explained Kyota everything. About his grandfather, his feelings for her and his fears that Volatire would hurt Kyota.
Kyota was a little scared afer hearing this but she said nothing and hugged Kai. She kissed him a few times and noticed he was warming up. Kai kissed Kyota too and noticed she didn't care a bit about his grandfather. Kyota had told Kai her father was a policeman and if they would tell everything to him, he would have enough proove to lock him away for many jears. Kai smiled and closed his eyes while embracing Kyota. She felt Kai was calming down a bit and felt like it was too serious so she started telling him about Tyson and Hilary...
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Tyson and Hilary had reached the group with the campfire and they went to sit with them. They were done kissing and they were cold so they wanted to enjoy the fire too. They sat there a few minutes and finally, they noticed two people wlking towards them. Kyota and Kai were holding each other and they walked towards the group. They explained everything and finally, they walked towards the trainstation again, knowing their train still had to leave while Kai was giving tyson and Hilary strange looks.
They left the little town. The moon had vanished behind a cloud and the water had stopped sparkling. All there could be heared were a few happy voices in the distance, who were celebrating around the fire.
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