Disclaimer: I don't own anything except the plot idea and Vanessa.
A/N –
Hey, Thanx to all those who reviewed even for the 'hard' reviews cause they help me. Umm... and right now I'll take time to answer ppl's questions.
Voldie on Varsity Track – Umm... all the characters that aren't J.K. Rowlings are real ppl at my school in Saudi Arabia. So... Basically I didn't mean for you think that it Mandy Moore. Sorry about that confusion.
Paprika90 - No... She's not in her first year, she's being placed as a 6th year. She's only getting sorted to see what house she'll be in.
Ella264 – Yes, I know I have really tense problem and I really need to fix it. I've been trying to keep it in past tense but sometimes I seem wander off. And about the paragraph thingy, I'll try to make it smaller and more separate.
WolfKyr – As I said before I have lots of tense problems and I know my writing style may not be that great but please bear with me cause I'm a 15 who's worst subject is grammer. Well... and geometry but anyway... The repetition... Yes, I kinda ova used the bitch thing but I don't know any other word for bitch, but you do please tell! I'm trying to use 3rd person past tense but I guess it's not working and I'm sorry...
V-S-S (guam_is_awesome@yahoo.com) – Yes, I know there is no Diagon Alley ¾, it was a typo. I also know that I have Hagrid's accent wrong, but I tried. How do you know the hat wouldn't mutter anything out loud? Anyway I didn't say the hat mumbled out loud nor mumbled in her head and I can see where you can be misconstrued. Umm... The scene between Vanessa and Draco, it was a fight over the compartment and a way for Vanessa to meet Draco. Yes, I'm looking for a beta-reader, if you're interested then tell me.
Thanx again for the reviews each and everyone of you. And as I told V-S-S, I'm looking for a beta-reader so... if anybody is interested please contact me at mojo_jojay@hotmail.com. And... just keep reading and I'll keep your suggestions in context. So... Thanx again and enjoy the next chapter! Oh yeah... This isn't a story when a new girl comes to Hogwarts and wins the heart of the cold Draco Malfoy. Nope, it has certain twists that I hope you guys will like.
~*JAY*~
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Chapter 2
"I am so sorry to disappoint you all, but I cannot decide where to put Vanessa." The Hat confessed.
Everyone was stunned including Professor Dumbledore. Not one person in the whole entire Great Hall had their mouth closed. Dumbledore was the first to recover from the shocking moment and started to speak but not a soul took their eyes off of Vanessa.
"Ummm... Vanessa, we shall set you up in the prefect's dorm." Dumbledore announced.
"Yes sir." Vanessa nervously replied.
"Please join any table you wish. And let the feast begin." Dumbledore declared.
Vanessa scanned all the tables to find Draco. She saw him sitting next to a pug-faced girl. Once the girl saw Vanessa staring in her direction, she gave Vanessa the don't-mess-with-my-man look. Normally she would have gone over there just to piss the girl off, but it was her first day and she was already tense from the Sorting Hat Ceremony. So, she decided to sit elsewhere and keep a low profile for the rest of the night.
"Vanessa, over here." Called a bushy haired girl. "I'm Hermione Granger. You can sit with us."
"Sure I'd love to." Vanessa replied.
"I'm Ron Weasley." Declared a boy with flaming red hair.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Harry Potter." Said a green-eyed cutie.
"I guess you guys probably know who I am. What year are you guys in?" Vanessa asked.
"We're sixth years. What about you? Said Hermione.
"How cool. I'm a sixth year too." Declared Vanessa.
"Great. We can help with your classes, and show you the ropes." Ron said.
"What wizard school did you transfer from in Saudi Arabia?" Harry asked.
"I didn't go to a wizarding school in Saudi Arabia. I just found out this summer that I'm a witch." Stated Vanessa.
"Maybe that's why the hat didn't know where to put you." Ron said
"It's never done there before. He usually knows everything." Declared Harry.
"So... Vanessa, what's Saudi Arabia like?" Asked Hermione.
"It's actually a pretty cool place to live. Well... My dad works for the oil company there, and we stay in a camp of houses. The camp is by a beach, and it's a really romantic place to go on a walk with your boyfriend. It's a small community where everybody knows one another" Vanessa informed.
They talked throughout the rest of the feast. They chatted about Hogwarts, Saudi Arabia and other things. After the feast Vanessa said good-bye to her new friends and was shown to her dorm. She had found that her things were already up there, and that her cat and ferret were fast asleep on her bed. She quickly took a shower and got dressed. She cautiously got into the bed. She fell into a deep sleep, and had an unusual dream.
The Dream:
Vanessa was standing in an unknown place. She was facing the front of a fairly large house with Persian origin. She walked to the back of the house. There, in the back was a glowing fire. The rasping of an old door could be heard as a lady walked out of the house. Vanessa couldn't see much of the lady because it was dark, but she did notice the lady's long, elegant, pearl-black hair under the moonlight. She slowly went to the flames and she stood over the fire. She then started to sprinkle some olive green dust into the fire. She looked up in the direction where Vanessa was standing. The lady's face was porcelain-white and her eyes burned an emerald green, and she then started muttering something in Farsi. The flames then turned into a blue inferno, but the fire quickly settled. Vanessa looked around to find that everything disappeared; she was all alone in the shadows of the night.
Vanessa woke up in a dazed state. The words that the lady said rung in her head. She understood some of it, but the rest of it was in an old form of Farsi. The words that she understood were: conceal, power, successor, 16th, deep, hidden, time, needed, guide, true, end, and faith.
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A/N –
Hey, Thanx to all those who reviewed even for the 'hard' reviews cause they help me. Umm... and right now I'll take time to answer ppl's questions.
Voldie on Varsity Track – Umm... all the characters that aren't J.K. Rowlings are real ppl at my school in Saudi Arabia. So... Basically I didn't mean for you think that it Mandy Moore. Sorry about that confusion.
Paprika90 - No... She's not in her first year, she's being placed as a 6th year. She's only getting sorted to see what house she'll be in.
Ella264 – Yes, I know I have really tense problem and I really need to fix it. I've been trying to keep it in past tense but sometimes I seem wander off. And about the paragraph thingy, I'll try to make it smaller and more separate.
WolfKyr – As I said before I have lots of tense problems and I know my writing style may not be that great but please bear with me cause I'm a 15 who's worst subject is grammer. Well... and geometry but anyway... The repetition... Yes, I kinda ova used the bitch thing but I don't know any other word for bitch, but you do please tell! I'm trying to use 3rd person past tense but I guess it's not working and I'm sorry...
V-S-S (guam_is_awesome@yahoo.com) – Yes, I know there is no Diagon Alley ¾, it was a typo. I also know that I have Hagrid's accent wrong, but I tried. How do you know the hat wouldn't mutter anything out loud? Anyway I didn't say the hat mumbled out loud nor mumbled in her head and I can see where you can be misconstrued. Umm... The scene between Vanessa and Draco, it was a fight over the compartment and a way for Vanessa to meet Draco. Yes, I'm looking for a beta-reader, if you're interested then tell me.
Thanx again for the reviews each and everyone of you. And as I told V-S-S, I'm looking for a beta-reader so... if anybody is interested please contact me at mojo_jojay@hotmail.com. And... just keep reading and I'll keep your suggestions in context. So... Thanx again and enjoy the next chapter! Oh yeah... This isn't a story when a new girl comes to Hogwarts and wins the heart of the cold Draco Malfoy. Nope, it has certain twists that I hope you guys will like.
~*JAY*~
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Chapter 2
"I am so sorry to disappoint you all, but I cannot decide where to put Vanessa." The Hat confessed.
Everyone was stunned including Professor Dumbledore. Not one person in the whole entire Great Hall had their mouth closed. Dumbledore was the first to recover from the shocking moment and started to speak but not a soul took their eyes off of Vanessa.
"Ummm... Vanessa, we shall set you up in the prefect's dorm." Dumbledore announced.
"Yes sir." Vanessa nervously replied.
"Please join any table you wish. And let the feast begin." Dumbledore declared.
Vanessa scanned all the tables to find Draco. She saw him sitting next to a pug-faced girl. Once the girl saw Vanessa staring in her direction, she gave Vanessa the don't-mess-with-my-man look. Normally she would have gone over there just to piss the girl off, but it was her first day and she was already tense from the Sorting Hat Ceremony. So, she decided to sit elsewhere and keep a low profile for the rest of the night.
"Vanessa, over here." Called a bushy haired girl. "I'm Hermione Granger. You can sit with us."
"Sure I'd love to." Vanessa replied.
"I'm Ron Weasley." Declared a boy with flaming red hair.
"Nice to meet you. I'm Harry Potter." Said a green-eyed cutie.
"I guess you guys probably know who I am. What year are you guys in?" Vanessa asked.
"We're sixth years. What about you? Said Hermione.
"How cool. I'm a sixth year too." Declared Vanessa.
"Great. We can help with your classes, and show you the ropes." Ron said.
"What wizard school did you transfer from in Saudi Arabia?" Harry asked.
"I didn't go to a wizarding school in Saudi Arabia. I just found out this summer that I'm a witch." Stated Vanessa.
"Maybe that's why the hat didn't know where to put you." Ron said
"It's never done there before. He usually knows everything." Declared Harry.
"So... Vanessa, what's Saudi Arabia like?" Asked Hermione.
"It's actually a pretty cool place to live. Well... My dad works for the oil company there, and we stay in a camp of houses. The camp is by a beach, and it's a really romantic place to go on a walk with your boyfriend. It's a small community where everybody knows one another" Vanessa informed.
They talked throughout the rest of the feast. They chatted about Hogwarts, Saudi Arabia and other things. After the feast Vanessa said good-bye to her new friends and was shown to her dorm. She had found that her things were already up there, and that her cat and ferret were fast asleep on her bed. She quickly took a shower and got dressed. She cautiously got into the bed. She fell into a deep sleep, and had an unusual dream.
The Dream:
Vanessa was standing in an unknown place. She was facing the front of a fairly large house with Persian origin. She walked to the back of the house. There, in the back was a glowing fire. The rasping of an old door could be heard as a lady walked out of the house. Vanessa couldn't see much of the lady because it was dark, but she did notice the lady's long, elegant, pearl-black hair under the moonlight. She slowly went to the flames and she stood over the fire. She then started to sprinkle some olive green dust into the fire. She looked up in the direction where Vanessa was standing. The lady's face was porcelain-white and her eyes burned an emerald green, and she then started muttering something in Farsi. The flames then turned into a blue inferno, but the fire quickly settled. Vanessa looked around to find that everything disappeared; she was all alone in the shadows of the night.
Vanessa woke up in a dazed state. The words that the lady said rung in her head. She understood some of it, but the rest of it was in an old form of Farsi. The words that she understood were: conceal, power, successor, 16th, deep, hidden, time, needed, guide, true, end, and faith.
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