Meh first song fic with "The First Cut is the Deepest" by Sheryl Crow. Please
review and tell what you think. Thank You for you support.
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Kenshin sat alone on the dojo porch staring out into the rain…
I would have given you all of my heart
But there's someone who's torn it apart
And she's taken just all that I had
Karou came up behind him and lay a gentle hand on his shoulder. Startling him out of his daydream he looked up at her…
But if you want I'll try to love again
Baby I'll try to love again but I know
The first cut is the deepest
Looking down at him she saw the hurt in his eyes.
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He must be thinking of her again…' she thought to her self.
Baby I know the first cut is the deepest
But when it come to being lucky he's cursed
When it come to loving me he's worse
He just can't seem to get past it. I wish he would someday so that maybe…
I still want you by my side
Just to help me dry the tears that I've cried
Kenshin looked back out into the rain staring down at a puddle that was forming on the ground.
And I'm sure going to give you a try
And if you want I'll try to love again
Baby I'll try to love again but I know
The first cut is the deepest
Kaoru felt a tear slide down her cheek quickly brushing it away she sat down beside Kenshin looking at the scar on his face…
Baby I know the first cut is the deepest
But when it come to being lucky he's cursed
When it come to loving me he's worse
I still want you by my side
Just to help me dry the tears that I've cried
Kenshin looked down at his hands, would he ever forget that day? Turning his head to the side he felt the smooth side of his face. Feeling the unmarred skin warm beneath his hand…
But I'm sure gonna give you a try
'cause if you want I'll try to love again
Baby I'll try to love again but I know
The first cut is the deepest
Kaoru wrapped her arms around his shoulders and buried her face into his back. Kenshin was surprised when he felt Miss Kaoru's body shake with her sobs. Turning to face her he took her into his arms and pulled her closer to him. She cried and he gently held her, silent tears streaming down his own face…
Baby I know the first cut is the deepest
But when it come to being lucky he's cursed
When it come to loving me he's worse
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