This is my first fanfiction so I want the honest truth. Also I know
this is kind of a corny story but I was going through a breakdown at the
time =)
~~~~Chapter 1~~~~
There once was a boy named Inuyasha. He was a half demon dog and half human. He had a very mean and tormented outside layer but a soft inside layer that is tormented for love to a girl named Kagome.
"Kagome, Kagome" Inuyasha shouted throughtout the forest.
"What, what do you want" Kagome shouted back.
"Kagome, you wench stop running off like that!" Inuyasha growled through clenched teeth.
You see Kagome and Inuyasha had just got into another one of there arguments.
"I'm going home" said Kagome.
"No your not" replied Inuyasha.
Who was now right behind her. He grabbed her by the hand as she was just about to jump into the well to go to her own time.
"Will you stop following me and "SIT" like a good little dog." Kagome commanded.
Inuyasha hit the ground creating a huge crater in front of the well. Kagome went down the well ran into her house and locked the door (like that would really help =). After coming off of being "sat" Inuyasha ran off toward the God tree.
Meanwhile Sango, Shippo and, Miroku saw the whole thing. They wondered if Inuyasha would ever tell his true feelings for Kagome.
Later that day Inuyasha snuck back to the well to go see Kagome. When got there he climbed up the tree and went through her window. But she wasn't there. Instead Sota just watched him come through his sisters window.
"Hi, Inuyasha" Sota said, "So that is how you get up here all the time."
Inuyasha was starteled by the little boy and nearly fell out the window.
"Where's Kagome?" Inuyasha asked.
"She's out with Hojo," replied Sota "Her friends pressured her into it."
"When is she coming back?"
"Sometime tonight" Sota said.
"Good I will wait then."
"OK" said Sota and he walked away.
The later it got the more Inuyasha started to wonder. What was he going to say to Kagome? Inuyasha decided he would write her a letter and leave it here for her. So he began to right his letter.
Later that night when Kagome had returned she went straight to her room.
"Kagome you have a vistor" Sota shouted out to his sister "He is in your room."
Kagome knew who it was. It had to be Inuyasha. So she dropped her stuff and ran to her room. But when she opened the door no one was there.
"Sota, it's rude to joke...." Kagome began but stopped when she saw the letter laying on her bed.
It read TO KAGOME real big on the front. She picked it up and began to read it....
Dear Kagome,
I know you think that I am just some mutt, but I wanted to tell you I am sorry. I am sorry for everything I put you through, I am sorry I make you so miserable. You are the only one that has ever understood me and I just wanted to say I LOVE YOU.
LOVE,
Inuyasha
Kagome's heart stopped. She had always wanted to tell him she loved him but didn't know if he felt the same way. Quickly Kagome grabbed her backpack and ran to the well. She jumped down only to be confronted by Inuyasha who was standing there looking straight at her. Kagome swung her arms around him she loved him too. But because Inuyasha let his guard down a demon took Kagome right out from underneath him.
"Inuyasha help!" Kagome screamed.
Bad tempered Inuyasha took the Tesiaga out and with one swoop killed the demon. Kagome fell into Inuyasha's arms. But when Kagome went to get up she fell to her knees. Kagome was stabbed by the demons claws Inuyasha picked Kagome up and took her to Kaeda's hut. Kaeda told Inuyasha that Kagome would be just fine that night but all she needed was to get some rest. But none the less Inuyasha took Kagome up into the God tree and placed her in a way so she could not fall and slept with her there.
"Kagome," Inuyasha whispered in her ear "I love you and I will never let you get hurt again."
"I love you too, Inuyasha" Kagome said in a faint whisper.
Inuyasha hugged her gently and fell asleep with Kagome in his arms.
Ok what did you think? OK I know it was a little corny but if you did like it then I need at least 2 reviews and I will write the second chapter.
~~~~Chapter 1~~~~
There once was a boy named Inuyasha. He was a half demon dog and half human. He had a very mean and tormented outside layer but a soft inside layer that is tormented for love to a girl named Kagome.
"Kagome, Kagome" Inuyasha shouted throughtout the forest.
"What, what do you want" Kagome shouted back.
"Kagome, you wench stop running off like that!" Inuyasha growled through clenched teeth.
You see Kagome and Inuyasha had just got into another one of there arguments.
"I'm going home" said Kagome.
"No your not" replied Inuyasha.
Who was now right behind her. He grabbed her by the hand as she was just about to jump into the well to go to her own time.
"Will you stop following me and "SIT" like a good little dog." Kagome commanded.
Inuyasha hit the ground creating a huge crater in front of the well. Kagome went down the well ran into her house and locked the door (like that would really help =). After coming off of being "sat" Inuyasha ran off toward the God tree.
Meanwhile Sango, Shippo and, Miroku saw the whole thing. They wondered if Inuyasha would ever tell his true feelings for Kagome.
Later that day Inuyasha snuck back to the well to go see Kagome. When got there he climbed up the tree and went through her window. But she wasn't there. Instead Sota just watched him come through his sisters window.
"Hi, Inuyasha" Sota said, "So that is how you get up here all the time."
Inuyasha was starteled by the little boy and nearly fell out the window.
"Where's Kagome?" Inuyasha asked.
"She's out with Hojo," replied Sota "Her friends pressured her into it."
"When is she coming back?"
"Sometime tonight" Sota said.
"Good I will wait then."
"OK" said Sota and he walked away.
The later it got the more Inuyasha started to wonder. What was he going to say to Kagome? Inuyasha decided he would write her a letter and leave it here for her. So he began to right his letter.
Later that night when Kagome had returned she went straight to her room.
"Kagome you have a vistor" Sota shouted out to his sister "He is in your room."
Kagome knew who it was. It had to be Inuyasha. So she dropped her stuff and ran to her room. But when she opened the door no one was there.
"Sota, it's rude to joke...." Kagome began but stopped when she saw the letter laying on her bed.
It read TO KAGOME real big on the front. She picked it up and began to read it....
Dear Kagome,
I know you think that I am just some mutt, but I wanted to tell you I am sorry. I am sorry for everything I put you through, I am sorry I make you so miserable. You are the only one that has ever understood me and I just wanted to say I LOVE YOU.
LOVE,
Inuyasha
Kagome's heart stopped. She had always wanted to tell him she loved him but didn't know if he felt the same way. Quickly Kagome grabbed her backpack and ran to the well. She jumped down only to be confronted by Inuyasha who was standing there looking straight at her. Kagome swung her arms around him she loved him too. But because Inuyasha let his guard down a demon took Kagome right out from underneath him.
"Inuyasha help!" Kagome screamed.
Bad tempered Inuyasha took the Tesiaga out and with one swoop killed the demon. Kagome fell into Inuyasha's arms. But when Kagome went to get up she fell to her knees. Kagome was stabbed by the demons claws Inuyasha picked Kagome up and took her to Kaeda's hut. Kaeda told Inuyasha that Kagome would be just fine that night but all she needed was to get some rest. But none the less Inuyasha took Kagome up into the God tree and placed her in a way so she could not fall and slept with her there.
"Kagome," Inuyasha whispered in her ear "I love you and I will never let you get hurt again."
"I love you too, Inuyasha" Kagome said in a faint whisper.
Inuyasha hugged her gently and fell asleep with Kagome in his arms.
Ok what did you think? OK I know it was a little corny but if you did like it then I need at least 2 reviews and I will write the second chapter.
