Chapter #10!!!!
Are any of my reviewers alive? Or am I doing a very bad job, ;.; I hope not.
I never thought i'd make it here so quickly ^^. Well, not really that quick because I started this story so long ago and during that time my computer broke twice and it delayed my progress on this story. But I'm still gonna finish it. I don't know where though. I'll think about the ending later.
This chapter: Rin is being held captive by Naraku and he finds many wayz to torture her. Including having her brother try to kill her! What will happen to Rin and is Sesshoumaru coming to save her?
Disclaimer: I own all the totures, heheheheh! (I still don't own Inuyasha ;.;)
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Does He Even Care?
"Hey wench, wake up!" A deep voice yelled from inside the dark room.
Rin opened her eyes and saw a man with scars all over his body in front of her. She balled her fist and tried to bring them forward but she was held back on a wall by thick chains.
"Nice try, but you're not going anywhere until Master Naraku has a little fun." The scarred man said evily as he walked up to her. He looked over her pale face and fierce eyes. "You might be a good little play-mate." He snickered.
"Bastard!" Rin tried to kick him but she found her feet where bound back to the wall, "Damn these chains!"
He laughed evily and traced her face with his finger, "You're a fiesty one, I like those kind of women."
Rin shook her head away from his hand and spat at his feet, "Who would ever want you?!" Rin then looked around the room and recalled what the guy said, "You're not going anywhere until Master Naraku has a little fun." She looked back over to the guy and put on a serious expression, "Where the heck am I?"
"No, no, no, little woman such as yourself shouldn't show men such disrespect." He raised the back of his hand to her cheek and slapped her. "Ask nicely and maybe I'll tell you wench!"
She spat blood and then looked over at him with a sly smile. "Maybe if you were a little more gental then I would ask polietly." 'Let this bastard get close to me.' Rin thought.
"Gental huh? Okay." He said seductively. He leaned his body on hers and looked in her eyes, "Is this gental eno.. ufff!"
Rin lifted her knee and hit him in the crotch. He backed up off her and crouched to the stone floor, grasping himself between the legs. Rin smirked and looked for a way out, she could barely see the outline of a door. But she still was chained to the wall and it wouldn't be easy to get out of them.
The man rose to his feet and puched Rin in the stomach. "Stupid wench!" He hit her again and Rin spat out more blood. "Naraku should just let me kill you!" He turned around and walked out of the room.
Rin lifted her head and looked at the door, "It'll take more than that to kill me." She mumbled.
^.~
"Lord Sesshoumaru?" Jaken called on Ah-Un's back. They'd been traveling for a day looking for Rin. Sesshoumaru followed the smell of her blood in the air. "My Lord, are we getting close to her?" Jaken looked over to Sesshoumaru's face. It was more clam then it was before when they had first began to follow.
Sesshoumaru ignored him, the little toad had been asking him that everytime they came to a clearing and that was rather often. 'Naraku, what could you possibibly need with her? You are truly an audatious one...' Sesshoumaru stopped and spoke lowly, "What do you want Kagura?"
Kagura wasn't supprised he knew she was there. She'd been following him for almost an hour. "Hello Lord Sesshoumaru." She lowered herself on her feather to the ground and she jumped off of it.
"I asked, what do you want?" Sesshoumaru shot a cold glare at her.
She merely smirked and said, "Besides the point of Naraku wanting me to come to you, I felt like seeing your pretty face."
"What does Naraku want with me?" Sesshoumaru asked cocking an eyebrow. Sesshoumaru smelled another demon that matched the scent of Naraku. "And who's this with you?"
Kagura smirked and turned to see Kanna walking up to her. "Why her, this is my older sister, Kanna. She goes everywhere with me, pay her no mind." Kagura looked at her sister and gave her a stern look. She then looked back at Sesshoumaru and began to explain.
"Lord Sesshoumaru, Naraku is pondering a question that needs an answer." Kagura then paused and looked at her sister again. She looked back over to to him and opened her fan and covered her face. "The question is, why exactly is the high and mightly Lord Sesshoumaru carrying a human around with him? Naraku wishes to know why you would bring a lowly human into you're life and care for her? She's just a burden on you. You'll have to take care of her and watch over her feeble weak body. She's just a creature that can be easily killed by the demons of the world. She's nothing more than a mouse to a snake about to stirke." Kagura finished and saw the change of emotion on his face. 'I've got him.'
'She is right, Rin is nothing more than a stupid human with emotions and love. Just like my stupid half-brother. She's no concern to me anymore.' Sesshoumaru smirked and them lifted his head. "Tell Naraku that he can have her. She mean's nothing to me at all." He then turned and walked away saying, "Lets go Jaken."
Jaken looked at his master walking away, "Why, Lord Sesshoumaru?" He said lowly. Jaken gave in a lowered his head. "Go Ah-un." Ah-Un looked back at Kagura and Kanna and then followed Sesshoumaru.
Kagura pulled out her feather and hopped on it. Kanna jumped on also and faced her mirror towards Kagura. Soon Sesshoumaru's face appeared and his image said,"Tell Naraku that he can have her. She mean's nothing to me at all."
"Perfect, now the girl will be more fun to kill." Kagura then flew back to Naraku's castle.
^.~
Rin stared blankly at the wall ahead of her, 'Will he come to save me?' She quickly turned her head to the door and saw a little boy with his hair in a ponytail and freackles walk in.
The boy lowered the tray he was carrying on the floor and picked up the baboon pipe filled with water to Rin's mouth. She happily accepted and the cold water soothed her dry throat.
"Aren't you Sango's brother, Kohaku?" Rin asked staring at the boy grabbing a stick with a cooked fish on it.
Kohaku raised his head and looked at her questionably. "Brother? Sango?" He asked looking at her face.
'That's right, she told me that Naraku stole Kohaku of all his memories. The poor boy.' "Listen Kohaku, you have a sister named Sango who misses you and loves you dearly. You don't know this because Naraku tricked you and erased all of your memories! I can take you to her, just get me out of here, please!" She begged. She could see tears falling down his face as he just heard the news of his past.
"Finally someone know's who I am!" He got up and hugged her.
Rin smiled and said soothingly, "It'll be okay Kohaku." With him holding her like that, it reminded her of her brother hugging her at times when they were young, and this brought tears to her eyes.
He backed off of her and pulled out a key from his pocket. "Promise me you'll take me to my sister."
"I promise I'll take you to her as soon as we get out of here. So unlock..." Rin heard footsteps approaching the door. "Wait Kohaku, go sneak my sword in here and then come back after whoever's coming okay!"
He nodded and ran out of the room. A few seconds later Kagura and Kanna arrived.
Rin shook with anger as Kagura's evil smirk was in front her. "Kagura," Rin growled lowly.
"Now, now, you shouldn't hold such a grudge against me. Take you're anger out on Naraku and Kurogasa who planned this." Kugura smirked bigger as the hatred grew on Rin's face.
"Those two..." She paused and then smirked, "They'll be sorry once Sesshoumaru gets here, I saw him fighting Inuyasha and I know he's on his way here! I hope he kicks your sorry a..."
"Im sorry, did you said "Sesshoumaru is on his way here?" I'm afraid not. He told me otherwise. He told me that you were nothing to him. He isn't coming to save you."
Rin smirked again and yelled, "You liar, why should I believe you!"
Kagura pointed her fan to Kanna's mirror and Rin observed. Soon Sesshoumaru's face appeared saying, "Tell Naraku that he can have her. She mean's nothing to me at all."
Rin stared in shock at what she had just seen. "That's..." She couldn't believe what she heard. 'He gave up on me. I am just a little toy for him. I'm nothing to him..." Rin felt the tears fall but the hatred towards him burned her face. "Damn him!"
"Oh, dry your eyes girl, you wont be seeing him anymore. Anything else for that matter, you're gonna die here anyway." Kagura turned and walked out of the room with her sister.
"I'm so stupid, to think I could love someone like him!" Rin banged her swollen wrist against the stone wall behind her. "How could I not see that I was nothing to him!"
"Miss?" Kohaku said walking into the door seeing her actions.
Rin pulling out her wrists a little and said, "Get me out of here. After I give you back to Sango. I'm on my own."
Kohaku released her and gave her her sword. "Stay low and I'll get us out of here."
"Right." Rin followed him through all the halls of the castle being as quiet as she could.
Kohaku and her where almost out of there when a voice called in his head. He grasped his head and started to scream.
"Kohaku, Kohaku, what's worng?" Rin asked grabbing his shoulders.
He stopped and pulled out his sickle and raised it high. Rin saw this and backed away. He lifted his head and his eyes were blank, he was under Naraku's control again.
"I've gotta get out of here!" Rin ran and as fast as she could to find an exit out of the castle. She felt the wounds from the battle with Kagura sting and bleed as she ran. 'Damnit, I feel like I'm about to pass out.'
"Yhaaa!" She yelled as she was slashed on the back by Kohaku's sickle. She ran even faster than she was before. Before she was out of the castle a familiar face stood in front of her. Her brother.
"Torumaru?" Rin said in a state of shock. She didn't want to fight her brother so she knocked him back with her sword sheathed and ran out of the huge gate. Tears fell from her eyes and she ran through the forest. 'Why!? Why my brother to be controlled by him. Sesshoumaru doesn't even care anymore, no one in this world for me to lo...' "Ah..."
Rin ran into something tall and soft. She looked up and saw him standing over her with his soft emotionless face. "You..." Rin frowned and ran passed him.
"Rin?" Sesshoumaru called as she ran away.
"He doesn't care so I'm, I'm..." Rin stopped and fell to her knees, "So, tired." Her wounds had bleed enough for her to black out. "Sesshoumaru..." She then fell and hit the ground. Her unconscious body began to fall down a hill and then into a river. She floated above the water and was carried down stream to the bank.
A few hours later a man in a green kimono holding a big hammer found her. "What's this thing doing in the river?" Totousai picked her up and carried her into his cave.
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Hehehehehehe! I added the crazy Totousai into my story! I'm so evil!
Well, now that he's found her, what will happen?
Next chapter: New Sword, New Training!
Read&Review
Are any of my reviewers alive? Or am I doing a very bad job, ;.; I hope not.
I never thought i'd make it here so quickly ^^. Well, not really that quick because I started this story so long ago and during that time my computer broke twice and it delayed my progress on this story. But I'm still gonna finish it. I don't know where though. I'll think about the ending later.
This chapter: Rin is being held captive by Naraku and he finds many wayz to torture her. Including having her brother try to kill her! What will happen to Rin and is Sesshoumaru coming to save her?
Disclaimer: I own all the totures, heheheheh! (I still don't own Inuyasha ;.;)
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Does He Even Care?
"Hey wench, wake up!" A deep voice yelled from inside the dark room.
Rin opened her eyes and saw a man with scars all over his body in front of her. She balled her fist and tried to bring them forward but she was held back on a wall by thick chains.
"Nice try, but you're not going anywhere until Master Naraku has a little fun." The scarred man said evily as he walked up to her. He looked over her pale face and fierce eyes. "You might be a good little play-mate." He snickered.
"Bastard!" Rin tried to kick him but she found her feet where bound back to the wall, "Damn these chains!"
He laughed evily and traced her face with his finger, "You're a fiesty one, I like those kind of women."
Rin shook her head away from his hand and spat at his feet, "Who would ever want you?!" Rin then looked around the room and recalled what the guy said, "You're not going anywhere until Master Naraku has a little fun." She looked back over to the guy and put on a serious expression, "Where the heck am I?"
"No, no, no, little woman such as yourself shouldn't show men such disrespect." He raised the back of his hand to her cheek and slapped her. "Ask nicely and maybe I'll tell you wench!"
She spat blood and then looked over at him with a sly smile. "Maybe if you were a little more gental then I would ask polietly." 'Let this bastard get close to me.' Rin thought.
"Gental huh? Okay." He said seductively. He leaned his body on hers and looked in her eyes, "Is this gental eno.. ufff!"
Rin lifted her knee and hit him in the crotch. He backed up off her and crouched to the stone floor, grasping himself between the legs. Rin smirked and looked for a way out, she could barely see the outline of a door. But she still was chained to the wall and it wouldn't be easy to get out of them.
The man rose to his feet and puched Rin in the stomach. "Stupid wench!" He hit her again and Rin spat out more blood. "Naraku should just let me kill you!" He turned around and walked out of the room.
Rin lifted her head and looked at the door, "It'll take more than that to kill me." She mumbled.
^.~
"Lord Sesshoumaru?" Jaken called on Ah-Un's back. They'd been traveling for a day looking for Rin. Sesshoumaru followed the smell of her blood in the air. "My Lord, are we getting close to her?" Jaken looked over to Sesshoumaru's face. It was more clam then it was before when they had first began to follow.
Sesshoumaru ignored him, the little toad had been asking him that everytime they came to a clearing and that was rather often. 'Naraku, what could you possibibly need with her? You are truly an audatious one...' Sesshoumaru stopped and spoke lowly, "What do you want Kagura?"
Kagura wasn't supprised he knew she was there. She'd been following him for almost an hour. "Hello Lord Sesshoumaru." She lowered herself on her feather to the ground and she jumped off of it.
"I asked, what do you want?" Sesshoumaru shot a cold glare at her.
She merely smirked and said, "Besides the point of Naraku wanting me to come to you, I felt like seeing your pretty face."
"What does Naraku want with me?" Sesshoumaru asked cocking an eyebrow. Sesshoumaru smelled another demon that matched the scent of Naraku. "And who's this with you?"
Kagura smirked and turned to see Kanna walking up to her. "Why her, this is my older sister, Kanna. She goes everywhere with me, pay her no mind." Kagura looked at her sister and gave her a stern look. She then looked back at Sesshoumaru and began to explain.
"Lord Sesshoumaru, Naraku is pondering a question that needs an answer." Kagura then paused and looked at her sister again. She looked back over to to him and opened her fan and covered her face. "The question is, why exactly is the high and mightly Lord Sesshoumaru carrying a human around with him? Naraku wishes to know why you would bring a lowly human into you're life and care for her? She's just a burden on you. You'll have to take care of her and watch over her feeble weak body. She's just a creature that can be easily killed by the demons of the world. She's nothing more than a mouse to a snake about to stirke." Kagura finished and saw the change of emotion on his face. 'I've got him.'
'She is right, Rin is nothing more than a stupid human with emotions and love. Just like my stupid half-brother. She's no concern to me anymore.' Sesshoumaru smirked and them lifted his head. "Tell Naraku that he can have her. She mean's nothing to me at all." He then turned and walked away saying, "Lets go Jaken."
Jaken looked at his master walking away, "Why, Lord Sesshoumaru?" He said lowly. Jaken gave in a lowered his head. "Go Ah-un." Ah-Un looked back at Kagura and Kanna and then followed Sesshoumaru.
Kagura pulled out her feather and hopped on it. Kanna jumped on also and faced her mirror towards Kagura. Soon Sesshoumaru's face appeared and his image said,"Tell Naraku that he can have her. She mean's nothing to me at all."
"Perfect, now the girl will be more fun to kill." Kagura then flew back to Naraku's castle.
^.~
Rin stared blankly at the wall ahead of her, 'Will he come to save me?' She quickly turned her head to the door and saw a little boy with his hair in a ponytail and freackles walk in.
The boy lowered the tray he was carrying on the floor and picked up the baboon pipe filled with water to Rin's mouth. She happily accepted and the cold water soothed her dry throat.
"Aren't you Sango's brother, Kohaku?" Rin asked staring at the boy grabbing a stick with a cooked fish on it.
Kohaku raised his head and looked at her questionably. "Brother? Sango?" He asked looking at her face.
'That's right, she told me that Naraku stole Kohaku of all his memories. The poor boy.' "Listen Kohaku, you have a sister named Sango who misses you and loves you dearly. You don't know this because Naraku tricked you and erased all of your memories! I can take you to her, just get me out of here, please!" She begged. She could see tears falling down his face as he just heard the news of his past.
"Finally someone know's who I am!" He got up and hugged her.
Rin smiled and said soothingly, "It'll be okay Kohaku." With him holding her like that, it reminded her of her brother hugging her at times when they were young, and this brought tears to her eyes.
He backed off of her and pulled out a key from his pocket. "Promise me you'll take me to my sister."
"I promise I'll take you to her as soon as we get out of here. So unlock..." Rin heard footsteps approaching the door. "Wait Kohaku, go sneak my sword in here and then come back after whoever's coming okay!"
He nodded and ran out of the room. A few seconds later Kagura and Kanna arrived.
Rin shook with anger as Kagura's evil smirk was in front her. "Kagura," Rin growled lowly.
"Now, now, you shouldn't hold such a grudge against me. Take you're anger out on Naraku and Kurogasa who planned this." Kugura smirked bigger as the hatred grew on Rin's face.
"Those two..." She paused and then smirked, "They'll be sorry once Sesshoumaru gets here, I saw him fighting Inuyasha and I know he's on his way here! I hope he kicks your sorry a..."
"Im sorry, did you said "Sesshoumaru is on his way here?" I'm afraid not. He told me otherwise. He told me that you were nothing to him. He isn't coming to save you."
Rin smirked again and yelled, "You liar, why should I believe you!"
Kagura pointed her fan to Kanna's mirror and Rin observed. Soon Sesshoumaru's face appeared saying, "Tell Naraku that he can have her. She mean's nothing to me at all."
Rin stared in shock at what she had just seen. "That's..." She couldn't believe what she heard. 'He gave up on me. I am just a little toy for him. I'm nothing to him..." Rin felt the tears fall but the hatred towards him burned her face. "Damn him!"
"Oh, dry your eyes girl, you wont be seeing him anymore. Anything else for that matter, you're gonna die here anyway." Kagura turned and walked out of the room with her sister.
"I'm so stupid, to think I could love someone like him!" Rin banged her swollen wrist against the stone wall behind her. "How could I not see that I was nothing to him!"
"Miss?" Kohaku said walking into the door seeing her actions.
Rin pulling out her wrists a little and said, "Get me out of here. After I give you back to Sango. I'm on my own."
Kohaku released her and gave her her sword. "Stay low and I'll get us out of here."
"Right." Rin followed him through all the halls of the castle being as quiet as she could.
Kohaku and her where almost out of there when a voice called in his head. He grasped his head and started to scream.
"Kohaku, Kohaku, what's worng?" Rin asked grabbing his shoulders.
He stopped and pulled out his sickle and raised it high. Rin saw this and backed away. He lifted his head and his eyes were blank, he was under Naraku's control again.
"I've gotta get out of here!" Rin ran and as fast as she could to find an exit out of the castle. She felt the wounds from the battle with Kagura sting and bleed as she ran. 'Damnit, I feel like I'm about to pass out.'
"Yhaaa!" She yelled as she was slashed on the back by Kohaku's sickle. She ran even faster than she was before. Before she was out of the castle a familiar face stood in front of her. Her brother.
"Torumaru?" Rin said in a state of shock. She didn't want to fight her brother so she knocked him back with her sword sheathed and ran out of the huge gate. Tears fell from her eyes and she ran through the forest. 'Why!? Why my brother to be controlled by him. Sesshoumaru doesn't even care anymore, no one in this world for me to lo...' "Ah..."
Rin ran into something tall and soft. She looked up and saw him standing over her with his soft emotionless face. "You..." Rin frowned and ran passed him.
"Rin?" Sesshoumaru called as she ran away.
"He doesn't care so I'm, I'm..." Rin stopped and fell to her knees, "So, tired." Her wounds had bleed enough for her to black out. "Sesshoumaru..." She then fell and hit the ground. Her unconscious body began to fall down a hill and then into a river. She floated above the water and was carried down stream to the bank.
A few hours later a man in a green kimono holding a big hammer found her. "What's this thing doing in the river?" Totousai picked her up and carried her into his cave.
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Hehehehehehe! I added the crazy Totousai into my story! I'm so evil!
Well, now that he's found her, what will happen?
Next chapter: New Sword, New Training!
Read&Review
