I'm sorry that the last chapter was so unclear. I'm trying to get used to
this new keyboard... To the confused Reviewer, they are both human. But
not for long, MUAHAHAHAHA-COUGH- HAHAHA.
Tis chapter's gonna be MUCH more intresting, trust me. The rating was for blood, violence,strong language, and IF YOU CALL THIS A HUMAN SUE, YOU ARE SOOOOOOO WRONG
Now that I'm done tormenting you.
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Phoenix and Serenity were knocked out after harsh beatings from Gale's worshippers. It was far before they got to the estate, but when they arrived, they were hurled into a dank musty-smelling cell. Their bodies had been handled brutally, but what did they care? They were about to face the wrath of the most powerful man on Earth!
Phoenix woke up very slowly and painfully. He checked his body for injuries and winced when he felt his back. His thin shirt was soaked with blood and a large area of his back felt raw and chafed. He finally noticed Serenity lying limp with her left arm draped across his midriff. She was is no worse a state than he was. She stirred slightly and her arm fell from him.
He got up and looked around the cell. There was some food in a corner and he crawled over to it. There were two small loaves of bread and a pitcher of water. He drank a bit of the water and ate one of the loaves. It tasted horrible, but he was extremely hungry. Serenity finally woke up as Gale strode into the room. "Ah, I see my.........Guests have finally woken up?"
"Shut the hell up. We won't say anything to you." Phoenix fumed angrily. "What is there to say?" The horrible man answered. "I just wish to squeeze the life out of you two until you are screaming for mercy." He gestured to two guards, who opened the cell and carried the two none too gently up into a large bright room. It was obviously a torture room. Phoenix winced as he caught sight of a huge sharp knife suspended by a pendulum like pole. The guards strapped them both to a metal slab tilted at an angle. Gale rubbed his hands together evilly. "Let's begin, shall we?" He pressed a button on a platinum panel and the two felt electricity surge through their bodies. "NOW YE'VE PUSHED IT TOO FAR!!!" A voice boomed out from the walls. Gale hit a button that stopped the machine and looked around frantically. "Who said that?" He yelled into the light. "You should know who we are, mate!" This voice was more feminine. "I demand to know who this is!"
Phoenix yelled out with shock as the lights exploded, and a large whirling black vortex smirled in the center of the room. Gale staggered backwards and hit a table hard. After Phoenix's eyes had adjusted to the dim light. He saw two bodies had appeared that were about his size. One thing was different, though. Instead of two humans two otters stood there. One with a sword, one with a spear. The sword was beautiful. It had a sparkling red pommelstone and the blade flashed like magic. Both wore clothes and talked in english. The male otter rushed at the crimelord with his blade flashing. Gale coicidentally had his favored weapon close at hand. The Harpoon launcher. He parried awkwardly and shot at the otter. Phoenix wasn't paying attention to that, though. He was paying attention to the flasks of glowing liquid at each of their belts. Gale rewound the launcher and shot once more. But the otter staggared and was run through with the harpoon. Serenity screamed as the harpoon went completely through and caught the ottermaid off guard. Both the otters fell heavily. The male coughed up blood heavily. His eyes started to mist over and he used his last breath to utter one unfamiliar word. "Karna!" He yelled with his paw upraised. A swirling dark substance encircled the shackles on their wrists.
The metal rings burst into shards and they fell to the floor, rubbing their wrists. The female called out painfully. "Kalnaz!" The bottle of liquid at the dead male's side floated swiftly to her hand. "Here.... Ta..take these.... yo... you need to....... es...escape....him..." Her expression went blank and she fell back. The portal was fading fast. They saw Kahn running toward them with a blade. The blade that the male had. Phoenix laughed and dodged easily aside. No one was able to best him at swordplay. He picked up a chain and threw it toward the handle of the blade. The chain wrapped around the hilt and the sword was pulled out of the man's hands. He smirked and ran past the male's body pulling the scabbard from it and grabbing Serenity's hand. He ran through the dark swirling portal.
They looked around but not for long. Their feet fell from below them and they were cast into complete darkness.
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I hope that one was better than the first! Well as usual R+R!
Tis chapter's gonna be MUCH more intresting, trust me. The rating was for blood, violence,strong language, and IF YOU CALL THIS A HUMAN SUE, YOU ARE SOOOOOOO WRONG
Now that I'm done tormenting you.
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Phoenix and Serenity were knocked out after harsh beatings from Gale's worshippers. It was far before they got to the estate, but when they arrived, they were hurled into a dank musty-smelling cell. Their bodies had been handled brutally, but what did they care? They were about to face the wrath of the most powerful man on Earth!
Phoenix woke up very slowly and painfully. He checked his body for injuries and winced when he felt his back. His thin shirt was soaked with blood and a large area of his back felt raw and chafed. He finally noticed Serenity lying limp with her left arm draped across his midriff. She was is no worse a state than he was. She stirred slightly and her arm fell from him.
He got up and looked around the cell. There was some food in a corner and he crawled over to it. There were two small loaves of bread and a pitcher of water. He drank a bit of the water and ate one of the loaves. It tasted horrible, but he was extremely hungry. Serenity finally woke up as Gale strode into the room. "Ah, I see my.........Guests have finally woken up?"
"Shut the hell up. We won't say anything to you." Phoenix fumed angrily. "What is there to say?" The horrible man answered. "I just wish to squeeze the life out of you two until you are screaming for mercy." He gestured to two guards, who opened the cell and carried the two none too gently up into a large bright room. It was obviously a torture room. Phoenix winced as he caught sight of a huge sharp knife suspended by a pendulum like pole. The guards strapped them both to a metal slab tilted at an angle. Gale rubbed his hands together evilly. "Let's begin, shall we?" He pressed a button on a platinum panel and the two felt electricity surge through their bodies. "NOW YE'VE PUSHED IT TOO FAR!!!" A voice boomed out from the walls. Gale hit a button that stopped the machine and looked around frantically. "Who said that?" He yelled into the light. "You should know who we are, mate!" This voice was more feminine. "I demand to know who this is!"
Phoenix yelled out with shock as the lights exploded, and a large whirling black vortex smirled in the center of the room. Gale staggered backwards and hit a table hard. After Phoenix's eyes had adjusted to the dim light. He saw two bodies had appeared that were about his size. One thing was different, though. Instead of two humans two otters stood there. One with a sword, one with a spear. The sword was beautiful. It had a sparkling red pommelstone and the blade flashed like magic. Both wore clothes and talked in english. The male otter rushed at the crimelord with his blade flashing. Gale coicidentally had his favored weapon close at hand. The Harpoon launcher. He parried awkwardly and shot at the otter. Phoenix wasn't paying attention to that, though. He was paying attention to the flasks of glowing liquid at each of their belts. Gale rewound the launcher and shot once more. But the otter staggared and was run through with the harpoon. Serenity screamed as the harpoon went completely through and caught the ottermaid off guard. Both the otters fell heavily. The male coughed up blood heavily. His eyes started to mist over and he used his last breath to utter one unfamiliar word. "Karna!" He yelled with his paw upraised. A swirling dark substance encircled the shackles on their wrists.
The metal rings burst into shards and they fell to the floor, rubbing their wrists. The female called out painfully. "Kalnaz!" The bottle of liquid at the dead male's side floated swiftly to her hand. "Here.... Ta..take these.... yo... you need to....... es...escape....him..." Her expression went blank and she fell back. The portal was fading fast. They saw Kahn running toward them with a blade. The blade that the male had. Phoenix laughed and dodged easily aside. No one was able to best him at swordplay. He picked up a chain and threw it toward the handle of the blade. The chain wrapped around the hilt and the sword was pulled out of the man's hands. He smirked and ran past the male's body pulling the scabbard from it and grabbing Serenity's hand. He ran through the dark swirling portal.
They looked around but not for long. Their feet fell from below them and they were cast into complete darkness.
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I hope that one was better than the first! Well as usual R+R!
